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*SilenceInTheLibrary: Just like Viren before him, Callum earns himself a shushing for making noise in the library.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Rayla steals the key to Callum's office so she can get into a forbidden part of the castle, and is spotted by a guard acting strangely outside the room. Upon leaving she's arrested for her trespass by Opeli, and is only let off the hook because Callum vouches for her.
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Misuse, Trope was cut/disambiguated due to cleanup
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Among the shelves of dark magic ingredients she finds in Viren's secret chamber, Rayla notes a jar of eyeballs, a jar of toenails, and a jar of peanut butter.
--> '''Rayla''': I guess dark mages get snacky too?
--> '''Rayla''': I guess dark mages get snacky too?
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Among the shelves of dark magic ingredients she finds in Viren's secret chamber, Rayla notes a jar of eyeballs, a jar of toenails, and a jar of... peanut butter.
--> '''Rayla''': I guess dark mages get snacky too?
* MoodWhiplash: Claudia and Terry's moment of serenity is interrupted by "Sir Sparklepuff" [[SuddenlyVoiced suddenly]] shouting "Blood of Child!", freaking them out.
--> '''Rayla''': I guess dark mages get snacky too?
* MoodWhiplash: Claudia and Terry's moment of serenity is interrupted by "Sir Sparklepuff" [[SuddenlyVoiced suddenly]] shouting "Blood of Child!", freaking them out.
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--> '''Rayla''': I guess dark mages get snacky too?
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* HeroicVow: Rayla gives a sacred promise to her parents to rescue them.
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* HeroicVow: Rayla gives a sacred promise to her parents to rescue them.them from their coin prison.
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* WhamShot: Rayla finds another enchanted coin like the ones holding her fellow elves, with the difference that this one holds a ''human''.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Rayla steals the key to Callum's office so she can get into a forbidden part of the castle, upon leaving she's arrested for her trespass by Opeli, and is only let off the hook because Callum vouches for her.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Rayla steals the key to Callum's office so she can get into a forbidden part of the castle, upon and is spotted by a guard acting strangely outside the room. Upon leaving she's arrested for her trespass by Opeli, and is only let off the hook because Callum vouches for her.
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The entire point of the 'Can't get away with nuthin' trope is being caught and punished immediately, despite the unlikelihood of such a thing occurring, because the writers wish to make a point. If you're going to delete both those elements you may as well delete the trope because it no longer fits.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned family. She's immediately caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned family. She's immedialty caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather, because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned family. She's immedialty immediately caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather, stepfather because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned fsmily. She's immedialty caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather, because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned fsmily.family. She's immedialty caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather, because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned fsmily. She's immedialty caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Rayla takes the key to the high mage's office and sneaks inside while Callum is busy in the library to find clues on freeing her imprisoned fsmily. She's immedialty caught afterwards while holding the weapon that killed King Harrow, Callum's stepfather.stepfather, because she's unwilling to let another share her burden and explain herself beforehand.
