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The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln, Fic!Clyde, Fic!Rusty, Fic!Liam, and Fic!Zach by their lockers, excited for summer and for "class night", which Lincoln (the real one) defines as "like prom night, but lamer". Then, it turns out that all of them have dates except Fic!Lincoln. The real Lincoln doubts this as likely, and Clyde calls him a girl magnet, piquing the curiosity of the sisters.
Then, it's revealed that Fic!Lincoln has a crush on a girl but is too nervous to ask her out. Fic!Zach condescendingly says, "Yeah, and the grass is green and the sky is blue", to which Fic!Liam says that it's not technically true, which, as Lincoln points out, is odd, since Liam doesn't know squat about science. Fic!Zach tells Fic!Lincoln that feeling shy around his crushes is normal, but he needs to get over his jitters, so Fic!Lincoln decides to ask his crush out that day.
Fic!Lincoln then does a test but has trouble and worries that means his crush won't like him. After the test, he walks over to Fic!Stella (despite Lincoln pointing out that he knows that no means no) and is about to ask her out but she has to take the bus. Lisa snidely points out that Lincoln, the real one at least, has a cell phone.
Later, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde are at the movies buying snacks and drinks (but Lynn would rather break the rules and bring her own snacks and drinks). Fic!Clyde convinces Fic!Lincoln to text Fic!Stella, and he nervously does. After the movie, Fic!Lori texts Fic!Lincoln, inviting him to Burpin' Burger.
There, Fic!Stella is revealed to already have a date, which makes Fic!Lincoln grumpy. He's still in a sulk when helping with the dishes after dinner that night, even when Fic!Lynn Sr. reveals that they're going to the beach tomorrow. Fic!Lola jumps on Fic!Lincoln's stomach and Lincoln reveals that Lola does indeed do that sometimes, in a game she calls "Trampoline".
That night, the older sisters are concerned about Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lori goes to talk to him and he tells her he got rejected. The real Lori points out that dating isn't a big deal in fifth grade, then adds that girls mature faster than boys... even though, according to Lincoln, she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school, but she claims she sang it "ironically". Fic!Lincoln goes to sleep.
The next day, at the beach, Fic!Lincoln is doing a "Q&A" and explains it to Fic!Leni. Fic!Paige asks if he's going to class night, and the next day at school, he asks her out, but she also has a date, as do Fic!Girl Jordan, Fic!Cristina, and four more girls, so he decides not to go. Fic!Clyde says he has to and Lynn tries to say that's not true, but she feels a bit sad about not having gone to class night in elementary school.
Fic!Lori convinces him that class night will be fun, so he phones up Fic!Ronnie Anne. Much to his excitement, she says yes. The sisters tease Lincoln for Fic!Lincoln's excitement, and Lincoln points out that his fanfic counterpart is only excited to not be alone. Lisa asks why he can't bring a ''boy'', but Lincoln says that it'd just be weird and refuses to argue with someone who sleeps with a nightlight.
Fic!Lincoln gets teased as well, and then he goes to the class night, where Fic!Rusty has rented a ''limo''. Then, the story abruptly ends.
Then, it's revealed that Fic!Lincoln has a crush on a girl but is too nervous to ask her out. Fic!Zach condescendingly says, "Yeah, and the grass is green and the sky is blue", to which Fic!Liam says that it's not technically true, which, as Lincoln points out, is odd, since Liam doesn't know squat about science. Fic!Zach tells Fic!Lincoln that feeling shy around his crushes is normal, but he needs to get over his jitters, so Fic!Lincoln decides to ask his crush out that day.
Fic!Lincoln then does a test but has trouble and worries that means his crush won't like him. After the test, he walks over to Fic!Stella (despite Lincoln pointing out that he knows that no means no) and is about to ask her out but she has to take the bus. Lisa snidely points out that Lincoln, the real one at least, has a cell phone.
Later, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde are at the movies buying snacks and drinks (but Lynn would rather break the rules and bring her own snacks and drinks). Fic!Clyde convinces Fic!Lincoln to text Fic!Stella, and he nervously does. After the movie, Fic!Lori texts Fic!Lincoln, inviting him to Burpin' Burger.
There, Fic!Stella is revealed to already have a date, which makes Fic!Lincoln grumpy. He's still in a sulk when helping with the dishes after dinner that night, even when Fic!Lynn Sr. reveals that they're going to the beach tomorrow. Fic!Lola jumps on Fic!Lincoln's stomach and Lincoln reveals that Lola does indeed do that sometimes, in a game she calls "Trampoline".
