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* MisterBig: The Gelrakian leader is shortest person among his species that we see onscreen.
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-->'''Ransom:''' The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
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-->'''Ransom:''' First officer's log, stardate 57501.4. The ''Cerritos'' is en route to Cardassia Prime for the most amazing reason. Captain Freeman is going to be instrumental in brokering peace between the -– uh, wait. Just… reading a little message here. Yada yada yada… oh. [[OhCrap Oh no.]] The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
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* AngryAnimalisticGrowl: Dr. T'Ana viciously hisses when she performs a flying kick against three Gelrakian soldiers.
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* EmergingFromTheShadows: The Gelrakian leader describes how Vindor would usually emerge from the shadows at the arena for maximum intimidation, but they'll skip that since he's present right now. Vindor still manages to pull it off.
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'''Ransom:''' You ''always'' speak freely! Nobody can ''prevent'' you from speaking freely!
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'''Ransom:''' You ''always'' speak freely! Nobody can ''prevent'' you ''stop you'' from speaking freely!
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* DavidVersusGoliath: Ransom is dwarfed by the humongous Vindor, but the former defeats the latter during the TrialByCombat.
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* FamousFamousFictional: inverted. Mariner's locations, as listed under "EveryScarHasAStory," have two foreign planets followed by the very real [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scottsdale,_Arizona Scottsdale, Arizona]].
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* FamousFamousFictional: inverted.Inverted. Mariner's locations, as listed under "EveryScarHasAStory," have two foreign planets followed by the very real [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scottsdale,_Arizona Scottsdale, Arizona]].
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** As she explains her various scars, Mariner shows off one she somehow got in Scottsdale, Arizona, which she describes as a "mess".
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** As she explains her various scars, Mariner shows off one she somehow got in Scottsdale, Arizona, which she describes as a "mess"."mess."
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Ransom has this reaction, mid CaptainsLog, when he sees that the ''Cerritos's'' high-profile diplomatic mission to Cardassia Prime has been cancelled.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Ransom has this reaction, mid CaptainsLog, mid-CaptainsLog, when he sees that the ''Cerritos's'' ''Cerritos'''s high-profile diplomatic mission to Cardassia Prime has been cancelled.
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Mariner rattles off the locations where she got her scars: Magus III, Nanibia Prime, and Scottsdale, Arizona. That last one was a mess, apparently.
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* NoodleIncident: In preparation for the away mission, Ransom lists some of his past incidents including horned gorillas, sentient tar and spores that make you sleep with your best friend's sister.
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** In preparation for the away mission, Ransom lists some of his past incidents including horned gorillas, sentient tar and spores that make you sleep with your best friend'ssister.sister.
** As she explains her various scars, Mariner shows off one she somehow got in Scottsdale, Arizona, which she describes as a "mess".
** In preparation for the away mission, Ransom lists some of his past incidents including horned gorillas, sentient tar and spores that make you sleep with your best friend's
** As she explains her various scars, Mariner shows off one she somehow got in Scottsdale, Arizona, which she describes as a "mess".
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* FamousFamousFictional: inverted. Mariner's locations, as listed under "EveryScarHasAStory," have two foreign planets followed by the very real [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scottsdale,_Arizona Scottsdale, Arizona]].
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Ransom has this reaction, mid CaptainsLog, when he sees that the ''Cerritos's'' high-profile diplomatic mission to Cardassia Prime has been cancelled.
-->'''Ransom:''' The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
-->'''Ransom:''' The captain is ''not'' gonna be happy about this.
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* YoureInsane: Mariner believes Ransom has lost his mind after he stabs her foot with the battle blade; injuring a fellow officer is a court-martial offense.
-->'''Mariner''': You are such a psycho! What are you doing?! Ow! Why?
-->'''Mariner''': You are such a psycho! What are you doing?! Ow! Why?
