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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Lori admits that she doesn't always mean it when she says, "Literally".
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: InUniverse, the siblings find the scene of Lincoln and Lily eating cookies too cutesy.

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* TastesLikeDiabetes: SweetnessAversion: InUniverse, the siblings find the scene of Lincoln and Lily eating cookies too cutesy.
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*NoodleImplements: Luan's comment on the "mean sisters"'s attempt to make up to Lincoln involving popcorn and sleeping bags: "Also, I’ll need a rake, nine bottles of rubbing alcohol and a German-to-Italian dictionary. Oh, and one of those giant lollipops that you can only get at Disneyland."
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** Then, fanfic Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser. He also thin-skinned while the real Lincoln is thick-skinned.

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** Then, fanfic Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser. He also thin-skinned while the real Lincoln is thick-skinned.


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** Then, fanfic Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser.

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** Then, fanfic Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser. He also thin-skinned while the real Lincoln is thick-skinned.

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The story begins with Fic!Lincoln watching TV at night with his sisters. Already, things are looking a bit off-- ''ARGGH!'' is the only show Lincoln really watches at night, and his sisters don't tend to like that many shows he watches. The strangeness continues when Fic!Lincoln speaks in incorrect grammar (much to the ire of Lucy) and his sisters seem strangely focused on them being family for no particular reason.)

After Fic!Lincoln (uncharacteristically clumsily) gets out of bed, he decides he wants to sleep in his living room but Fic!Lynn Sr. says no because there's been a "robbery on couches". After the siblings point out the ludicrousness of burglars stealing only couches, Fic!Rita suggests that Fic!Lincoln bunk with two of his sisters, which he thinks is a good idea. Lori disagrees.

So Fic!Lincoln tries the twins, but Fic!Lola objects, so he tries Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily's room, but decides it's too dangerous (and the real Lincoln and Lisa agree). Fic!Lynn gives the confusing answer, "Of course! Not after you let me stay at your room!" but Fic!Lincoln runs away after remembering "Space Invader" and Fic!Lucy wanting him to play a corpse. He goes to Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan's room, where the latter makes a pie prank... that just involves haphazardly throwing the pies everywhere. Finally, he tries Fic!Lori and Fic!Leni's room. Fic!Lori says no (and the real Lori agrees), but Fic!Leni glares at her, so she caves in.

Lisa, meanwhile, has gotten so fed up with the bad grammar that she rigs explosives to detonate every time the story changes tenses.

Three days later, apparently, Fic!Lincoln has bunked with all of his sisters, having inexplicably changed his mind about Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lucy's room, Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan's room, and Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily's room, and having, equally inexplicably, convinced Fic!Lola to let him bunk with the twins after all. The fanfic versions of half of the sisters (the ones dubbed as mean) are fed up, though, with Fic!Lincoln leaving comics in the twins' room, ruining Fic!Lynn's "sleep training" by [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext doing karate in his sleep]], "ruining" Fic!Luan's pie prank... even though it was successful, and "ruining" Fic!Lisa's experiments... by saving them from exploding.

So, at night, the "mean sisters" prank Fic!Lincoln with, not bedsheet ghosts, but ''towel'' ghosts, and he ''falls for it''. The rest of the sisters, and Fic!Lincoln, chew them out for their prank. Meanwhile, the real siblings are commenting on the ludicrousness of the plot.

Fic!Lincoln breaks into tears and has some happy memories with the "nice sisters" (which the real siblings admit are pretty cute), while the "mean sisters" get grounded and finally see the error of their ways and they all have a slumber party.

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The story begins with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln watching TV at night with his sisters. Already, things are looking a bit off-- ''ARGGH!'' is the only show Lincoln really watches at night, and his sisters don't tend to like that many shows he watches. The strangeness continues when Fic!Lincoln he speaks in incorrect grammar (much to the ire of Lucy) Lisa) and his sisters seem strangely focused on them being family for no particular reason.)

After Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln (uncharacteristically clumsily) gets out of bed, he decides he wants to sleep in his living room but Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. says no because there's been a "robbery on couches". After the siblings on the couch point out the ludicrousness of burglars stealing only couches, Fic!Rita Rita in the story suggests that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunk with two of his sisters, which he thinks is a good idea. Lori (the real one) disagrees.

So Fic!Lincoln So, in the story, Lincoln tries the twins, but Fic!Lola Lola objects, so he tries Fic!Lisa Lisa and Fic!Lily's Lily's room, but decides it's too dangerous (and the real Lincoln and Lisa agree). Fic!Lynn Lynn gives the confusing answer, "Of course! Not after you let me stay at your room!" but Fic!Lincoln Lincoln runs away after remembering "Space Invader" and Fic!Lucy Lucy wanting him to play a corpse. He goes to Fic!Luna Luna and Fic!Luan's Luan's room, where the latter makes a pie prank... that just involves haphazardly throwing the pies everywhere. Finally, he tries Fic!Lori Lori and Fic!Leni's Leni's room. Fic!Lori Lori says no (and the real Lori agrees), but Fic!Leni Leni glares at her, so she caves in.

The real Lisa, meanwhile, has gotten so fed up with the bad grammar that she rigs explosives to detonate every time the story changes tenses.

Three days later, apparently, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in the story has bunked with all of his sisters, having inexplicably changed his mind about Fic!Lynn Lynn and Fic!Lucy's Lucy's room, Fic!Luna Luna and Fic!Luan's Luan's room, and Fic!Lisa Lisa and Fic!Lily's Lily's room, and having, equally inexplicably, convinced Fic!Lola Lola to let him bunk with the twins after all. The fanfic versions of half of the sisters (the ones dubbed as mean) are fed up, though, with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln leaving comics in the twins' room, ruining Fic!Lynn's Lynn's "sleep training" by [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext doing karate in his sleep]], "ruining" Fic!Luan's Luan's pie prank... even though it was successful, and "ruining" Fic!Lisa's Lisa's experiments... by saving them from exploding.

So, at night, the "mean sisters" prank Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln with, not bedsheet ghosts, but ''towel'' ghosts, and he ''falls for it''. The rest of the sisters, and Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, chew them out for their prank. Meanwhile, the real siblings are commenting on the ludicrousness of the plot.

Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in the story breaks into tears and has some happy memories with the "nice sisters" (which the real siblings admit are pretty cute), while the "mean sisters" get grounded and finally see the error of their ways and they all have a slumber party.



* AdaptationalBadass: Zigzagged. Fic!Lincoln does karate in his sleep, but he's also much whinier than usual.
* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lincoln ''falls'' for the fake ghosts, even though they're made of towels and telling him to get out of his sisters' rooms.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lisa is much pettier towards Fic!Lincoln than the real Lisa would be, and she claims to hate his white hair.
* AdaptationalWimp: Fic!Lincoln is scared to the point of tears by a bunch of ghosts made out of ''towels'' and he cries and whines instead of simply being annoyed upon finding out it's a prank.
* AskAStupidQuestion: When Fic!Lincoln asks his sisters what they are doing in his room, Luan quips, "Playing leapfrog!".

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* AdaptationalBadass: Zigzagged. Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln does karate in his sleep, but he's also much whinier than usual.
* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lincoln The fanfic version of Lincoln ''falls'' for the fake ghosts, even though they're made of towels and telling him to get out of his sisters' rooms.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lisa The story version of Lisa is much pettier towards Fic!Lincoln Lincoln than the real Lisa would be, and she claims to hate his white hair.
* AdaptationalWimp: Fic!Lincoln is scared to the point of tears by a bunch of ghosts made out of ''towels'' and he cries and whines instead of simply being annoyed upon finding out it's a prank.
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AskAStupidQuestion: When Fic!Lincoln the story Lincoln asks his sisters what they are doing in his room, the real Luan quips, "Playing leapfrog!".



* BigWhat: Fic!Lincoln shouts, "WHAT?!" upon finding out his sisters were pranking him for bunking with them.
* CaptainObvious: Luan says, "You guys got pied!" after pieing Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Luna.
* CharacterExaggeration: Lola does have anger issues, but Fic!Lola gets angry over Fic!Lincoln ''leaving comics in her room'', which could easily be solved by simply asking him to take them.

