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* LiteralMetaphor: Hazel thinks that the Black Market Car is a market that sells everything in black. Kisaragi doesn't bother to correct her.
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* MushroomHouse: These are found in the Toadstool House that Grace and Simon enter after finally leaving the Pond ar.
* NonIndicativeName: Lantern comments how even though her name is "Lantern" she doesn't carry one.
* NonIndicativeName: Lantern comments how even though her name is "Lantern" she doesn't carry one.
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* MushroomHouse: These are found in the Toadstool House that Grace and Simon enter after finally leaving the Pond ar.
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* NonIndicativeName: Lantern comments how even though her name is "Lantern" she doesn't carryone.one, instead carrying a tablet.
* NonIndicativeName: Lantern comments how even though her name is "Lantern" she doesn't carry
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Chespie uses Vine Whip to slap Mairin in how selfish she is on wanting to enter the Train.
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Misuse. Nothing surprising for the first entry and the second entry is just "character isn't Easily Forgiven"
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened. Not to mention that there's ''still'' the controversy of Sara willing to bully someone with Asperger's.
** Even though Specter is shown to be atoning, that doesn't mean he's forgiven for all of his crimes. George Gore makes remarks that for all of his crimes, Specter has done ''far worse'' and Specter himself can't argue with it.
** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened. Not to mention that there's ''still'' the controversy of Sara willing to bully someone with Asperger's.
** Even though Specter is shown to be atoning, that doesn't mean he's forgiven for all of his crimes. George Gore makes remarks that for all of his crimes, Specter has done ''far worse'' and Specter himself can't argue with it.
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Dewicked trope
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* AdultFear:
** The Apex can't get a hold of Tiffany, who is BoundAndGagged and then ''brainwashed'' against her own will and neither Grace nor Simon are aware that the Apex aren't even in the Mall Car at all.
** The kind Nurse Joy that comforted Tokio knows ''way too much'' than expected.
** Grace's mom is ''not'' happy to learn everything that her daughter has committed in the past eight years ranging from running a cult and ''murdering people'' (with Grace trying to explain what's going on really making things worse). On the flipside, Grace's fears of not being noticed end up being real when she's considered disowned, not helping that Grace is already an adult.
** The Apex can't get a hold of Tiffany, who is BoundAndGagged and then ''brainwashed'' against her own will and neither Grace nor Simon are aware that the Apex aren't even in the Mall Car at all.
** The kind Nurse Joy that comforted Tokio knows ''way too much'' than expected.
** Grace's mom is ''not'' happy to learn everything that her daughter has committed in the past eight years ranging from running a cult and ''murdering people'' (with Grace trying to explain what's going on really making things worse). On the flipside, Grace's fears of not being noticed end up being real when she's considered disowned, not helping that Grace is already an adult.
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"Having tea" is not a trope
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* SpotOfTea: During the events of the Night Garden Car, both Windchasers and Red Lotus Uprising partake in a tea ceremony.
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** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened.
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** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened. Not to mention that there's ''still'' the controversy of Sara willing to bully someone with Asperger's.
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* AmbiguousSituation: When Specter starts destroying his heart pillow in front of Pandor, is he doing it intentionally or was it more just to get her off his back?
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* AmbiguousSituation: When Specter starts destroying his heart pillow in front of Pandor, is he doing it intentionally or was it more just to get her off his back?back (given the remorse he feels after she leaves)?
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Tiffany becomes the recipient of this and it turns out George Gore is one too.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Tiffany becomes the recipient of this and it turns out George Gore is one too.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Tiffany becomes BreatherEpisode: The Routine Arc is a much more relaxing affair that focuses on the recipient of this White Gestalt's return and it turns out George Gore revealing what the Apex is one too.going through.
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* MushroomHouse: These are found in the Toadstool House that Grace and Simon enter after finally leaving the Pond ar.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Pandora is absolutely surprised to see the 180 Specter has put upon himself since he's smiling and ''humming'' a tune compared to the traumatized Knight she's taken care of for months.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** Pandora is absolutely surprised to see the 180 Specter has put upon himself since he's smiling and ''humming'' a tune compared to the traumatized Knight she's taken care of formonths.months.
