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Tanis agrees to take ''Voyager'' to Suspiria's location. On the way, he teaches Kes how to move objects and raise their temperatures with her abilities. She demonstrates these abilities to Tuvok but becomes unable to shut them off, nearly burning Tuvok alive. But Kes continues learning from Tanis, who unlocks her ability to summon a huge firestorm that burns all of her plants. He tells her that soon she will evolve beyond her crewmates and be able to join Suspiria in a realm of pure thought.
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Tanis agrees to take ''Voyager'' to Suspiria's location. On the way, he teaches Kes how to move objects and raise their temperatures with her abilities. She demonstrates these abilities to Tuvok but becomes [[PowerIncontinence unable to shut them off, off]], nearly burning Tuvok alive. But Kes continues learning from Tanis, who unlocks her ability to summon a huge firestorm that burns all of her plants. He tells her that soon she will evolve beyond her crewmates and be able to join Suspiria in a realm of pure thought.
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* ChekhovsGun: The remains of the Caretaker that the crew retrieved in the pilot episode.
* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtesy of the Preservers.]]
* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtesy of the Preservers.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: ChekhovsGun:
** The remains of the Caretaker that the crew retrieved in the pilot episode.
* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtesy of ** Tuvok's anti-sporocystian toxin gets used before the Preservers.]]episode is done.
** The remains of the Caretaker that the crew retrieved in the pilot episode.
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* [[HeroWithBadPublicity Heroes With Bad Publicity]]: A later episode reveals that the Kazon have been damaging ''Voyager'''s reputation to prevent them gaining allies.
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* [[HeroWithBadPublicity Heroes With Bad Publicity]]: HeroWithBadPublicity: A later episode reveals that the Kazon have been damaging ''Voyager'''s reputation to prevent them gaining allies.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to interrupt Suspiria long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian [[BuffySpeak gun-thingy]].
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to interrupt Suspiria long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian [[BuffySpeak gun-thingy]].weapon.
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* ScreamingWoman: On seeing Tuvok in convulsions, Kes delivers a terrified shriek several octaves higher that any human woman could.
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* ScreamingWoman: On seeing Tuvok in convulsions, Kes delivers a terrified shriek several octaves higher that any human woman could.shriek.
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* SwordOverHead: Janeway holds back from killing the defenceless Suspira, in order to show they're not the killers she thinks they are.
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* SwordOverHead: Janeway holds StatusQuoIsGod: In the end, the ship is right back from killing the defenceless Suspira, in order to show they're not the killers she thinks square one, and Kes's psychic abilities have returned more or less to where they are.started.
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: YouLeaveHimAlone: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.
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Kes, exploring her abilities, gets frustrated with how slowly Tuvok is forcing her to take it. When some of her own kind arrive and begin to train her, speaking of the possibility of her ascending, Kes enjoys it and begins to consider leaving ''Voyager'' with them. But are these fellows as friendly as they seem?
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The ship arrives at a space station that looks very similar to the Caretaker's array, though much smaller. Kim notes that the station is filled with Ocampa. But as the ship draws closer, they're fired upon. The station's commander, Tanis, orders the ship to go away, but Janeway introduces him to Kes, a fellow Ocampa, and Tanis agrees to meet with them on ''Voyager.'' Onboard, Tanis tells Janeway that ''Voyager'' has developed a reputation as a "ship of death," and that they're believed to have killed the Caretaker. Janeway denies all of this. He also reveals that his people's caretaker, Suspiria, has helped them evolve, increasing their lifespan and psychic abilities. He invites Kes to join them, and Janeway urgers her to think it over. After Tanis returns to his station, however, he telepathically promises to deliver ''Voyager'' to Suspiria.
Tanis agrees to take ''Voyager'' to Suspiria's location. On the way, he teaches Kes how to move objects and raise their temperatures with
Suspiria arrives on the ship looking like a little girl, and it turns out that she's on a mission to avenge her mate. She starts to destabilize the ship. Kes figures out what's happening and fights Tanis off using her new psychic powers. The captain uses Tuvok's anti-sporocystian weapon to stun Suspiria and lock her behind a forcefield. However, to Suspiria's surprise, Janeway grants mercy to her and Tanis, allowing them to leave unharmed. However, Janeway vows to seek out Suspiria in the future and convince her to take the ship home. With Tanis gone, Kes's psychic abilities have greatly diminished, and she returns to Tuvok for training. She regrets the dark impulses that made her lose control of her abilities. Tuvok assures her that everyone has these impulses, and Kes simply needs to learn to control them.
