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* BrokenAesop: "Thomas Comes to Breakfast" is going for a cautionary tale about {{pride}}, but the careless cleaner obliviously changing Thomas' controls means that his humiliating experience with the stationmaster's house would have happened anyway.
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* WeWantOurJerkBack: Percy and Toby shoot down Thomas' arrogance in the first story and then laugh at him after his accident. [[TheMillstoneThen Daisy arrives and makes running the branch line even harder for them, with her refusal to pull anything]].
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* WeWantOurJerkBack: Percy and Toby shoot down Thomas' arrogance in the first story and then laugh at him after his accident. [[TheMillstoneThen [[TheMillstone Then Daisy arrives and makes running the branch line even harder for them, with her refusal to pull anything]].
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* MidSeasonUpgrade: Thomas returns from the works, now with a flat running board, as his old running board left his buffers at different hights.
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* WeWantOurJerkBack: Percy and Toby shoot down Thomas' arrogance in the first story and then laugh at him after his accident. [[TheMillstoneThen Daisy arrives and makes running the branch line even harder for them, with her refusal to pull anything]].
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** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged, despite the fact it was the careless clearer messing with his controls.
** Later, The Fatt Controller tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Later, The Fatt Controller tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
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** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Fat Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged, despite the fact it was the careless clearer messing with his controls.
** Later, TheFatt Fat Controller tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Later, The
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* NoOSHACompliance: Who's idea was it to not add a pair of buffers between the stationmaster's house and the end of the tracks?
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Edit to sound less complain-y
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* LethallyStupid: Seriously, who builds a house ''at the end of a train track''?! Bonus stupidity points for the ''lack of any buffers''.
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* LethallyStupid: Seriously, who builds It's not a good idea to build a house ''at at the end of a train track''?! Bonus stupidity points track without any buffers. If not for ArtisticLicense, the ''lack of any buffers''.stationmaster and his family would have almost certainly been killed by Thomas crashing through their wall.
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--->'''Daisy:''' Feeble? ''Feeble?!'' Let me...!
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--->'''Daisy:''' Feeble? ''Feeble?!'' F-F-F-Feeble?! Let me...!
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** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up the accident that was caused by Percy.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up the accident that was caused by Percy.
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** Later, he then The Fatt Controller tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up theaccident wreckage that was caused by Percy.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up the
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** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
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** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and crashing into the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line branch line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
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** [[ FromBadToWorse "You have put us in an awkward predicament!]]"
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** [[ FromBadToWorse "You "[[FromBadToWorse You have put us in an awkward predicament!]]"
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** "You have put us in an awkward predicament!"
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** [[ FromBadToWorse "You have put us in an awkward predicament!"predicament!]]"
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** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
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** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a an awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
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** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged.
** Later, he tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
** Later, he tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
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** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged.
damaged, despite the fact it was the careless clearer messing with his controls.
** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up the accident that was caused by Percy.
** Later, he then tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped Toby cleared up the accident that was caused by Percy.
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** Finally he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
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** Finally Finally, he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
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* WhatTheHellHero:
** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged.
** Later, he tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
** Along with the Stationmaster's family, The Fatt Controller scolds Thomas for crashing into the stationmaster's house for breakfast which resulted in his front end being damaged.
** Later, he tells off Percy for his accident with the trucks and the break van, which resulted in the Branch Line to be run by only Toby and Daisy, putting them in a awkward predicament and also reminded Percy to be more careful with trucks.
** Finally he calls out Daisy for her laziness, but gives her a second chance after she helped cleared up the accident caused by Percy.
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* TooDumbToLive: The stationmaster and his family live in a house that was built at the end of a train track, with no buffers for protection. [[FailedASpotCheck They never realize anything wrong with this.]] They would have all been seriously injured at best and most likely killed, if the same accident happened in real life.
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* TooDumbToLive: The stationmaster and his family live in a house that was built at the end of a train track, with no buffers for protection. [[FailedASpotCheck They never realize anything wrong with this.]] They would have all been seriously injured at best and most likely killed, [[ArtisticLicensePhysics if the same accident happened in real life.life]].
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* TooDumbToLive: The stationmaster and his family live in a house that was built at the end of a train track, with no buffers for protection. [[FailedASpotCheck They never realise anything wrong with this.]] They would have all been seriously injured at best and most likely killed, if the same accident happened in real life.
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* TooDumbToLive: The stationmaster and his family live in a house that was built at the end of a train track, with no buffers for protection. [[FailedASpotCheck They never realise realize anything wrong with this.]] They would have all been seriously injured at best and most likely killed, if the same accident happened in real life.
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** Don't tell Annie, Clarabel or Henrietta that they are "rubbish". They do not like it.
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** Don't tell Annie, Clarabel or Henrietta that they are they’re "rubbish". They do not don’t like it.