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* BeautifulTears: Cookie looks adorable when [[OcularGushers she cries after Daikarin's kind words.]] Daikarin petting her head reinforces the look.
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* CryCute: Cookie looks adorable when [[OcularGushers she cries after Daikarin's kind words.]] Daikarin petting her head reinforces the look.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Team Star Killer starts their training journey.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Team Star Killer starts their training journey.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch:
** After the previous episode had Cookie and Daikarin promise to train Muko and Kalita at the L'Asagne farm, it turns out that they were only going there for the ring. They plan to train at Monyan, using the stolen ring as a way to improve their technique through sparring.
** Ida flirts with Zebreastian, calling him handsome and asking if he has a girlfriend. Cookie panics, believing that Ida will use her "bodily capital" on him. An epilogue page at the end of the chapter later shows that Ida gave Zebreastian a dress to gift to his girlfriend.
** After the previous episode had Cookie and Daikarin promise to train Muko and Kalita at the L'Asagne farm, it turns out that they were only going there for the ring. They plan to train at Monyan, using the stolen ring as a way to improve their technique through sparring.
** Ida flirts with Zebreastian, calling him handsome and asking if he has a girlfriend. Cookie panics, believing that Ida will use her "bodily capital" on him. An epilogue page at the end of the chapter later shows that Ida gave Zebreastian a dress to gift to his girlfriend.
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* CryCute: Cookie looks adorable when [[OcularGushers she cries after Daikarin's kind words.]] Daikarin petting her head reinforces the look.
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* OcularGushers: Cookie cries a river of tears after Daikarin praises her for Trilamity Day, overwhelmed with gratitude at someone not hating her or criticizing her for what happened two years ago.
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I Hate Past Me is about actually meeting or seeing your past self. It's not just about shame over your past actions. Kick The Dog is about *pointless* evil, not just evil actions in general.
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* IHatePastMe: Cookie is ashamed of the way she acted back when she was ''Fortune Cookie'' because she realized how selfish she was to her Fortune Gals at the time. When Daikarin tells Muko about how Cookie made her Combagals fight after Freydar got into a coma, Cookie sadly notes that she was motivated by greed at the time and believes that she deserves to be hated for prioritizing her monetary gain over the emotional welfare of her Combagals, who were traumatized by what happened to Freydar.
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* KickTheDog: Cookie made her Fortune Gals fight on Trilamity Day after Freydar fell into a coma the previous day. While Daikarin [[TheShowMustGoOn believes that she made the right choice,]] Cookie herself believes that she made the decision out of greed and without caring about the trauma that her Combagals were suffering for what happened to Freydar.
* TheShowMustGoOn: Daikarin believes that Cookie made the right choice by having her Combagals fight despite Freydar being in a coma, believing that it's the professional duty of an entertainer to bring hope to the public during dark times. Ida even compliments Cookie, saying that she always admired her professionalism despite their differences.
* TheShowMustGoOn: Daikarin believes that Cookie made the right choice by having her Combagals fight despite Freydar being in a coma, believing that it's the professional duty of an entertainer to bring hope to the public during dark times. Ida even compliments Cookie, saying that she always admired her professionalism despite their differences.
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* CallBack: When Muko gets a headache, Ida suggests to take a pill. Muko refuses since she remembers the lecture Cookie gave her in Chapter 7.
* IHatePastMe: Cookie is ashamed of the way she acted back when she was ''Fortune Cookie'' because she realized how selfish she was to her Fortune Gals at the time. When Daikarin tells Muko about how Cookie made her Combagals fight after Freydar got into a coma, Cookie sadly notes that she was motivated by greed at the time and believes that she deserves to be hated for prioritizing her monetary gain over the emotional welfare of her Combagals, who were traumatized by what happened to Freydar.
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* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a deer and a dog.
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* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a deer and a dog.dog.
* KickTheDog: Cookie made her Fortune Gals fight on Trilamity Day after Freydar fell into a coma the previous day. While Daikarin [[TheShowMustGoOn believes that she made the right choice,]] Cookie herself believes that she made the decision out of greed and without caring about the trauma that her Combagals were suffering for what happened to Freydar.
* TheShowMustGoOn: Daikarin believes that Cookie made the right choice by having her Combagals fight despite Freydar being in a coma, believing that it's the professional duty of an entertainer to bring hope to the public during dark times. Ida even compliments Cookie, saying that she always admired her professionalism despite their differences.
* KickTheDog: Cookie made her Fortune Gals fight on Trilamity Day after Freydar fell into a coma the previous day. While Daikarin [[TheShowMustGoOn believes that she made the right choice,]] Cookie herself believes that she made the decision out of greed and without caring about the trauma that her Combagals were suffering for what happened to Freydar.
* TheShowMustGoOn: Daikarin believes that Cookie made the right choice by having her Combagals fight despite Freydar being in a coma, believing that it's the professional duty of an entertainer to bring hope to the public during dark times. Ida even compliments Cookie, saying that she always admired her professionalism despite their differences.
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Go by the actual story, not by its title page.
