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"The 'La Sirena'" is wrong. "Rio Grande River".
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The crew of the ''La Sirena'' defeat their captors in a brief fight, but Elnor is wounded. While Raffi gets him to Sickbay, Jurati finishes plugging in the Borg Queen, and ''La Sirena'' makes the time-travel slingshot jump.
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The crew of the ''La Sirena'' defeat their captors in a brief fight, but Elnor is wounded. While Raffi gets him to Sickbay, Jurati finishes plugging in the Borg Queen, and ''La Sirena'' makes the time-travel slingshot jump.
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Hero Ball and Idiot Ball too negative: Character didn't do something 'for no reason,' he was trying to get to the commbadge.
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* HeroBall: Rios deciding for no reason to try and 'save' the doctor from the immigration raid. All it does is get them both arrested.
* IdiotBall: After Rios has had his most pressing medical issues fixed to the point where he can get up and start walking again, he finds his missing communicator and instead of getting it from the kid and leaving, he sticks around to banter with the kid, eat some cookies and fails to get it back. Then the immigration raid happens and he starts juggling the Idiot Ball and the Hero Ball by sticking around and getting arrested, which is something Jurati explicitly told him not to do, and which he specifically said he wouldn't.
* IdiotBall: After Rios has had his most pressing medical issues fixed to the point where he can get up and start walking again, he finds his missing communicator and instead of getting it from the kid and leaving, he sticks around to banter with the kid, eat some cookies and fails to get it back. Then the immigration raid happens and he starts juggling the Idiot Ball and the Hero Ball by sticking around and getting arrested, which is something Jurati explicitly told him not to do, and which he specifically said he wouldn't.
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* HeroBall: Rios deciding for no reason poses as a doctor, perhaps intending to try bluff his way into the office where his badge is. Instead of slipping in and out quietly, he tries to 'save' the doctor from the immigration raid.raid via BavarianFireDrill. All it does is get them both arrested.
* IdiotBall: After Rios has had his most pressing medical issues fixed to the point where he can get up and start walking again, he finds his missing communicator and instead of getting it from the kid and leaving, he sticks around to banter with the kid, eat some cookies and fails to get it back. Then the immigration raid happens and he starts juggling the Idiot Ball and the Hero Ball by sticking around and getting arrested, which is something Jurati explicitly told him not to do, and which he specifically said he wouldn't. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that he's suffering from a concussion the whole time.
* IdiotBall: After Rios has had his most pressing medical issues fixed to the point where he can get up and start walking again, he finds his missing communicator and instead of getting it from the kid and leaving, he sticks around to banter with the kid, eat some cookies and fails to get it back. Then the immigration raid happens and he starts juggling the Idiot Ball and the Hero Ball by sticking around and getting arrested, which is something Jurati explicitly told him not to do, and which he specifically said he wouldn't. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that he's suffering from a concussion the whole time.
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* LongRunnerTechMarchesOn: Compared to the {{Zeerust}} of [=DS9=]'s "Past Tense", 2024 is depicted as identical to 2022 where technology is concerned.
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* LongRunnerTechMarchesOn: Compared to the {{Zeerust}} of [=DS9=]'s "Past Tense", Tense," 2024 is depicted as identical to 2022 where technology is concerned.
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** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust". Picard rebuffs the accusation; Q is the one playing games, and Picard has no say in the matter.
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** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust". "joust." Picard rebuffs the accusation; Q is the one playing games, and Picard has no say in the matter.
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** Rios, due to a transporter malfunction, falls about a storey off a fire escape. With the pop song in the soundtrack, seems like it's just going to be some {{slapstick}} humor, right? Nope! Rios actually gets a concussion from hitting his head and a busted hand.
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** Rios, due to a transporter malfunction, falls about a storey story off a fire escape. With the pop song in the soundtrack, seems like it's just going to be some {{slapstick}} humor, right? Nope! Rios actually gets a concussion from hitting his head and a busted hand.
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* TeleporterAccident: The transporters have just enough power for a one-way trip with reduced accuracy. This scatters Seven, Raffi, and Rios in different locations a few blocks away from the target, with the added wrinkle that Rios is beamed one storey off the ground and ends up in the hospital after gravity kicks in.
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* TeleporterAccident: The transporters have just enough power for a one-way trip with reduced accuracy. This scatters Seven, Raffi, and Rios in different locations a few blocks away from the target, with the added wrinkle that Rios is beamed one storey story off the ground and ends up in the hospital after gravity kicks in.