That night, the older sisters are concerned about Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lori goes to talk to him and he tells her he got rejected. The real Lori points out that dating isn't a big deal in fifth grade, then adds that girls mature faster than boys... even though, according to Lincoln, she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school, but she claims she sang it "ironically". Fic!Lincoln goes to sleep.
The next day, at the beach, Fic!Lincoln is doing a "Q&A" and explains it to Fic!Leni. Fic!Paige asks if he's going to class night, and the next day at school, he asks her out, but she also has a date, as do Fic!Girl Jordan, Fic!Cristina, and four more girls, so he decides not to go. Fic!Clyde says he has to and Lynn tries to say that's not true, but she feels a bit sad about not having gone to class night in elementary school.
Fic!Lori convinces him that class night will be fun, so he phones up Fic!Ronnie Anne. Much to his excitement, she says yes. The sisters tease Lincoln for Fic!Lincoln's excitement, and Lincoln points out that his fanfic counterpart is only excited to not be alone. Lisa asks why he can't bring a ''boy'', but Lincoln says that it'd just be weird and refuses to argue with someone who sleeps with a nightlight.
Fic!Lincoln gets teased as well, and then he goes to the class night, where Fic!Rusty has rented a ''limo''. Then, the story abruptly ends.
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The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln, Fic!Clyde, Fic!Rusty, Fic!Liam, Lincoln, Clyde, Rusty, Liam, and Fic!Zach Zach by their lockers, excited for summer and for "class night", which Lincoln (the real one) defines as "like prom night, but lamer". Then, it turns out that all of them have dates except Fic!Lincoln.Lincoln. The real Lincoln doubts this as likely, and Clyde calls him a girl magnet, piquing the curiosity of the sisters.
Then, it's revealed thatFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln has a crush on a girl but is too nervous to ask her out. Fic!Zach Zach condescendingly says, "Yeah, and the grass is green and the sky is blue", to which Fic!Liam Liam says that it's not technically true, which, as the real Lincoln points out, is odd, since Liam doesn't know squat about science. Fic!Zach Fanfic Zach tells Fic!Lincoln Lincoln that feeling shy around his crushes is normal, but he needs to get over his jitters, so Fic!Lincoln Lincoln decides to ask his crush out that day.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln then does a test but has trouble and worries that means his crush won't like him. After the test, he walks over to Fic!Stella Stella (despite the real Lincoln pointing out that he knows that no means no) and is about to ask her out but she has to take the bus. Lisa snidely points out that Lincoln, the real one at least, has a cell phone.
Later,Fic!Lincoln the fanfic versions of Lincoln and Fic!Clyde Clyde are at the movies buying snacks and drinks (but Lynn would rather break the rules and bring her own snacks and drinks). Fic!Clyde Fanfic Clyde convinces Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to text Fic!Stella, Stella, and he nervously does. After the movie, Fic!Lori fanfic Lori texts Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, inviting him to Burpin' Burger.
There,Fic!Stella fanfic Stella is revealed to already have a date, which makes Fic!Lincoln Lincoln grumpy. He's still in a sulk when helping with the dishes after dinner that night, even when Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. reveals that they're going to the beach tomorrow. Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola jumps on Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's stomach and the real Lincoln reveals that Lola does indeed do that sometimes, in a game she calls "Trampoline".
That night, the older sisters are concerned aboutFic!Lincoln, fanfic Lincoln, and Fic!Lori Lori goes to talk to him and he tells her he got rejected. The real Lori points out that dating isn't a big deal in fifth grade, then adds that girls mature faster than boys... even though, according to Lincoln, she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school, but she claims she sang it "ironically". Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln goes to sleep.
The next day, at the beach,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln is doing a "Q&A" and explains it to Fic!Leni. Fic!Paige Leni. Paige asks if he's going to class night, and the next day at school, he asks her out, but she also has a date, as do Fic!Girl Girl Jordan, Fic!Cristina, Cristina, and four more girls, so he decides not to go. Fic!Clyde Fanfic Clyde says he has to and the real Lynn tries to say that's not true, but she feels a bit sad about not having gone to class night in elementary school.
Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori convinces him that class night will be fun, so he phones up Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne. Much to his excitement, she says yes. The sisters tease Lincoln for Fic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's excitement, and the real Lincoln points out that his fanfic counterpart is only excited to not be alone. Lisa asks why he can't bring a ''boy'', but Lincoln says that it'd just be weird and refuses to argue with someone who sleeps with a nightlight.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets teased as well, and then he goes to the class night, where Fic!Rusty Rusty has rented a ''limo''. Then, the story abruptly ends.