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* BigWhat: Fic!Lincoln In the story, Lincoln shouts, "WHAT?!" upon finding out his sisters were pranking him for bunking with them.
* CaptainObvious: In the story, Luan says, "You guys got pied!" after pieing Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Luna.
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* CharacterExaggeration: Lola does have anger issues, but Fic!Lola fanfic Lola gets angry over Fic!Lincoln Lincoln ''leaving comics in her room'', which could easily be solved by simply asking him to take them.



* DeathGlare: All it takes for Fic!Lori be convinced to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni is a glare from the latter.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lucy, despite reading ''Princess Pony'', finds the scene of Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lily eating cookies too saccharine.

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* DeathGlare: All it takes for Fic!Lori fanfic Lori be convinced to let Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni Leni is a glare from the latter.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lucy, despite reading ''Princess Pony'', finds the scene of Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lily Lily eating cookies too saccharine.



* LamePunReaction: Luan's siblings groan when she says, "You're a night!" after Fic!Lori mentions calling it a night.

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* LamePunReaction: Luan's siblings groan when she says, "You're a night!" after Fic!Lori Lori in the fanfiction mentions calling it a night.



** Fic!Lincoln implies that "it's just one night" of sleeping alone, even though both he and the real Lincoln do that every night.
** Fic!Leni begs Fic!Lori to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with them "for your sake".
** Fic!Lori is convinced to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni after only a dirty look from the latter.

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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln implies that "it's just one night" of sleeping alone, even though both he and the real Lincoln do that every night.
** Fic!Leni Fanfic Leni begs Fic!Lori Lori to let Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunk with them "for your sake".
** Fic!Lori is convinced to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni after only a dirty look from the latter.
sake".



** Then, Fic!Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser.

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** Then, Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser.



** Fic!Lana believes that Fic!Lola wouldn't mind Fic!Lincoln bunking with them.

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** Fic!Lana Fanfic Lana believes that Fic!Lola Lola wouldn't mind Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunking with them.



** Fic!Lisa gets mad at Fic!Lincoln for "ruining" her experiment by preventing it from exploding. The real Lisa would be grateful unless she was deliberately trying to make it explode and if she was, she wouldn't just leave it there and go to bed. She also joins in on pranking him and says, "In your face!".
** Fic!Luan doesn't make puns. Instead, she just observes things and laughs.
* PieInTheFace: Fic!Luan does a variation where she just haphazardly flings the pies everywhere. The real Luan says that that's not nearly as funny as directly throwing a pie at someone.

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** Fic!Lisa Fanfic Lisa gets mad at Fic!Lincoln Lincoln for "ruining" her experiment by preventing it from exploding. The real Lisa would be grateful unless she was deliberately trying to make it explode and if she was, she wouldn't just leave it there and go to bed. She also joins in on pranking him and says, "In your face!".
** Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan doesn't make puns. Instead, she just observes things and laughs.
* PieInTheFace: Fic!Luan Luan in the story does a variation where she just haphazardly flings the pies everywhere. The real Luan says that that's not nearly as funny as directly throwing a pie at someone.



** Fic!Lincoln is too scared to bunk with the fanfic versions of Lynn, Lucy, Lisa, and Lily, but then later on in the story, he inexplicably does.
** Fic!Lola didn't let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her... but then later on, she also inexplicably changes her mind.
** Fic!Luan complains about Fic!Lincoln "ruining" her pie prank... but the pie prank was successful.
** The so-called "mean sisters" only act mean when Fic!Lincoln tries to bunk with them. Up until then, they seemed outright soppy with their niceness.
** Fic!Lori has a "plan" to keep Fic!Lincoln out of his sisters' rooms, even though she only let him stay with them one night anyway.

