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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: When Torra lightly turns down Kaz when she mistakes him for sneaking in to make out with her, she caresses his face. Kaz is surprised by this.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: When Torra lightly turns down Kaz when she mistakes him for sneaking in to make out with after mistakenly assuming he has a crush on her, she caresses his face. Kaz is surprised by this.
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** Kaz accidentally stumbles into Torra's room while running from Vonreg and his men. Torra assumes that he's here because he wanted to make out with her. Kaz just goes with it since it gives him a cover story, and he doesn't have time to say otherwise anyway. She at least changes it to Kaz being a friend and having gotten lost trying to visit her.
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** Kaz accidentally stumbles into Torra's room while running from Vonreg and his men. Torra assumes that he's here because he wanted to make out with has a crush on her. Kaz just goes with it since it gives him a cover story, and he doesn't have time to say otherwise anyway. She at least changes it to Kaz being a friend and having gotten lost while trying to visit her.
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* AbsenteeActor: Yeager is nowhere to be seen.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Tam speaks the phrase aloud when Neeku notices Kaz parkouring on the ledges of Doza Tower while Stormtroopers shoot at him.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Tam speaks the phrase aloud when Neeku notices Kaz parkouring on the ledges of Doza Tower while Stormtroopers stormtroopers shoot at him.
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Kaz is still searching for a way up to Doza Tower, and asks Tam about her friendship with Hype. She recounts some details, bitterly, and begins to list off the things she doesn't like about him... as Kaz tries to warn her that Hype is approaching from behind. He tells Tam he saw her at Aunt Z's earlier, and invites her and Kaz up to the Aces Lounge, an offer that Kaz immediately accepts. In the lounge, Kaz sees Vonreg and the stormtroopers going through a door, and looks for a way to slip off. He finds one when Hype and Tam get into an argument about the sorry state of the Fireball, as Hype thinks that Tam will never get to be a proper racer with that kind of a ship. When Tam decides to leave, she does it alone, wondering where Kaz disappeared off to.
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Kaz is still searching for a way up to Doza Tower, and asks Tam about her friendship with Hype. She recounts some details, bitterly, and begins to list off the things she doesn't like about him... as Kaz tries to warn her that Hype is approaching from behind. He tells Tam he saw her at Aunt Z's earlier, and invites her and Kaz up to the Aces Lounge, an offer that Kaz immediately accepts. In the lounge, Kaz sees Vonreg and the stormtroopers going through a door, and looks for a way to slip off. He finds one when Hype and Tam get into an argument about the sorry state of the Fireball, ''Fireball'', as Hype thinks that Tam will never get to be a proper racer with that kind of a ship. When Tam decides to leave, she does it alone, wondering where Kaz disappeared off to.
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Doza, having overheard the commotion, asks Vonreg what was going on, and when told of a spy, is incredulous. Torra arrives and says the intruder was just one of her friends, who got lost on his way out. Doza backs her up, and claims that he knows everything that goes on at the Colossus, irritated at slander against one of his citizens. Vonreg and his troopers leave. When Kaz meets up with Tam and Neeku back at the shop, he claims he simply ran into the First Order personnel in a restricted area, and that he's come to the conclusion the Aces Lounge isn't what it's cracked up to be. Tam smiles and tells him to get back to work, as the power comes back on and Kaz returns Neeku's comlink. In his office, Captain Doza pulls up a security camera image of Kaz, and wonders who he is.
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Doza, having overheard the commotion, asks Vonreg what was going on, and is incredulous when told of a spy, is incredulous.spy. Torra arrives and says the intruder was just one of her friends, who got lost on his way out. Doza backs her up, and claims that he knows everything that goes on at the Colossus, irritated at slander against one of his citizens. Vonreg and his troopers leave. When Kaz meets up with Tam and Neeku back at the shop, he claims he simply ran into the First Order personnel in a restricted area, and that he's come to the conclusion the Aces Lounge isn't what it's cracked up to be. Tam smiles and tells him to get back to work, as the power comes back on and Kaz returns Neeku's comlink. In his office, Captain Doza pulls up a security camera image of Kaz, and wonders who he is.
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** The way Torra politely declines Kaz sounds like she is putting him in the friend zone. Except, the thought of dating her hasn't even crossed Kaz's mind to begin with.
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** The way Torra politely declines Kaz sounds like she is putting him in the friend zone. Except, Except the thought of dating her hasn't hadn't even crossed Kaz's mind to begin with. with.
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** Captain Doza has made shady dealings with the criminal underworld, which is what the First Order is threatening to reveal if he rats them out to the New Republic.
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** Captain Doza has made shady dealings with the criminal underworld, which is what the First Order is threatening threatens to reveal if he rats them out to the New Republic.
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* TitleDrop: Aunt Z explains why she thinks Captain Doza is responsible for recent power fluctuations on the Colossus:
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* TitleDrop: Aunt Z explains why she thinks Captain Doza is responsible for recent deliberately causing power fluctuations shortages on the Colossus:
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* TruceZone: Tam says that members of all factions are allowed to come to the Colossus and do business, but they know it won't be if the First Order takes possession.
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* TruceZone: Tam says that members of all factions are allowed to come to the Colossus and do business, but they know it won't be if the First Order takes possession. business.