Then, it's revealed that
Later,
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella and Fic!Rusty are implied to be dating.
* AdaptationalWealth: Fic!Rusty's parents are apparently richer than the real Rusty's, since he rented a ''limo'' for Class Night.
* BigYes: Fic!Lincoln says, "YESSSSS!" when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation.
* AdaptationalWealth: Fic!Rusty's parents are apparently richer than the real Rusty's, since he rented a ''limo'' for Class Night.
* BigYes: Fic!Lincoln says, "YESSSSS!" when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella Fanfic Stella and Fic!Rusty Rusty are implied to be dating.
* AdaptationalWealth:Fic!Rusty's Fanfic Rusty's parents are apparently richer than the real Rusty's, since he rented a ''limo'' for Class Night.
* BigYes:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln says, "YESSSSS!" when Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation.
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* BigYes:
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* ComfortFood: Invoked by Fic!Lincoln who says that he should check if Fic!Stella replied at Burpin' Burger, so if she rejects him, he can "eat his feelings away".
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* ComfortFood: Invoked by Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln who says that he should check if Fic!Stella Stella replied at Burpin' Burger, so if she rejects him, he can "eat his feelings away".
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** Liam doesn't know anything whatsoever about physics but Fic!Liam knows that colours are an illusion.
** Fic!Lynn Sr. is strangely apathetic; when Fic!Lincoln is moody, Fic!Lynn Sr. can't be bothered to either discipline or console him.
** Fic!Lynn Sr. is strangely apathetic; when Fic!Lincoln is moody, Fic!Lynn Sr. can't be bothered to either discipline or console him.
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** Liam doesn't know anything whatsoever about physics but Fic!Liam fanfic Liam knows that colours are an illusion.
**Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn Sr. is strangely apathetic; when Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is moody, Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. can't be bothered to either discipline or console him.
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* RapidFireYes: Fic!Lincoln, when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation, says, "Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!".
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* RapidFireYes: Fic!Lincoln, Fanfic Lincoln, when Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation, says, "Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!".
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella and Fic!Rusty are implied to be dating.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella and Fic!Rusty are implied to be dating.
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* PrimalFears: Discussed when Lisa says that it is human nature to be afraid of the dark.
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* PrimalFears: PrimalFear: Discussed when Lisa says that it is human nature to be afraid of the dark.
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Lincoln has brought along Lori, Lynn, Lisa, and, for the first time, Clyde (who is wearing blinders to prevent him from seeing Lori). They are going to be reading ''Class Night''.
The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln, Fic!Clyde, Fic!Rusty, Fic!Liam, and Fic!Zach by their lockers, excited for summer and for "class night", which Lincoln (the real one) defines as "like prom night, but lamer". Then, it turns out that all of them have dates except Fic!Lincoln. The real Lincoln doubts this as likely, and Clyde calls him a girl magnet, piquing the curiosity of the sisters.
Then, it's revealed that Fic!Lincoln has a crush on a girl but is too nervous to ask her out. Fic!Zach condescendingly says, "Yeah, and the grass is green and the sky is blue", to which Fic!Liam says that it's not technically true, which, as Lincoln points out, is odd, since Liam doesn't know squat about science. Fic!Zach tells Fic!Lincoln that feeling shy around his crushes is normal, but he needs to get over his jitters, so Fic!Lincoln decides to ask his crush out that day.
Fic!Lincoln then does a test but has trouble and worries that means his crush won't like him. After the test, he walks over to Fic!Stella (despite Lincoln pointing out that he knows that no means no) and is about to ask her out but she has to take the bus. Lisa snidely points out that Lincoln, the real one at least, has a cell phone.
Later, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde are at the movies buying snacks and drinks (but Lynn would rather break the rules and bring her own snacks and drinks). Fic!Clyde convinces Fic!Lincoln to text Fic!Stella, and he nervously does. After the movie, Fic!Lori texts Fic!Lincoln, inviting him to Burpin' Burger.
There, Fic!Stella is revealed to already have a date, which makes Fic!Lincoln grumpy. He's still in a sulk when helping with the dishes after dinner that night, even when Fic!Lynn Sr. reveals that they're going to the beach tomorrow. Fic!Lola jumps on Fic!Lincoln's stomach and Lincoln reveals that Lola does indeed do that sometimes, in a game she calls "Trampoline".
