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[[caption-width-right:350:GET IT?!]]
[[caption-width-right:350:GET IT?!]]
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Or, at least, that's what happened in the original. In the re-written verison, Marceline gets a taste of Z-Squared's power when she peers into his head while he meditates.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Actually, more like a soul is a terrible thing to sample. To see what's going on with Z-Squared, Marceline uses her soul-sucking ability to have a nice peek...and is soon met with ominous and somewhat demonic visions. It's his true form, by the way.
* BadPowersGoodPeople: This is the first time in the series when [[FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire Marceline]] uses her soul-sucking abilities to a harmless degree. She gets more than she bargained for.
* BadPowersGoodPeople: This is the first time in the series when [[FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire Marceline]] uses her soul-sucking abilities to a harmless degree. She gets more than she bargained for.
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* {{Expy}}: Between his motifs, skills, and theme, Kal-Roh just HAS to be based on [[VideoGame/KillerInstict Kan-Rha!]]
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* {{Expy}}: Between his motifs, skills, and theme, original theme before it got changed, Kal-Roh just HAS to be based on [[VideoGame/KillerInstict Kan-Rha!]]
* MeditatingPowerup: What Z-Squared seems to be going through whenever he does so. A sinister red aura keeps surrounding him and odd smoke is doing the very same. Looking into his head also brings out terrifying visions of hellfire and such.
** On the flip-side, Kal-Roh when his staff is broken.
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* VillainousBreakdown: A minor one. Kal-Roh is panicking when the Staff is destroyed.
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* VillainousBreakdown: A minor one. Kal-Roh is panicking when the Staff is destroyed. He's got every right to...
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* ElementalArmor: Kal-Roh can create stone armor to protect himself.
* GroinAttack: Finn delivers this to Kal-Roh as the villain's plans go up in flames.
** UnusualEuphemism: Yep. Right in the 'Scarabs'.
** UnusualEuphemism: Yep. Right in the 'Scarabs'.
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* VillainTeleportaion / WeaponizedTeleportation: Kal-Roh can do this, gaining a moment to Shoryuken his foes.
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* VillainTeleportaion VillainTeleportation / WeaponizedTeleportation: Kal-Roh can do this, gaining a moment to Shoryuken his foes.foes.
* VillainousBreakdown: A minor one. Kal-Roh is panicking when the Staff is destroyed.
* WreckedWeapon: A stray blast of magic from Twilight destroys the power source of the Staff of Obedience.
* VillainousBreakdown: A minor one. Kal-Roh is panicking when the Staff is destroyed.
* WreckedWeapon: A stray blast of magic from Twilight destroys the power source of the Staff of Obedience.
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* CallBack: The Punitor and Z-Squared's rising power are plot points here.
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* CallBack: The Punitor and Z-Squared's rising power are plot points here. The Legion of Musicians are also mentioned.
* CaptainObvious: [[PlayedForLaughs Played for laughs]] when Finn calls Kal-Roh tough. The villain promptly tells him to stop stating the obvious and die like a man.
* DishingOutDirt: Kal-Roh can manipulate sand, even creating constructs!
* {{Expy}}: Between his motifs, skills, and theme, Kal-Roh just HAS to be based on [[VideoGame/KillerInstict Kan-Rha!]]
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: Kal-Roh. Finn even calls his plan "So cliched, it hurts."
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: Kal-Roh. Finn even calls his plan "So cliched, it hurts."
* MindOverMatter: One of Kal-Roh's skills. He puts this to deadly use when using sharpened jewels in places of knives.
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** CannotTakeCriticism: What lead to his revenge.
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** CannotTakeCriticism: CantTakeCriticism: What lead to his revenge.revenge.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Kal-Roh decides to do this.
* VillainTeleportaion / WeaponizedTeleportation: Kal-Roh can do this, gaining a moment to Shoryuken his foes.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Kal-Roh decides to do this.
* VillainTeleportaion / WeaponizedTeleportation: Kal-Roh can do this, gaining a moment to Shoryuken his foes.
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* TheDarkArts: Kal-Roh turned to them for the sake of attention.
* DuctTapeForEverything: The crack of the Punitor is sealed by duct tape.
