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** Atticus being annoyed about the door that leads to Hop's hotel room. Back in the Corgi Car he was stuck with the 'Impossible puzzle door' before Tulip noted that how to open it was how all doors work.
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* ICantDance: Neither Ash nor Trip are good at dancing and are shown fumbling around in their waltz.
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* InternalReveal: Mairin finally learns what happened to Alain. She doesn't take it well.
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!!Tropes found in this chapter include:
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros. This includes Amelia discussing the possibility of killing Hop to deprive them on a crucial 'part'.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; {{Discussed}}; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros. This includes Amelia discussing the possibility of killing Hop to deprive them on a crucial 'part'.
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* ElectricTorture: Simon uses the electrical properties of his shoes to torture to Paul this way.
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* ElectricTorture: Simon uses the electrical properties of his shoes to torture to Paul this way.
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* InformedAttribute: Discussed. Chloe questions why Alex is ''Desire'' since he doesn't shapeshift into what people desire most nor is he filled with lust. Alex brings up that desire isn't just about adult things, but just wanting something even though you can't have it...like Alex wanting Hop to be his brother.
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* InformedAttribute: Discussed.{{Discussed}}. Chloe questions why Alex is ''Desire'' since he doesn't shapeshift into what people desire most nor is he filled with lust. Alex brings up that desire isn't just about adult things, but just wanting something even though you can't have it...like Alex wanting Hop to be his brother.
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* WhamEpisode: We learn just what happens to those who enact the Cage of Flauros, Simon snaps at Paul, Hop snaps when Chloe pushes his biggest BerserkButton and Alex unleashes his monstrous form.
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* WhamEpisode: We learn just what happens to those who enact the Cage of Flauros, Simon snaps at Paul, Hop snaps when Chloe pushes his biggest BerserkButton and Alex unleashes his monstrous form.form.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros. This includes Amelia discussing the possibility of killing Hop to deprive them on a crucial 'part'.
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* TheCameo: Scenes with Leon, Professor Sycamore and Mairin and Reggie appear as they worry over their loved ones.
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* TheCameo: Scenes with Leon, Sonia, Professor Sycamore and Mairin and Reggie appear as they worry over their loved ones.
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* TheReveal: The Cage of Flauros will essentially transform all its ritual components into predators to chase down the Apex. And once every single member of Apex is gone -- whether via changing their ways or death -- then ''every single component will die''. '''No exceptions'''.
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** The Cage of Flauros will essentially transform all its ritual components into predators to chase down the Apex. And once every single member of Apex is gone -- whether via changing their ways or death -- then ''every single component will die''. '''Noexceptions'''.exceptions'''.
** On a more minor note Sonia was ''not'' on the Infinity Train.
** The Cage of Flauros will essentially transform all its ritual components into predators to chase down the Apex. And once every single member of Apex is gone -- whether via changing their ways or death -- then ''every single component will die''. '''No
** On a more minor note Sonia was ''not'' on the Infinity Train.
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* AmbiguousSyntax: Paul/Despair answers Simon's question about what happened to Sean in that he doesn't know: which means either he honestly doesn't know what happened after Electivire knocked Sean into the water or that he doesn't know the concept of "if you die on the Train, your body is left where the Train picked you up and you're reincarnated into a denizen".
* TheCameo: Scenes with Leon, Professor Sycamore and Mairin and Reggie appear as they worry over their loved ones.
* TheCameo: Scenes with Leon, Professor Sycamore and Mairin and Reggie appear as they worry over their loved ones.
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* ElectricTorture: Simon uses the electrical properties of his shoes to torture to Paul this way.
* HauntedHouse: Chloe and Hop venture through the Borley Haunted Mansion, which somehow is replicating events in Chloe's life in order to spook her.
* HauntedHouse: Chloe and Hop venture through the Borley Haunted Mansion, which somehow is replicating events in Chloe's life in order to spook her.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Simon unleashes this on Paul/Despair, electrocuting him with the soles of his shoes when he doesn't get the answers he seeks.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Simon unleashes this on Paul/Despair, electrocuting him with Paul/Despair kicking the soles trainer while demanding answers.
* TheReveal: The Cage ofhis shoes when he doesn't get Flauros will essentially transform all its ritual components into predators to chase down the answers he seeks.Apex. And once every single member of Apex is gone -- whether via changing their ways or death -- then ''every single component will die''. '''No exceptions'''.
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* TemptingFate: Reggie all but begs for his brother to be all right. The next scene has Simon electrocuting Paul.
* TookALevelInBadass: Wooloo levels up and evolves in to Dubwool.
* TookALevelInBadass: Wooloo levels up and evolves in to Dubwool.
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* ContinuityNod: Chloe reciting lyrics to a ''Music/CreatureFeatuer'' song ("Buried Alive") like she did in Part 3 of The Plush Penguin Car.
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* ContinuityNod: Chloe reciting lyrics to a ''Music/CreatureFeatuer'' ''Music/CreatureFeature'' song ("Buried Alive") like she did in Part 3 of The Plush Penguin Car.
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As night falls, the ritual components interact in ways that are all according to plan....somewhat.
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: The carousel does 13 laps before Hop ''breaks''.
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros.
* ChekhovsGun: Alex's combat knife. While he first uses it to threaten Chloe that he'll hurt her if something happens to Hop, he uses it on himself to transform into the Bogeyman.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The chapter ends as Chloe sees Hop in his delirious form, prepared to fight him.
* ContinuityNod: Chloe reciting lyrics to a ''Music/CreatureFeatuer'' song ("Buried Alive") like she did in Part 3 of The Plush Penguin Car.
* InformedAttribute: Discussed. Chloe questions why Alex is ''Desire'' since he doesn't shapeshift into what people desire most nor is he filled with lust. Alex brings up that desire isn't just about adult things, but just wanting something even though you can't have it...like Alex wanting Hop to be his brother.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Simon unleashes this on Paul/Despair, electrocuting him with the soles of his shoes when he doesn't get the answers he seeks.
* RingOfFire: When Hop loses it, a ring of fire forms around the carousel similar to what happened in ''Silent Hill: Revelation''.
* WhamEpisode: We learn just what happens to those who enact the Cage of Flauros, Simon snaps at Paul, Hop snaps when Chloe pushes his biggest BerserkButton and Alex unleashes his monstrous form.
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: The carousel does 13 laps before Hop ''breaks''.
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed; Amelia and Lexi both show concern over Chloe's well-being and are willing to do anything they can to ensure she doesn't become part of the Cage of Flauros.
* ChekhovsGun: Alex's combat knife. While he first uses it to threaten Chloe that he'll hurt her if something happens to Hop, he uses it on himself to transform into the Bogeyman.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The chapter ends as Chloe sees Hop in his delirious form, prepared to fight him.
* ContinuityNod: Chloe reciting lyrics to a ''Music/CreatureFeatuer'' song ("Buried Alive") like she did in Part 3 of The Plush Penguin Car.
* InformedAttribute: Discussed. Chloe questions why Alex is ''Desire'' since he doesn't shapeshift into what people desire most nor is he filled with lust. Alex brings up that desire isn't just about adult things, but just wanting something even though you can't have it...like Alex wanting Hop to be his brother.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Simon unleashes this on Paul/Despair, electrocuting him with the soles of his shoes when he doesn't get the answers he seeks.
* RingOfFire: When Hop loses it, a ring of fire forms around the carousel similar to what happened in ''Silent Hill: Revelation''.
* WhamEpisode: We learn just what happens to those who enact the Cage of Flauros, Simon snaps at Paul, Hop snaps when Chloe pushes his biggest BerserkButton and Alex unleashes his monstrous form.
