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* ForWantOfANail: Because Brody spent too long dealing with the coroner and the mayor, we miss out on Alex Kitner's death scene as Brody only learns about it after the fact.
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* PointOfDivergence: Because Brody spent too long dealing with the coroner and the mayor, we miss out on Alex Kitner's death scene as Brody only learns about it after the fact.
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* NotHisSled: Discussed: When Jon asks about the possibility of the shark ''missing'' Chrissie during the prologue, Paulo admits that he rolls for certain critical events prior to the start of the campaigns he DMs before any player involvement occurs to see if they still play out, with the event not happening on a Crit Fail.
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* NotHisSled: Discussed: When Jon asks about the possibility of the shark ''missing'' Chrissie during the prologue, Paulo admits that he rolls for certain critical events prior to the start of the campaigns he DMs [=DMs=] before any player involvement occurs to see if they still play out, with the event not happening on a Crit Fail.
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Kill Em All is no longer a trope
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* OffTheRails: Downplayed. The campaign follows the movie pretty closely, [[KillEmAll but it has a very different ending]]. At the end of their ''[[Recap/FilmRerollHalloween1978 Halloween]]'' campaign, Paulo explains that this happened because the plot of this movie is strongly connected to the motivation of its characters. Thus, the only part of it which really could change -- and did -- was the final confrontation with the shark.
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* OffTheRails: Downplayed. The campaign follows the movie pretty closely, [[KillEmAll but it has a very different ending]].ending. At the end of their ''[[Recap/FilmRerollHalloween1978 Halloween]]'' campaign, Paulo explains that this happened because the plot of this movie is strongly connected to the motivation of its characters. Thus, the only part of it which really could change -- and did -- was the final confrontation with the shark.
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* EveryoneHasStandards:
** When Jon [[KickTheDog tries to have Brody deny any involvement in the death of Alex Kitner]], Paulo [[ArmedWithCanon points out]] he gave Brody "Guilt Complex", and that Mrs. Kitner calling him out is triggering it, meaning he ''does'' feel guilty for her son's death.
** When the prospect of Brody's son getting eaten the shark on the Fourth of July becomes a possibility, Jon decides that Brody [[DrivenToSuicide is going to kill himself]] if that happens (and thankfully, it doesn't).
** When Jon [[KickTheDog tries to have Brody deny any involvement in the death of Alex Kitner]], Paulo [[ArmedWithCanon points out]] he gave Brody "Guilt Complex", and that Mrs. Kitner calling him out is triggering it, meaning he ''does'' feel guilty for her son's death.
** When the prospect of Brody's son getting eaten the shark on the Fourth of July becomes a possibility, Jon decides that Brody [[DrivenToSuicide is going to kill himself]] if that happens (and thankfully, it doesn't).
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Thanks to a severely failed Fright Check roll doing the battle with the shark, Brody becomes ''convinced'' that the shark is targeting him specifically for indirectly letting it kill Chrissie and Alex Kitner, and accepts his impending demise.
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* NotHisSled: Discussed: When Jon asks about the possibility of the shark ''missing'' Chrissie during the prologue, Paulo admits that he rolls for certain critical events prior to the start of the campaigns he DMs before any player involvement occurs to see if they still play out, with the event not happening on a Crit Fail.
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* TakingYouWithMe: Explicitly stated by Jon himself: When the shark reawakens after Hooper manages to fire the poison-tipped spear down its throat, he decides (as a dying action) to bite Hooper as to invoke a MutualKill.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Downplayed: While the shark was already a major threat in ''Paulo's'' hands as an NPC, once ''Jon'' is given the character sheet, Hooper and Quint can't help but notice the shark somehow became ''smarter''.
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* NoSympathy: Jon's immediate reaction to Mrs. Kitner slapping Brody?
-->'''Jon''': Alright, well, too bad, she's going to prison. (Andy and Paulo begin laughing) I'm arresting her for assaulting a police officer.
-->'''Jon''': Alright, well, too bad, she's going to prison. (Andy and Paulo begin laughing) I'm arresting her for assaulting a police officer.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Kara is arguably the most upset over Jon Miller's take on Brody, outright calling him "the worst cop" more than once, and even states ''he's worse than the mayor''.
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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
** Kara is arguably the most upset over Jon Miller's take on Brody, outright calling him "the worst cop" more than once, and even states ''he's worse than themayor''.mayor''.
