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-->''“On the battlefield, I’m somebody. I feel powerful, confident. Like I could take on the world. It’s bliss; I get so caught up in them I forget my own shortcomings. That’s why I’ll never turn down a fight. That’s why I’m challenging Gyms now at the height of my abilities. I want to be strong, special.”''
-->--'''Winter''', revealing her HiddenDepths
Our heroes are heading to Fimbulvetr Town for Ash’s next Gym Battle with an new friend in Winter in tow. Should be a simple excursion, but fate has other things planned.
-->--'''Winter''', revealing her HiddenDepths
Our heroes are heading to Fimbulvetr Town for Ash’s next Gym Battle with an new friend in Winter in tow. Should be a simple excursion, but fate has other things planned.
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-->--'''Renee'''
The ordeal at the
-->--'''Winter''', revealing her HiddenDepths
Our heroes are heading to
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* BloodKnight: It may be surprising to see Winter is a closet example, which explains her occasional eagerness in the previous chapter.
* CerebusSyndrome: Starting to kick in beginning with this chapter. We have a bloodthirsty Pokemon, a vengeful revenant trying to "save" people, and several allusions to death. Not to mention, it's confirmed Team Hectic had a hand in this. Time will tell if this sticks.
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case with Winter's biological father. She mentions, after her mother died of an illness, he looked "to have given up".
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battles as a means of forgetting her own shortcomings.
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* HeartwarmingOrphan: This chapter confirms Winter is one, although her children friend's parents quickly adopted her.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Winter admits she wants to take the Pokemon League to win battle after battle to become strong and therefore special.
* TheNondescript: As a child following her parent's demises, Winter saw herself as someone who had no special talents of note, wasn’t a good talker, and had a weak body.
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: Starting to kick in beginning with this chapter. We have a bloodthirsty Pokemon, a vengeful revenant trying to "save" people, and several allusions to death. Not to mention, it's confirmed Team Hectic had a hand in this. Time will tell if this sticks.
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case with Winter's biological father. She mentions, after her mother died of an illness, he looked "to have given up".
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battles as a means of forgetting her own shortcomings.
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* HeartwarmingOrphan: This chapter confirms Winter is one, although her children friend's parents quickly adopted her.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Winter admits she wants to take the Pokemon League to win battle after battle to become strong and therefore special.
* TheNondescript: As a child following her parent's demises, Winter saw herself as someone who had no special talents of note, wasn’t a good talker, and had a weak body.
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* BloodKnight: It may be surprising to see AffectionateNickname: Winter's is "Winny".
* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter isa closet example, which explains raring to beat as part of her occasional eagerness career. That said, she's got an extremely laid-back and quirky personality.
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
*CerebusSyndrome: Starting to kick in beginning with this chapter. We have a bloodthirsty Pokemon, a vengeful revenant trying to "save" people, and several allusions to death. Not to mention, it's confirmed Team Hectic had a hand in this. Time will tell if this sticks.
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case withToBeAMaster: Winter's biological father. She mentions, after desire is to be Tenla Region Champion.
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate hermother died of an illness, he looked "to have given up".
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battlescredentials as a means Gym Leader. Let it be known Heather won using only two of forgetting her own shortcomings.
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* HeartwarmingOrphan: This chapter confirms Winter is one, although her children friend's parents quickly adopted her.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Winter admits she wants to take thePokemon League to win in a 3-v-3 battle after battle to become strong and therefore special.
* TheNondescript: As a child followingonly using three of her parent's demises, Winter saw herself as someone who had no special talents of note, wasn’t a good talker, and had a weak body.
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: A respected Gym Leader who defeated Gary with a little CherryTapping and the person Winter is
* DeadpanSnarker: Heather, full stop. Whereas Marina was a humorous and playful variant, Heather is full-on sarcastic.
-->'''Heather''': (''to Brock after his RunningGag'') Goodness, man, my students spit better lines than that.
* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Winter is described as having eyes "bereft of their natural sheen" as a result of the trauma she went through in the previous chapter. Dawn talks her out of it.
* FriendshipMoment: Dawn and Winter share something of one with the former comforting the latter out of her slump.
* LargeHam: Heather again. This woman absolutely loves to chew the scenery. Her brand of style and humor also offsets the tension brought forth by the previous chapter.
*
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case with
* TheWorfEffect: A flashback is used to show how Heather beat Gary to validate her
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battles
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* HeartwarmingOrphan: This chapter confirms Winter is one, although her children friend's parents quickly adopted her.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Winter admits she wants to take the
* TheNondescript: As a child following
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].bad]].
* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* VengefulGhost: Master Silverplien. Although he acts cordial and helps into his house when they're lost, he is in fact a vengeful revenant bent on "saving" people from the harshness of life. He became like this after he and his family had their lives unceremoniously taken by [[StandardEvilOrganizationSquad Team Hectic]].
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* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Winter admits she wants to take the Pokemon League to win battle after battle to become strong and therefore special.
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-->''“On the battlefield, I’m somebody. I feel powerful, confident. Like I could take on the world. It’s bliss; I get so caught up in them I forget my own shortcomings. That’s why I’ll never turn down a fight. That’s why I’m challenging Gyms now at the height of my abilities. I want to be strong, special.”''
-->--'''Winter''', revealing her HiddenDepths
Our heroes are heading to Fimbulvetr Town for Ash’s next Gym Battle with an new friend in Winter in tow. Should be a simple excursion, but fate has other things planned.
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!!The chapter contains the following examples:
* BloodKnight: It may be surprising to see Winter is a closet example, which explains her occasional eagerness in the previous chapter.
* CerebusSyndrome: Starting to kick in beginning with this chapter. We have a bloodthirsty Pokemon, a vengeful revenant trying to "save" people, and several allusions to death. Not to mention, it's confirmed Team Hectic had a hand in this. Time will tell if this sticks.
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case with Winter's biological father. She mentions, after her mother died of an illness, he looked "to have given up".
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battles as a means of forgetting her own shortcomings.
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* TheNondescript: As a child following her parent's demises, Winter saw herself as someone who had no special talents of note, wasn’t a good talker, and had a weak body.
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
-->--'''Winter''', revealing her HiddenDepths
Our heroes are heading to Fimbulvetr Town for Ash’s next Gym Battle with an new friend in Winter in tow. Should be a simple excursion, but fate has other things planned.
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!!The chapter contains the following examples:
* BloodKnight: It may be surprising to see Winter is a closet example, which explains her occasional eagerness in the previous chapter.
* CerebusSyndrome: Starting to kick in beginning with this chapter. We have a bloodthirsty Pokemon, a vengeful revenant trying to "save" people, and several allusions to death. Not to mention, it's confirmed Team Hectic had a hand in this. Time will tell if this sticks.
* DeathByDespair: Seems to be the case with Winter's biological father. She mentions, after her mother died of an illness, he looked "to have given up".
* {{Escapism}}: Winter uses battles as a means of forgetting her own shortcomings.
* {{Fainting}}: Winter has been plagued by weak constitutions since childhood. She’ll faint under great duress.
* TheNondescript: As a child following her parent's demises, Winter saw herself as someone who had no special talents of note, wasn’t a good talker, and had a weak body.
* RealityEnsues: You know how Dawn (and her game counterpart) tend to parade around in short skirts? The chapter [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] that -- she catches a cold from wearing an outfit she states is similar to the one she wore to Snowpoint City, leading the guys to stop at Silverplien's house and get roped into... [[{{Understatement}} something bad]].
