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The ''Canterbury'' survivors try to figure out what to do with the Martian corvette. Miller keeps trying to put together what happened to Julie, despite a Star Helix directive to look for the man who attacked Havelock instead.
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The ''Canterbury'' survivors try to figure out what to do with the Martian corvette.''Tachi'' - to make it harder to identify, they brainstorm a new name for it. Miller keeps trying to put together what happened to Julie, despite a Star Helix directive to look for the man who attacked Havelock instead.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Nobody likes any of Alex's name suggestions for the corvette.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Nobody likes any of Alex's name suggestions for to replace the corvette.''Tachi''.
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** Amos second guesses Naomi, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness something we've never seen him do]]. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.
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** Amos second guesses Naomi, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness something we've never seen him do]]. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.Tycho Station.
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* RenegadeSplinterFaction: Anderson Dawes claims that the rioters in the Medina are one of these, rather than [[NoTrueScotsman actual OPA members]].
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* RenegadeSplinterFaction: Anderson Dawes claims that the rioters in the Medina sector are part of one of these, rather than [[NoTrueScotsman actual OPA members]].
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* WaterWakeup: Holden is woken up by a droplet of blood that's floating in zero gravity until it strikes his face.
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* WaterWakeup: Holden is woken up awakened by a droplet of blood that's floating in zero gravity until it strikes his face.
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** Amos second guesses Naomi, something we've never seen him do. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.
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** Amos second guesses Naomi, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness something we've never seen him do.do]]. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.
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* HiddenDepths: Amos recognizes the name "Rocinante" and knows its literal meaning. He mentions knowing somebody by that name, but it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary reference]].
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* HiddenDepths: HiddenDepths:
** Amos recognizes the name "Rocinante" and knows its literal meaning. He mentions knowing somebody by that name, but it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literaryreference]].reference]].
** Amos second guesses Naomi, something we've never seen him do. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.
** Amos recognizes the name "Rocinante" and knows its literal meaning. He mentions knowing somebody by that name, but it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary
** Amos second guesses Naomi, something we've never seen him do. This in turn gets Naomi to change her mind about going to Tycho.
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; Miller is more interested in the Mao case than hunting down Havelock's attacker. When he's offered Kothari on a plate if he tells what he knows about the case, he refuses to bite.
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; Subverted; Miller is more interested in the Mao case than hunting down Havelock's attacker. When he's offered Kothari on a plate if he tells what he knows about the case, he refuses to bite.
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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: In both this episode and the short story "The Butcher of Anderson Station," UN Colonel Fred Johnson massacres a group of mining insurgents who had already surrendered. The episode omits the explanation that [[spoiler: Fred's superiors prevented him from seeing their surrender, giving Johnson the impression that the miners had forced his hand and given him no other choice.]] This is explained in Season 2.
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I'm not sure what this means, this was an almost one-for-one adaptation of the Anderson Station story
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The version of the Anderson Station story shown in the series shows the UN and Fred Johnson in a far more villainous light than the books.
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; Holden is more interested in the Mao case than hunting down Havelock's attacker. When he's offered Kothari on a plate if he tells what he knows about the case, he refuses to bite.
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; Holden Miller is more interested in the Mao case than hunting down Havelock's attacker. When he's offered Kothari on a plate if he tells what he knows about the case, he refuses to bite.
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* HiddenDepths: Amos knows what "Rocinante" means (though it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary reference]] or just knows some Spanish).
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* HiddenDepths: Amos knows what recognizes the name "Rocinante" means (though and knows its literal meaning. He mentions knowing somebody by that name, but it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary reference]] or just knows some Spanish).reference]].
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* PowderKegCrowd: Holden has an OhCrap when he's on a tube train during a power cut and everyone starts staring at him. Fortunately the power comes on before things get ugly.
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* PowderKegCrowd: Holden Miller has an OhCrap when he's on a tube train during a power cut and everyone starts staring at him. Fortunately the power comes on before things get ugly.
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* MustHaveCaffiene: Holden is overjoyed to find the ''Tachi'' is well-stocked with coffee.
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* MustHaveCaffiene: MustHaveCaffeine: Holden is overjoyed to find the ''Tachi'' is well-stocked with coffee.
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* MustHaveCaffiene: Holden is overjoyed to find the ''Tachi'' is well-stocked with coffee.
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* GonnaNeedABiggerWarrant:
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* GonnaNeedABiggerWarrant: Miller refuses to kick the Mao case upstairs even when he realises it's connected to the wider events taking place.
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* ShoutOut: [[Film/TheTerminator Tech Noir]].
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; when Holden is offered the location of Kothari as a bribe, he refuses to bite.
