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Hilda's essay about her close encounter with a troll wins her the chance to tag along with Trolberg's new head of the safety patrol, Erik Ahlberg. However, it soon becomes apparent that Ahlberg is vain, overzealous, and not great at his job... and that's before his idiocy puts the group in mortal danger.
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Hilda's essay about her close encounter with a troll wins her the chance to tag along with Trolberg's new head of the safety patrol, Erik Ahlberg. However, it soon becomes apparent that Ahlberg is vain, overzealous, and not great at his job... and that's before his idiocy puts the group in mortal danger.
a situation where they have to flee unpetrified trolls.
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Hilda's essay about her close encounter with a troll wins her the chance to tag along with Trolberg's new head of the safety patrol, Erik Ahlberg. However, it soon becomes apparent that Ahlberg is vain, overzealous, and not great at his job.
job... and that's before his idiocy puts the group in mortal danger.
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Hilda's essay about her close encounter with a troll wins her the chance to tag along with Trolberg's new head of the safety patrol, Erik Ahlberg. However, Ahlberg turns out to be vain, overzealous, and not great at his job.
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Hilda's essay about her close encounter with a troll wins her the chance to tag along with Trolberg's new head of the safety patrol, Erik Ahlberg. However, it soon becomes apparent that Ahlberg turns out to be is vain, overzealous, and not great at his job.