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* RealityWarper: Throughout the story, Evan’s grandmother turns Trevor into a small wimpy kid, removes the people of Larkinville’s fear of Trevor’s dad, turns Trevor back to normal, and even changes history so that the Burger family founded the town instead of the Larkins, with the town now being called Burgerville.
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* RealityWarper: Throughout the story, Evan’s grandmother turns Trevor into a small wimpy kid, wimp, removes the people of Larkinville’s fear of Trevor’s dad, turns Trevor back to normal, and even changes history so that the Burger family founded the town instead of the Larkins, with the town now being called Burgerville.
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* RealityWarper: Throughout the story, Evan’s grandmother turns Trevor into a small wimpy kid, removes the people of Larkinville’s fear of Trevor’s dad, turns Trevor back to normal, and even changes history so that the Burger family founded the town instead of the Larkins, with the town now being called Burgerville.
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* SycophanticServant: At school Trevor has a suck up toady that both constantly compliments him an eggs him on to abuse others. He isn't seen after that first day.
* VillainProtagonist: It's what Trevor is.
* VillainProtagonist: It's what Trevor is.
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* SycophanticServant: At school school, Trevor has a suck up toady that who both constantly compliments sucks up to him an eggs and encourages him on to abuse others. He isn't seen after that the first day.
* VillainProtagonist:It's what Trevor is.Trevor, the main character of the story, is a bully.
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* KarmicTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Evan no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* KarmicTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Evan Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* KarmicTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* KarmicTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor Evan no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* BullyingTheDisabled: Trevor considers Evan an easy target partially because he has a prosthetic leg.
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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: The only episode that focuses on a jerk who doesn't get his lesson and instead we get a KarmicTwistEnding.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: The only episode that focuses on a jerk who doesn't get his lesson and instead we get a KarmicTwistEnding.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: In the new reality where Trevor is no longer in a position to terrorize anyone, everyone is said by the narrator to be much, much happier.
* AwfulWeddedLife: Trevor's dad seems happy with all his privilege, but his wife Kendra, who's clearly a much younger TrophyWife, is miserable. She avoids kissing him with the excuse that she doesn't want to mess up her makeup, and meekly tries to suggest that they be less horrible and abusive to others in town. In the new reality she's happily married to a busker, who's now rich.
* AwfulWeddedLife: Trevor's dad seems happy with all his privilege, but his wife Kendra, who's clearly a much younger TrophyWife, is miserable. She avoids kissing him with the excuse that she doesn't want to mess up her makeup, and meekly tries to suggest that they be less horrible and abusive to others in town. In the new reality she's happily married to a busker, who's now rich.
* TheDogBitesBack: Once people recognize Trevor in his new, wimpy body, they immediately decide to seek physical retribution for his years of terrorizing them and begin to mob them.
* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: Trevor is only saved from an angry mob by the grace of the last kid he bullied, because as he says if they go through with it they'll all be no better than him.
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* KarmicTransformation: Trevor Larkin is a bully who gets turned into a small, wimpy kid.
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* KarmicTransformation: Trevor Larkin is a large bully who gets turned into a small, wimpy kid.kid as punishment for physically abusing others.
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* ScarsAreForever: Trevor has a distinguishing scar on his chin which is the sole thing people recognize him by after he's transformed.
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* SycophanticServant: At school Trevor has a suck up toady that both constantly compliments him an eggs him on to abuse others. He isn't seen after that first day.
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* ExactWords: The witch assured Trevor that when he woke up in the morning, the world would be as it should. Note the very specific word choice: "As it ''should'' be", not "As it was before."
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* CruelTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* KarmicTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: The only episode that focuses on a jerk who doesn't get his lesson and instead we get a KarmicTwistEnding.
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* Jerkass: Trevor. In spades.
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* Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: Trevor. In spades.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Trevor makes everyone’s live in Larkinville a living hell, even the adults, and gets away with it because his family founded the town. Evan’s grandmother punished him by making him small and weak and removing everyone’s fear of him. When Trevor has an IgnoredEpiphany, the witch resets the world so that his family is no longer rich or important.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Trevor makes everyone’s live lives in Larkinville a living hell, even the adults, and gets away with it because his family founded the town. Evan’s grandmother punished him by making him small and weak and removing everyone’s fear of him. When Trevor has an IgnoredEpiphany, the witch resets the world so that his family is no longer rich or important.