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* FanserviceExtra: The hunky guy with only a towel wrapped around his waist who was first seen in "Second Contact" reappears in the hallway where the ensigns sleep.
* ThemeTuneCameo: Boimler hums a couple bars of the theme tune while alone in a turbolift.
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* ThemeTuneCameo: Boimler hums a couple bars of the theme tune while alone in a turbolift.
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* TooImportantToWalk: The Gelrakian leader is carried by two servants.
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* TrashTalk: Oddly {{inverted}} -- beating up a giant alien with the lives of the away team on the line doesn't prevent Ransom from forgetting his Starfleet ideals.
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hitting Vendor)'' I respect your sovereignty!
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hitting Vendor)'' I respect your sovereignty!
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* TrashTalk: Oddly {{inverted}} -- beating up a giant alien with the lives of the away team on the line doesn't prevent mean Ransom from forgetting forgets his Starfleet ideals.
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hittingVendor)'' Vindor)'' I respect your sovereignty!
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hitting
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* TrashTalk: Oddly {{inverted}} -- beating up a giant alien with the lives of the away team on the line doesn't prevent Ransom from forgetting his Starfleet ideals.
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hitting Vendor)'' I respect your sovereignty!
-->'''Ransom:''' ''(while hitting Vendor)'' I respect your sovereignty!
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Shaxs tackles Boimler and realizes his mistake.
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Occurs after Shaxs tackles Boimler and realizes his mistake.
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* MeaningfulLook: After Boimler finishes playing "Essence", a Vulcan and a blue-skinned alien in attendance glance at each other with a quiet understanding that his violin composition wasn't great.
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-->'''Mariner''': See this bad boy? Tentacle guy, bunch of arms. Stabbed me with a barnacle blade. Check it out -- Magus III, Nanibia Prime, Scottsdale. That was a mess. I earned every one in high-concept fights just like this one.
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* CallingYourAttacks: Ransom shouts "Double-fist punch!" and "Interlocked hands!" when battling Vindor.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Vindor suggests that instead of trial by combat, they should just have a normal trial, with lawyers and all that. The leader somehow takes away that they should get a death race going.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Vindor suggests that instead of trial by combat, they should just have a normal trial, regular trial with lawyers and all that.a judge. The leader somehow takes away that they should get a death race going.
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-->'''Shaxs:''' It's just that huffy Ensign.\\
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-->'''Shaxs:''' It's Oh, it's just that huffy Ensign.\\
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* PlanetOfHats: The Star Trek franchise's history of this is spoofed in this episode. The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and define major aspects of their culture around it with religious reverence. Conversely, they consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries who are said to worship trees are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
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* PlanetOfHats: The Star Trek franchise's history of this trope is spoofed in this episode. The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and define major aspects of their culture around it with religious reverence. Conversely, they consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries who are said to worship trees are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
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* SchizoTech: The Gelrakians have starships, and boarding vessels able to puncture the hull of the ''Cerritos'', but their weapons technology seems to be limited to crystal spears.
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* SchizoTech: The Gelrakians have starships, starships and their boarding vessels able to can puncture the hull of the ''Cerritos'', but their weapons technology seems to be limited to crystal spears.spears, crystal battle blades and crystal-embedded clubs.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Vindor suggests that instead of trial by combat, they should just have a normal trial, with lawyers and all that. The leader somehow takes away that they should get a death race going.
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Shaxs tackles Boimler and realizes his mistake.
-->'''Shaxs:''' It's just that huffy Ensign.\\
'''Boimler:''' I'm not huffy!
-->'''Shaxs:''' It's just that huffy Ensign.\\
'''Boimler:''' I'm not huffy!
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* SmartPeopleSpeakTheQueensEnglish: The schoolteacher in the far future speaks with an English accent.
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* GilliganCut: Boimler is assured by his friends that the "Boimler Effect" will be forgotten by history. Cut to "The Far Future," where Boimler is revered as the opposite of the person he was (at the time of the series). Chief Miles O'Brien is also revered as a hero, but that one is entirely deserved.
