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* ShoutOut: Lincoln says he has twenty knickknacks, which is a line from ''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''.
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* ShoutOut: Lincoln says he has twenty knickknacks, which is a line from ''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''.''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989''.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord:
** Much to the ire of Luan, this story twice claims that a character made a joke, even though there was no joke.
** Fanfic Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
** Much to the ire of Luan, this story twice claims that a character made a joke, even though there was no joke.
** Fanfic Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord:
**YouKeepUsingThatWord: Much to the ire of Luan, this story twice claims that a character made a joke, even though there was no joke.
** Fanfic Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.joke.
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** Fanfic Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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* TemptingFate: At first, Lola is excited to read the fanfic because of the juicy title. She... doesn't end up liking it.
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*UnintentionallySympathetic: InUniverse example; the fanfic places Lola in the wrong for reading Lincoln's diary and therefore "deserving" to get severely beaten by Lincoln. But the real Lola and Lincoln, along with Luan, Lynn, and Lisa, immediately sympathize with fanfic Lola, while viewing fanfic Lincoln as UnintentionallyUnsympathetic. Lola asks, "Did this author write me as a big meanie just so he could say I deserved to get hurt?!" while Lincoln comments, "Geez, what a brute. I think I actually preferred it when I was a whiny crybaby."
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*EverybodyCries: Lola and her sisters do this at the hospital as they feel sorry for Lincoln having been dumped by Ronnie Anne.
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*TheToothHurts: Not only does fanfic Lincoln give Lola a shiner, he also punches out most of her teeth!
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*HiddenDepths: The real Lynn is surprisingly knowledgeable about snake biology, to the amazement of [[ChildProdigy Lisa]].
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The fanfic starts with the Louds spring cleaning. Fic!Lori and Fic!Leni are sorting their clothes (with Fic!Leni "choosing indecisively" somehow), Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan are deciding whether to donate some of their instruments and props respectively, then Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Leni with her plastic spider, causing Fic!Leni to spray insect repellent even though spiders are arachnids... then again, it's Leni we're talking about.
Fic!Lynn is organising her sports balls and Fic!Lucy is sorting through her books. The former says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", which the latter says sounds creepy, and besides it would make sense to have that many, so Fic!Lynn says, "I don't get the joke"... even though Fic!Lucy didn't make a joke.
Meanwhile, Fic!Lana is tidying up the trash, and Fic!Lola is polishing her pageant awards. She says, "I'm always knew I was that good!" (sic), which is apparently also meant to be a joke. Fic!Lisa, in a hazmat suit, tidies up her supplies and changes Fic!Lily's diaper.
And Fic!Lincoln has found a blank diary mysteriously on his shelf. He writes his name on it, then starts writing in it at bedtime, and then again in the middle of the night.
The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell. Fic!Lana decides to take Fic!El Diablo and Fic!Lola searches in Fic!Lincoln's room and decides to bring his diary to school. Fic!Lana shows off Fic!El Diablo, then she and the teacher go to the bathroom, while Fic!Lola reads the diary.
It documents Fic!Lincoln's love for ''The Dream Boat'' and the time he got covered in poop (during "Two Boys and a Baby"). The class bursts out laughing, and the information spreads around the school. Fic!Chandler, Fic!Papa Wheelie, and Fic!Girl Jordan tease Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde, and Fic!Ronnie Anne is about to tell something to Fic!Lincoln, but the school bell rings.
When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts that Fic!Ronnie Anne "broke up" with him. Fic!Lola comes in, not having heard her brother shouting, and the diary falls out, exposing her. Still very angry, Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, giving her a black eye, knocking her teeth out, and causing her to fall downstairs and be knocked out.
Fic!Lola is taken to the hospital, where she thinks she deserved it. The real Lola strongly disagrees. Fic!Lola goes back from the hospital, and Fic!Lincoln is still mad at her, making the real Lola cry. Fic!Lincoln then tells his other sisters that Fic!Lola has to dazzle him to make him love her again. The real Lincoln, fortunately, is highly offended by his fanfic counterpart's behaviour and lets Lola know that she doesn't have to do anything to earn his love.
Fic!Lola has Fic!Lana build a stage, then puts on a show for Fic!Lincoln, who finally forgives her. Then, the real Lincoln carries Lola off to get ice cream to cheer her up.
