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* AdjustingYourGlasses: As a bespectacled unicorn, Moondancer adjusts her slipping glasses with her magic or her hooves.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Like Moondancer, her [[NoNameGiven unnamed]] sister has {{messy|Hair}} red hair with a SkunkStripe and BigOlEyebrows. It makes you wonder if [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E7MakeNewFriendsButKeepDiscord Tree Hugger]] is related to them.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Like Moondancer, her [[NoNameGiven unnamed]] sister has {{messy|Hair}} red hair with a SkunkStripe skunk stripe and BigOlEyebrows. It makes you wonder if [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E7MakeNewFriendsButKeepDiscord Tree Hugger]] is related to them.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Twilight is happy about being able to apologize to everyone at once, Spike snarks "Let's hope they're not all as traumatized as Minuette." Turns out one former friend ''was'' traumatized by Twilight's sudden disappearance.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Twilight is happy about being able to apologize to everyone at once, Spike snarks "Let's hope they're not all as traumatized as Minuette". Turns out one former friend ''was'' traumatized by Twilight's sudden disappearance.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Twilight is happy about being able to apologize to everyone at once, Spike snarks "Let's hope they're not all as traumatized as Minuette". Turns out one former friend ''was'' traumatized by Twilight's sudden disappearance.
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* CatharticCrying: Moondancer's sour attitude is the result of her lingering hurt and anger towards Twilight's absence from the party. When Twilight throws another party as an apology to her, Moondancer doesn't take this well and starts ranting about how much she wanted to make friends and how much Twilight hurt her when she didn't come to the first party. After she finishes ranting, Moondancer has a hearty fit of crying before she calms down and accepts Twilight's apology as well as her words of wisdom.
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* CatharticCrying: Moondancer's sour attitude is the result of her lingering hurt and anger towards Twilight's absence from the party. When Twilight throws another party as an apology to her, Moondancer doesn't take this well and starts [[AnguishedOutburst ranting about how much she wanted to make friends and how much Twilight hurt her when she didn't come to the first party.party]]. After she finishes ranting, Moondancer has a hearty fit of crying before she calms down and accepts Twilight's apology as well as her words of wisdom. At the end of the episode, it's shown that Moondancer has started going out with her friends again.
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* CatharticCrying: Moondancer's sour attitude is the result of her lingering hurt and anger towards Twilight's absence from the party. When Twilight throws another party as an apology to her, Moondancer doesn't take this well and starts ranting about how much she wanted to make friends and how much Twilight hurt her when she didn't come to the first party. After she finishes ranting, Moondancer has a hearty fit of crying before she calms down and accepts Twilight's apology as well as her words of wisdom.
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* RealityEnsues: While Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, and Minuette all knew Twilight wasn't that interested in friendship and [[EasilyForgiven forgave her easily]], the similarly reclusive Moondancer, who thought of Twilight as a close friend, was hurt by her [[InnocentlyInsensitive insensitive]] actions and Twilight spends most of the episode trying to make up for it.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, and Minuette all knew Twilight wasn't that interested in friendship and [[EasilyForgiven forgave her easily]], the similarly reclusive Moondancer, who thought of Twilight as a close friend, was hurt by her [[InnocentlyInsensitive insensitive]] actions and Twilight spends most of the episode trying to make up for it.
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* MythologyGag: Moondancer refers to Twilight as "Twilight Twinkle", a member of the G3 ''My Little Pony'' cast that influenced Twilight's design. That was even Twilight Sparkle's name on early scripts for the show.
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* MythologyGag: Moondancer refers to Twilight as "Twilight Twinkle", a member of the G3 ''My Little Pony'' cast that influenced Twilight's design. That Also a DevelopmentGag, as that was even Twilight Sparkle's name on early scripts for the show.
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* CultOfPersonality: Possibly. Minuette in particular seems more interested that Twilight is a princess when she reunites than the fact her old friend came back to visit after a long absence, insisting she get a picture with Twilight's wings as if showing off she knows a princess is itself important and not that she and Twilight go way back.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: What kicks off the episode when Spike makes a comment on how anti-social Twilight was before coming to Ponyville and never trying to make friends in Cantorlot making her realize this and try to reconnect with her original friends. Twilight gets it again later upon finding out Moondancer became the way she was due to her blowing off a party just as Moondancer was starting to open up to everypony.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: What kicks off the episode when Spike makes a comment on how anti-social Twilight was before coming to Ponyville and never trying to make friends in Cantorlot Canterlot making her realize this and try to reconnect with her original friends. Twilight gets it again later upon finding out Moondancer became the way she was due to her blowing off a party just as Moondancer was starting to open up to everypony.
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* BreakTheCutie: After Moondancer [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chews out Twilight for not showing up to her party and then basically abandoning her without saying goodbye]], her emotions get the better of her and she breaks down crying over feeling alone and worthless.
