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** The story Lord John is telling at dinner is about Margaret Campbell and her fortune telling abilities.
** Lord John says that the events of Season 3's "[[Recap/OutlanderS3E12TheBakra The Bakra]]" aren't even the strangest thing that's happened to him in Jamaica. This may be a reference to the novella "Lord John and the Plague of Zombies" which takes place during his governorship of Jamaica.
** Lord John says that the events of Season 3's "[[Recap/OutlanderS3E12TheBakra The Bakra]]" aren't even the strangest thing that's happened to him in Jamaica. This may be a reference to the novella "Lord John and the Plague of Zombies" which takes place during his governorship of Jamaica.
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** The story Lord John is telling at dinner is about Margaret Campbell and her fortune telling fortune-telling abilities.
** Lord John says that the events of Season 3's "[[Recap/OutlanderS3E12TheBakraThe Bakra]]" "The Bakra"]] aren't even the strangest thing that's happened to him in Jamaica. This may be a reference to the novella "Lord John and the Plague of Zombies" Zombies", which takes place during his governorship of Jamaica.
** Lord John says that the events of Season 3's "[[Recap/OutlanderS3E12TheBakra
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* SignificantSketchbook: Brianna uses charcoal to draw abstract pictures of her emotions. When Lizzie sees the pictures, all she sees is dark, scary pictures and she fears that she's contributed to breaking Brianna's soul and opened the door to her being possessed.
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Jamie, Claire, and Young Ian embark on an uncertain journey to retrieve Roger from the Mohawk. A pregnant Brianna attempts to strong arm Lord John into protecting her from Jocasta's insistent matchmaking. Murtagh and Fergus' efforts to find Stephen Bonnet lead to unexpected consequences.
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Jamie, Claire, and Young Ian embark on an uncertain journey to retrieve Roger from the Mohawk. A pregnant Brianna attempts to strong arm Lord John into protecting shielding her from Jocasta's insistent matchmaking. Murtagh and Fergus' efforts to find Stephen Bonnet lead to unexpected consequences.
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Jamie, Claire, and Young Ian embark on an uncertain journey to retrieve Roger from the Mohawk. Brianna scrambles to fend off Jocasta's efforts to marry her off to a suitable husband before her child is born. Murtagh and Fergus' attempts to find Stephen Bonnet lead to unexpected consequences.
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Jamie, Claire, and Young Ian embark on an uncertain journey to retrieve Roger from the Mohawk. A pregnant Brianna scrambles attempts to fend off strong arm Lord John into protecting her from Jocasta's efforts to marry her off to a suitable husband before her child is born. insistent matchmaking. Murtagh and Fergus' attempts efforts to find Stephen Bonnet lead to unexpected consequences.
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* WrongAssumption: Brianna is intent on getting Lord John Grey to accept a marriage proposal because she believes that because he is gay he will have no interest in sex with her. He corrects her, essentially explaining in ultra polite 1770s terminology that he is fully capable of performing his "husbandly duties."
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* WrongAssumption: Brianna is intent on getting Lord John Grey to accept a marriage proposal because she believes that because he is gay he will have no interest in sex with her. He corrects her, essentially explaining in ultra polite 1770s terminology that he is fully capable of performing his "husbandly duties."
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He *is* gay, but that doesn't make him physically incapable.
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* WrongAssumption: Brianna is intent on getting Lord John Grey to accept a marriage proposal because she believes he is gay and will have no interest in sex with her. He corrects her, essentially explaining in ultra polite 1770s terminology that he is bisexual and fully capable of performing his "husbandly duties."
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* WrongAssumption: Brianna is intent on getting Lord John Grey to accept a marriage proposal because she believes that because he is gay and he will have no interest in sex with her. He corrects her, essentially explaining in ultra polite 1770s terminology that he is bisexual and fully capable of performing his "husbandly duties."
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* BlackmailBackfire: Brianna threatens to out Lord John Grey, first by threatening to tell his employers and then threatening to tell Jamie. For the first, he points out that doing so would ver possibly get him literally killed and still not solve her problem. Not willing to go that far, Brianna backs down. For the second, he points out that she's incorrectly assuming that Jamie doesn't already know of his preference for men.
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* BlackmailBackfire: Brianna threatens to out Lord John Grey, first by threatening to tell his employers and then threatening to tell Jamie. For the first, he He points out that doing so the first would ver very possibly get him literally killed and still not solve her problem. Not willing to go that far, Brianna backs down. For the second, he points out that she's incorrectly assuming that Jamie doesn't already know of his preference for men.
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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsRealism: Brianna still pines for Roger and will not marry anyone else while waiting for Roger to return, but Jocasta realistically tells her that Roger is possibly dead and she should move on.
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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVsRealism: SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: Brianna still pines for Roger and will not marry anyone else while waiting for Roger to return, but Jocasta realistically tells her that Roger is possibly dead and she should move on.
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* ExactWords: When Brianna learns that Lord John has a son, she says that the boy must be a perfect gentleman if he's anything like his father. With a small smile, Lord John agrees that the boy is very much like his father, knowing that Brianna doesn't know the truth of Jamie's son.
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"The Bakra" was in Season 3
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** Lord John says that the events of Season 4's "The Bakram" aren't even the strangest thing that's happened to him in Jamaica. This may be a reference to the novella "Lord John and the Plague of Zombies" which takes place during his governorship of Jamaica.
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** Lord John says that the events of Season 4's "The Bakram" 3's "[[Recap/OutlanderS3E12TheBakra The Bakra]]" aren't even the strangest thing that's happened to him in Jamaica. This may be a reference to the novella "Lord John and the Plague of Zombies" which takes place during his governorship of Jamaica.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Jamie worries that he cannot be a true father to Brianna and will never live up to her beloved Frank. Claire points out that Frank had Brianna's entire childhood to learn how to be a father and he definitely made mistakes, but had time to be forgiven and make things right as often as needed. Jamie, who has never had the opportunity to raise his children, is simply experiencing a steep learning curve.