* DuctTapeForEverything: The crack of the Punitor is sealed by duct tape.
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* KarmaHoudini: Discord isn't punished for causing Finn to be in possession of Mr. Plotter and causing Megatron to flip out.
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...
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* KarmaHoudini: Discord isn't punished ILoveTheDead: One of Kal-Roh's crimes was defiling the dead. Sir saw this as the last straw for causing him.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Discord, the moment he appears, is smashed through a wall by Megatron. He was the one who caused Finn to bein possession of [[MisBlamed blamed for Mr. Plotter and causing Megatron to flip out.
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...Plotter's disappearance.]]
* LoadBearingBoss: In all fairness, though, the room fills up with sand right after Anubis lets the two go after Kal-Roh has been punished.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Discord, the moment he appears, is smashed through a wall by Megatron. He was the one who caused Finn to be
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...
* LoadBearingBoss: In all fairness, though, the room fills up with sand right after Anubis lets the two go after Kal-Roh has been punished.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Kal-Roh, to a P.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Kal-Roh, to a P.P.
** CannotTakeCriticism: What lead to his revenge.
** CannotTakeCriticism: What lead to his revenge.
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* KarmaHoudini: Discord isn't punished for causing Finn to be in possession of Mr. Plotter and causing Megatron to flip out.
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...
** However, Megatron DOES promise to get back at him...
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* SealedEvilInACan: Kal-Roh serves as this.
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* OhCrap: Sir, upon seeing Kal-Roh has escaped.
* RightBehindMe: Kal-Roh, upon being handed Mr. Plotter, is subject to this. He makes a wise decision to just give the duck to Megatron.
* SealedEvilInACan: Kal-Roh serves asthis.this.
* SmallNameBigEgo: Kal-Roh, to a P.
* RightBehindMe: Kal-Roh, upon being handed Mr. Plotter, is subject to this. He makes a wise decision to just give the duck to Megatron.
* SealedEvilInACan: Kal-Roh serves as
* SmallNameBigEgo: Kal-Roh, to a P.
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From the same artifact that trapped Manos, a disgruntled and power-hungry Egyptian sorcerer named Kal-Roh seeks the Staff of Obeidiance from one of Egypts Pyramids. Finn and Twilight are sent to stop him and they must contend with him and the controlled spirit of Anubis (locked in a statue). It ends with Anubis freed and Kal-Roh punished...severely. Meanwhile, Z-Squared and Sir discuss what happened at the end of the last fic.
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* BerserkButton: Don't you DARE steal Mr. Plotter from Megatron.
* BigCreepyCrawlies: The scarabs that devour Kal-Roh. Doubles as a [[ShoutOut shout out]] to the remake of 'The Mummy'.
* CallBack: The Punitor and Z-Squared's rising power are plot points here.
** Also, the rubber duck from 'Beast War's returns as Megatron's [[CompanionCube buddy again!]] He's even given a name: Mr. Plotter.
* CompanionCube: See above.
* EatenAlive: The main source of Kal-Roh's punishment.
* MagicStaff / MindControlDevice: The Staff of Obedience. It can even control GODS of all things!
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Kal-Roh's punishment? [[EatenAlive Being devoured by Scarabs]] in a painful manner and his remains buried under pile upon pile of sand.
* SealedEvilInACan: Kal-Roh serves as this.
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* BerserkButton: Don't you DARE steal Mr. Plotter from Megatron.
* BigCreepyCrawlies: The scarabs that devour Kal-Roh. Doubles as a [[ShoutOut shout out]] to the remake of 'The Mummy'.
* CallBack: The Punitor and Z-Squared's rising power are plot points here.
** Also, the rubber duck from 'Beast War's returns as Megatron's [[CompanionCube buddy again!]] He's even given a name: Mr. Plotter.
* CompanionCube: See above.
* EatenAlive: The main source of Kal-Roh's punishment.
* MagicStaff / MindControlDevice: The Staff of Obedience. It can even control GODS of all things!
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Kal-Roh's punishment? [[EatenAlive Being devoured by Scarabs]] in a painful manner and his remains buried under pile upon pile of sand.
* SealedEvilInACan: Kal-Roh serves as this.