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*ForTheEvulz: Trevor bullies everyone in town just for laughs.
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* Jerkass: Trevor. In spades.
* KarmicTransformation: Trevor Larkin is a bully who gets turned into a small, wimpy kid.
* KarmicTransformation: Trevor Larkin is a bully who gets turned into a small, wimpy kid.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The Larkins control all of Larkinville. They provide school funding, run the companies that give people jobs, and own the buildings where others live. As such, Trevor Larkin is free to bully anyone and everyone unlucky enough to cross his path. A mom who tried to stand up for her son who got his nose hurt by Trevor got fired and evicted.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The Larkins control all of Larkinville. They provide school funding, run the companies that give people jobs, and own the buildings where others live. As such, Trevor Larkin is free to bully anyone and everyone unlucky enough to cross his path. A mom who tried to stand up for her son who got his nose hurt by Trevor got fired and evicted.evicted.
*VillainProtagonist: It's what Trevor is.
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Trevor Larkin’s dad practically runs their hometown, so Trevor can bully anyone he wants and get away with it every time… until one day, he bullies the wrong person.
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* BigJerkOnCampus: Since his dad controls the whole town, Trevor can bully everyone at school, even the teachers, and never receive any punishment, unless someone wants to get fired or lose their school funding.
* CruelTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
* IgnoredEpiphany: Trevor promised to be nicer if things were set back to the way they were before. When they seem to have been restored, Trevor immediately casts aside what he promised and declares its payback time. Too bad the world has been changed to strip him on his "get out of jail free" card.
* IronicHell: Trevor relied on his money and status as the son of the founding family to let him get away with whatever he wanted. In the new reality, he’s no longer rich or part of a powerful family.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Trevor makes everyone’s live in Larkinville a living hell, even the adults, and gets away with it because his family founded the town. Evan’s grandmother punished him by making him small and weak and removing everyone’s fear of him. When Trevor has an IgnoredEpiphany, the witch resets the world so that his family is no longer rich or important.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The Larkins control all of Larkinville. They provide school funding, run the companies that give people jobs, and own the buildings where others live. As such, Trevor Larkin is free to bully anyone and everyone unlucky enough to cross his path. A mom who tried to stand up for her son who got his nose hurt by Trevor got fired and evicted.
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* BigJerkOnCampus: Since his dad controls the whole town, Trevor can bully everyone at school, even the teachers, and never receive any punishment, unless someone wants to get fired or lose their school funding.
* CruelTwistEnding: Trevor gets his body back, believing that everything is back to the way it was before, and gets ready to go back to his normal routine of bullying the town… until he finds his dad working as a gardener. The sign for the town now says Burgerville instead of Larkinville, meaning now Evan’s family runs the town. This means that Trevor no longer has a fortune to inherit, or the power to get away with bullying.
* IgnoredEpiphany: Trevor promised to be nicer if things were set back to the way they were before. When they seem to have been restored, Trevor immediately casts aside what he promised and declares its payback time. Too bad the world has been changed to strip him on his "get out of jail free" card.
* IronicHell: Trevor relied on his money and status as the son of the founding family to let him get away with whatever he wanted. In the new reality, he’s no longer rich or part of a powerful family.
* LaserGuidedKarma: Trevor makes everyone’s live in Larkinville a living hell, even the adults, and gets away with it because his family founded the town. Evan’s grandmother punished him by making him small and weak and removing everyone’s fear of him. When Trevor has an IgnoredEpiphany, the witch resets the world so that his family is no longer rich or important.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The Larkins control all of Larkinville. They provide school funding, run the companies that give people jobs, and own the buildings where others live. As such, Trevor Larkin is free to bully anyone and everyone unlucky enough to cross his path. A mom who tried to stand up for her son who got his nose hurt by Trevor got fired and evicted.