Fic!Lynn is organising her sports balls and Fic!Lucy is sorting through her books. The former says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", which the latter says sounds creepy, and besides it would make sense to have that many, so Fic!Lynn says, "I don't get the joke"... even though Fic!Lucy didn't make a joke.
Meanwhile, Fic!Lana is tidying up the trash, and Fic!Lola is polishing her pageant awards. She says, "I'm always knew I was that good!" (sic), which is apparently also meant to be a joke. Fic!Lisa, in a hazmat suit, tidies up her supplies and changes Fic!Lily's diaper.
And Fic!Lincoln has found a blank diary mysteriously on his shelf. He writes his name on it, then starts writing in it at bedtime, and then again in the middle of the night.
The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell. Fic!Lana decides to take Fic!El Diablo and Fic!Lola searches in Fic!Lincoln's room and decides to bring his diary to school. Fic!Lana shows off Fic!El Diablo, then she and the teacher go to the bathroom, while Fic!Lola reads the diary.
It documents Fic!Lincoln's love for ''The Dream Boat'' and the time he got covered in poop (during "Two Boys and a Baby"). The class bursts out laughing, and the information spreads around the school. Fic!Chandler, Fic!Papa Wheelie, and Fic!Girl Jordan tease Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde, and Fic!Ronnie Anne is about to tell something to Fic!Lincoln, but the school bell rings.
When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts that Fic!Ronnie Anne "broke up" with him. Fic!Lola comes in, not having heard her brother shouting, and the diary falls out, exposing her. Still very angry, Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, giving her a black eye, knocking her teeth out, and causing her to fall downstairs and be knocked out.
Fic!Lola is taken to the hospital, where she thinks she deserved it. The real Lola strongly disagrees. Fic!Lola goes back from the hospital, and Fic!Lincoln is still mad at her, making the real Lola cry. Fic!Lincoln then tells his other sisters that Fic!Lola has to dazzle him to make him love her again. The real Lincoln, fortunately, is highly offended by his fanfic counterpart's behaviour and lets Lola know that she doesn't have to do anything to earn his love.
Fic!Lola has Fic!Lana build a stage, then puts on a show for Fic!Lincoln, who finally forgives her. Then, the real Lincoln carries Lola off to get ice cream to cheer her up.
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The fanfic starts with the Louds spring cleaning. Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori and Fic!Leni Leni are sorting their clothes (with Fic!Leni Leni "choosing indecisively" somehow), Fic!Luna Luna and Fic!Luan Luan are deciding whether to donate some of their instruments and props respectively, then Fic!Luan Luan pranks Fic!Leni Leni with her plastic spider, causing Fic!Leni Leni to spray insect repellent even though spiders are arachnids... then again, it's Leni we're talking about.
Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn is organising her sports balls and Fic!Lucy Lucy is sorting through her books. The former says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", which the latter says sounds creepy, and besides it would make sense to have that many, so Fic!Lynn Lynn says, "I don't get the joke"... even though Fic!Lucy Lucy didn't make a joke.
Meanwhile, Fic!Lana Meanwhile in the fanfic, Lana is tidying up the trash, and Fic!Lola Lola is polishing her pageant awards. She says, "I'm always knew I was that good!" (sic), which is apparently also meant to be a joke. Fic!Lisa, Lisa, in a hazmat suit, tidies up her supplies and changes Fic!Lily's Lily's diaper.
AndFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln has found a blank diary mysteriously on his shelf. He writes his name on it, then starts writing in it at bedtime, and then again in the middle of the night.
The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell.Fic!Lana Lana decides to take Fic!El El Diablo and Fic!Lola Lola searches in Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's room and decides to bring his diary to school. Fic!Lana Lana shows off Fic!El El Diablo, then she and the teacher go to the bathroom, while Fic!Lola Lola reads the diary.
It documentsFic!Lincoln's Lincoln's love for ''The Dream Boat'' and the time he got covered in poop (during "Two Boys and a Baby"). The class bursts out laughing, and the information spreads around the school. Fic!Chandler, Fic!Papa Chandler, Papa Wheelie, and Fic!Girl Girl Jordan tease Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Clyde, Clyde, and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne is about to tell something to Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, but the school bell rings.