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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln is too scared to bunk with the fanfic versions of Lynn, Lucy, Lisa, and Lily, but then later on in the story, he inexplicably does.
** Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola didn't let Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunk with her... but then later on, she also inexplicably changes her mind.
** Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan complains about Fic!Lincoln Lincoln "ruining" her pie prank... but the pie prank was successful.
** The so-called "mean sisters" only act mean in the fanfic when Fic!Lincoln Lincoln tries to bunk with them. Up until then, they seemed outright soppy with their niceness.
** Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori has a "plan" to keep Fic!Lincoln Lincoln out of his sisters' rooms, even though she only let him stay with them one night anyway.



* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Fic!Lucy says, "Sigh" after Fic!Lincoln doesn't want to be her practice corpse.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Lisa tries to walk away after Fic!Lincoln's poem says, "Me is Lincoln L. Loud."
* {{Sleepwalking}}: Fic!Lynn trains in her sleep, prompting Fic!Lincoln to do karate on her, spoiling it... also in his sleep.

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* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Fic!Lucy Fafic Lucy says, "Sigh" after Fic!Lincoln Lincoln doesn't want to be her practice corpse.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Lisa tries to walk away after Fic!Lincoln's fanfic Lincoln's poem says, "Me is Lincoln L. Loud."
* {{Sleepwalking}}: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn trains in her sleep, prompting Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to do karate on her, spoiling it... also in his sleep.



** The siblings all say in unison that they expected Fic!Lola to not let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her.

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** The siblings all say in unison that they expected Fic!Lola the story version of Lola to not let Fic!Lincoln Lincoln bunk with her.



** Fic!Lincoln decides not to bunk with Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily after hearing an explosion coming from their room. He later tries to defy it by mixing something into Lisa's solution to prevent it blowing up, only for Fic!Lisa to blow it up anyway.

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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln decides not to bunk with Fic!Lisa Lisa and Fic!Lily Lily after hearing an explosion coming from their room. He later tries to defy it by mixing something into Lisa's solution to prevent it blowing up, only for Fic!Lisa Lisa to blow it up anyway.



* TastesLikeDiabetes: InUniverse, the siblings find the scene of Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lily eating cookies too cutesy.
* VulgarHumour: Lori and Luan snicker after Fic!Luna asks Fic!Lincoln if he got the cream (from Fic!Luan's pies) out of his hair.
* WorldsSmallestViolin: Luan quips, "Where's the world's smallest violin when you need it?" as a response to Fic!Lincoln whining about being pranked. Lucy then pulls out an actual tiny violin she found in the attic.

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* TastesLikeDiabetes: InUniverse, the siblings find the scene of Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lily Lily eating cookies too cutesy.
* VulgarHumour: Lori and Luan snicker after Fic!Luna story Luna asks Fic!Lincoln Lincoln if he got the cream (from Fic!Luan's Luan's pies) out of his hair.
* WorldsSmallestViolin: Luan quips, "Where's the world's smallest violin when you need it?" as a response to Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln whining about being pranked. Lucy then pulls out an actual tiny violin she found in the attic.
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OK, so Lincoln Loud is sitting on his couch with Lisa, Lori, Luan, and Lucy. He has the girls say hello and lets the audience know that they will be reading a story about them. Lisa chastises fanfiction writers for having "limited brain power", prompting Lincoln to tell her to be nice. She reveals that some fanfic writers describe her, Lori, Luan, Lynn, and Lola as "mean sisters". The Louds then get started on the story, which is titled ''Bunking In''.

The story begins with Fic!Lincoln watching TV at night with his sisters. Already, things are looking a bit off-- ''ARGGH!'' is the only show Lincoln really watches at night, and his sisters don't tend to like that many shows he watches. The strangeness continues when Fic!Lincoln speaks in incorrect grammar (much to the ire of Lucy) and his sisters seem strangely focused on them being family for no particular reason.)

After Fic!Lincoln (uncharacteristically clumsily) gets out of bed, he decides he wants to sleep in his living room but Fic!Lynn Sr. says no because there's been a "robbery on couches". After the siblings point out the ludicrousness of burglars stealing only couches, Fic!Rita suggests that Fic!Lincoln bunk with two of his sisters, which he thinks is a good idea. Lori disagrees.