*** It reaches its peak when Brody decides to [[MoralEventHorizon shift the blame for Alex Kitner's death onto both the mayor and the coroner]] and claim he was forced to leave the beaches open.
---->'''Kara''': (horrified) ''You are '''reprehensible'''...''
---->'''Andy''': What was the cause of death of the coroner, being ''thrown under a bus?!''
** Kara is less than pleased when Andy snatches defeat from the jaws of victory and accidentally advocates that Quint was close to the edge of the boat when the shark rammed it, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero causing Paulo to declare that Quint fell overboard]].
** Kara is arguably the most upset over Jon Miller's take on Brody, outright calling him "the worst cop" more than once, and even states ''he's worse than the
*** It reaches its peak when Brody decides to [[MoralEventHorizon shift the blame for Alex Kitner's death onto both the mayor and the coroner]] and claim he was forced to leave the beaches open.
---->'''Kara''': (horrified) ''You are '''reprehensible'''...''
---->'''Andy''': What was the cause of death of the coroner, being ''thrown under a bus?!''
** Kara is less than pleased when Andy snatches defeat from the jaws of victory and accidentally advocates that Quint was close to the edge of the boat when the shark rammed it, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero causing Paulo to declare that Quint fell overboard]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[invoked]] Discussed: Annoyed with how fixated Jon was on trying to arrest Tom over Chrissie's death, despite the fact that the true culprit is ''a shark'', Kara makes a point of reminding him that "the movie ain't called 'Toms'". This then causes a brief discussion on what that film would look like, complete with the conclusion that [[Music/GiorgioMoroder "Tom's Diner"]] would be the film's {{Leitmotif}}.
-->'''Kara''': [[{{Tagline}} Just when you thought it was safe to get on the moped again...]] ''[[{{Tagline}} Toms]]''
-->'''Kara''': [[{{Tagline}} Just when you thought it was safe to get on the moped again...]] ''[[{{Tagline}} Toms]]''
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-->'''Jon''': Well, you know, shark attacks... It's unlikely to repeat, it's probably a one time thing... Uh, I think... You know, no reason to cause a panic.
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-->'''Jon''': Well, you know, shark attacks... It's unlikely to repeat, it's probably a one time thing... Uh, I think... You know, there's no reason to cause a panic.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[invoked]] Discussed: Annoyed with how fixated Jon was on trying to arrest Tom over Chrissie's death, despite the fact that the true culprit is ''a shark'', Kara makes a point of reminding him that "the movie ain't called 'Toms'". This then causes a brief discussion on what that film would look like, complete with the conclusion that [[Music/GiorgioMoroder "Tom's Diner"]] would be the film's {{Leitmotif}}.
-->'''Kara''': [[{{Tagline}} Just when you thought it was safe to get on the moped again...]] ''[[{{Tagline}} Toms]]''
-->'''Kara''': [[{{Tagline}} Just when you thought it was safe to get on the moped again...]] ''[[{{Tagline}} Toms]]''
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: In response to Brody's aggressive/less-than-professional approach to interrogating Tom, all Kara can say in response is a mortified "''You are the worst policeman...''"
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Brody is now a CowboyCop who immediately suspects Tom of murder when he wants to file a missing person report, and shows NoSympathy towards Mrs. Kinter when she blames him for the death of her son. The other players comment explicitly that he comes off as a worse villain than the unsympathetic mayor.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Brody is now a CowboyCop who immediately suspects Tom of murder when he wants to file a missing person report, and shows NoSympathy towards Mrs. Kinter Kitner when she blames him for the death of her son. The other players comment explicitly that he comes off as a worse villain than the unsympathetic mayor.
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Starring Jon Miller as Brody, Kara “Pitr” Strait as Hooper, Andy Hoover as Quint (FirstAppearance), and Paulo Quiros as the Dungeon Master.
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Starring Jon Miller as Brody, Kara “Pitr” Strait Strait[[note]] credited as “Pitr Strait” [[/note]] as Hooper, Andy Hoover as Quint (FirstAppearance), and Paulo Quiros as the Dungeon Master.
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* BehindTheBlack / ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Variation: After Pitr establishes that Tom waited on the other side of a sand dune after Brody and his deputy Jeff discover Chrissie's body, once Jon tries having Tom get arrested, Pitr point blank decides Tom had left.