When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts thatFic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne "broke up" with him. Fic!Lola Lola comes in, not having heard her brother shouting, and the diary falls out, exposing her. Still very angry, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln punches Fic!Lola Lola in the face, giving her a black eye, knocking her teeth out, and causing her to fall downstairs and be knocked out.
Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola is taken to the hospital, where she thinks she deserved it. The real Lola strongly disagrees. Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola goes back from the hospital, and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is still mad at her, making the real Lola cry. Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln then tells his other sisters that Fic!Lola Lola has to dazzle him to make him love her again. The real Lincoln, fortunately, is highly offended by his fanfic counterpart's behaviour and lets Lola know that she doesn't have to do anything to earn his love.
Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola has Fic!Lana Lana build a stage, then puts on a show for Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, who finally forgives her. Then, the real Lincoln carries Lola off to get ice cream to cheer her up.
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The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell.
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When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts that
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** Fic!Lola is an even bigger gossip than the real Lola and reads Fic!Lincoln's diary to her whole class.
** Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, hard enough to land her in hospital, and doesn't seem to care that she's hurt. Sure, the real Lincoln might be angry if Lola shared his diary with her class, but he wouldn't be that cruel.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", prompting the real Lynn, plus Lincoln, to snicker.
* BigBrotherBully: Fic!Lincoln punches his little sister in the face, landing her in hospital, doesn't care, and says she has to dazzle him to make him love her again, all because she spilt some embarrassing secrets.
* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" when Fic!Lola claims she deserved being put in the hospital.
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him except Fic!Lana herself.
** Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, hard enough to land her in hospital, and doesn't seem to care that she's hurt. Sure, the real Lincoln might be angry if Lola shared his diary with her class, but he wouldn't be that cruel.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", prompting the real Lynn, plus Lincoln, to snicker.
* BigBrotherBully: Fic!Lincoln punches his little sister in the face, landing her in hospital, doesn't care, and says she has to dazzle him to make him love her again, all because she spilt some embarrassing secrets.
* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" when Fic!Lola claims she deserved being put in the hospital.
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him except Fic!Lana herself.
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** Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola is an even bigger gossip than the real Lola and reads Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's diary to her whole class.
**Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln punches Fic!Lola Lola in the face, hard enough to land her in hospital, and doesn't seem to care that she's hurt. Sure, the real Lincoln might be angry if Lola shared his diary with her class, but he wouldn't be that cruel.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Miss Allegra is called Ms. Taber in the fanfic.
* BallsGag:Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", prompting the real Lynn, plus Lincoln, to snicker.
* BigBrotherBully:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln punches his little sister in the face, landing her in hospital, doesn't care, and says she has to dazzle him to make him love her again, all because she spilt some embarrassing secrets.
* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" whenFic!Lola fanfic Lola claims she deserved being put in the hospital.
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him exceptFic!Lana Lana herself.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Miss Allegra is called Ms. Taber in the fanfic.
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* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" when
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him except
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** Lola may be a gossip, but she wouldn't read someone else's diary to her whole class. Fic!Lola on the other hand...
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction. Fic!Lana builds a stage in ''two hours''.
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction. Fic!Lana builds a stage in ''two hours''.
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** Lola may be a gossip, but she wouldn't read someone else's diary to her whole class. Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola on the other hand...
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction.Fic!Lana Fanfic Lana builds a stage in ''two hours''.
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction.
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* TheDiaperChange: At the beginning, Fic!Lisa changes Fic!Lily's diaper, and the real Lisa remarks that she does often have to change Lily, but doesn't mind because she tests things on her as well.
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* TheDiaperChange: At the beginning, Fic!Lisa fanfic Lisa changes Fic!Lily's Lily's diaper, and the real Lisa remarks that she does often have to change Lily, but doesn't mind because she tests things on her as well.
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** Lynn is disgusted when Fic!Lincoln says that Fic!Lola needs to "dazzle" him to earn his love again.
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** Lynn Lynn, despite being the most abrasive Loud, is disgusted when Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln says that Fic!Lola Lola needs to "dazzle" him to earn his love again.
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** Fic!Lola gets such a bad black eye, it needs a bandage.