That night, the older sisters are concerned about Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lori goes to talk to him and he tells her he got rejected. The real Lori points out that dating isn't a big deal in fifth grade, then adds that girls mature faster than boys... even though, according to Lincoln, she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school, but she claims she sang it "ironically". Fic!Lincoln goes to sleep.
The next day, at the beach, Fic!Lincoln is doing a "Q&A" and explains it to Fic!Leni. Fic!Paige asks if he's going to class night, and the next day at school, he asks her out, but she also has a date, as do Fic!Girl Jordan, Fic!Cristina, and four more girls, so he decides not to go. Fic!Clyde says he has to and Lynn tries to say that's not true, but she feels a bit sad about not having gone to class night in elementary school.
Fic!Lori convinces him that class night will be fun, so he phones up Fic!Ronnie Anne. Much to his excitement, she says yes. The sisters tease Lincoln for Fic!Lincoln's excitement, and Lincoln points out that his fanfic counterpart is only excited to not be alone. Lisa asks why he can't bring a ''boy'', but Lincoln says that it'd just be weird and refuses to argue with someone who sleeps with a nightlight.
Fic!Lincoln gets teased as well, and then he goes to the class night, where Fic!Rusty has rented a ''limo''. Then, the story abruptly ends.
The siblings and Clyde are a bit bemused, but reckon they haven't missed much. Lynn reveals that the middle school dance is coming up but she's going stag because boys find her intimidating. She shows her bare stomach, which causes Clyde to start crushing on ''her''.
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* AdaptationalWealth: Fic!Rusty's parents are apparently richer than the real Rusty's, since he rented a ''limo'' for Class Night.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella and Fic!Rusty are implied to be dating.
* BigYes: Fic!Lincoln says, "YESSSSS!" when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation.
* BookDumb: Liam isn't stupid, but this episode reveals that he's not very book-smart: he doesn't believe in evolution and used to believe, among other things, that the moon was a star and bats were bugs.
* ComfortFood: Invoked by Fic!Lincoln who says that he should check if Fic!Stella replied at Burpin' Burger, so if she rejects him, he can "eat his feelings away".
* ContinuityNod:
** Lincoln remembers that Stella already told him she wasn't interested (in "Be Stella My Heart").
** Lincoln and Clyde remember Paige, from "L is for Love" and Cristina from "Making the Case".
* CopycatMockery: When Clyde says, "But Lynn, isn't that against theatre policy?!", she teasingly mimics him.
* GirlsHaveCooties: Lori says that when boys are in fifth grade, they're just figuring out that girls don't have cooties, but girls have already matured. Then, Lincoln says that she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school.
* LastSecondWordSwap: When Lynn offers Clyde a piggyback, he says, "I'd lo-- I mean like to."
* MistakenForGay: Defied by Lincoln, who refuses to dance with a boy because that'd be weird.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Liam doesn't know anything whatsoever about physics but Fic!Liam knows that colours are an illusion.
** Fic!Lynn Sr. is strangely apathetic; when Fic!Lincoln is moody, Fic!Lynn Sr. can't be bothered to either discipline or console him.
* PrimalFears: Discussed when Lisa says that it is human nature to be afraid of the dark.
* RapidFireYes: Fic!Lincoln, when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation, says, "Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!".
* WhatAreRecords: Lincoln doesn't know what DVD and Blu-Ray are.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: This episode reveals Lisa to be afraid of the dark.
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The fanfic begins with Fic!Lincoln, Fic!Clyde, Fic!Rusty, Fic!Liam, and Fic!Zach by their lockers, excited for summer and for "class night", which Lincoln (the real one) defines as "like prom night, but lamer". Then, it turns out that all of them have dates except Fic!Lincoln. The real Lincoln doubts this as likely, and Clyde calls him a girl magnet, piquing the curiosity of the sisters.
Then, it's revealed that Fic!Lincoln has a crush on a girl but is too nervous to ask her out. Fic!Zach condescendingly says, "Yeah, and the grass is green and the sky is blue", to which Fic!Liam says that it's not technically true, which, as Lincoln points out, is odd, since Liam doesn't know squat about science. Fic!Zach tells Fic!Lincoln that feeling shy around his crushes is normal, but he needs to get over his jitters, so Fic!Lincoln decides to ask his crush out that day.