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* BehindTheBlack / ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Variation: After Pitr Kara establishes that Tom waited on the other side of a sand dune after Brody and his deputy Jeff discover Chrissie's body, once Jon tries having Tom get arrested, Pitr Kara point blank decides Tom had left.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Discussed: After Jon (with some prodding from Paulo) decides to close the beaches ''after'' Alex Kitner is eaten, Pitr points out to Jon how half of the film's plot ''[[TooDumbToLive was to get the beaches closed]]''.
* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only for Pitr to argue that they should just leave him behind. After Brody tries to instead reassign Jeff to watching after the beach[[note]]as Jeff, confused, thinks this means he's getting promoted to Sheriff[[/note]], [[KickTheDog he decides to just fire Jeff instead out of impatience.]]
* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only for Pitr to argue that they should just leave him behind. After Brody tries to instead reassign Jeff to watching after the beach[[note]]as Jeff, confused, thinks this means he's getting promoted to Sheriff[[/note]], [[KickTheDog he decides to just fire Jeff instead out of impatience.]]
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Discussed: After Jon (with some prodding from Paulo) decides to close the beaches ''after'' Alex Kitner is eaten, Pitr Kara points out to Jon how half of the film's plot ''[[TooDumbToLive was to get the beaches closed]]''.
* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only forPitr Kara to argue that they should just leave him behind. After Brody tries to instead reassign Jeff to watching after the beach[[note]]as Jeff, confused, thinks this means he's getting promoted to Sheriff[[/note]], [[KickTheDog he decides to just fire Jeff instead out of impatience.]]
* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only for
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* EpicFail: Pitr and Andy's attempt to dual-play the coroner runs into some obvious logistical problems as they try to coordinate speaking.
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* EpicFail: Pitr Kara and Andy's attempt to dual-play the coroner runs into some obvious logistical problems as they try to coordinate speaking.
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-->'''Pitr!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark, it would make me stop believing in sharks!
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* ExactWords: At one point, Quint says that he is "in the middle of a pancake." Pitr points out that he never said that he was eating it, and might be using it as a sleeping bag for all they know.
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* ExactWords: At one point, Quint says that he is "in the middle of a pancake." Pitr Kara points out that he never said that he was eating it, and might be using it as a sleeping bag for all they know.
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* HarmfulToMinors: After dealing with Chrissie's death, Brody goes home and tells his wife ''and child'' about his day. After Pitr expresses shock that he told a kid about it, Jon says he only mentioned there was a death (which even then is a bit too much).
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* HarmfulToMinors: After dealing with Chrissie's death, Brody goes home and tells his wife ''and child'' about his day. After Pitr Kara expresses shock that he told a kid about it, Jon says he only mentioned there was a death (which even then is a bit too much).
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-->'''Pitr''': So, you don't trust him to spell the word "beach" without an R, but you trust him to close ''all of the beaches'' in a fucking ''beach town''.
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* SchrodingersGun: When Hooper loads his equipment onto Quint's boat, Paulo explicitly allows Pitr an unspecified gizmo to be identified later at a plot-appropriate moment. After the expedition's weapons are lost overboard along with the people carrying them, Pitr resolves that the gizmo is a spare harpoon gun, which she uses to finish Jaws off.
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* SchrodingersGun: When Hooper loads his equipment onto Quint's boat, Paulo explicitly allows Pitr Kara an unspecified gizmo to be identified later at a plot-appropriate moment. After the expedition's weapons are lost overboard along with the people carrying them, Pitr Kara resolves that the gizmo is a spare harpoon gun, which she uses to finish Jaws off.
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* SoreLoser: Pitr describes herself as such after the campaign ends, [[MutualKill even though it ended on a draw.]]
-->'''Pitr''': I feel like the mark of a true sore loser is that they feel like a draw is a lose, and that's how I feel right now.
-->'''Pitr''': I feel like the mark of a true sore loser is that they feel like a draw is a lose, and that's how I feel right now.
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* SoreLoser: Pitr Kara describes herself as such after the campaign ends, [[MutualKill even though it ended on a draw.]]
-->'''Pitr''': -->'''Kara''': I feel like the mark of a true sore loser is that they feel like a draw is a lose, and that's how I feel right now.
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-->'''Pitr''': '''[[RageBreakingPoint SOMEONE GOT EATEN BY A SHARK!]]'''
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-->'''Pitr''': ''You knew that!''
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-->'''Pitr''': You're the ''worst'' cop!
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* VoiceOfTheLegion: The Coroner randomly gets this, as Andy and Pitr both want to play him.
