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* PosthumousCharacter: Lily and James Potter are still dead in this universe, but Lily is mentioned several times by Petunia.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Lily and James Potter are still dead in this universe, but Lily is mentioned several times by Petunia.Petunia.
* TakeThat: When Vernon once told Petunia that he wanted children and would call his son Dudley, her internal reaction was, "''what kind of parent names their child Dudley Dursley?''"
* TakeThat: When Vernon once told Petunia that he wanted children and would call his son Dudley, her internal reaction was, "''what kind of parent names their child Dudley Dursley?''"
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. Harry's father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is arguing with Harry's mother, Petunia Evans-Verres, about the existence of magic. Petunia claims to have witnessed magic conducted by her sister Lily, but Michael is not convinced. Harry goes upstairs to write a response to Hogwarts, arguing about the existence of magic in his head. After completing the letter, he wonders about how he will send his response to Hogwarts, considering that he does not have an owl to send the response. He decides to exit the house and wave the letter in the air, yelling that he is sending the response to Hogwarts, so that an owl may take the letter. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. Harry's father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is arguing with Harry's mother, Petunia Evans-Verres, about the existence of magic. Petunia claims to have witnessed magic conducted by her sister Lily, but Michael is not convinced. Harry goes upstairs to write a response to Hogwarts, arguing about the existence of magic in his head. After completing the letter, he wonders about how he will send his response to Hogwarts, considering letter and realising that he does not have an has no owl to send the response. He response, he decides to exit the house and wave the letter in the air, yelling that he is sending the response a letter to Hogwarts, so that an owl may take the letter. No owl comes. Instead, Hogwarts - whereupon his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg appears and offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg's reveal.
* FreudianTrio
** TheKirk: Harry
** TheSpock: Michael
** TheMcCoy: Petunia
* FreudianTrio
** TheKirk: Harry
** TheSpock: Michael
** TheMcCoy: Petunia
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* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg's reveal.
reveal is simply "what."
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** TheKirk: Harry
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Michael's reasoning is purely scientific.
** TheMcCoy:PetuniaPetunia's reasoning is purely emotional.
** TheKirk: Harry's reasoning is a mixture of emotion and rationality.
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** TheKirk: Harry's reasoning is a mixture of emotion and rationality.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Petunia Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to [=McGonagall=], stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his Harry's father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that arguing with Harry's mother, Petunia Evans-Verres, about the existence of magic. Petunia claims to have witnessed magic conducted by her sister Lily, but Michael is not convinced. Harry goes upstairs to write a response to Hogwarts, arguing about the existence of magic in his head. After completing the letter, he wonders about how he will send his response to Hogwarts, considering that he does not exist, and is unwilling have an owl to accept Petunia Evans-Verres' arguments to send the contrary. Harry response. He decides that to exit the only way to settle house and wave the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to [=McGonagall=], stands in the yard, and loudly calls for air, yelling that he is sending the response to Hogwarts, so that an owl.owl may take the letter. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: In this universe, Vernon Dursley never married Petunia, causing him to never merit more than a single mention in the story. Since Vernon and Petunia never married, Dudley Dursley does not exist.
* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg'sreveal.reveal.
* FreudianTrio
** TheKirk: Harry
** TheSpock: Michael
** TheMcCoy: Petunia
* PosthumousCharacter: Lily and James Potter are still dead in this universe, but Lily is mentioned several times by Petunia.
* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg's
* FreudianTrio
** TheKirk: Harry
** TheSpock: Michael
** TheMcCoy: Petunia
* PosthumousCharacter: Lily and James Potter are still dead in this universe, but Lily is mentioned several times by Petunia.
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* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg's reveal.
* FlatWhat: Harry's reaction to Figg's reveal.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Lily Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to [=McGonagall=], stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Lily Petunia Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to [=McGonagall=], stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Lily Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to McGonagall, stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Lily Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to McGonagall, [=McGonagall=], stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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Harry has just received his Hogwarts acceptance letter. The only trouble is that his father, Professor Michael Verres-Evans, is utterly convinced that magic does not exist, and is unwilling to accept Lily Evans-Verres' arguments to the contrary. Harry decides that the only way to settle the argument is to correspond with Hogwarts himself. He writes a letter addressed to McGonagall, stands in the yard, and loudly calls for an owl. No owl comes. Instead, his next-door neighbor Mrs. Figg offers to send the letter herself. His experiment successful, Harry can only stand in shock at the utter improbability.
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