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; when Holden is more interested in the Mao case than hunting down Havelock's attacker. When he's offered the location of Kothari as on a bribe, plate if he tells what he knows about the case, he refuses to bite.
* PowderKegCrowd: Holden has an OhCrap when he's on a tube train during a power cut and everyone starts staring at him. Fortunately the power comes on before things get ugly.
* WorstAid: InUniverse; with Shed dead the others have to work out how to treat the compound fracture in Amos' leg. Amos points out that Shed wasn't a real medic either, so they can hardly do any worse.
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* ZippingUpTheBodyBag
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* ZippingUpTheBodyBagZippingUpTheBodyBag: Alex to [[DueToTheDead Lopez]].
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* ItsPersonal: Averted; when Holden is offered the location of Kothari as a bribe, he refuses to bite.
* WaterWakeup: Holden is woken up by a droplet of blood that's floating in zero gravity until it strikes his face.
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-->'''Holden''': We look like terrorists.
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-->'''Holden''': We look like terrorists.terrorists.
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The name of the ship is "Tachi" not "Taschi"
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* MeaningfulRename: The ''Taschi'' ''Tachi'' gets renamed the ''Rocinante''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The version of the Anderson Station story shown in the series shows the UN and Fred Johnson in a far more villainous light than the books.
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'''Season 1, Episode 5''':
!Back to the Butcher
The ''Canterbury'' survivors try to figure out what to do with the Martian corvette. Miller keeps trying to put together what happened to Julie, despite a Star Helix directive to look for the man who attacked Havelock instead.
In a series of flashbacks, we see the events which caused Fred Johnson to be dubbed "the Butcher of Anderson Station."
!!Tropes:
* BagOfKidnapping: At the end of the episode, Miller gets kidnapped off the street like this.
* TheButcher: Col. Johnson is labeled "The Butcher of Anderson Station" because of the way he stopped a strike there 11 years ago.
* GiverOfLameNames: Nobody likes any of Alex's name suggestions for the corvette.
* HiddenDepths: Amos knows what "Rocinante" means (though it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary reference]] or just knows some Spanish).
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Downplayed; Captain Shaddid makes it clear that if Kothari gets "accidentally" pushed out an airlock while they're trying to capture him, that's just fine.
* MeaningfulRename: The ''Taschi'' gets renamed the ''Rocinante''.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: In addition to "TheButcher of Anderson Station", Miller gets data on a ship called the ''[[NamesToRunAwayFrom/ReligiousNames Anubis]]'' which seems to have been involved with the incident on Phoebe.
* RenegadeSplinterFaction: Anderson Dawes claims that the rioters in the Medina are one of these, rather than [[NoTrueScotsman actual OPA members]].
* SpySpeak: To talk to the data broker, go to a particular shop and ask for a sherpa.
* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: Holden points out that they're now the sole survivors of two different mysterious attacks, and even he wouldn't believe their story if he hadn't been there.
-->'''Holden''': We look like terrorists.
!Back to the Butcher
The ''Canterbury'' survivors try to figure out what to do with the Martian corvette. Miller keeps trying to put together what happened to Julie, despite a Star Helix directive to look for the man who attacked Havelock instead.
In a series of flashbacks, we see the events which caused Fred Johnson to be dubbed "the Butcher of Anderson Station."
!!Tropes:
* BagOfKidnapping: At the end of the episode, Miller gets kidnapped off the street like this.
* TheButcher: Col. Johnson is labeled "The Butcher of Anderson Station" because of the way he stopped a strike there 11 years ago.
* GiverOfLameNames: Nobody likes any of Alex's name suggestions for the corvette.
* HiddenDepths: Amos knows what "Rocinante" means (though it's not clear if he recognizes the [[Literature/DonQuixote literary reference]] or just knows some Spanish).
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Downplayed; Captain Shaddid makes it clear that if Kothari gets "accidentally" pushed out an airlock while they're trying to capture him, that's just fine.
* MeaningfulRename: The ''Taschi'' gets renamed the ''Rocinante''.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: In addition to "TheButcher of Anderson Station", Miller gets data on a ship called the ''[[NamesToRunAwayFrom/ReligiousNames Anubis]]'' which seems to have been involved with the incident on Phoebe.
* RenegadeSplinterFaction: Anderson Dawes claims that the rioters in the Medina are one of these, rather than [[NoTrueScotsman actual OPA members]].
* SpySpeak: To talk to the data broker, go to a particular shop and ask for a sherpa.
* YouWouldntBelieveMeIfIToldYou: Holden points out that they're now the sole survivors of two different mysterious attacks, and even he wouldn't believe their story if he hadn't been there.
-->'''Holden''': We look like terrorists.