** Fic!Lincoln ''kisses'' Fic!Lola's damaged eye.
** Fic!Lincoln ''kisses'' Fic!Lola's damaged eye.
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** Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola gets such a bad black eye, it needs a bandage.
**Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln ''kisses'' Fic!Lola's Lola's damaged eye.
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* HazmatSuit: Fic!Lisa wears a hazmat suit to tidy up her supplies and change Fic!Lily's diaper.
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* HazmatSuit: Fic!Lisa Fanfic Lisa wears a hazmat suit to tidy up her supplies and change Fic!Lily's Lily's diaper.
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** Fic!Lincoln wakes up in the middle of the night to write about ''The Dream Boat'', which is something the real Lincoln probably wouldn't do.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class like Fic!Lola does. Also, Lincoln's room probably isn't the first place she'd look for something for show-and-tell.
* PlotHole: It's never revealed how Fic!Lincoln's diary ended up in his room, or how Fic!Lori heard his secrets, how Fic!Ronnie Anne was able to "break up" with Fic!Lincoln, or how Fic!Lola didn't hear Fic!Lincoln yell that Fic!Ronnie Anne broke up with him.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class like Fic!Lola does. Also, Lincoln's room probably isn't the first place she'd look for something for show-and-tell.
* PlotHole: It's never revealed how Fic!Lincoln's diary ended up in his room, or how Fic!Lori heard his secrets, how Fic!Ronnie Anne was able to "break up" with Fic!Lincoln, or how Fic!Lola didn't hear Fic!Lincoln yell that Fic!Ronnie Anne broke up with him.
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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln wakes up in the middle of the night to write about ''The Dream Boat'', which is something the real Lincoln probably wouldn't do.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class likeFic!Lola story Lola does. Also, Lincoln's room probably isn't the first place she'd look for something for show-and-tell.
* PlotHole: It's never revealed howFic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's diary ended up in his room, or how Fic!Lori Lori heard his secrets, how Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne was able to "break up" with Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, or how Fic!Lola Lola didn't hear Fic!Lincoln Lincoln yell that Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne broke up with him.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class like
* PlotHole: It's never revealed how
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* RealMenHateAffection: Fic!Lincoln is laughed at for watching a romance show.
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* RealMenHateAffection: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln is laughed at for watching a romance show.show because he's a boy.
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* SnakesAreSinister: While Fic!El Diablo himself is harmless, Fic!Lana is the only girl in her class who doesn't scream at the sight of him.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama. Fic!Lola is sent falling downstairs, knocking her out.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama. Fic!Lola is sent falling downstairs, knocking her out.
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* SnakesAreSinister: While Fic!El fanfic El Diablo himself is harmless, Fic!Lana Lana is the only girl in her class who doesn't scream at the sight of him.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama.Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola is sent falling downstairs, knocking her out.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama.
* WouldHitAGirl: The "hit" part is taken quite literally, when the story has Lincoln punch Lola in the eye.
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** Fic!Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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** Fic!Lisa's Fanfic Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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** Lynn is disgusted when Fic!Lincoln says that Fic!Lola needs to "dazzle" him to earn his love again.
-->'''Lynn''': God, what a scummy thing to say!\\
'''Lincoln''': Took the words right out of my mouth.
-->'''Lynn''': God, what a scummy thing to say!\\
'''Lincoln''': Took the words right out of my mouth.
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This time, Lincoln has brought along Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lisa and they will be reading ''The Diary of a Loud''. It's by Animation Fan 15, who's a pretty prolific fanfiction author.
The fanfic starts with the Louds spring cleaning. Fic!Lori and Fic!Leni are sorting their clothes (with Fic!Leni "choosing indecisively" somehow), Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan are deciding whether to donate some of their instruments and props respectively, then Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Leni with her plastic spider, causing Fic!Leni to spray insect repellent even though spiders are arachnids... then again, it's Leni we're talking about.
Fic!Lynn is organising her sports balls and Fic!Lucy is sorting through her books. The former says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", which the latter says sounds creepy, and besides it would make sense to have that many, so Fic!Lynn says, "I don't get the joke"... even though Fic!Lucy didn't make a joke.