Fic!Lincoln then does a test but has trouble and worries that means his crush won't like him. After the test, he walks over to Fic!Stella (despite Lincoln pointing out that he knows that no means no) and is about to ask her out but she has to take the bus. Lisa snidely points out that Lincoln, the real one at least, has a cell phone.
Later, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Clyde are at the movies buying snacks and drinks (but Lynn would rather break the rules and bring her own snacks and drinks). Fic!Clyde convinces Fic!Lincoln to text Fic!Stella, and he nervously does. After the movie, Fic!Lori texts Fic!Lincoln, inviting him to Burpin' Burger.
There, Fic!Stella is revealed to already have a date, which makes Fic!Lincoln grumpy. He's still in a sulk when helping with the dishes after dinner that night, even when Fic!Lynn Sr. reveals that they're going to the beach tomorrow. Fic!Lola jumps on Fic!Lincoln's stomach and Lincoln reveals that Lola does indeed do that sometimes, in a game she calls "Trampoline".
That night, the older sisters are concerned about Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lori goes to talk to him and he tells her he got rejected. The real Lori points out that dating isn't a big deal in fifth grade, then adds that girls mature faster than boys... even though, according to Lincoln, she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school, but she claims she sang it "ironically". Fic!Lincoln goes to sleep.
The next day, at the beach, Fic!Lincoln is doing a "Q&A" and explains it to Fic!Leni. Fic!Paige asks if he's going to class night, and the next day at school, he asks her out, but she also has a date, as do Fic!Girl Jordan, Fic!Cristina, and four more girls, so he decides not to go. Fic!Clyde says he has to and Lynn tries to say that's not true, but she feels a bit sad about not having gone to class night in elementary school.
Fic!Lori convinces him that class night will be fun, so he phones up Fic!Ronnie Anne. Much to his excitement, she says yes. The sisters tease Lincoln for Fic!Lincoln's excitement, and Lincoln points out that his fanfic counterpart is only excited to not be alone. Lisa asks why he can't bring a ''boy'', but Lincoln says that it'd just be weird and refuses to argue with someone who sleeps with a nightlight.
Fic!Lincoln gets teased as well, and then he goes to the class night, where Fic!Rusty has rented a ''limo''. Then, the story abruptly ends.
The siblings and Clyde are a bit bemused, but reckon they haven't missed much. Lynn reveals that the middle school dance is coming up but she's going stag because boys find her intimidating. She shows her bare stomach, which causes Clyde to start crushing on ''her''.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationalWealth: Fic!Rusty's parents are apparently richer than the real Rusty's, since he rented a ''limo'' for Class Night.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Stella and Rusty are explicitly platonic friends. Fic!Stella and Fic!Rusty are implied to be dating.
* BigYes: Fic!Lincoln says, "YESSSSS!" when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation.
* BookDumb: Liam isn't stupid, but this episode reveals that he's not very book-smart: he doesn't believe in evolution and used to believe, among other things, that the moon was a star and bats were bugs.
* ComfortFood: Invoked by Fic!Lincoln who says that he should check if Fic!Stella replied at Burpin' Burger, so if she rejects him, he can "eat his feelings away".
* ContinuityNod:
** Lincoln remembers that Stella already told him she wasn't interested (in "Be Stella My Heart").
** Lincoln and Clyde remember Paige, from "L is for Love" and Cristina from "Making the Case".
* CopycatMockery: When Clyde says, "But Lynn, isn't that against theatre policy?!", she teasingly mimics him.
* GirlsHaveCooties: Lori says that when boys are in fifth grade, they're just figuring out that girls don't have cooties, but girls have already matured. Then, Lincoln says that she sang, "Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider" until high school.
* LastSecondWordSwap: When Lynn offers Clyde a piggyback, he says, "I'd lo-- I mean like to."
* MistakenForGay: Defied by Lincoln, who refuses to dance with a boy because that'd be weird.
* OutOfCharacter:
** Liam doesn't know anything whatsoever about physics but Fic!Liam knows that colours are an illusion.
** Fic!Lynn Sr. is strangely apathetic; when Fic!Lincoln is moody, Fic!Lynn Sr. can't be bothered to either discipline or console him.
* PrimalFears: Discussed when Lisa says that it is human nature to be afraid of the dark.
* RapidFireYes: Fic!Lincoln, when Fic!Ronnie Anne accepts his invitation, says, "Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!".
* WhatAreRecords: Lincoln doesn't know what DVD and Blu-Ray are.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: This episode reveals Lisa to be afraid of the dark.
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