So Fic!Lincoln tries the twins, but Fic!Lola objects, so he tries Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily's room, but decides it's too dangerous (and the real Lincoln and Lisa agree). Fic!Lynn gives the confusing answer, "Of course! Not after you let me stay at your room!" but Fic!Lincoln runs away after remembering "Space Invader" and Fic!Lucy wanting him to play a corpse. He goes to Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan's room, where the latter makes a pie prank... that just involves haphazardly throwing the pies everywhere. Finally, he tries Fic!Lori and Fic!Leni's room. Fic!Lori says no (and the real Lori agrees), but Fic!Leni glares at her, so she caves in.

Lisa, meanwhile, has gotten so fed up with the bad grammar that she rigs explosives to detonate every time the story changes tenses.

Three days later, apparently, Fic!Lincoln has bunked with all of his sisters, having inexplicably changed his mind about Fic!Lynn and Fic!Lucy's room, Fic!Luna and Fic!Luan's room, and Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily's room, and having, equally inexplicably, convinced Fic!Lola to let him bunk with the twins after all. The fanfic versions of half of the sisters (the ones dubbed as mean) are fed up, though, with Fic!Lincoln leaving comics in the twins' room, ruining Fic!Lynn's "sleep training" by [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext doing karate in his sleep]], "ruining" Fic!Luan's pie prank... even though it was successful, and "ruining" Fic!Lisa's experiments... by saving them from exploding.

So, at night, the "mean sisters" prank Fic!Lincoln with, not bedsheet ghosts, but ''towel'' ghosts, and he ''falls for it''. The rest of the sisters, and Fic!Lincoln, chew them out for their prank. Meanwhile, the real siblings are commenting on the ludicrousness of the plot.

Fic!Lincoln breaks into tears and has some happy memories with the "nice sisters" (which the real siblings admit are pretty cute), while the "mean sisters" get grounded and finally see the error of their ways and they all have a slumber party.

After the story is over, Lucy leaves, but the rest of the sisters are in bad moods. Lori lets Lincoln know she loves him, and the four of them hug it out.