Meanwhile, Fic!Lana is tidying up the trash, and Fic!Lola is polishing her pageant awards. She says, "I'm always knew I was that good!" (sic), which is apparently also meant to be a joke. Fic!Lisa, in a hazmat suit, tidies up her supplies and changes Fic!Lily's diaper.
And Fic!Lincoln has found a blank diary mysteriously on his shelf. He writes his name on it, then starts writing in it at bedtime, and then again in the middle of the night.
The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell. Fic!Lana decides to take Fic!El Diablo and Fic!Lola searches in Fic!Lincoln's room and decides to bring his diary to school. Fic!Lana shows off Fic!El Diablo, then she and the teacher go to the bathroom, while Fic!Lola reads the diary.
It documents Fic!Lincoln's love for ''The Dream Boat'' and the time he got covered in poop (during "Two Boys and a Baby"). The class bursts out laughing, and the information spreads around the school. Fic!Chandler, Fic!Papa Wheelie, and Fic!Girl Jordan tease Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde, and Fic!Ronnie Anne is about to tell something to Fic!Lincoln, but the school bell rings.
When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts that Fic!Ronnie Anne "broke up" with him. Fic!Lola comes in, not having heard her brother shouting, and the diary falls out, exposing her. Still very angry, Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, giving her a black eye, knocking her teeth out, and causing her to fall downstairs and be knocked out.
Fic!Lola is taken to the hospital, where she thinks she deserved it. The real Lola strongly disagrees. Fic!Lola goes back from the hospital, and Fic!Lincoln is still mad at her, making the real Lola cry. Fic!Lincoln then tells his other sisters that Fic!Lola has to dazzle him to make him love her again. The real Lincoln, fortunately, is highly offended by his fanfic counterpart's behaviour and lets Lola know that she doesn't have to do anything to earn his love.
Fic!Lola has Fic!Lana build a stage, then puts on a show for Fic!Lincoln, who finally forgives her. Then, the real Lincoln carries Lola off to get ice cream to cheer her up.
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** Fic!Lola is an even bigger gossip than the real Lola and reads Fic!Lincoln's diary to her whole class.
** Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, hard enough to land her in hospital, and doesn't seem to care that she's hurt. Sure, the real Lincoln might be angry if Lola shared his diary with her class, but he wouldn't be that cruel.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", prompting the real Lynn, plus Lincoln, to snicker.
* BigBrotherBully: Fic!Lincoln punches his little sister in the face, landing her in hospital, doesn't care, and says she has to dazzle him to make him love her again, all because she spilt some embarrassing secrets.
* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" when Fic!Lola claims she deserved being put in the hospital.
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him except Fic!Lana herself.
* CharacterExaggeration:
** Lola may be a gossip, but she wouldn't read someone else's diary to her whole class. Fic!Lola on the other hand...
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction. Fic!Lana builds a stage in ''two hours''.
* ComfortFood: Lincoln takes Lola to get ice cream to cheer her up.
* ContinuityNod:
** The Loud kids reminisce (and cringe) over the events of "Cover Girls".
** Lincoln getting covered in Lily's poop in "Two Boys and a Baby" is mentioned.
** Lincoln remembers the "trophy case incident", which happened in "Making the Case".
* CurseCutShort: When the time Lily's diaper hit the ceiling fan is brought up, Luan says, "Well, you know what they say, sh--", but Lynn interrupts.
* TheDiaperChange: At the beginning, Fic!Lisa changes Fic!Lily's diaper, and the real Lisa remarks that she does often have to change Lily, but doesn't mind because she tests things on her as well.
* DisproportionateRetribution: As Lola pointed out, she'd deserve ''something'' for spilling Lincoln's secrets, but not to be hospitalised.
* EveryoneHasStandards:
** Lola may read diaries all the time, but she wouldn't share info from them with her whole class.
** As Lincoln says, he gets steamed at his sisters sometimes, but would never say he hates them.
* EyeScream:
** Fic!Lola gets such a bad black eye, it needs a bandage.
** Fic!Lincoln ''kisses'' Fic!Lola's damaged eye.
* GameOfNerds: Lynn says that baseball is the "thinking girl's sport".
* HazmatSuit: Fic!Lisa wears a hazmat suit to tidy up her supplies and change Fic!Lily's diaper.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Fic!Lincoln wakes up in the middle of the night to write about ''The Dream Boat'', which is something the real Lincoln probably wouldn't do.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class like Fic!Lola does. Also, Lincoln's room probably isn't the first place she'd look for something for show-and-tell.
