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Why single out the women? The men are just as scantily clad, and there are slightly more of them seen.
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* VaporWear: Apparently a common form of traditional dress on Edo. If those Edo women were wearing any less fabric, there would be no need to bother with fabric at all. (A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever, and they're all running on hard-surfaced pathways. )
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* VaporWear: Apparently a common form of traditional dress on Edo. Edo, for both men and women. If those Edo women they were wearing any less fabric, there would be no need to bother with fabric at all. (A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever, and they're all running on hard-surfaced pathways. )
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* AdultFear: Dr. Crusher's son is sentenced to death by a foreign government because he broke a law that he was not informed about.
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* IllFatedFlowerbed: Tripping and falling into one of these gets Wesley the death penalty.
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* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Edo "god" is an inter-dimensional ship that appears translucently in orbit near the ''Enterprise''. When they scan Data's mind he picks up that they used to be flesh-and-blood creatures in the distant past, but have evolved beyond such forms.
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* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Edo "god" is an inter-dimensional ship that appears translucently in orbit near the ''Enterprise''. When they scan Data's mind he picks up that they used to be flesh-and-blood creatures in the distant past, but have evolved beyond such forms. Data practically quotes the principle while discussing the Edo "god" with Picard.
-->'''Picard:''' Did you learn anything about the relationship between that and the Edo? Why are they so certain it's a god?\\
'''Data:''' Any sufficiently advanced life-form would appear to others to be that, sir.
-->'''Picard:''' Did you learn anything about the relationship between that and the Edo? Why are they so certain it's a god?\\
'''Data:''' Any sufficiently advanced life-form would appear to others to be that, sir.
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'''Original air date:''' November 10, 1987
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* ArrestedOnArrival: It would have been a pretty dull episode if nothing had happened.
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** She appears to have done no due diligence whatsoever. She apparently learns that there is no crime while having cocktails with the natives, even calling Worf over to hear about it.
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** She appears to have done no due diligence whatsoever. She apparently learns that there is no crime while having cocktails with the natives, even excitedly calling Worf over to hear about it.
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** She appears to have done no due diligence whatsoever. She apparently learns that there is no crime while having cocktails with the natives, even calling Worf over to hear about it.
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** It's also unlikely he could have attended Starfleet Academy yet never heard of the Roman Empire.
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** It's also unlikely he could have had attended Starfleet Academy yet never hear of the Roman Empire.
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* ArrestedOnArrival ArrestedOnArrival: It would have been a pretty dull episode if nothing had happened.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: This is how Picard [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talkes the monster to death]].
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: This is how Picard [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talkes talks the monster to death]].
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* ArrestedOnArrival It would have been a pretty dull episode if nothing had happened.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: This is how Picard [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath takes the monster to death]].
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: This is how Picard [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath takes talkes the monster to death]].
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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Discussed. When Picard observes that violating the Prime Directive to save Wesley may result in the Edo "god" punishing the entire crew, Data asks whether Picard would choose one life over one thousand. Picard refuses to let arithmetic decide the issue. (Later, when Wesley himself learns of this possibility, it's implied that he wouldn't be willing to risk the crew's lives for his sake.)
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* PapaWolf: The entity flies into a ''rage'' simply by seeing it's "child" on the ship, demanding they "release" her, even though she came willingly. (Picard wisely does what it says.)
* PatrickStewartSpeech: See TalkingTheMonsterToDeath.
* PatrickStewartSpeech: See TalkingTheMonsterToDeath.
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* PapaWolf: The entity flies into a ''rage'' simply by seeing it's its "child" on the ship, demanding they "release" her, even though she came willingly. (Picard wisely does what it says.)
* PatrickStewartSpeech:See TalkingTheMonsterToDeath.This is how Picard [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath takes the monster to death]].
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* PleasurePlanet: Rubicun [=III=] is a world's where the population wear barely any clothes and spend most of their time having sex.
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* AdultFear: Dr. Crusher's son is sentenced to death by a foreign government because he broke a law he didn't know about.
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** When Worf hears "When in Rome" from Riker, he has no idea what Rome is. It's later revealed that Worf was partially raised on Earth by human parents.
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** When Worf hears "When in Rome" from Riker, he has no idea what Rome is. is unfamiliar with both the saying and [[UsefulNotes/{{Rome}} the city itself]]. It's later revealed that Worf was partially raised on Earth by human foster parents.
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** When Worf hears "When in Rome" from Riker, he has no idea what Rome is. It's later revealed that Worf was raised on Earth by human parents.
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** When Worf hears "When in Rome" from Riker, he has no idea what Rome is. It's later revealed that Worf was partially raised on Earth by human parents.
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* PlentyOfBlondes: Every one of the Edo is blonde. Also toned, waxed and bronzed to perfection. It's an Aryan dream come true!
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* PlentyOfBlondes: Every one of the Edo is blonde. Also toned, waxed and bronzed to perfection. It's an Aryan dream come true!
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* BrokenGlassPenalty: On this planet, it's ''[[DisproportionateRetribution death]]''.
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* DoesntLikeShoes: The Edo. As if their apparel wasn't already minimal enough.
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* OhCrap: Wesley's friends when he falls into the flower bed, and when the mediators show up.
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* VaporWear: Apparently a common form of traditional dress on Edo. If those Edo women were wearing any less fabric, there would be no need to bother with fabric at all. (A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever. )
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* VaporWear: Apparently a common form of traditional dress on Edo. If those Edo women were wearing any less fabric, there would be no need to bother with fabric at all. (A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever.whatsoever, and they're all running on hard-surfaced pathways. )
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* HumanAliens: The Edo look completely human, as far as physical appearance goes; in fact, they might actually be more so than most examples on the show.
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* EldritchAbomination: The "god" the Edo worship is this an EnergyBeing. Unlike most, it can be reasoned with, though it takes effort.
* FalseUtopia: Edo is a paradise for the natives, and seems that way to visitors, but it can be downright dangerous for any not familiar with its customs.
* FalseUtopia: Edo is a paradise for the natives, and seems that way to visitors, but it can be downright dangerous for any not familiar with its customs.
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** A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever.
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* VaporWear: Apparently a common form of traditional dress on Edo. If those Edo women were wearing any less fabric, there would be no need to bother with fabric at all.
** Aall. (A bit of Fridge, especially for older and athletic viewers: those slippers they're wearing have no support whatsoever. )
** A
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* PapaWolf: The entity flies into a ''rage'' simply by seeing it's "child" on the ship, demanding they "release" her, even though she came willingly. (Picard wisely does what it says.)
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* {{Stripperific}}: Every resident of Edo, both male and female, fit the Trope.