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* GilliganCut: Boimler is assured by his friends that the "Boimler Effect" will be forgotten by history. Cut to "The Far Future," where Boimler is revered as [[FutureImperfect the opposite of the person he was was]] (at the time of the series). Chief Miles O'Brien is also revered as a hero, but that one is entirely deserved.
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** '''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
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'''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the
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'''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a
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* ExhaustionInducedIdiocy: All over the place, courtesy of the elimination of buffer time. Vendome brings the wrong token to the Gelrakians and pisses them off, and Shaxs attacks Boimler on the bridge thinking him to be an enemy.
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* OhCrap: Boimler gets ''really'' nervous when he accidentally mentions buffer time in front of Freeman, putting her wise to what the ensigns have been doing.
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'''Ransom:''' You always speak freely. Nobody can prevent you from speaking freely.
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'''Ransom:''' You always ''always'' speak freely. freely! Nobody can prevent ''prevent'' you from speaking freely.freely!
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* CrowdChant: When Ransom enters the arena for his TrialByCombat, the Gelrakian spectators shout Vindor's name to cheer for their champion.
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: Everyone on the ''Cerritos'' except Boimler get this as buffer time is eschewed and they're forced to work nonstop. Even Captain Freeman gets this even if she's not completely non-functional.
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: Everyone on the ''Cerritos'' except Boimler get this these as buffer time is eschewed and they're forced to work nonstop. Even Captain Freeman gets this also develops eye bags even if she's not completely non-functional.
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** Boimler says, "Space: the funnest frontier?", a twist on the opening monologue of both ''TOS'' and ''TNG''.
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** Boimler says, muses, "Space: the funnest frontier?", a twist on the opening monologue of both ''TOS'' and ''TNG''.
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* PlanetOfHats: The Star Trek franchise's history of this is spoofed in this episode. The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and define major aspects of their culture around it with religious reverence. Conversely they consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries who are said to worship trees are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
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* PlanetOfHats: The Star Trek franchise's history of this is spoofed in this episode. The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and define major aspects of their culture around it with religious reverence. Conversely Conversely, they consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries who are said to worship trees are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: Freeman clearly thinks she's the only competent officer on the ''Cerritos'' because she's the only one (besides Boimler) who isn't non-functional from overworking. Subverted in that she still has eyebags like the others, is ''much'' more short-tempered, and is clearly acting irrationally.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: Freeman clearly thinks she's the only competent officer on the ''Cerritos'' because she's the only one (besides Boimler) who isn't non-functional from overworking. Subverted in that she still has eyebags eye bags like the others, is ''much'' more short-tempered, and is clearly acting irrationally.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Captain Freeman decides to eliminate buffer time and constrain her crew to nonstop work, even in the middle of an invasion of their ship, because she feels slighted by the Federation.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Captain Freeman decides to eliminate buffer time and constrain her crew to nonstop work, even in the middle of an invasion of their ship, because she feels slighted by the Federation.Starfleet.
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* BizarreAlienPsychology: The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
* ExhaustedEyeBags: Everyone on the ''Cerritos'' except Boimler get this as buffer time is eschewed and they're forced to work nonstop. Even Captain Freeman gets this even if she's not completely non-functional.
* HonorBeforeReason: Captain Freeman decides to eliminate buffer time and constrain her crew to nonstop work, even in the middle of an invasion of their ship, because she feels slighted by the Federation.
* PlanetOfHats: The Star Trek franchise's history of this is spoofed in this episode. The Gelrakians live on a crystal-rich world and define major aspects of their culture around it with religious reverence. Conversely they consider wood to be a deep insult, as their unseen adversaries who are said to worship trees are implied to be from a heavily-forested planet.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: Freeman clearly thinks she's the only competent officer on the ''Cerritos'' because she's the only one (besides Boimler) who isn't non-functional from overworking.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: Freeman clearly thinks she's the only competent officer on the ''Cerritos'' because she's the only one (besides Boimler) who isn't non-functional from overworking. Subverted in that she still has eyebags like the others, is ''much'' more short-tempered, and is clearly acting irrationally.