* PlotHole: It's never revealed how Fic!Lincoln's diary ended up in his room, or how Fic!Lori heard his secrets, how Fic!Ronnie Anne was able to "break up" with Fic!Lincoln, or how Fic!Lola didn't hear Fic!Lincoln yell that Fic!Ronnie Anne broke up with him.
* {{Pun}}: Luan says that "oxymoron" without the "oxy" is Leni. She later says that she "wood" not expect Lana to be able to build a stage in two hours.
* RealMenHateAffection: Fic!Lincoln is laughed at for watching a romance show.
* {{Shipping}}: Discussed InUniverse when Lincoln is annoyed that so many fanfiction writers seem to think Ronnie Anne is his girlfriend.
* ShoutOut: Lincoln says he has twenty knickknacks, which is a line from ''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''.
* SnakesAreSinister: While Fic!El Diablo himself is harmless, Fic!Lana is the only girl in her class who doesn't scream at the sight of him.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama. Fic!Lola is sent falling downstairs, knocking her out.
* TwitchyEye: Of the "annoyed" variety, Lisa's eye twitches at one point because of the bad grammar.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord:
** Much to the ire of Luan, this story twice claims that a character made a joke, even though there was no joke.
** Fic!Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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The fanfic starts with the Louds spring cleaning. Fic!Lori and Fic!Leni are sorting their clothes (with Fic!Leni "choosing indecisively" somehow), Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan are deciding whether to donate some of their instruments and props respectively, then Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Leni with her plastic spider, causing Fic!Leni to spray insect repellent even though spiders are arachnids... then again, it's Leni we're talking about.
Fic!Lynn is organising her sports balls and Fic!Lucy is sorting through her books. The former says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", which the latter says sounds creepy, and besides it would make sense to have that many, so Fic!Lynn says, "I don't get the joke"... even though Fic!Lucy didn't make a joke.
Meanwhile, Fic!Lana is tidying up the trash, and Fic!Lola is polishing her pageant awards. She says, "I'm always knew I was that good!" (sic), which is apparently also meant to be a joke. Fic!Lisa, in a hazmat suit, tidies up her supplies and changes Fic!Lily's diaper.
And Fic!Lincoln has found a blank diary mysteriously on his shelf. He writes his name on it, then starts writing in it at bedtime, and then again in the middle of the night.
The next morning, the fanfic twins need to find something for show-and-tell. Fic!Lana decides to take Fic!El Diablo and Fic!Lola searches in Fic!Lincoln's room and decides to bring his diary to school. Fic!Lana shows off Fic!El Diablo, then she and the teacher go to the bathroom, while Fic!Lola reads the diary.
It documents Fic!Lincoln's love for ''The Dream Boat'' and the time he got covered in poop (during "Two Boys and a Baby"). The class bursts out laughing, and the information spreads around the school. Fic!Chandler, Fic!Papa Wheelie, and Fic!Girl Jordan tease Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde, and Fic!Ronnie Anne is about to tell something to Fic!Lincoln, but the school bell rings.
When he gets home, his older sisters have apparently found out about him getting covered in poop too and he angrily shouts that Fic!Ronnie Anne "broke up" with him. Fic!Lola comes in, not having heard her brother shouting, and the diary falls out, exposing her. Still very angry, Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, giving her a black eye, knocking her teeth out, and causing her to fall downstairs and be knocked out.
Fic!Lola is taken to the hospital, where she thinks she deserved it. The real Lola strongly disagrees. Fic!Lola goes back from the hospital, and Fic!Lincoln is still mad at her, making the real Lola cry. Fic!Lincoln then tells his other sisters that Fic!Lola has to dazzle him to make him love her again. The real Lincoln, fortunately, is highly offended by his fanfic counterpart's behaviour and lets Lola know that she doesn't have to do anything to earn his love.
Fic!Lola has Fic!Lana build a stage, then puts on a show for Fic!Lincoln, who finally forgives her. Then, the real Lincoln carries Lola off to get ice cream to cheer her up.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** Fic!Lola is an even bigger gossip than the real Lola and reads Fic!Lincoln's diary to her whole class.