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* EasilyForgiven: Rather than castigate Kes for nearly getting him killed, Tuvok advises her to treat the incident as a learning experience and remains committed to instructing her.
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* {{Cult}}: Although the episode doesn't get into it explicitly, the way Tanis describes life on Suspiria's station has all the hallmarks of a cult. He promises Kes that she can unlock her latent potential and live longer. He gives her an intense sensory experience and entices her to destroy something she loves, while trying to isolate her from her friends by telling her that she's better than them. And sufficiently advanced Ocampa get to go to "Exosia" where they experience communion with Suspiria in thought and energy.
* EasilyForgiven: Rather than castigate Kes for nearly getting him killed, Tuvok advises her to treat the incident as a learning experience and remains committed to instructingher.her because the incident certainly demonstrates that she needs to practice her control. He even forestalls her apology by saying that guilt is not a particularly useful emotion.
* EasilyForgiven: Rather than castigate Kes for nearly getting him killed, Tuvok advises her to treat the incident as a learning experience and remains committed to instructing
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* FailureIsTheOnlyOption
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* FailureIsTheOnlyOptionFailureIsTheOnlyOption: It's only season 2, which means the crew is not going to succeed in persuading Suspiria to yeet them back to the Alpha Quadrant.
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* RevengeMyopia: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' [[VengefulWidow killed her mate]], and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* RevengeMyopia: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' [[VengefulWidow [[CrusadingWidow killed her mate]], and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* OhCrap: Kes is initially happy to sense Suspiria, but is then horrified to sense her malevolence.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampa can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence. Kes will do this in "The Gift". Unfortunately the episode also serves as foreshadowing for Kes' DarkSide in "Fury".
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* PragmaticHero: A minor but important example; Tuvok notes that the Caretaker was a powerful entity who could have easily done them great harm if he'd been so inclined, and so is given permission to study the Caretaker's remains and devise a weapon that could be used against Suspiria if she proves to be hostile.
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* The47Society: Tanis says Suspiria will make contact with Voyager in 47 hours.
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* AbortedArc: Suspira never appears again after this episode, ending any involvement by the Caretaker and his species in ''Voyager's'' efforts to get home.
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* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: Tanis urges Kes to abandon the crew to whatever fate Suspira has in mind for them. He doesn't know Kes very well.
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper: Tanis is only interested in Kes, and even though the crew's behaviour doesn't match their "ship of death" reputation, has no interest in the possibility that Suspira might be wrong in judging them guilty of killing the Caretaker.
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper: Tanis is only interested in Kes, and even though the crew's behaviour doesn't match their "ship of death" reputation, has no interest in the possibility that Suspira might be wrong in judging them guilty of killing the Caretaker.
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* TheyWereHoldingYouBack: Tanis urges Kes to abandon the crew to whatever fate Suspira Suspiria has in mind for them. He doesn't know Kes very well.
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper: Tanis is only interested in Kes, and even though the crew'sbehaviour behavior doesn't match their "ship of death" reputation, has no interest in the possibility that Suspira Suspiria might be wrong in judging them guilty of killing the Caretaker.
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper: Tanis is only interested in Kes, and even though the crew's
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to interrupt Suspira long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian [[BuffySpeak gun-thingy]].
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to interrupt Suspira Suspiria long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian [[BuffySpeak gun-thingy]].
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* PstandardPsychicPstance: Tanis making contact with Suspira.
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* PstandardPsychicPstance: Tanis making contact with Suspira.Suspiria.
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees Tuvok and B'Elanna [[CeilingCorpse suspended above her head]].
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira Suspiria when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees Tuvok and B'Elanna [[CeilingCorpse suspended above her head]].
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* InnocentFlowerGirl: Inverted when Kes burns up all her flowers...and likes it.
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* InnocentFlowerGirl: Inverted when Kes burns up all her flowers... and likes it.