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Rios, Seven and Raffi, alternating between TranquilFury and UnstoppableRage over the death of her [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]], transport to Los Angeles where Raffi intends to scan for refugees on the planet who are operating at a higher TechnologyLevel than they should be. Jurati warns them to stay off the grid and avoid the authorities -- which Rios is unable to prevent, because the transporter accidentally dumps him out 20 feet in the air. An Angeleno finds him on the sidewalk with no wallet, keys, smartphone or ID, and therefore takes him to a local clinic which serves illegal immigrants.
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Rios, Seven and Raffi, alternating between TranquilFury and UnstoppableRage over the death of her [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]], transport to Los Angeles where Raffi intends to scan for refugees on the planet who are operating at a higher TechnologyLevel [[TechnologyLevels Technology Level]] than they should be. Jurati warns them to stay off the grid and avoid the authorities -- which Rios is unable to prevent, because the transporter accidentally dumps him out 20 feet in the air. An Angeleno finds him on the sidewalk with no wallet, keys, smartphone or ID, and therefore takes him to a local clinic which serves illegal immigrants.
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Teresa, the woman who runs the clinic, is alarmed when [[https://www.ice.gov/ ICE]] raid the place hoping to pick up illegal immigrants. Rios is about to get away when he notices his 24th-century Confederation combadge is still lying around. He comes back to help Teresa defend her innocence... but only ends up getting the two of them arrested.
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Teresa, the woman doctor who runs the clinic, is alarmed when [[https://www.ice.gov/ ICE]] raid the place hoping to pick up illegal immigrants. Rios is about to get away when he notices his 24th-century Confederation combadge is still lying around. He comes back to help Teresa defend her innocence... but only ends up getting the two of them arrested.
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The crew of the ''La Sirena'' take their captors in a brief fight, but Elnor is wounded. While Raffi gets him to Sickbay, Jurati finishes plugging in the Borg Queen, and ''La Sirena'' makes the time-travel slingshot jump.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena'' crashlands; and, with no power to the biobed, Elnor succumbs to his injuries.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena'' crashlands; and, with no power to the biobed, Elnor succumbs to his injuries.
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The crew of the ''La Sirena'' take defeat their captors in a brief fight, but Elnor is wounded. While Raffi gets him to Sickbay, Jurati finishes plugging in the Borg Queen, and ''La Sirena'' makes the time-travel slingshot jump.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena''crashlands; is sucked into Earth's gravity well and crash-lands; and, with no power to the biobed, Elnor succumbs to his injuries.
injuries.
Rios, Seven and Raffi, alternating between TranquilFury and UnstoppableRage over the death of her [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]], transport to Los Angeles where Raffi intends to scan for refugees on the planet who are operating at a higher TechnologyLevel than they should be. Jurati warns them to stay off the grid and avoid the authorities -- which Rios is unable to prevent, because the transporter accidentally dumps him out 20 feet in the air. An Angeleno finds him on the sidewalk with no wallet, keys, smartphone or ID, and therefore takes him to a local clinic which serves illegal immigrants.
Meanwhile, Jurati and Picard stay on the ship to try and repair the Borg Queen, as she's their only ticket back to their own time. This involves Jurati letting herself get semi-assimilated. Her non-conscious mind remains on ''La Sirena'' sassing Picard while her consciousness invades the Queen's memory banks; she succeeds at stealing the location of The Watcher from the Queen, impressing the latter.
Teresa, the woman who runs the clinic, is alarmed when [[https://www.ice.gov/ ICE]] raid the place hoping to pick up illegal immigrants. Rios is about to get away when he notices his 24th-century Confederation combadge is still lying around. He comes back to help Teresa defend her innocence... but only ends up getting the two of them arrested.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena''
Rios, Seven and Raffi, alternating between TranquilFury and UnstoppableRage over the death of her [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]], transport to Los Angeles where Raffi intends to scan for refugees on the planet who are operating at a higher TechnologyLevel than they should be. Jurati warns them to stay off the grid and avoid the authorities -- which Rios is unable to prevent, because the transporter accidentally dumps him out 20 feet in the air. An Angeleno finds him on the sidewalk with no wallet, keys, smartphone or ID, and therefore takes him to a local clinic which serves illegal immigrants.
Meanwhile, Jurati and Picard stay on the ship to try and repair the Borg Queen, as she's their only ticket back to their own time. This involves Jurati letting herself get semi-assimilated. Her non-conscious mind remains on ''La Sirena'' sassing Picard while her consciousness invades the Queen's memory banks; she succeeds at stealing the location of The Watcher from the Queen, impressing the latter.
Teresa, the woman who runs the clinic, is alarmed when [[https://www.ice.gov/ ICE]] raid the place hoping to pick up illegal immigrants. Rios is about to get away when he notices his 24th-century Confederation combadge is still lying around. He comes back to help Teresa defend her innocence... but only ends up getting the two of them arrested.
