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%%* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
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* CallBack:
** Shun Gonfano bought the Cyclone Crushers from Cookie by using a BriefcaseFullOfMoney to convince Cookie to accept the trade. This is similar to how Dinedon betrayed Cookie at the Masato Match when Shun had a briefcase with more cash than Cookie's bribe.
** Muko hugs Cookie and spins her in the air like she did in Chapter 2 and Chapter 7. Unlike the previous occasions, Cookie laughs with tears in her eyes, showing how happy she is to reconcile with Muko.
** Shun Gonfano bought the Cyclone Crushers from Cookie by using a BriefcaseFullOfMoney to convince Cookie to accept the trade. This is similar to how Dinedon betrayed Cookie at the Masato Match when Shun had a briefcase with more cash than Cookie's bribe.
** Muko hugs Cookie and spins her in the air like she did in Chapter 2 and Chapter 7. Unlike the previous occasions, Cookie laughs with tears in her eyes, showing how happy she is to reconcile with Muko.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Cookie is still in this state from the previous chapter and she still hasn't recovered from the first one. Muko also has one that causes her HeroicBSOD that caused her to shut down for two weeks.
* DownerBeginning: Two weeks after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD. Cookie snaps out of it first, thanks to Saniko.
* DownerBeginning: Two weeks after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD. Cookie snaps out of it first, thanks to Saniko.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Cookie is still in this state from the previous chapter and she still hasn't recovered from the first one. Muko also has one that causes her HeroicBSOD that caused her to shut down for two weeks.
three days.
* DownerBeginning:Two weeks Three days after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD. Cookie snaps out of it first, thanks to Saniko.
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%%* MyBelovedSmother: Muko calls out Saniko for being this during their argument. It hurts her feelings, but she realizes that Muko's kind of right.
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%%* TitleDrop: Muko points out that she's happy to be back to furry fighting with Cookie as her manager.
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* TheAlcoholic: Cookie became this after Trilamity Day destroyed her reputation and she sold her Combagals to Shun.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns...and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* BittersweetEnding: Muko and Cookie reunite with their passion for furry fighting stronger than ever after CharacterDevelopment from both of them. Cookie strives to teach Muko how to be a Combagal without taking any shortcuts and Muko will work hard without distracting herself from the fanservice. However, Muko must learn to be independent, Nyarai is still the Masato Champion, Shun may have a scheme for the future against them, and Kalita reappears in their home as a LoanShark to get the money for a loan Cookie can't pay.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns...and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* BittersweetEnding: Muko and Cookie reunite with their passion for furry fighting stronger than ever after CharacterDevelopment from both of them. Cookie strives to teach Muko how to be a Combagal without taking any shortcuts and Muko will work hard without distracting herself from the fanservice. However, Muko must learn to be independent, Nyarai is still the Masato Champion, Shun may have a scheme for the future against them, and Kalita reappears in their home as a LoanShark to get the money for a loan Cookie can't pay.
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* TheAlcoholic: Cookie became this developed a drinking problem after Trilamity Day destroyed her reputation and she sold her Combagals to Shun.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns... and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops on Cookie for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* BittersweetEnding: Muko and Cookiereunite reunite, with their passion for furry fighting stronger than ever after CharacterDevelopment from both of them. Cookie strives to teach Muko how to be a Combagal without taking any shortcuts shortcuts, and Muko will plans to work hard without distracting herself from the fanservice. However, Muko must learn to be independent, Nyarai is still the Masato Champion, Shun may have a scheme for the future against them, and Kalita reappears in their home as a LoanShark to get the money for a loan Cookie can't pay.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns... and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops on Cookie for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* BittersweetEnding: Muko and Cookie
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* BriefcaseFullOfMoney: Just like with Dinedon, Shun used one with Cookie to buy the Fortune Gals after the incident with Freydar at Trilamity Day.
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** Muko realizes that furry fighting is more than just fanservice and resolves to fight for the sake of the sport rather than satisfy her desires.
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** Muko realizes that furry fighting is more than just fanservice fanservice, and resolves to fight for the sake of the sport rather than to satisfy her desires.
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* DownerBeginning: Two weeks after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD with Cookie snapping out of it first thanks to Saniko.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she became TheAlcoholic instead.
* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
* GetOut: Saniko agrees to let Muko return to furry fighting, but she must move out of the house to learn independence. This forces Muko to move to Cookie's office -a janitor's closet in a soapland- until she can afford an apartment.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she became TheAlcoholic instead.
* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
* GetOut: Saniko agrees to let Muko return to furry fighting, but she must move out of the house to learn independence. This forces Muko to move to Cookie's office -a janitor's closet in a soapland- until she can afford an apartment.
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* DownerBeginning: Two weeks after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD with HeroicBSOD. Cookie snapping snaps out of it first first, thanks to Saniko.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she becameTheAlcoholic instead.
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%%* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
* GetOut: Saniko agrees to let Muko return to furry fighting, but demands that she must move out of the house to learn independence. This forces Muko to moveto into Cookie's office -a office--a janitor's closet in a soapland- until soapland--until she can afford an apartment.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she became
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%%* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
* GetOut: Saniko agrees to let Muko return to furry fighting, but demands that she must move out of the house to learn independence. This forces Muko to move
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* HatesBeingTouched: Subverted as Cookie laughs when Muko hugs her, shedding happy tears as they reunite as manager and Combagal.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Cookie feels incredibly guilty for what happened to Muko as she neglected her training and expected Nyarai to win the Masato Match despite never bothering to find anything out about her. She initially refused to face Muko out of shame until Saniko blackmailed her into helping her sister, pointing out her negligence counted as criminal charges.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Cookie feels incredibly guilty for over what happened to Muko as she neglected her training and expected Nyarai to win the Masato Match despite never bothering to find anything out about her. She initially refused to face Muko out of shame until Saniko blackmailed her into helping her sister, pointing out her negligence counted as criminal charges.
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* TheMagnificent: Nyarai is called ''The Invincible'' for the abilities she displayed during the Masato Match giving her an edge over most fighters.
* MyBelovedSmother: Muko calls out Saniko for being this during their argument. It hurts her feelings, but she realizes that she's kind of right.
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her own title. ''The Invincible''
* MyBelovedSmother: Muko calls out Saniko for being this during their argument. It hurts her feelings, but she realizes that she's kind of right.
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her own title. ''The Invincible''
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* TheMagnificent: Nyarai is called ''The Invincible'' "The Invincible" for the abilities she displayed during the Masato Match giving her an edge over most fighters.
* %%* MyBelovedSmother: Muko calls out Saniko for being this during their argument. It hurts her feelings, but she realizes that she's Muko's kind of right.
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her owntitle. ''The Invincible''title: "The Invincible".
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her own
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* TapOnTheHead: Averted as Saniko points out that Nyarai's kick not only broke Adelgund's jaw but also gave her a concussion.
* TitleDrop: Muko says this when she points out that she's happy to be back to furry fighting with Cookie as her manager.
* TitleDrop: Muko says this when she points out that she's happy to be back to furry fighting with Cookie as her manager.
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A couple of weeks after the Masato Match, Cookie is confronted by Saniko, who tells her that Muko has been depressed for about the events of that night. Feeling responsible, Cookie visits her former Combagal and explains the events that happened after the Masato Match.
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* KarmaHoudini: Shun Gonfano, Nyarai, and the Cyclone Crushers get away with their actions by the end of Part 2. Their only drawback is that Muko and Cookie are still willing to try furry fighting.
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* TheMagnificent: Nyarai is called ''The Invincible'' for the abilities she displayed during the Masato Match giving her an edge over most fighters.
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* {{Blackmail}}: Saniko threatens to call the cops on Cookie for forcing her sister to fight bikers and then having her fight in a match despite her inexperience, leading to her getting hurt twice.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Muko and Cookie get hit with this as they recover from the events of the Masato Match together.
** Muko realizes that furry fighting is more than just fanservice and resolves to fight for the sake of the sport rather than satisfy her desires.
** Cookie understands that neglecting Muko's training in favor of an easy win was a mistake and resolves to rise to the top with her the old fashioned way.
** Muko realizes that furry fighting is more than just fanservice and resolves to fight for the sake of the sport rather than satisfy her desires.
** Cookie understands that neglecting Muko's training in favor of an easy win was a mistake and resolves to rise to the top with her the old fashioned way.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Cookie feels incredibly guilty for what happened to Muko as she neglected her training and expected Nyarai to win the Masato Match despite never bothering to find anything out about her. She initially refused to face Muko out of shame until Saniko blackmailed her into helping her sister, pointing out her negligence counted as criminal charges.
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* TraumaticHaircut: Cookie used to have long hair, also dyed black, but her descent into alcoholism caused her to rip parts of it with her own hands as well as her eyebrows.
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* TapOnTheHead: Averted as Saniko points out that Nyarai's kick not only broke Adelgund's jaw but also gave her a concussion.
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* TheGlomp: Muko hugs and picks up Cookie again. Despite Cookie's protests, they're both happy to be reunited.
