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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The boys' main character traits are shown in the first chapter: Benedict's hot-blooded nature, Tank's easygoing, and Kidd's snarky to hide his insecurity.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The boys' main character traits are shown in the first chapter: Benedict's hot-blooded nature, Tank's easygoing, easygoing personality, and Kidd's snarky to hide his insecurity.
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon. After Tank, Benedict and Kidd are introduced, they proceed to look for Professor Tom Nook. Tank is enthusiastic about meeting him, Benedict is enthusiastic about being able to actually use Pokémon, and finally Kidd is anxious, and hides his anxiety with snark. After they meet Tom and get their starters, they proceed to save Leila and hunt more Pokémon, with Tank standing out, while Benedict wins his first fight against another trainer. Which makes him far more enthusiastic about fighting. Meanwhile, Kidd has trouble bonding with his Pokémon, which affects his status as a trainer.
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire acquire their first Pokémon. After Tank, Benedict and Kidd are introduced, they proceed to look for Professor Tom Nook. Tank is enthusiastic about meeting him, Benedict is enthusiastic about being able to actually use Pokémon, and finally Kidd is anxious, and hides his anxiety with snark. After they meet Tom and get their starters, they proceed to save Leila and hunt more Pokémon, with Tank standing out, while Benedict wins his first fight against another trainer. Which makes him far more enthusiastic about fighting. Meanwhile, Kidd has trouble bonding with his Pokémon, which affects his status as a trainer.
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon. After Tank, Benedict and Kidd are introduced, they proceed to look for Tom Nook. Tank is enthusiastic about meeting him, Benedict is enthusiastic about being able to actually use Pokémon, and finally Kidd is anxious, and hides his anxiety with snark. After they meet Tom and get their starters, they proceed to save a little Kappa and hunt more Pokémon, with Tank standing out, while Benedict wins his first fight against another trainer. Which makes him far more enthusiastic about fighting. Meanwhile, Kidd has trouble bonding with his Pokémon, which affects his hunting skills.
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon. After Tank, Benedict and Kidd are introduced, they proceed to look for Professor Tom Nook. Tank is enthusiastic about meeting him, Benedict is enthusiastic about being able to actually use Pokémon, and finally Kidd is anxious, and hides his anxiety with snark. After they meet Tom and get their starters, they proceed to save a little Kappa Leila and hunt more Pokémon, with Tank standing out, while Benedict wins his first fight against another trainer. Which makes him far more enthusiastic about fighting. Meanwhile, Kidd has trouble bonding with his Pokémon, which affects his hunting skills.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd or even Benedict, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him but still begging for another one from Benedict, Tank snarks back.]]
* WorfHadTheFlu: Benedict defeats a more experienced trainer, but his opponent had handicapped himself by using only a single Pokémon.
* WorfHadTheFlu: Benedict defeats a more experienced trainer, but his opponent had handicapped himself by using only a single Pokémon.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd or even Benedict, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him but still begging for another one from Benedict, Tank snarks back.]]
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon.
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon.
Pokémon. After Tank, Benedict and Kidd are introduced, they proceed to look for Tom Nook. Tank is enthusiastic about meeting him, Benedict is enthusiastic about being able to actually use Pokémon, and finally Kidd is anxious, and hides his anxiety with snark. After they meet Tom and get their starters, they proceed to save a little Kappa and hunt more Pokémon, with Tank standing out, while Benedict wins his first fight against another trainer. Which makes him far more enthusiastic about fighting. Meanwhile, Kidd has trouble bonding with his Pokémon, which affects his hunting skills.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him, Tank snarks back.]]
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd, Kidd or even Benedict, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him, him but still begging for another one from Benedict, Tank snarks back.]]
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The beginning of the story, in which the protagonists aquire their first Pokémon.
!!Contains examples of:
* BloodKnight: Benedict is looking forward to fight other trainers.
* DeadpanSnarker: Kidd can often snark around his friends, for example when Tank is putting Tom Nook on a pedestal. Also, when he falls on his face, he notes sarcastically it's the best day of his life.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him, Tank snarks back.]]
* WorfHadTheFlu: Benedict defeats a more experienced trainer, but his opponent had handicapped himself by using only a single Pokémon.
!!Contains examples of:
* BloodKnight: Benedict is looking forward to fight other trainers.
* DeadpanSnarker: Kidd can often snark around his friends, for example when Tank is putting Tom Nook on a pedestal. Also, when he falls on his face, he notes sarcastically it's the best day of his life.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Tank is not as snarky as Kidd, but after [[spoiler:Kidd snarks at him for getting more Pokémon than him, Tank snarks back.]]
* WorfHadTheFlu: Benedict defeats a more experienced trainer, but his opponent had handicapped himself by using only a single Pokémon.
