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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to hell when Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and the Federation. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to hell when High Teer Akaar is killed by his pro-Klingon rival Maab, and Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against other men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and the Federation. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: "I'm a doctor, not an escalator!"
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: When [=McCoy=] is trying to help Eleen climb up the rocks and hampered by her refusal to let anyone but him touch her. "I'm a doctor, not an escalator!"
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* ValuesDissonance: [=McCoy=] being nothing but impatient and aggressive when Elaan refuses to let him touch her, and actually striking her, looks extremely questionable by later standards of cultural sensitivity and consent in medicine.
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* ValuesDissonance: [=McCoy=] being nothing but impatient and aggressive when Elaan refuses to let him touch her, and actually striking her, looks extremely questionable by later standards of cultural sensitivity and consent in medicine.
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[[caption-width-right:350:♪ ''[[Advertising/DumbWaysToDie Dumb ways to die, so many dumb ways to die.]]'' ♪[[note]] To put this into context, this RedShirt attempted to attack a Klingon for no good reason other than instinctive reflex that he was a Klingon.[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:♪ ''[[Advertising/DumbWaysToDie Dumb ways to die, so many dumb ways to die.]]'' ♪[[note]] To put this into context, this RedShirt attempted to attack a Klingon for no good reason other than instinctive reflex that he was a Klingon.an enemy.[[/note]]]]
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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to hell when Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and co. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to hell when Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and co.the Federation. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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* LampshadeHanging: At the end of the episode Spock mentions the potential complications if the Capellans ever realize Eleen's son is technically Bones', not Akaar's, by their cultural rules. When Scotty asks how that could possibly be true Kirk admits they have no idea.
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* LampshadeHanging: At the end of the episode episode, Spock mentions the potential complications if the Capellans ever realize Eleen's son is technically Bones', not Akaar's, by their cultural rules. When Scotty asks how that could possibly be true true, Kirk admits they have no idea.
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* PregnantBadass: Eleen has her moments. She's able to go rock climbing while in labor and Bones is more tired than she is after the delivery.
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* PregnantBadass: Eleen has her moments. She's able to go rock climbing while in labor labor, and Bones is more tired than she is after the delivery.
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** Kras paints the Klingons this way, and utterly fails to live up to that description himself.
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** Kras paints the Klingons this way, and but utterly fails to live up to that description himself.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset about it Spock actually points this out, but [[AFatherToHisMen Kirk continues to defend Grant]] as having been a young, inexperienced security officer and reacting instinctively to protect them upon seeing an enemy of the Federation, and blames himself instead.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset about it it, Spock actually points this out, but [[AFatherToHisMen Kirk continues to defend Grant]] as having been a young, inexperienced security officer and reacting instinctively to protect them upon seeing an enemy of the Federation, and blames himself instead.
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"oochie-woochie-koochie-koo" Is what he says
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* BabyTalk: Bones makes some "oochi-boochie-goochie!" noises for little Leonard James. [[TheComicallySerious Spock]] is completely mystified.
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* BabyTalk: Bones makes some "oochi-boochie-goochie!" "oochie-woochie-koochie-koo" noises for little Leonard James. [[TheComicallySerious Spock]] is completely mystified.
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* ImperiledInPregnancy: A usurper named Ma'ab [[KlingonPromotion kills Aka'ar]], the Teer (tribal king), in a successful coup. (Kirk wisely takes this in stride, saying only "If you lead these people now, be sure you make the right decisions.") He then demands Aka'ar's pregnant wife Eleen and her unborn son killed, as the unborn son is Aka'ar's heir of succession, and Kirk, Spock and [=McCoy=] have to go on the run with Eleen to keep her safe.
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* ImperiledInPregnancy: A usurper named Ma'ab [[KlingonPromotion kills Aka'ar]], the Teer (tribal king), in a successful coup. (Kirk wisely takes this in stride, saying only "If you lead these people now, be sure you make the right decisions.") He then demands Aka'ar's pregnant wife Eleen and her unborn son be killed, as the unborn son is Aka'ar's heir of succession, and Kirk, Spock and [=McCoy=] have to go on the run with Eleen to keep her safe.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset about it Spock actually points this out, but [[AFatherToHisMen Kirk continues to defend Grant]] as having been a young inexperienced security officer and reacting instinctively to protect them upon seeing an enemy of the Federation, and blames himself instead.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset about it Spock actually points this out, but [[AFatherToHisMen Kirk continues to defend Grant]] as having been a young young, inexperienced security officer and reacting instinctively to protect them upon seeing an enemy of the Federation, and blames himself instead.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset at them about it Spock actually points this out.