* HatesBeingTouched: Subverted as Cookie laughs when Muko hugs her, shedding happy tears as they reunite as manager and Combagal.
* HatesBeingTouched: Subverted as Cookie laughs when Muko hugs her, shedding happy tears as they reunite as manager and Combagal.
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* BriefcaseFullOfMoney: Just like with Dinedon, Shun used one with Cookie to buy the Fortune Gals after the incident with Freydar at Trilamity Day.
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* GamerGirl: Before her argument with Saniko, Muko visualizes some options like an RPG game.
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* LuminiscentBlush: Both Muko and Cookie blush very hard when Cookie opens the door and finds Muko busy with her pants down.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Muko calls out Saniko for being this during their argument. It hurts her feelings, but she realizes that she's kind of right.
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* BittersweetEnding: Muko and Cookie reunite with their passion for furry fighting stronger than ever after CharacterDevelopment from both of them. Cookie strives to teach Muko how to be a Combagal without taking any shortcuts and Muko will work hard without distracting herself from the fanservice. However, Muko must learn to be independent, Nyarai is still the Masato Champion, Shun may have a scheme for the future against them, and Kalita reappears in their home as a LoanShark to get the money for a loan Cookie can't pay.
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* DownerBeginning: Two weeks after the events of the previous chapter, Muko and Cookie are both suffering a HeroicBSOD with Cookie snapping out of it first thanks to Saniko.
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* GetOut: Saniko agrees to let Muko return to furry fighting, but she must move out of the house to learn independence. This forces Muko to move to Cookie's office -a janitor's closet in a soapland- until she can afford an apartment.
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* LuminiscentBlush: Both Muko and Cookie blush very hard when Cookie opens the door and finds Muko busy with her pants down.
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* HeroicBSOD: Muko suffered one after the events of the Masato Match. It takes a talk with Cookie to snap out of it.
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* TheRival: Invoked by Muko as she declares Nyarai her first rival in her journey to become a Combagal.
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[[caption-width-right:213:A depressed Cookie meets a disgruntled Saniko, who needs to talk about Muko.]]
[[caption-width-right:213:A depressed Cookie meets a disgruntled Saniko, who needs to talk about Muko.]]
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! Chapter 19: Despite Everything
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* AccidentalPervert: When Cookie enters Muko's room, she finds her in the middle of masturbating to Internet porn. Both of them are very embarrassed.
* TheAlcoholic: Cookie became this after Trilamity Day destroyed her reputation and she sold her Combagals to Shun.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns...and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* TheBusCameBack: After being absent for all of Part 2, Kalita returns as a LoanShark to collect Cookie's debt.
* CaughtWithYourPantsDown: Cookie enters Muko's room when she's masturbating to Internet porn. Muko is very embarrassed about it.
* DespairEventHorizon: Cookie is still in this state from the previous chapter and she still hasn't recovered from the first one. Muko also has one that causes her HeroicBSOD that caused her to shut down for two weeks.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she became TheAlcoholic instead.
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her own title. ''The Invincible''
* TitleDrop: Muko says this when she points out that she's happy to be back to furry fighting with Cookie as her manager.
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* AccidentalPervert: When Cookie enters Muko's room, she finds her in the middle of masturbating to Internet porn. Both of them are very embarrassed.
* TheAlcoholic: Cookie became this after Trilamity Day destroyed her reputation and she sold her Combagals to Shun.
* BatterUp: Kalita returns...and she's using the bat that one of her underlings had when they invaded Cafe Carrots.
* BigSisterInstinct: Saniko went to Monyan to collect Cookie and forced her to talk with Muko to snap her out of her HeroicBSOD since she can't do it herself. When Cookie refuses out of guilt, Saniko threatens to call the cops for making Muko fight with Kalita and later Nyarai despite her lack of experience. Cookie immediately complies.
* TheBusCameBack: After being absent for all of Part 2, Kalita returns as a LoanShark to collect Cookie's debt.
* CaughtWithYourPantsDown: Cookie enters Muko's room when she's masturbating to Internet porn. Muko is very embarrassed about it.
* DespairEventHorizon: Cookie is still in this state from the previous chapter and she still hasn't recovered from the first one. Muko also has one that causes her HeroicBSOD that caused her to shut down for two weeks.
* DrowningMySorrows: Cookie started drinking after selling her Combagals with the money Shun gave her. Since she didn't get any jobs, she became TheAlcoholic instead.
* RedBaron: Nyarai now has her own title. ''The Invincible''
* TitleDrop: Muko says this when she points out that she's happy to be back to furry fighting with Cookie as her manager.
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