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* CharacterFocus: The first page of the chapter is the cover page of Part 4, featuring Cookie in her new manager outfit. This shows that, just like the other three main characters in the previous Parts, she will have her own story arc in this Part.
* CuddleBug: When asked by Kalita why she did not sit in the back of the truck, Muko answers that she wanted to cuddle her new friends.
* DoesNotDrive: Much to Kalita's annoyance, she's the one of the group who has a driver's license, forcing her to drive the team to the Fortune Factory. Her friends have their own reasons for not having a license, such as lack of skill (Daikarin), no time (Cookie), or using public transport (Muko).
* CuddleBug: When asked by Kalita why she did not sit in the back of the truck, Muko answers that she wanted to cuddle her new friends.
* DoesNotDrive: Much to Kalita's annoyance, she's the one of the group who has a driver's license, forcing her to drive the team to the Fortune Factory. Her friends have their own reasons for not having a license, such as lack of skill (Daikarin), no time (Cookie), or using public transport (Muko).
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* DoesNotDrive: Much to Kalita's annoyance, she's the only one of the group who has a driver's license, forcing her to drive the team to the Fortune Factory. Her friends have their own reasons for not having a license, such as lack of skill (Daikarin), no time (Cookie), or using public transport (Muko).
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* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a cervine father and a canine mother.
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* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a cervine father deer and a canine mother.dog.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: This is implied to be the case with Daikarin, as she proudly states that she took her driving test three times and failed in all of them.
* EyeScream: Kalita's pig friend had an eye bandage when she said goodbye to her, implying that she got it injured prior to her adoption.
* EyeScream: Kalita's pig friend had an eye bandage when she said goodbye to her, implying that she got it injured prior to her adoption.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: This is implied to be the case with Daikarin, as she Daikarin proudly states that she took her driving test three times and failed in all of them.
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* EyeScream: Kalita's pig friend had an eye bandage whenshe Kali said goodbye to her, implying that she got it injured prior to her adoption.
* EyeScream: Kalita's pig friend had an eye bandage when
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--->'''Kalita''': (driving with an annoyed expression on her face while cramped and surrounded by her new team) Does no one else have a driver's license?
--->'''Daikarin''': (proudly) I failed the test three times!
--->'''Muko''': (cheerfully) I like trains.
--->'''Cookie''': (bored) I had better business.
--->'''Daikarin''': (proudly) I failed the test three times!
--->'''Muko''': (cheerfully) I like trains.
--->'''Cookie''': (bored) I had better business.
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--->'''Daikarin''':
'''Daikarin''': (proudly) I failed the test three
--->'''Muko''':
'''Muko''': (cheerfully) [[WebAnimation/{{asdfmovie}} I like
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'''Cookie''': (bored) I had better business.
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* FunTShirt: Muko wears a shirt that says "Burger Queen" in this chapter.
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Having successfully made their debut, Team Star Killer goes to Fortune Factory to begin their furry fighting training. On the way, they learn more about Cookie's past.
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* CharacterFocus: The first page of the chapter is the cover page of Part 4, featuring Cookie in her new manager outfit. This shows that, just like the other three main characters in the previous Parts, she will have her own story arc in this Part.
* CuddleBug: When asked by Kalita why she did not sit in the back of the truck, Muko answers that she wanted to cuddle her new friends.
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--->'''Kalita''': (driving with an annoyed expression on her face while cramped and surrounded by her new team) Does no one else have a driver's license?
--->'''Daikarin''': (proudly) I failed the test three times!
--->'''Muko''': (cheerfully) I like trains.
--->'''Cookie''': (bored) I had better business.
--->'''Daikarin''': (proudly) I failed the test three times!
--->'''Muko''': (cheerfully) I like trains.
--->'''Cookie''': (bored) I had better business.
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* EyeScream: Kalita's pig friend had an eye bandage when she said goodbye to her, implying that she got it injured prior to her adoption.
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! Chapter 36: A Place Of Your Own
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* DoesNotDrive: Much to Kalita's annoyance, she's the one of the group who has a driver's license, forcing her to drive the team to the Fortune Factory. Her friends have their own reasons for not having a license, such as lack of skill (Daikarin), no time (Cookie), or using public transport (Muko).
* DrivesLikeCrazy: This is implied to be the case with Daikarin, as she proudly states that she took her driving test three times and failed in all of them.
* InterspeciesAdoption: Kalita was friends with a pig girl, who was adopted by a cervine father and a canine mother.
* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a cervine father and a canine mother.
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* DoesNotDrive: Much to Kalita's annoyance, she's the one of the group who has a driver's license, forcing her to drive the team to the Fortune Factory. Her friends have their own reasons for not having a license, such as lack of skill (Daikarin), no time (Cookie), or using public transport (Muko).
* DrivesLikeCrazy: This is implied to be the case with Daikarin, as she proudly states that she took her driving test three times and failed in all of them.
* InterspeciesAdoption: Kalita was friends with a pig girl, who was adopted by a cervine father and a canine mother.
* InterspeciesRomance: The new adoptive parents of Kalita's friend in the flashback are a cervine father and a canine mother.