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* The47Society: Tanis says Suspira will make contact with Voyager in 47 hours.
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* The47Society: Tanis says Suspira Suspiria will make contact with Voyager in 47 hours.
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* TheyWereHoldingYouBack
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* TheyWereHoldingYouBackTheyWereHoldingYouBack: Tanis urges Kes to abandon the crew to whatever fate Suspira has in mind for them. He doesn't know Kes very well.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when ''Voyager'' appears people fear destruction.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when ''Voyager'' appears [[WalkingDisasterArea people fear destruction.destruction]].
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees Tuvok and B'Elanna suspended above her head.
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees Tuvok and B'Elanna [[CeilingCorpse suspended above her head.head]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Rather than castigate Kes for nearly getting him killed, Tuvok advises her to treat the incident as a learning experience and remains committed to instructing her.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when Voyager appears people fear destruction. Your ship is known as a [[DoomMagnet ship of death]].
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when Voyager ''Voyager'' appears people fear destruction. destruction.
-->'''Other Ocampan:''' Your ship is known as a [[DoomMagnet ship of death]].
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-->'''Chakotay:''' None of that is true. We've never attacked anyone except in self-defense.
-->'''Tuvok:''' And we did not kill the Caretaker. He died of natural causes.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That [[GenreSavvy when Voyager appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a [[OmnicidalManiac ship of death]].
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That [[GenreSavvy when Voyager appears people fear destruction]]. destruction. Your ship is known as a [[OmnicidalManiac [[DoomMagnet ship of death]].
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* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtest of the Preservers.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtest courtesy of the Preservers.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Chakotay asks Kes if any Ocampans were taken away by aliens. [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries It's happened to humans often enough, courtest of the Preservers.]]
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.
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* [[YouLookFamiliar You (Will) Look Familiar]]: Gary Graham (playing Tanis) will reappear as Ambassador Soval in ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise''.
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* [[YouLookFamiliar [[YouLeaveHimAlone You (Will) Look Familiar]]: Gary Graham (playing Tanis) will reappear as Ambassador Soval in ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise''.Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when Voyager appears people fear destruction. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
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-->'''Tanis:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That [[GenreSavvy when Voyager appears people fear destruction. destruction]]. Your ship is known as a [[OmnicidalManiac ship of death.death]].
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-->'''Tanis:''' You've established quite a reputation. You killed the Caretaker, declared war on the Kazon, raided planets for their resources...
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-->'''Tanis:''' You've established quite a reputation. You [[KillTheGod killed the Caretaker, Caretaker]], [[AlwaysABiggerFish declared war on the Kazon, Kazon]], [[PlanetLooters raided planets for their resources...]]
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-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? That when Voyager appears people fear destruction. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' ''(incredulous)'' What?
-->'''TANIS:''' You've established quite a reputation. You killed the Caretaker, declared war on the Kazon, raided planets for their resources...
-->'''JANEWAY:''' ''(incredulous)'' What?
-->'''TANIS:''' You've established quite a reputation. You killed the Caretaker, declared war on the Kazon, raided planets for their resources...
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-->'''TANIS:''' What would an Ocampa be doing on an alien starship?
-->'''KES:''' It's a long story. But I'd like to know what an Ocampa is doing on an alien space station.
-->'''TANIS:''' That is also a long story.
-->'''KES:''' It's a long story. But I'd like to know what an Ocampa is doing on an alien space station.
-->'''TANIS:''' That is also a long story.
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-->'''TORRES:''' We've placed the remains in a hexiprismatic field, Captain. The next time it responds to sporocystian energy, the field should give us a heading to the source.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' You're using the remains like a compass.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' You're using the remains like a compass.
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-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when Voyager appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
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-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when Voyager appears people fear destruction]].destruction. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
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* {{Revenge}} [=\=] VengefulWidow: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* {{Revenge}} [=\=] VengefulWidow: RevengeMyopia: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' [[VengefulWidow killed her mate, mate]], and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees a blood-dripping Tuvok and B'Elanna suspended above her head.
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* RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees a blood-dripping Tuvok and B'Elanna suspended above her head.
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* {{Revenge}}: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* {{Revenge}}: {{Revenge}} [=\=] VengefulWidow: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway telling her otherwise.
