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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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[[MoodWhiplash *Cue happy credits music*]]
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Starlight wakes up Sunburst while it's still dark out to have some fun. Sunburst also asks for her to turn around or leave the room so he can get dressed.
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%% * GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Starlight wakes up Sunburst while it's still dark out GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to have some fun. Sunburst also asks for her to turn around or leave overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the room so he can get dressed.future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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->''I was trying to have fun doing the one thing I thought we still had in common, but I guess we don't even have that anymore.''
-->--'''Starlight Glimmer'''
-> Written by Josh Haber and Kevin Lappin
-->--'''Starlight Glimmer'''
-> Written by Josh Haber and Kevin Lappin
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-->--'''Starlight
-->-- '''Starlight Glimmer'''
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->''I was trying to have fun doing the one thing I thought we still had in common, but I guess we don't even have that anymore.''
-->--'''Starlight Glimmer'''
-> Written by Josh Haber and Kevin Lappin
-->--'''Starlight Glimmer'''
-> Written by Josh Haber and Kevin Lappin
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* {{Adorkable}}:
** Starlight during the ColdOpen, where she talks to anypony around her about how excited she is to spend time with Sunburst, and how much they have in common.
** Twilight's {{Squee}} over getting trapped in Dragon Pit is adorable. Sunburst even says as much.
** Starlight during the ColdOpen, where she talks to anypony around her about how excited she is to spend time with Sunburst, and how much they have in common.
** Twilight's {{Squee}} over getting trapped in Dragon Pit is adorable. Sunburst even says as much.
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* EndearinglyDorky: Twilight's {{Squee}} over getting trapped in Dragon Pit is adorable. Sunburst even says as much.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeology: While Sunburst's description of the rock he and Maud uncovered does make sense by itself (gneiss, phyllite and slate are part of single gradient of increasingly metamorphically altered rocks and can certainly be mistaken for each other, and they all have horizontal and regular planar fabric created by pressure "flattening" their component crystals), the actual rock he's pointing at is a mass of purple crystal with no striations beyond looping, criss-crossing lines. Even without knowing what the rocks in question look like (grey, brown or black and very prominently striped), it's fairly obvious that there's none of the "consistent planar fabric" he's talking about.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Sunburst repeatedly rambles on about how wonderful Twilight, Trixie and Maud are--in front of Starlight, whom he fails to notice is silently fuming.
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* InformedAbility: Sunburst's description of the rock he and Maud uncovered is meant to show how he's very knowledgeable about geology, and his actual monologue taken alone ''does'' make sense taken by itself... but the rock he's pointing at is a mass of purple crystal with no striations beyond looping, criss-crossing lines, and looks nothing like what he's talking about.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Sunburst repeatedly rambles on about how wonderful Twilight, Trixie and Maudare--in are -- in front of Starlight, whom he fails to notice is silently fuming.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Sunburst repeatedly rambles on about how wonderful Twilight, Trixie and Maud
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* ShipTease: The episode seems to be these full on for the Starlight/Sunburst ship. The plot even has the makings of a harem comedy with Sunburst at the center.
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Indentation.
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* EpicFail: Trixie tries to perform an escape trick where she locks herself in chains and escapes in seconds, but gets caught for real and needs help. Sunburst says he knows how the trick works but has never been able to find the weak chainlink to do it. There is a montage later of Trixie and Sunburst showing each other their own tricks, and the secrets of how they do it. In one trick Sunburst fails to draw the card Trixie picked from the deck several times and Trixie accidentally reveals she has a ball under all three cups in the old "ball under a cup" trick.
** Not to mention the cups all have different colors and patterns, so finding the one with the ball under it isn't exactly what you'd call a gamble.
** Not to mention the cups all have different colors and patterns, so finding the one with the ball under it isn't exactly what you'd call a gamble.
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* EpicFail: Trixie tries to perform an escape trick where she locks herself in chains and escapes in seconds, but gets caught for real and needs help. Sunburst says he knows how the trick works but has never been able to find the weak chainlink to do it. There is a montage later of Trixie and Sunburst showing each other their own tricks, and the secrets of how they do it. In one trick Sunburst fails to draw the card Trixie picked from the deck several times and Trixie accidentally reveals she has a ball under all three cups in the old "ball under a cup" trick.
**trick. Not to mention the cups all have different colors and patterns, so finding the one with the ball under it isn't exactly what you'd call a gamble.
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** Not to mention the cups all have different colors and patterns, so finding the one with the ball under it isn't exactly what you'd call a gamble.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Starlight wakes up Sunburst while its still dark out to have some fun. Sunburst also asks for her to turn around or leave the room so he can get dressed.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Starlight wakes up Sunburst while its it's still dark out to have some fun. Sunburst also asks for her to turn around or leave the room so he can get dressed.
