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* {{Polyamory}}: Sera Jernigan, technically. She's married, with two daughters, who she leaves behind after her death. Tonic uses this to [[AppealToPity guilt Venus later]].
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* {{Polyamory}}: Sera Jernigan, technically. She's married, with two daughters, who she leaves behind after her death. Tonic uses this to [[AppealToPity guilt Venus later]].later.
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* DownerEnding: '''Oh hell yeah.'''
* EarlyBirdCameo (Sneak Peeks): Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/LimerenceMMBC Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
* EarlyBirdCameo (Sneak Peeks): Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/LimerenceMMBC Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
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** Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/LimerenceMMBC Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
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* {{Expy}}: Deepika Siddhartham to Symmatra from {{VideoGame/Overwatch}}. The mechanical arm kind of gives it away.
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* {{Expy}}: Deepika Siddhartham to Symmatra Symmetra from {{VideoGame/Overwatch}}.''{{VideoGame/Overwatch}}''. The mechanical arm kind of gives it away.
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* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project... but it also contributes to it being one of the author's [[MagnumOpus most well known]].
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* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project... but it also contributes to it being one of the author's [[MagnumOpus most well known]].known.
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* CompleteMonster: Dutch Iris Dogwood. He gets a FreudianExcuse of DaddyIssues later, but it does little to redeem him.
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* UnInstallment: Functions as a sort of sequel to the Recap/PowersMMBC, with two of the same characters travelling over from that. (Another went over to Recap/HartMMBC, and a fourth to [[Recap/BainesMMBC Baines]].) Since Powers was cancelled within the first episode and never got off the ground, Ostkaka overlaps this with SequelDisplacement.
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* UnInstallment: Functions as a sort of sequel to the Recap/PowersMMBC, with two of the same characters travelling over from that. (Another went over to Recap/HartMMBC, and a fourth to [[Recap/BainesMMBC Baines]].) Since Powers was cancelled within the first episode and never got off the ground, Ostkaka overlaps this with SequelDisplacement.
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* EarlyBirdCameo (Sneak Peeks): Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/KissOfDeath Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired *after* that episode.
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired *after* that episode.
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* EarlyBirdCameo (Sneak Peeks): Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/KissOfDeath [[Recap/LimerenceMMBC Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired*after* ''after'' that episode.
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired
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* EarlyBirdCameo (Sneak Peeks): Two, circa Episode 10. Tonic's sisters Pride Martini and Moscow Mule appear (as does her cousin and [[Recap/KissOfDeath Quartz' brother]] Bubble) to set the stage for their [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS2 subsequent sequel]].
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired *after* that episode.
** Inverted in Episode 10: though it takes place prior to the first installment of [[Recap/KesslerMaurerMMBC Slaughter or Salvage]] and thus their first appearance, Catherine Axiom's cameo was aired *after* that episode.
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--> Nobody has ever loved her. Nobody has ever cared for her. That’s what her brain whispers. So she loves herself. So the love comes in, a poisonous love, that twists and taints and *takes* and takes and takes-
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--> Nobody has ever loved her. Nobody has ever cared for her. That’s what her brain whispers. So she loves herself. So the love comes in, a poisonous love, that twists and taints and *takes* '''takes''' and takes and takes-
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* CharacterBlog: [[https://canoelesbian.tumblr.com Lichen Hara]], as is becoming increasingly common for these things.
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* CharacterBlog: [[https://canoelesbian.tumblr.com Lichen Hara]], as is becoming increasingly common for these things.
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* {{Narcissist}}: Gin Tonic herself, to a pitiable degree. Justified:
--> Nobody has ever loved her. Nobody has ever cared for her. That’s what her brain whispers. So she loves herself. So the love comes in, a poisonous love, that twists and taints and *takes* and takes and takes-
* {{Polyamory}}: Sera Jernigan, technically. She's married, with two daughters, who she leaves behind after her death. Tonic uses this to [[AppealToPity guilt Venus later]].
--> Nobody has ever loved her. Nobody has ever cared for her. That’s what her brain whispers. So she loves herself. So the love comes in, a poisonous love, that twists and taints and *takes* and takes and takes-
* {{Polyamory}}: Sera Jernigan, technically. She's married, with two daughters, who she leaves behind after her death. Tonic uses this to [[AppealToPity guilt Venus later]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Iris in the tail end of Episode 14. Tonic sleuthing through his property doesn't help matters. WordOfGod states that he's trying to emulate the infamous [[Recap/HawthorneMMBC Cupid]] in this regard, subconsciously or not - after all, in his mind, it's all staged anyway.