** Fic!Lincoln punches Fic!Lola in the face, hard enough to land her in hospital, and doesn't seem to care that she's hurt. Sure, the real Lincoln might be angry if Lola shared his diary with her class, but he wouldn't be that cruel.
* BallsGag: Fic!Lynn says, "Who knew I had so many balls?!", prompting the real Lynn, plus Lincoln, to snicker.
* BigBrotherBully: Fic!Lincoln punches his little sister in the face, landing her in hospital, doesn't care, and says she has to dazzle him to make him love her again, all because she spilt some embarrassing secrets.
* BigWhat: The siblings all shout, "WHAT?!" when Fic!Lola claims she deserved being put in the hospital.
* BoysLikeCreepyCritters: All of the boys in the fanfic twins' class think El Diablo is cool. That's about 15 six-year-old boys, who all like snakes. And none of the girls like him except Fic!Lana herself.
* CharacterExaggeration:
** Lola may be a gossip, but she wouldn't read someone else's diary to her whole class. Fic!Lola on the other hand...
** Canon Lana is good with engineering, plumbing, and construction. Fic!Lana builds a stage in ''two hours''.
* ComfortFood: Lincoln takes Lola to get ice cream to cheer her up.
* ContinuityNod:
** The Loud kids reminisce (and cringe) over the events of "Cover Girls".
** Lincoln getting covered in Lily's poop in "Two Boys and a Baby" is mentioned.
** Lincoln remembers the "trophy case incident", which happened in "Making the Case".
* CurseCutShort: When the time Lily's diaper hit the ceiling fan is brought up, Luan says, "Well, you know what they say, sh--", but Lynn interrupts.
* TheDiaperChange: At the beginning, Fic!Lisa changes Fic!Lily's diaper, and the real Lisa remarks that she does often have to change Lily, but doesn't mind because she tests things on her as well.
* DisproportionateRetribution: As Lola pointed out, she'd deserve ''something'' for spilling Lincoln's secrets, but not to be hospitalised.
* EveryoneHasStandards:
** Lola may read diaries all the time, but she wouldn't share info from them with her whole class.
** As Lincoln says, he gets steamed at his sisters sometimes, but would never say he hates them.
* EyeScream:
** Fic!Lola gets such a bad black eye, it needs a bandage.
** Fic!Lincoln ''kisses'' Fic!Lola's damaged eye.
* GameOfNerds: Lynn says that baseball is the "thinking girl's sport".
* HazmatSuit: Fic!Lisa wears a hazmat suit to tidy up her supplies and change Fic!Lily's diaper.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Fic!Lincoln wakes up in the middle of the night to write about ''The Dream Boat'', which is something the real Lincoln probably wouldn't do.
** While Lola does read people's diaries, she wouldn't read them to the whole class like Fic!Lola does. Also, Lincoln's room probably isn't the first place she'd look for something for show-and-tell.
* PlotHole: It's never revealed how Fic!Lincoln's diary ended up in his room, or how Fic!Lori heard his secrets, how Fic!Ronnie Anne was able to "break up" with Fic!Lincoln, or how Fic!Lola didn't hear Fic!Lincoln yell that Fic!Ronnie Anne broke up with him.
* {{Pun}}: Luan says that "oxymoron" without the "oxy" is Leni. She later says that she "wood" not expect Lana to be able to build a stage in two hours.
* RealMenHateAffection: Fic!Lincoln is laughed at for watching a romance show.
* {{Shipping}}: Discussed InUniverse when Lincoln is annoyed that so many fanfiction writers seem to think Ronnie Anne is his girlfriend.
* ShoutOut: Lincoln says he has twenty knickknacks, which is a line from ''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''.
* SnakesAreSinister: While Fic!El Diablo himself is harmless, Fic!Lana is the only girl in her class who doesn't scream at the sight of him.
* StaircaseTumble: Played for drama. Fic!Lola is sent falling downstairs, knocking her out.
* TwitchyEye: Of the "annoyed" variety, Lisa's eye twitches at one point because of the bad grammar.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord:
** Much to the ire of Luan, this story twice claims that a character made a joke, even though there was no joke.
** Fic!Lisa's tidying up her chemicals is described as "confiscating" them.
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