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"Home, Sour Home" is the 48th chapter of ''Fanfic/JuniorOfficers''.
Changed line(s) 11,13 (click to see context) from:
--> ''And then the porch door slammed shut.''
--> ''Humphrey was home.''
* YouAreNotMyFather: Deborah renounces Humphrey as her father after Barnacles refers to her as "his daughter".
--> ''Humphrey was home.''
* YouAreNotMyFather: Deborah renounces Humphrey as her father after Barnacles refers to her as "his daughter".
to:
--> ''And then the porch door slammed shut.\\
Humphrey was home.''
--> ''Humphrey was home.''
* YouAreNotMyFather: Deborah renounces Humphrey as her father after Barnacles refers to her as "his daughter".daughter".
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Humphrey was home.''
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* CaneFu: Barnacles fends Humphrey off with his cane.
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Deborah's visit home to her family goes awry.
'''ALL SPOILERS ARE UNMARKED.''' You have been warned.
!!Tropes, Sour Tropes:
* AffectionateNickname: Barnacles refers to Deborah as "princess".
* PrecisionFStrike: Barnacles refers to Humphrey as a "shitbag". To date, it is the strongest swear word used in the series.
* UnseenNoMore: After only being spoken about and seen in flashbacks, this chapter gives a proper introduction to Humphrey.
* WhamLine:
--> ''And then the porch door slammed shut.''
--> ''Humphrey was home.''
* YouAreNotMyFather: Deborah renounces Humphrey as her father after Barnacles refers to her as "his daughter".
'''ALL SPOILERS ARE UNMARKED.''' You have been warned.
!!Tropes, Sour Tropes:
* AffectionateNickname: Barnacles refers to Deborah as "princess".
* PrecisionFStrike: Barnacles refers to Humphrey as a "shitbag". To date, it is the strongest swear word used in the series.
* UnseenNoMore: After only being spoken about and seen in flashbacks, this chapter gives a proper introduction to Humphrey.
* WhamLine:
--> ''And then the porch door slammed shut.''
--> ''Humphrey was home.''
* YouAreNotMyFather: Deborah renounces Humphrey as her father after Barnacles refers to her as "his daughter".