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** The bookseller Twilight invites to Moondancer's party appears to be a ponified [[Disney/BigHero6 Honey Lemon]] (complete with beehive cutie mark).
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** The bookseller Twilight invites to Moondancer's party appears to be a ponified [[Disney/BigHero6 [[WesternAnimation/BigHero6 Honey Lemon]] (complete with beehive cutie mark).
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* WrittenInAbsence: Out of Twilight's old friends, only Lyra Heartstrings doesn't show up, because she's back in Ponyville as noted by Twinkleshine.
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* AnAesop: As Twilight mentions to Moondancer: don't let one silly mistake from the past stop you from making friends.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: This would not be the only time in this season that Twilight [[spoiler:[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E26TheCutieRemarkPart2 had to confront a very emotionally hurt unicorn and have her get over the past]]]].
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* TearsOfJoy: This happens a few times at the end of the episode. Moon Dancer is moved to tears when Twilight, Minuette, Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine, and a few other party guests offer her their friendship, and Twilight gets a little misty-eyed as she and Moon Dancer share a hug, and Moon Dancer cries a few tears of joy one last time as she sees Spike's gift for her.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: This would not be the only time in this season that Twilight [[spoiler:[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E26TheCutieRemarkPart2 had to confront a very emotionally hurt unicorn and have her get over the past]]]].
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* NerdGlasses: Moondancer wears a pair of glasses with tape.
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* NerdGlasses: Moondancer wears a pair of glasses repaired with tape.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: Moondancer's dumpy turtleneck sweater, broken horn-rimmed glasses, BigOlEyebrows, and unkempt mane and tail all show that she is too focus on her studies to groom herself.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: Moondancer's dumpy turtleneck sweater, broken horn-rimmed glasses, BigOlEyebrows, and unkempt mane and tail all show that she is too focus focused on her studies to groom herself.
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Moondancer's name is listed as one word in the credits, but the captions list her name as "Moon Dancer".
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Moondancer's name is listed as one word in the credits, but the captions list her name as "Moon Dancer".
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Moondancer's name is listed is one word in the credits, but the captions list her name as "Moon Dancer".
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Moondancer's name is listed is as one word in the credits, but the captions list her name as "Moon Dancer".
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* SeriouslyScruffy: Moondancer's dumpy turtleneck sweater, broken horn-rimmed glasses, BigOlEyebrows, and unkempt mane and tail.
* ShadowArchetype: Moondancer, who starts the episode as who Twilight would have become if she had shut everybody out, doing pretty much nothing but studying. To emphasize the point, flashbacks show that Moondancer used to be a PaletteSwap of Twilight and also uses Twilight's original magic aura from the early seasons of the show.
* ShadowArchetype: Moondancer, who starts the episode as who Twilight would have become if she had shut everybody out, doing pretty much nothing but studying. To emphasize the point, flashbacks show that Moondancer used to be a PaletteSwap of Twilight and also uses Twilight's original magic aura from the early seasons of the show.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: Moondancer's dumpy turtleneck sweater, broken horn-rimmed glasses, BigOlEyebrows, and unkempt mane and tail.
tail all show that she is too focus on her studies to groom herself.
* ShadowArchetype:Moondancer, who Moondancer starts the episode as who Twilight would have become if she had shut everybody out, doing pretty much nothing but studying. To emphasize the point, flashbacks show that Moondancer used to be a PaletteSwap of Twilight and also uses Twilight's original magic aura from the early seasons of the show.
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* SpitTake: Discussed. According to Minuette, Twinkleshine did spit out her oats when she learned Twilight Sparkle had become the Princess of Friendship.
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* SpitTake: Discussed. According to Minuette, Twinkleshine did spit spat out her oats when she learned Twilight Sparkle had become the Princess of Friendship.
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Larson [[note]]His final official episode as a writer for the show, though there would be [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E14FameAndMisfortune another episode]] based on one of his unused scripts.[[/note]]
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* FreudianExcuse: The reason why Moondancer is such an antisocial loner is because [[spoiler:Twilight didn't come to her party.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: The reason why Moondancer is such an antisocial loner is because [[spoiler:Twilight didn't come to her party.]]
