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Freeman is commiserating with Mariner in her ready room about their relationship being revealed, which neither of them wanted. When Ransom arrives to deliver his officer recommendations for promotion to the ''Sacramento'', both of them are frustrated by his sudden reflexive obseqiousness towards Mariner. Later, as she is walking the ship's corridors, the thinly-veiled stares and whispers from countless crew around her make it clear that her worst fears have come true: Beckett Mariner, Captain Freeman's daughter, is now on everyone's lips, either scared of her or looking to curry favor with her. Even Boimler, of all people, tries to get her to sign a letter of recommendation for him so he can get a promotion to the ''Sacramento''. This gives Mariner an idea. If ''she'' got the promotion to another ship, she would be a nobody again. So she rolls down her sleeves, straightens her posture, and affects her best ass-kissing persona before marching back to work.
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Freeman is commiserating with Mariner in her ready room about their relationship being revealed, which neither of them wanted. When Ransom arrives to deliver his officer recommendations for promotion to the ''Sacramento'', both of them are frustrated by his sudden reflexive obseqiousness obsequiousness towards Mariner. Later, as she is walking the ship's corridors, the thinly-veiled stares and whispers from countless crew around her make it clear that her worst fears have come true: Beckett Mariner, Captain Freeman's daughter, is now on everyone's lips, either scared of her or looking to curry favor with her. Even Boimler, of all people, tries to get her to sign a letter of recommendation for him so he can get a promotion to the ''Sacramento''. This gives Mariner an idea. If ''she'' got the promotion to another ship, she would be a nobody again. So she rolls down her sleeves, straightens her posture, and affects her best ass-kissing persona before marching back to work.