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The crew go back in time to try and fix the world they knew.
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The crew go back of the ''La Sirena'' take their captors in time a brief fight, but Elnor is wounded. While Raffi gets him to try Sickbay, Jurati finishes plugging in the Borg Queen, and fix ''La Sirena'' makes the world they knew.
time-travel slingshot jump.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena'' crashlands; and, with no power to the biobed, Elnor succumbs to his injuries.
The ship emerges in what seems to be the early 21st century -- sensors are too damaged to make a solid reading, and anyhow the Queen is draining the ship's power to recover her own reserves. ''La Sirena'' crashlands; and, with no power to the biobed, Elnor succumbs to his injuries.
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** Elnor dies from being shot by the Magistrate's forces last episode.
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** After the bio-bed loses power, Elnor dies from being shot by the Magistrate's forces last episode.
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* DeadpanSnarker: This must be a prerequisite for passing med school in the Trek universe. The clinic doctor snarks as hard as any we've ever met.
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* DeadpanSnarker: This must be a prerequisite for passing med school in the Trek ''Trek'' universe. The clinic doctor snarks as hard as any we've ever met.
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That's speculation. We don't know that this is why the reference was included.
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* ShoutOut: The doctor refuses to let her son watch ''WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty'' unless he behaves himself. It doubles as a nod to ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' creator Mike [=McMahan=], a former R&M writer.
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* ShoutOut: The doctor refuses to let her son watch ''WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty'' unless he behaves himself. It doubles as a nod to ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' creator Mike [=McMahan=], a former R&M writer.
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* HeroBall: Rios deciding for no reason to try and 'save' the doctor from the immigration raid. All it does is get him arrested.
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* HeroBall: Rios deciding for no reason to try and 'save' the doctor from the immigration raid. All it does is get him them both arrested.
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** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust".
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
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** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust".
"joust". Picard rebuffs the accusation; Q is the one playing games, and Picard has no say in the matter.
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique about hiding his emotions while she's hooked up to the Borgqueen, Queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.unfiltered. Picard just sits through it and Jurati quickly changes topics in response to the Queen's probing.
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique about hiding his emotions while she's hooked up to the Borg
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: ReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust".
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
** Raffi chews Picard out over his decades of "playing games" with Q, costing other people their lives while the two of them "joust".
** Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
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* TemptingFate: The crew is warned against ending up in hospitals or law enforcement facilities, as they might be subjected to scans or other examinations that would reveal the futuristic technology in their bodies that definitely shouldn't be available in 2024. Rios manages to run into both, though at least the hospital isn't his fault.
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* TemptingFate: The crew is warned against ending up in hospitals or law enforcement facilities, as they might be subjected to scans or other examinations that would reveal the futuristic technology in their bodies that definitely shouldn't be available in 2024. Rios manages to run into both, though at least the hospital isn't his fault. They're also warned not to lose any advanced tech; Rios naturally loses his comm badge.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Agnes gives Picard a devastating character critique while she's hooked up to the Borg queen, as the process lets her innermost thoughts out unfiltered.
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* DeadpanSnarker: This must be a prerequisite for passing med school in the Trek universe. The clinic doctor snarks as hard as any we've ever met.
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* TemptingFate: The crew is warned against ending up in hospitals or law enforcement facilities, as they might be subjected to scans or other examinations that would reveal the futuristic technology in their bodies that definitely shouldn't be available in 2024. Rios manages to run into both, though at least the hospital isn't his fault.
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* LongRunnerTechMarchesOn: Compared to the {{Zeerust}} of DS9's "Past Tense", 2024 is depicted as identical to 2022 where technology is concerned.
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* LongRunnerTechMarchesOn: Compared to the {{Zeerust}} of DS9's [=DS9=]'s "Past Tense", 2024 is depicted as identical to 2022 where technology is concerned.
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* LongRunnerTechMarchesOn: Compared to the {{Zeerust}} of DS9's "Past Tense", 2024 is depicted as identical to 2022 where technology is concerned.
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** When Rios is arrested by ICE, one of them asks for his UHC card. In [=DS9's=] "Past Tense," which is also set in 2024, Sisko and Bashir were asked for their UHC cards.
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** When Rios is arrested by ICE, one of them asks for his UHC card. In [=DS9's=] "Past Tense," "[[Recap/StarTrekDeepSpaceNineS03E11PastTensePartI Past Tense]]," which is also set in 2024, Sisko and Bashir were asked for their UHC cards.