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'''Moondancer:''' Well sure, why wouldn't it? That was only the ''first'' time I put myself out there, and then you ''didn't even bother to show up''! Then you left town without saying goodbye, even though we were supposed to be friends! ''(tearing up)'' I was ''humiliated''! I felt like I wasn't important! I ''never'' wanted to let myself be hurt like that again! ''[points to Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts]'' Those three finally convinced me that I had value, that other ponies might like me and want to be my friend, and ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis you! Didn't! Show!]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis UP!!!]]''''' ''[[[TearJerker breaks down crying]]]''
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'''Moondancer:''' Well sure, why wouldn't it? That was only the ''first'' time I put myself out there, and then you ''didn't even bother to show up''! Then you left town without saying goodbye, even though we were supposed to be friends! ''(tearing up)'' I was ''humiliated''! I felt like I wasn't important! I ''never'' wanted to let myself be hurt like that again! ''[points to Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts]'' Those three finally convinced me that I had value, that other ponies might like me and want to be my friend, and ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis you! Didn't! Show!]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis UP!!!]]''''' ''[[[TearJerker '''AAAGH!''' ''[[[BreakTheCutie breaks down crying]]]''
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* HeroicBSOD: Twilight gains one briefly at the cafe upon realizing that she might be the reason why Moondancer became such a closed-off hermit.
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* HeroicBSOD: Twilight gains one briefly at the cafe upon realizing that she might be ''she'' was the reason why Moondancer became such a closed-off hermit.
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** A flashback to Minuette as a foal shows her with braces as previously shown in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E12PinkiePride Pinkie Pride]].
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** A flashback to Minuette as a foal shows her with braces as previously shown in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E12PinkiePride "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E12PinkiePride Pinkie Pride]].Pride]]".
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'''Minuette:''' (''chuckling cheerfully'') That's old Moondancer all right! She always did like her books. (''to Twilight'') Hey, kinda like you used to be, huh?
'''Minuette:''' (''chuckling cheerfully'') That's old Moondancer all right! She always did like her books. (''to Twilight'') Hey, kinda like you used to be, huh?
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'''Moondancer:''' Well sure, why wouldn't it? That was only the ''first'' time I put myself out there, and then you ''didn't even bother to show up''! Then you left town without saying goodbye, even though we were supposed to be friends! ''(tearing up)'' I was ''humiliated''! I felt like I wasn't important! I ''never'' wanted to let myself be hurt like that again! (''points to Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts'') Those three finally convinced me that I had value, that other ponies might like me and want to be my friend, and ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis you! Didn't! Show!]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis UP!!!]]''''' (''[[TearJerker breaks down crying]]'')
* {{Retcon}}: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles "The Cutie Mark Chronicles"]] and [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicIDW Sunset Shimmer's origin story in the comics]] depict Moondancer, Lyra, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts at near present age when they appear while Twilight was still a filly; this episode undoes the age gap. The comics also had Moondancer similar to Fluttershy in mane-style and personality; here, she's these to Twilight. However, the flashback in season one depicts those characters [[OffModel as earth ponies]] rather than unicorns.
* {{Retcon}}: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles "The Cutie Mark Chronicles"]] and [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicIDW Sunset Shimmer's origin story in the comics]] depict Moondancer, Lyra, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts at near present age when they appear while Twilight was still a filly; this episode undoes the age gap. The comics also had Moondancer similar to Fluttershy in mane-style and personality; here, she's these to Twilight. However, the flashback in season one depicts those characters [[OffModel as earth ponies]] rather than unicorns.
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'''Moondancer:''' Well sure, why wouldn't it? That was only the ''first'' time I put myself out there, and then you ''didn't even bother to show up''! Then you left town without saying goodbye, even though we were supposed to be friends! ''(tearing up)'' I was ''humiliated''! I felt like I wasn't important! I ''never'' wanted to let myself be hurt like that again! (''points ''[points to Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts'') Hearts]'' Those three finally convinced me that I had value, that other ponies might like me and want to be my friend, and ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis you! Didn't! Show!]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis UP!!!]]''''' (''[[TearJerker ''[[[TearJerker breaks down crying]]'')
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* {{Retcon}}:[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles "The "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles The Cutie Mark Chronicles"]] Chronicles]]" and [[ComicBook/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicIDW Sunset Shimmer's origin story in the comics]] depict Moondancer, Lyra, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts at near present age when they appear while Twilight was still a filly; this episode undoes the age gap. The comics also had Moondancer similar to Fluttershy in mane-style and personality; here, she's these to Twilight. However, the flashback in season one depicts those characters [[OffModel as earth ponies]] rather than unicorns.
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* VisualPun: Moondancer pops Twilights "Bubble of Silence" during one of the latter's attempts to talk to the former. You could say she literally "Burst her bubble."
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'''Moondancer:''' (''noticing more ponies that showed up to the party'') What? That's the librarian! The bookseller! My sister!\\
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->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Moon Dancer, wait! A wise pony once taught me that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon there's more to life than dusty old books!]]\\
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->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Moon Dancer, Moondancer, wait! A wise pony once taught me that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon there's more to life than dusty old books!]]\\
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* HammerSpace: No wonder Lemon could squeeze her head into that flask.
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'''Moon Dancer:''' I tried friendship and it's just not for me. Now, if you'll excuse me...
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