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** The opening conversation about baseball references Buck Bokai breaking [=DiMaggio=]'s record, a stat that's previously come up on TNG and [=DS9=].
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** The opening conversation about baseball references Buck Bokai breaking Joe [=DiMaggio=]'s record, record for hits in consecutive games (56) , a stat that's that previously come came up on TNG and [=DS9=].
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* EasilyForgiven: Chakotay risks not only his life, but also Paris and Seven's. He is injured in the process, but doesn't even get a slap on the hand from the captain.
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* EasilyForgiven: Chakotay risks not only his life, but also Paris and Seven's. He is injured in the process, but doesn't even get a slap on the hand from the captain.captain, only a (justifiably) angry dressing-down from Seven.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: Kelly's life seen in the flashbacks feel like a test run for the tone that ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'' eventually adopted as a series.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: Kelly's life seen in the flashbacks feel seem like a test run for the tone that ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'' eventually adopted as a series.style of ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'', which detailed the early years of humanity's deep-space exploration and growth into an intergalactic power, leading to the founding of the United Federation of Planets, and premiered shortly after ''Voyager'' ended its 7-season run.
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* TheUnmasquedWorld: Kelly is presented with undeniable proof that there is other intelligent life in the universe when he sees a fragment of an alien spacecraft. Despite his certain death, [[YouAreNotAlone he takes comfort from this]].
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* TheUnmasquedWorld: Kelly is presented with undeniable proof that there is other intelligent life in the universe when he sees a fragment of an alien spacecraft. Despite his certain death, [[YouAreNotAlone he takes comfort from this]].this]].
* WorthIt: Although aware he will die, Kelly says that his experiences show that space exploration is not a waste, that traveling into space is the right thing for humans to do.
* WorthIt: Although aware he will die, Kelly says that his experiences show that space exploration is not a waste, that traveling into space is the right thing for humans to do.