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Not what that trope means. Did you even read it?
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* InformedAttractiveness: Mariner and Ransom both consider the other to be hot.
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As stated in the trope's description, a Sound Effect Bleep occurs whenever "A sound effect covers up a naughty word," so these entries are perfectly valid.
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** '''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
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That's just a normal bleep
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** '''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(to Ransom)'' I'm calling bull[bleep] on your whole thing here, sir.
** '''Mariner:''' ''(after Ransom spears her in the foot)'' What the [bleep]?!
** '''T'Ana:''' ''(re Mariner's collection of scars)'' Congratulations, you look like a [bleep] scratching post.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Mariner and Ransom's argument in an alien prison. Mariner snaps that despite his broad shoulders and flashy hair, Ransom isn't a very effective commander. He doesn't know when to break protocol and stop making speeches, and it's gotten them all locked up. For his part, Ransom retorts that Mariner doesn't really seem to have any long-term plan at all, is too busy getting off on deliberately breaking protocol to notice or care, and her flippant attitude –- which, despite her being second-in-command on the away team, was completely unhelpful earlier -- is eventually going to get someone killed.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Mariner and Ransom's argument in an alien prison. Mariner snaps that despite his broad shoulders and flashy hair, Ransom isn't a very effective commander. He doesn't know when to break protocol and stop making speeches, and it's gotten them all locked up. For his part, Ransom retorts that Mariner doesn't really seem to have any long-term plan at all, is too busy getting off on deliberately breaking protocol to notice or care, and her flippant attitude –- -- which, despite her being second-in-command on the away team, was completely unhelpful earlier -- is eventually going to get someone killed.
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** Just before leaving on the away mission, Ransom tells Mariner to roll down her sleeves. After Mariner is healed in Sickbay, Ransom has her thrown in the brig because she never rolled her sleeves down.
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** Just before leaving on the away mission, Ransom tells orders Mariner to roll down her sleeves. After Mariner is healed in Sickbay, Ransom has her thrown in the brig because she never rolled her sleeves down.
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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Gelrakians have starships yet use crystal spears in combat that shoot graffiti beams. Boimler is incredulous that anyone would even bother with Red Alert for such pathetic opponents.
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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Gelrakians have starships yet use crystal spears in combat that shoot graffiti beams. Boimler is incredulous that anyone would even bother with Red Alert for such pathetic opponents. Rutherford notes the inferiority of Gelrakian weapons.
-->'''Rutherford''': Swords and spears? How did these guys get on board?
-->'''Rutherford''': Swords and spears? How did these guys get on board?
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* LetsGetDangerous: When Mariner inspires Ransom to fight Vindor to save the away team.
--> '''Ransom:''' ''(tears off his shirt)'' Let's do this!
--> '''Ransom:''' ''(tears off his shirt)'' Let's do this!
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* LetsGetDangerous: When Occurs when Mariner inspires Ransom to fight Vindor to save the away team.
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* GladiatorGames: TrialByCombat is a spectator sport on Gelrak V, and there's a large crowd at the arena for the Ransom vs. Vindor battle.
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* GilliganCut: Boimler is assured by his friends that the "Boimler Effect" will be forgotten by history. Cut to "The Far Future," where Boimler is revered as the opposite of the person he was. Chief Miles O'Brien is also revered as a hero, but that one is entirely deserved.
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* GilliganCut: Boimler is assured by his friends that the "Boimler Effect" will be forgotten by history. Cut to "The Far Future," where Boimler is revered as the opposite of the person he was.was (at the time of the series). Chief Miles O'Brien is also revered as a hero, but that one is entirely deserved.