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* TooDumbToLive: The episode's redshirt draws on the unarmed Kras while the latter is under the Capellans' protection. When Kirk gets upset at them about it Spock actually points this out.out, but [[AFatherToHisMen Kirk continues to defend Grant]] as having been a young inexperienced security officer and reacting instinctively to protect them upon seeing an enemy of the Federation, and blames himself instead.
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* DirtyCoward: Kras is nothing without Ma'ab's men backing him up, is terrified of fighting Kirk (it shows on his face, which Ma'ab immediately notices), and is only a threat when he gets his hands on a phaser (which Ma'ab wisely tried to keep from him).
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* TheChainsOfCommanding: Ma'ab feels this the very moment his coup is successful. Kirk reasonably points out that if he's the leader, ''he needs to make certain he's making the right decisions'' because there are real consequences for his people if he doesn't. Ma'ab gets an extremely thoughtful look on his face, begins to transition into a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, shows respect for Kirk as WorthyOpponent, and is clearly disgusted with the Klingon's naked fear after Kirk suggests the two of them fight.
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* AfraidToHoldTheBaby: Spock finds himself awkwardly holding Elaan's baby. Dr. [=McCoy=] tries showing him how to hold the infant properly; Spock responds by saying "I would rather not" and handing him off.
* AllThereInTheScript: Kras' name only appears in the credits and is never spoken in the episode; he's always referred to as "the Klingon" and addressed as "Klingon".
* AllThereInTheScript: Kras' name only appears in the credits and is never spoken in the episode; he's always referred to as "the Klingon" and addressed as "Klingon".
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* AfraidToHoldTheBaby: Spock finds himself awkwardly holding Elaan's Eleen's baby. Dr. [=McCoy=] tries showing him how to hold the infant properly; Spock responds by saying "I would rather not" and handing him off.
* AllThereInTheScript:Kras' Kras's name only appears in the credits and is never spoken in the episode; he's always referred to as "the Klingon" and addressed as "Klingon".
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** The remastered version screws up Kras' crew in this regard. His ship backs down from a fight with the ''Enterprise'', which might be understandable as it was originally shown to be a small scout, as Kras himself tells Kirk. The remastered version, however, changes it to a D-7 battlecruiser (making Kras a liar), which should be a match for the ''Enterprise''.
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** The remastered version screws up Kras' Kras's crew in this regard. His ship backs down from a fight with the ''Enterprise'', which might be understandable as it was originally shown to be a small scout, as Kras himself tells Kirk. The remastered version, however, changes it to a D-7 battlecruiser (making Kras a liar), which should be a match for the ''Enterprise''.
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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to Hell when Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and co. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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After viewing some footage and receiving a briefing on the people of Capella IV from Dr. [=McCoy=], who was on the FirstContact team, Kirk, Spock, Bones and a {{Redshirt}} with the shortest career ever beam down to negotiate with the locals. It seems the Klingons have gotten there first and the Capellans seem to have more of a rapport with them than they could ever have with Starfleet. Bones has been well versed in Capellan etiquette, but things still manage to go to Hell hell when Kirk saves High Teer Akaar's extremely pregnant wife from being murdered. (There is a strict taboo against men touching the wife of a Teer.) Kras the Klingon capitalizes on this, turning the rest of the Capellans against Kirk and co. Meanwhile, a Klingon ship is playing a Cat-And-Mouse game with the ''Enterprise''.
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* WontGetFooledAgain: After Scotty realizes that the first distress call is a ruse and orders the ship back to Capella IV, a second distress call comes in. Scotty ignores it and orders the incident entered on the log as "my order, my responsibility". Fortunately, he's right.
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* AfraidToHoldTheBaby: Spock finds himself awkwardly holding Elaan's baby. Dr. [=McCoy=] tries showing him how to hold the infant properly; Spock responds by saying "I would rather not" and handing him off.