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* HeadDesk: Frustrated by Fluttershy'rhyming, Sunset slams her head against the wheel, sounding the klaxon.
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* HeadDesk: Frustrated by Fluttershy'rhyming, Fluttershy's rhyming, Sunset slams her head against the wheel, sounding the klaxon.
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* VisualPun: Applejack uses her SuperStrength to lift the truck's front, acting like... a jack. Lampshaded by Sunset at the end.
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. If Applejack helps, she and Granny Smith offer to let Sunset practice driving the old family truck - and changing an unexpected flat tire, a skill that comes in handy during the test. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. If Applejack helps, she and Granny Smith offer to let Sunset practice driving the old family truck - -- and changing an unexpected flat tire, a skill that comes in handy during the test. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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* TheCameo: We meet the human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butler in Equestria, as the limo driver.
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* TheCameo: We meet the human version versions of Aloe the spa pony as well as Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butler in Equestria, as the limo driver.
* HeadDesk: Frustrated by Fluttershy'rhyming, Sunset slams her head against the wheel, sounding the klaxon.
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* RhymesOnADime: Fluttershy uses rhyming verses to remember proper protocols before actually driving.
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* RhymesOnADime: Fluttershy uses rhyming verses to remember proper protocols before actually driving.driving.
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, she takes Sunset out in the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a tire, a skill she uses during the test. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, If Applejack helps, she takes and Granny Smith offer to let Sunset out in practice driving the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a - and changing an unexpected flat tire, a skill she uses that comes in handy during the test. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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* TheAllegedCar: The Apple family truck has certainly seen better days. Little surprise it loses a tire while on the road.
* TheCameo: We meet the human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
* TheCameo: We meet the human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
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* TheAllegedCar: Played with. The Apple family truck has certainly seen better days. Little surprise it loses days, and the engine sounds very rough. Instead of a breakdown, though, a flat tire while on the road.
caused by driving over a nail is what stops it cold.
* TheCameo: We meet the human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara'sbutter butler in Equestria, as the limo driver.
* TheCameo: We meet the human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, she takes Sunset out in the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a tire, a skill she uses during the text. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, she takes Sunset out in the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a tire, a skill she uses during the text.test. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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* TheCameo: We meet the huamn version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
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* TheCameo: We meet the huamn human version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
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* DoubleSidedConversation: Sunset hears Rarity shout what she presumes are driving instructions, but Rarity is actually talking to her masseuse in the back seat.
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* DoubleSidedConversation: OneDialogueTwoConversations: Sunset hears Rarity shout what she presumes are driving instructions, but Rarity is actually talking to her masseuse in the back seat.
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->Written by: Kate Leth (edited by Nick Confalone)
Sunset just failed her latest driving test, and is worried about her retest on Monday. Her friends offer to help her practice.
If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, she takes Sunset out in the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a tire, a skill she uses during the text. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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* TheAllegedCar: The Apple family truck has certainly seen better days. Little surprise it loses a tire while on the road.
* TheCameo: We meet the huamn version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Rarity's idea to help Sunset's driving is to rent a limo and take her cruising for fun. Sunset ends up moving to the driver's seat to actually practice while Rarity enjoys the ride.
* DoubleSidedConversation: Sunset hears Rarity shout what she presumes are driving instructions, but Rarity is actually talking to her masseuse in the back seat.
* RhymesOnADime: Fluttershy uses rhyming verses to remember proper protocols before actually driving.
Sunset just failed her latest driving test, and is worried about her retest on Monday. Her friends offer to help her practice.
If Sunset asks Rarity for help, she rents a fancy limo for them to cruise the town in, more for recreation than driving practice, but Sunset does learn how to parallel park once she actually starts driving it. With Applejack, she takes Sunset out in the old family truck that breaks down, so Applejack shows Sunset how to change a tire, a skill she uses during the text. Fluttershy takes Sunset in her own car and recites a series of rhymes on proper preparation before heading out on the road, frustrating her, but the rhymes come in handy to remind her what to do during the test.
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!!Tropes:
* TheAllegedCar: The Apple family truck has certainly seen better days. Little surprise it loses a tire while on the road.
* TheCameo: We meet the huamn version of Randolph, Diamond Tiara's butter in Equestria, as the limo driver.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Rarity's idea to help Sunset's driving is to rent a limo and take her cruising for fun. Sunset ends up moving to the driver's seat to actually practice while Rarity enjoys the ride.
* DoubleSidedConversation: Sunset hears Rarity shout what she presumes are driving instructions, but Rarity is actually talking to her masseuse in the back seat.
* RhymesOnADime: Fluttershy uses rhyming verses to remember proper protocols before actually driving.
