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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampa can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence. Kes will do this in "The Gift". Unfortunately the episode also serves as foreshadowing for when TheBusCameBack in "Fury".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampa can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence. Kes will do this in "The Gift". Unfortunately the episode also serves as foreshadowing for when TheBusCameBack Kes' DarkSide in "Fury".
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* CreepyChild: Suspiria appears in the form of a crying human girl, but quickly turns nasty.
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* CreepyChild: Suspiria appears in the form of a crying weeping human girl, girl-child, but quickly turns nasty.
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* SwordOverHead: Janeway holds back from killing the defenceless Suspira, in order to show they're not the killers she thinks they are.
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* SpaceStation: A smaller Array
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* SpaceStation: A smaller ArrayArray houses the Ocampa colony.
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* {{Revenge}}: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway's denial.
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* {{Revenge}}: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway's denial.Janeway telling her otherwise.
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* {{Revenge}}: Suspira believes that ''Voyager'' killed her mate, and isn't interested in listening to Janeway's denial.
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* ChekhovsGun: The remains of the Caretaker.
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* ChekhovsGun: The remains of the Caretaker.
Caretaker that the crew retrieved in the pilot episode.
* CreepyChild:SuspiriaSuspiria appears in the form of a crying human girl, but quickly turns nasty.
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RainOfBlood: Janeway is trying to communicate with Suspira when she feels blood drip onto her shoulder. She looks up and sees a blood-dripping Tuvok and B'Elanna suspended above her head.
*ScreamingWomanScreamingWoman: On seeing Tuvok in convulsions, Kes delivers a terrified shriek several octaves higher that any human woman could.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonSuperWhatMeasureIsANonSuper: Tanis is only interested in Kes, and even though the crew's behaviour doesn't match their "ship of death" reputation, has no interest in the possibility that Suspira might be wrong in judging them guilty of killing the Caretaker.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampan can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampan Ocampa can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence. Kes will do this in "The Gift". Unfortunately the episode also serves as foreshadowing for when TheBusCameBack in "Fury".
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-->'''TANIS:''' What would an Ocampa be doing on an alien starship?
-->'''KES:''' It's a long story. But I'd like to know what an Ocampa is doing on an alien space station.
-->'''TANIS:''' That is also a long story.
-->'''KES:''' It's a long story. But I'd like to know what an Ocampa is doing on an alien space station.
-->'''TANIS:''' That is also a long story.
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-->'''JANEWAY:''' ''(incredulous)''' ''(incredulous)'' What?
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-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when ''Voyager'' appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
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-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when ''Voyager'' Voyager appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity[[HeroWithBadPublicity Heroes With Bad Publicity]]: A later episode reveals that the Kazon have been damaging ''Voyager'''s reputation to prevent them gaining allies.
-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when ''Voyager'' appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' ''(incredulous)''' What?
-->'''TANIS:''' You've established quite a reputation. You killed the Caretaker, declared war on the Kazon, raided planets for their resources...
-->'''TANIS:''' Captain, are you aware of how your ship is regarded? [[GenreSavvy That when ''Voyager'' appears people fear destruction]]. Your ship is known as a ship of death.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' ''(incredulous)''' What?
-->'''TANIS:''' You've established quite a reputation. You killed the Caretaker, declared war on the Kazon, raided planets for their resources...
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* Foreshadowing: Tanis says the Ocampan can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Tanis says the Ocampan can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence.AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence.
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BloodFromEveryOrifice: Tanis when [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes starts getting pissed off]].
*BookEndsBookEnds: The episode starts and ends with Tuvok instructing Kes.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to throw a spanner in Suspira's works long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian gun-thingy.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Tanis gives Kes the powers needed to throw a spanner in Suspira's works interrupt Suspira long enough for Janeway to grab the anti-sporocystian gun-thingy.[[BuffySpeak gun-thingy]].
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* HeyitsthatGuy: Gary Graham (playing Tanis) will reappear as Ambassador Soval in ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise''.
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* [[YouLookFamiliar You (Will) Look Familiar]]: Gary Graham (playing Tanis) will reappear as Ambassador Soval in ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise''.
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* AttackHello: The Array greets our heroes by shooting at Voyager.
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* Foreshadowing: Tanis says the Ocampan can AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence.
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* The47Society: Tanis says Suspira will make contact with Voyager in 47 hours.
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* RainOfBlood
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* InnocentFlowerGirl: Inverted when Kes burns up all her flowers...and likes it.
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* GenreSavvy: Tuvok prepares an anti-Suspira weapon "just in case".
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-->'''TORRES:''' We've placed the remains in a hexiprismatic field, Captain. The next time it responds to sporocystian energy, the field should give us a heading to the source.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' You're using the remains like a compass.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' You're using the remains like a compass.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never see Suspiria again.again.
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.dangerous.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never see Suspiria again.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never see Suspiria again.
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes Kes to get dangerous.
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* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes Kes [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend Kes]] to get dangerous.
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* PowerIncontinence: Kes suffers a [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] instance of this when she accidentally starts boiling Tuvok's blood while trying to push her abilities.
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Kes, exploring her abilities, gets frustrated with how slowly Tuvok is forcing her to take it. When some of her own kind arrive and begin to train her, speaking of the possibility of her ascending, Kes enjoys it and begins to consider leaving ''Voyager'' with them. But are these fellows as friendly as they seem?
!!This episode contains examples of the following tropes:
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kes.
* EvilFeelsGood: Kes receives a taste of this when her new mentor shows her new heights of her power and she ends up burning all the plants in the hydrobay. She confesses later to Tuvok that this power felt good, even though she knew there was something bad about it.
* PowerIncontinence: Kes suffers a [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] instance of this when she accidentally starts boiling Tuvok's blood while trying to push her abilities.
* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes Kes to get dangerous.
!!This episode contains examples of the following tropes:
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kes.
* EvilFeelsGood: Kes receives a taste of this when her new mentor shows her new heights of her power and she ends up burning all the plants in the hydrobay. She confesses later to Tuvok that this power felt good, even though she knew there was something bad about it.
* PowerIncontinence: Kes suffers a [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] instance of this when she accidentally starts boiling Tuvok's blood while trying to push her abilities.
* [[YouLeaveHimAlone You Leave Her Alone]]: Neelix yells this when Kes' new mentor is pushing the distressed girl to come with them and not worry about the fate of the crew. It doesn't work, but seeing him thrown backwards causes Kes to get dangerous.