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* UnInstallment: Functions as a sort of sequel to the Recap/PowersMMBC, with two of the same characters travelling over from that. Since Powers was cancelled within the first episode and never got off the ground, Ostkaka overlaps this with SequelDisplacement.
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* UnInstallment: Functions as a sort of sequel to the Recap/PowersMMBC, with two of the same characters travelling over from that. (Another went over to Recap/HartMMBC, and a fourth to [[Recap/BainesMMBC Baines]].) Since Powers was cancelled within the first episode and never got off the ground, Ostkaka overlaps this with SequelDisplacement.
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* UnInstallment: Functions as a sort of sequel to the Recap/PowersMMBC, with two of the same characters travelling over from that. Since Powers was cancelled within the first episode and never got off the ground, Ostkaka overlaps this with SequelDisplacement.
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* Expy: Deepika Siddhartham to Symmatra from VideoGame/Overwatch. The mechanical arm kind of gives it away.
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The Ostkaka Double MMBC is a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelorette Challenge]] with two hostesses: Moscow Mule and Pride Martini Ostkaka, part of the triplets that originally also contained [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS1 Gin Tonic Ostkaka]]. It may be read from the beginning [[http://tosimornottosim.tumblr.com/tagged/Ostkaka-MMBC2/chrono here]]. Not yet complete.
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The Ostkaka Double MMBC is a [[Fanfic/MurderMysteryBacheloretChallenges Murder Mystery Bachelorette Challenge]] with two hostesses: Moscow Mule and Pride Martini Ostkaka, part of by tosimornottosim - the triplets one that originally also contained [[Recap/OstkakaMMBCS1 Gin Tonic Ostkaka]].chronicles a fallen star on an inevitable march to her own grave. It may be read from the beginning [[http://tosimornottosim.tumblr.com/tagged/Ostkaka-MMBC2/chrono here]]. Not yet complete.
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* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project.
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* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project.project... but it also contributes to it being one of the author's [[MagnumOpus most well known]].
* WidowedAtTheWedding
* WidowedAtTheWedding
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[[folder:Deaths and Survivors so far (spoilers)]]
# Caderyn Dewey - thrown over the edge of a cliff
# Hierba Haysi Jade - choking on an apple
# Cynthia Stevenson - drain cleaner poisoning
# Deepika Siddhartham - electrocution
# Purple Rain - eaten by a cowplant
# Auburn Mars, Felicity Harrison - [[{{Squick}} drowned in paint]]
# Mint Whisp - drowned in water
# Sera Jernigan - buried alive
# Lichen Hara - strangled
# Prosecco Arsenic - shot three times
# Gin Tonic Ostkaka, bachelorette - shot three times
# Venus Flame, murderer
# Jackie Levin, winner
[[/folder]]
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* CompleteMonster: Dutch Iris Dogwood. He gets a FreudianExcuse of DaddyIssues later, but it does little to redeem him.
* DownerEnding: '''Oh hell yeah.'''
* Expy: Deepika Siddhartham to Symmatra from VideoGame/Overwatch. The mechanical arm kind of gives it away.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each episode is named for a Shakespeare quote, and begins with an {{Epigraph}} of the surrounding text the quote can be found in.
* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project.
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[[folder:Deaths and Survivors so far (spoilers)]]
# Caderyn Dewey - thrown over the edge of a cliff
# Hierba Haysi Jade - choking on an apple
# Cynthia Stevenson - drain cleaner poisoning
# Deepika Siddhartham - electrocution
# Purple Rain - eaten by a cowplant
# Auburn Mars, Felicity Harrison - [[{{Squick}} drowned in paint]]
# Mint Whisp - drowned in water
# Sera Jernigan - buried alive
# Lichen Hara - strangled
# Prosecco Arsenic - shot three times
# Gin Tonic Ostkaka, bachelorette - shot three times
# Venus Flame, murderer
# Jackie Levin, winner
[[/folder]]
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!! This MMBC provides examples of:
* CompleteMonster: Dutch Iris Dogwood. He gets a FreudianExcuse of DaddyIssues later, but it does little to redeem him.
* DownerEnding: '''Oh hell yeah.'''
* Expy: Deepika Siddhartham to Symmatra from VideoGame/Overwatch. The mechanical arm kind of gives it away.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each episode is named for a Shakespeare quote, and begins with an {{Epigraph}} of the surrounding text the quote can be found in.
* ItWasHisSled: The fact that the bachelorette dies is one of the most notable factors of the project.
