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* {{Cliffhanger}}: At the end of the episode, Weiss's airship crashes, leaving her injured on the ground. Attracted to the scene are a couple of men who stand in front of her as she weakly asks for their help. The men are revealed to be bandits from Raven's tribe when she shows up to see what's going on. She takes one look at Weiss, decides it's the tribe's lucky day and stamps on Weiss's face to knock her unconscious. The FadeToBlack that occurs as Weiss loses consciousness ends the episode.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: At the end of the episode, Weiss's airship crashes, leaving her injured on the ground. Attracted to the scene are a couple of men who stand in front of her as she weakly asks for their help. The men are revealed to be bandits from Raven's the Branwen tribe when she shows up to see what's going on. She takes one look at Deciding she can make use of Weiss, decides it's the tribe's lucky day and Raven stamps on Weiss's face to knock her unconscious.out. The FadeToBlack that occurs as Weiss loses consciousness ends the episode.
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* ImpairmentShot: At the end of the episode, Weiss is badly injured on the ground after her airship crashes and looks up at the people who have arrived in the hope of getting help. Instead, she witnesses Raven looking down at her. The camera angle takes Weiss's position, looking upwards at Raven as she lifts her foot at stamps downward. The camera fades to black, indicating that Weiss has just been kicked unconscious.
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* ImpairmentShot: At the end of the episode, Weiss is badly injured on the ground after her airship crashes and looks up at the people who have arrived in the hope of getting help. Instead, she witnesses Raven Cue a POV shot of Weiss looking down at her. The camera angle takes Weiss's position, looking upwards up at Raven as she lifts knocks her foot at stamps downward. The camera fades to black, indicating that Weiss has just been kicked unconscious.out cold.
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* OutOfTheFryingPan: Weiss manages to defeat the Queen Lancer that is threatening the airship she is travelling on, but not before the Grimm manages to take out one of their wings. Weiss uses her gravity glyphs to try and slow their descent but the ship still crashes hard, leaving her injured. The people who are attracted to her location are Raven's murderous bandits. Raven takes one look at her, decides she can make use of Weiss and kicks her unconscious.
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* OutOfTheFryingPan: Weiss manages to defeat defeats the Queen Lancer that is threatening the airship she is travelling on, but not before the Grimm manages to take out one of their wings. Weiss uses her gravity glyphs to try and slow their descent but the ship still crashes hard, leaving her injured. The people who are attracted to her location are Raven's murderous bandits. Raven takes one look at her, decides After deciding she can make use of Weiss and Weiss, Raven kicks her unconscious.
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* BeeAfraid: When Weiss is flying through the floating islands of Lake Matsu, she and her pilot encounter a distressed ship that is being attacked by a swarm of Lancers, hornet-like Grimm. When the Lancers notice Weiss' airship, they regroup as a swarm and chase the airship until they get close enough to use their stingers as grappling guns to hook onto the ship and reel it in.
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* ScaryStingingSwarm: When Weiss is flying through the floating islands of Lake Matsu, she and her pilot encounter a distressed ship that is being attacked by a swarm of Lancers, hornet-like Grimm. When the Lancers notice Weiss' airship, they regroup as a swarm and chase the airship until they get close enough to use their stingers as grappling guns to hook onto the ship and reel it in.
