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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russell agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Charger, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russell agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Charger, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
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Apparently the official name is "Combine Charger".
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russell agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russell agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, Charger, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
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* SchmuckBait: Just before meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate. The puzzle's purpose is to encourage observation of what the power lines are connected to.
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* SchmuckBait: Just before meeting the Heavy, a There is an optional toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) that is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate. The puzzle's purpose is to encourage observation of what the power lines are connected to.
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-->'''Alyx:''' Have you heard any Combine chatter about Dad escaping?\\
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'''Alyx:''' Getting to the Vault isn’t going to get any easier.
Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
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'''Alyx:''' Getting to the Vault isn’t isn't going to get any easier.
Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx andRussel Russell agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the building through a window.
Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Russell tells Alyx he's proud of her, and it would have been worth it to save Eli, but that if she had actually grabbed Eli's hand, it would have crushed the sensors in the gravity gloves.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Russell tells Alyx he's proud of her, and it would have been worth it though he still has to save Eli, but point out that if she had actually grabbed Eli's hand, it would have crushed the sensors in the gravity gloves. ''But'' it would be both totally understandable and worth it in that case, with another such worthy case being extremely unlikely. Alyx promises to take good care of the gloves.
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** A hallway with barnacles
** A railing over a room full of zombies
** More barnacles
** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open a door
** An enemy with a shield that will block gunfire
* SchmuckBait: Just after meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate.
** A railing over a room full of zombies
** More barnacles
** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open a door
** An enemy with a shield that will block gunfire
* SchmuckBait: Just after meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate.
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** A hallway with barnacles
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** A railing over a room full ofzombies
zombies.
** Morebarnacles
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** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open adoor
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** An enemy with a shield that will blockgunfire
gunfire.
* SchmuckBait: Justafter before meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate.investigate. The puzzle's purpose is to encourage observation of what the power lines are connected to.
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** A railing over a room full of
** More
** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open a
** An enemy with a shield that will block
* SchmuckBait: Just
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding building through a window.
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-->'''Alyx:''' Have you heard any Combine chatter about Dad escaping?\\
'''Russell:''' No, nothing. It’s all about sending reinforcements into the Quarantine Zone.\\
'''Alyx:''' On the plus side, that means Dad is still on his way back to you. We’d have heard if they recaptured Eli Vance.\\
'''Russell:''' And, on the down side...\\
'''Alyx:''' Getting to the Vault isn’t going to get any easier.
'''Russell:''' No, nothing. It’s all about sending reinforcements into the Quarantine Zone.\\
'''Alyx:''' On the plus side, that means Dad is still on his way back to you. We’d have heard if they recaptured Eli Vance.\\
'''Russell:''' And, on the down side...\\
'''Alyx:''' Getting to the Vault isn’t going to get any easier.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Russell tells Alyx he's proud of her, and it would have been worth it to save Eli, but that if she had actually grabbed Eli's hand, it would have crushed the sensors in the gravity gloves.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window.Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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* NewWeaponTargetRange: After finding the grenades, the player finds (along with several caches of grenades):
** A hallway with barnacles
** A railing over a room full of zombies
** More barnacles
** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open a door
** An enemy with a shield that will block gunfire
** A hallway with barnacles
** A railing over a room full of zombies
** More barnacles
** A duct that the player must toss a grenade into to open a door
** An enemy with a shield that will block gunfire
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* BlatantItemPlacement: The first grenades are found just before a hallway with several hard-to-shoot barnacles, giving the player an opportunity to test them out.
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* BlatantItemPlacement: The first grenades are found just before a hallway with several hard-to-shoot barnacles, giving the player an opportunity to test them out.out.
* SchmuckBait: Just after meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate.
* SchmuckBait: Just after meeting the Heavy, a toner puzzle (adjusting the wires in the walls with Alyx's multitool) is deliberately designed to teach players not to just blindly activate each junction in order, as doing so will sound an alarm and bring another soldier to investigate.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through an office window. She Realizing the Vault is hovering in midair, Alyx and Russel agree that their best chance of infiltrating it is to destroy the power junctions holding it up. Alyx obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front subway and sees the first power junction on the roof of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the Vortigaunt's instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building an office window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "Look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "Look "look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "Follow the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's words, "Follow "Look to the the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and a subway station, getting her first look at the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's instructions, "Follow the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and buildings toward the vault, getting her first look at it through a window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instructions. The doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in through a window.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's instructions, words, "Follow the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and buildings toward the vault, a subway station, getting her first look at it the Vault through a building window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a shotgun and a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instructions. instruction. The front doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in to the bulding through a window.
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* BlatantItemPlacement: The first grenades are found just before a hallway with several hard-to-shoot barnacles, giving the player an opportunity to test them out.
* BlatantItemPlacement: The first grenades are found just before a hallway with several hard-to-shoot barnacles, giving the player an opportunity to test them out.
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Alyx ponders the Vortigaunt's instructions, "Follow the northern star", as she proceeds through tunnels and buildings toward the vault, getting her first look at it through a window. She obtains grenades for the first time, and shortly after meets her first Combine Heavy, a heavily-armed soldier with a force shield. She exits the tunnels into a plaza in front of the Northern Star Hotel, explaining the instructions. The doors are sealed, but she is able to climb in through a window.
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