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* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, it's too little, too late.
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* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous.dangerous, and trapping her in an iceberg just sealed the deal. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, it's too little, too late.
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* HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
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* HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on inside an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.ice, setting her free.
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* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers Martin and Java's ears so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
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* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers plugs Martin and Java's ears so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
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* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, is too little, too late.
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* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, is it's too little, too late.
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Martin, Diana, and Java are sent to investigate a town in Newfoundland and Labrador that is being attacked by a siren. They soon realize that a sailor had a special, but very short relationship with the siren. So the siren seeks revenge.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The siren in human form has blue hair, which is one of the few indicators she's a supernatural creature. Until she starts singing that is.
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* EnthrallingSiren: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
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* OurSirensAreDifferent: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
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* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers Martin and Java's eyes so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
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* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers Martin and Java's eyes ears so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
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* CompellingVoice: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
* EnthrallingSiren: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
* EnthrallingSiren: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
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* CompellingVoice: EnthrallingSiren: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
*EnthrallingSiren: HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Somehow the principal doesn't notice that Martin is disguised as a cheerleader, being completely fooled by Martin's fake german accent.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Somehow the principal doesn't notice that Martin is disguised as a cheerleader, being completely fooled by Martin's invented backstory and fake german accent.
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* HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
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* HumanPopsicle: EnthrallingSiren: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
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* SchmuckBait: Charmed by the siren's beauty, Martin accidentally awakens the siren, who is none to pleased at the intruder.
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* SchmuckBait: Charmed by the siren's beauty, Martin accidentally awakens wakes up the siren, who is none to too pleased at the intruder.intruder in her nest.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The siren in human form has blue hair, which is one of the few indicators she's a supernatural creature. Until she starts singing that is.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The siren in human form has blue hair, which is one of the few indicators she's a supernatural creature. Until she starts singing that is.is.
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Martin, Diana, and Java are sent to investigate a town in Newfoundland and Labrador that is being attacked by a siren. They soon realize that a sailor had a special, but very short relationship with the siren. So the siren seeks revenge.
!!General Tropes:
* BirdPeople: The siren turns into a huge humanoid bird with bat-like wings.
* CompellingVoice: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
* HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
* IWasQuiteTheLooker: Rolf the crazy old sailor used to be pretty good looking fifty years ago.
* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers Martin and Java's eyes so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
* PaperThinDisguise: Somehow the principal doesn't notice that Martin is disguised as a cheerleader, being completely fooled by Martin's fake german accent.
* SchmuckBait: Charmed by the siren's beauty, Martin accidentally awakens the siren, who is none to pleased at the intruder.
* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, is too little, too late.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The siren in human form has blue hair, which is one of the few indicators she's a supernatural creature. Until she starts singing that is.
!!General Tropes:
* BirdPeople: The siren turns into a huge humanoid bird with bat-like wings.
* CompellingVoice: As expected from a siren, her singing charms men, but it doesn't affect women.
* HumanPopsicle: Rolf trapped the siren on an iceberg for 50 years until a couple of fishermen accidentally broke the ice and freed the siren.
* IWasQuiteTheLooker: Rolf the crazy old sailor used to be pretty good looking fifty years ago.
* LogicalWeakness: Just like in Greek mythology, Diana covers Martin and Java's eyes so they aren't affected again by the siren's song, although Diana uses chewing gum rather than wax.
* PaperThinDisguise: Somehow the principal doesn't notice that Martin is disguised as a cheerleader, being completely fooled by Martin's fake german accent.
* SchmuckBait: Charmed by the siren's beauty, Martin accidentally awakens the siren, who is none to pleased at the intruder.
* WomanScorned: Being abandoned by Rolf turned the siren vengeful and even more dangerous. Even though Rolf apologizes for his past actions, is too little, too late.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The siren in human form has blue hair, which is one of the few indicators she's a supernatural creature. Until she starts singing that is.