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* AdaptationalBadass: Zigzagged. Fic!Lincoln does karate in his sleep, but he's also much whinier than usual.
* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Lincoln ''falls'' for the fake ghosts, even though they're made of towels and telling him to get out of his sisters' rooms.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Fic!Lisa is much pettier towards Fic!Lincoln than the real Lisa would be, and she claims to hate his white hair.
* AdaptationalWimp: Fic!Lincoln is scared to the point of tears by a bunch of ghosts made out of ''towels'' and he cries and whines instead of simply being annoyed upon finding out it's a prank.
* AskAStupidQuestion: When Fic!Lincoln asks his sisters what they are doing in his room, Luan quips, "Playing leapfrog!".
* BigStupidDooDooHead: Luan calls Luna a "stupid butthead" for melting Mr. Coconuts.
* BigWhat: Fic!Lincoln shouts, "WHAT?!" upon finding out his sisters were pranking him for bunking with them.
* CaptainObvious: Luan says, "You guys got pied!" after pieing Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Luna.
* CharacterExaggeration: Lola does have anger issues, but Fic!Lola gets angry over Fic!Lincoln ''leaving comics in her room'', which could easily be solved by simply asking him to take them.
* ContinuityNod: Lincoln mentions the time in the canon episode "No Such Luck" when his sisters locked him out for being bad luck.
* DeathGlare: All it takes for Fic!Lori be convinced to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni is a glare from the latter.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lucy, despite reading ''Princess Pony'', finds the scene of Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lily eating cookies too saccharine.
* FoodAsBribe: Lisa's siblings convince her to come back after leaving in a huff by promising her chocolate.
* GoToSleepEnding: The fanfiction ends with the Loud siblings falling asleep.
* GrammarNazi: Lisa rigs an explosive to go off whenever the story changes tenses.
* LamePunReaction: Luan's siblings groan when she says, "You're a night!" after Fic!Lori mentions calling it a night.
* NonSequitur:
** Fic!Lincoln implies that "it's just one night" of sleeping alone, even though both he and the real Lincoln do that every night.
** Fic!Leni begs Fic!Lori to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with them "for your sake".
** Fic!Lori is convinced to let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her and Fic!Leni after only a dirty look from the latter.
* NotSoStoic: Lisa admits that she's not very emotional, but she still finds herself "aww"ing over the pillow fight scene.
* OutOfCharacter:
** First, the fanfic versions of the girls are way too keen to watch TV with Lincoln, just because they're family.
** Then, Fic!Lincoln acts uncharacteristically clumsy, falling out of bed and then slipping and hitting his foot on the dresser.
--->'''Lincoln''': "Okay, time out. I am ''not'' that much of a klutz."
** Fic!Lana believes that Fic!Lola wouldn't mind Fic!Lincoln bunking with them.
--->'''Lucy''': "I call shenanigans. Lana is not that naive."
** Fic!Lisa gets mad at Fic!Lincoln for "ruining" her experiment by preventing it from exploding. The real Lisa would be grateful unless she was deliberately trying to make it explode and if she was, she wouldn't just leave it there and go to bed. She also joins in on pranking him and says, "In your face!".
** Fic!Luan doesn't make puns. Instead, she just observes things and laughs.
* PieInTheFace: Fic!Luan does a variation where she just haphazardly flings the pies everywhere. The real Luan says that that's not nearly as funny as directly throwing a pie at someone.
* PlotHole:
** Fic!Lincoln is too scared to bunk with the fanfic versions of Lynn, Lucy, Lisa, and Lily, but then later on in the story, he inexplicably does.
** Fic!Lola didn't let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her... but then later on, she also inexplicably changes her mind.
** Fic!Luan complains about Fic!Lincoln "ruining" her pie prank... but the pie prank was successful.
** The so-called "mean sisters" only act mean when Fic!Lincoln tries to bunk with them. Up until then, they seemed outright soppy with their niceness.
** Fic!Lori has a "plan" to keep Fic!Lincoln out of his sisters' rooms, even though she only let him stay with them one night anyway.
* RonTheDeathEater: InUniverse, when Lisa points out that some fanfic writers dub her, Lori, Luan, Lynn, and Lola as "the mean sisters".
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Fic!Lucy says, "Sigh" after Fic!Lincoln doesn't want to be her practice corpse.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Lisa tries to walk away after Fic!Lincoln's poem says, "Me is Lincoln L. Loud."
* {{Sleepwalking}}: Fic!Lynn trains in her sleep, prompting Fic!Lincoln to do karate on her, spoiling it... also in his sleep.
* SnarkingThanks: Lincoln ironically thanks Lisa after she tells him he's not "that much of an ignoramus" to fall for a fake ghost made out of a towel.
* SpeakInUnison:
** The siblings all say in unison that they expected Fic!Lola to not let Fic!Lincoln bunk with her.
** Lincoln's sisters say, "Don't even think about it!" in unison when he considers making another "No Such Luck" reference.
* StuffBlowingUp:
** Fic!Lincoln decides not to bunk with Fic!Lisa and Fic!Lily after hearing an explosion coming from their room. He later tries to defy it by mixing something into Lisa's solution to prevent it blowing up, only for Fic!Lisa to blow it up anyway.
** Lisa sets up miniature explosives to blow up whenever the story changes tenses.
* TastesLikeDiabetes: InUniverse, the siblings find the scene of Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lily eating cookies too cutesy.
* VulgarHumour: Lori and Luan snicker after Fic!Luna asks Fic!Lincoln if he got the cream (from Fic!Luan's pies) out of his hair.
* WorldsSmallestViolin: Luan quips, "Where's the world's smallest violin when you need it?" as a response to Fic!Lincoln whining about being pranked. Lucy then pulls out an actual tiny violin she found in the attic.
* YouAreGrounded: In the fanfic, the "mean sisters" get grounded for two weeks for their ghost prank.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Lori admits that she doesn't always mean it when she says, "Literally".
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