** Simon actually shows genuine concern after Grace gets the damning call from her mother that she's being disowned.
** Pandora is absolutely surprised to see the 180 Specter has put upon himself since he's smiling and ''humming'' a tune compared to the traumatized Knight she's taken care of for
** Simon actually shows genuine concern after Grace gets the damning call from her mother that she's being disowned.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened.
** Even though Specter is shown to be atoning, that doesn't mean he's forgiven for all of his crimes. George Gore makes remarks that for all of his crimes, Specter has done ''far worse'' and Specter himself can't argue with it.
** Chloe's school is under investigation for other unreported signs of bullying. Chloe's might have been the one that made it on the news, but it's probably not the ''only'' case of bullying that's happened.
** Even though Specter is shown to be atoning, that doesn't mean he's forgiven for all of his crimes. George Gore makes remarks that for all of his crimes, Specter has done ''far worse'' and Specter himself can't argue with it.
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* NoodleImplements: We have no idea what Chloe's original performance plans had except for a diagram that had something involving "fashion zombies".
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Chespie uses Vine Whip to slap Mairin in how selfish she is on wanting to enter the Train.
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* CreepyChild: The Berrybaker kids act and sound like brainwashed cult members as they try to make Mairin go on the Train.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Sara smugly tries to break Chloe down by showing off pictures of Goh having fun with the phrase "Your friends have moved on, why not you?" Chloe notes that Sara was ''stalking'' Goh and, given that Sara was sending this to ''her'' personal number, she can instantly text Goh about Sara's misdoings and then blocks her.
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* SpotOfTea: During the events of the Night Garden Car, both Windchasers and Red Lotus Uprising partake in a tea ceremony.
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* AwfulTruth: Kisaragi spells out to Tuba what the Apex are truly capable of.
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* AwfulTruth: In the Pond Car, Kisaragi spells out to Tuba what the Apex are truly capable of.
* CallBack: White Gestalt has to go through Shion's cooking, just like Sycamore did when he first entered the Monster City Car.
* ContinuityNod: When Specter snarks how Chloe as a "Demon Lord" isn't all that frightening, Rimuru just shows her destroying the Mirage Army while she was Marchosias.
* CryIntoChest: Easter does this when they meet up with Specter, apologizing for their behavior.
* ExactWords: Sycamore tells Chloe not to send a recording of one of their performances to anyone in Kalos. Chloe promises not to...she just sent them to everyone she knows in ''Vermillion''.
* FusionDance: Specter and Easter gain the power to do this, forming into a new figure dubbed "Harmonious Storm" by Rimuru.
* MindRape: Kisaragi is forced to go through nightmare thera--sorry, "mental dive torture" at the end of the Night Garden Car. He ends up a broken drooling mess.
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* WhamEpisode: There's a new villainous group on the Train called Elipzo and they have agents ''outside of the Train'' ranging from the Pokémon world to even ''Den City''.
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* WhamEpisode: There's a new villainous group on the Train called Elipzo and they have agents ''outside of the Train'' ranging from the Pokémon world to even ''Den City''. They also are capable of develop a MindRape so powerful it ''shatters Kisaragi''.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Simon has no answer when Grace asks if he would've saved her if she was a denizen.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: As they walk through a path of lily pads in the Pond Car, Simon has no answer when Grace asks if he would've saved her if she was a denizen.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Simon has no answer when Grace asks if he would've saved her if she was a denizen.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: One-One notices that something is ''seriously'' wrong when he learns that Queen hadn't been processed normally, with her body lingering on the train and her soul nowhere to be found.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Whatever this new cult is, they have the capability to send souls to this...Queen's soul is explicitly stated to be tortured without any chance of redemption after reincarnation.
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** The Frog Denizens spell this out to Simon and Grace when they leave their car.
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** The Cerise family ultimately decide to leave Vermillion for good, since there simply aren't any good memories there.
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* TriggerPhrase: Elipzo has one for George Gore that makes him suggestible to their orders.