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* VoiceOfTheLegion: The Coroner randomly gets this, as Andy and Pitr Kara both want to play him.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Pitr is arguably the most upset over Jon Miller's take on Brody, outright calling him "the worst cop" more than once, and even states ''he's worse than the mayor''.
* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: After Jon decides ''against'' closing down the beaches after confirming Chrissie was killed by a shark, Pitr bluntly asks if he changed characters mid-campaign.
* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: After Jon decides ''against'' closing down the beaches after confirming Chrissie was killed by a shark, Pitr bluntly asks if he changed characters mid-campaign.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Pitr Kara is arguably the most upset over Jon Miller's take on Brody, outright calling him "the worst cop" more than once, and even states ''he's worse than the mayor''.
* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: After Jon decides ''against'' closing down the beaches after confirming Chrissie was killed by a shark,Pitr Kara bluntly asks if he changed characters mid-campaign.
* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: After Jon decides ''against'' closing down the beaches after confirming Chrissie was killed by a shark,
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-->'''Pitr''': ''Did you switch characters to the mayor?''
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Starring Jon Miller as Brody, Pitr Strait as Hooper, Andy Hoover as Quint (FirstAppearance), and Paulo Quiros as the Dungeon Master.
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* SoreLoser: Pitr describes herself as such after the campaign ends, [[MutualKill even though it ended on a draw.]]
-->'''Pitr''': I feel like the mark of a true sore loser is that they feel like a draw is a lose, and that's how I feel right now.
-->'''Pitr''': I feel like the mark of a true sore loser is that they feel like a draw is a lose, and that's how I feel right now.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Discussed: After Jon (with some prodding from Paulo) decides to close the beaches ''after'' Alex Kitner is eaten, Pitr points out to Jon how half of the film's plot ''[[TooDumbToLive was to get the beaches closed]]''.
* GreaterScopeVillain: Due to his incompetency as Brody, [[UnexpectedCharacter and how he was given Jaws to play as after Brody dies]], Jon technically was the real antagonist of the campaign.
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-->'''Pitr''': You're the worst ''worst'' cop!
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* YouHaveGOTToBeKiddingMe: After Jon decides ''against'' closing down the beaches after confirming Chrissie was killed by a shark, Pitr bluntly asks if he changed characters mid-campaign.
-->'''Jon''': Well, you know, shark attacks... It's unlikely to repeat, it's probably a one time thing... Uh, I think... You know, no reason to cause a panic.
-->'''Paulo''': (bemused) Sure.
-->'''Pitr''': ''Did you switch characters to the mayor?''
-->'''Jon''': Well, you know, shark attacks... It's unlikely to repeat, it's probably a one time thing... Uh, I think... You know, no reason to cause a panic.
-->'''Paulo''': (bemused) Sure.
-->'''Pitr''': ''Did you switch characters to the mayor?''
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-->'''Andy!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark, if would make me stop believing in God!
-->'''Pitr!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark, if would make me stop believing in sharks!
-->'''Pitr!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark, if would make me stop believing in sharks!
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-->'''Andy!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark, if it would make me stop believing in God!
-->'''Pitr!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark,if it would make me stop believing in sharks!
-->'''Pitr!The Coroner''': (at the same time) Here's the thing. If this were a shark,
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: A major contributing factor to [[AdaptationalVillany Jon's less-than-ideal bout as Brody]] is the fact that Jon never saw ''Jaws'' before.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: A major contributing factor to [[AdaptationalVillany [[AdaptationalVillainy Jon's less-than-ideal bout as Brody]] is the fact that Jon never saw ''Jaws'' before.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: A major contributing factor to [[AdaptationalVillany Jon's less-than-ideal bout as Brody]] is the fact that Jon never saw ''Jaws'' before.
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* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only for Pitr to argue that they should just leave him behind. After Brody tries to instead reassign Jeff to watching after the beach[[note]]as he, confused, thinks this means he's getting promoted to Sheriff[[/note]], [[KickTheDog he decides to just fire Jeff instead out of impatience.]]
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* CuttingTheKnot: Right as the group is preparing to leave to go after Jaws, Brody tries to have Jeff come along (as an extra pair of hands would be beneficial), only for Pitr to argue that they should just leave him behind. After Brody tries to instead reassign Jeff to watching after the beach[[note]]as he, Jeff, confused, thinks this means he's getting promoted to Sheriff[[/note]], [[KickTheDog he decides to just fire Jeff instead out of impatience.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: Our protagonists defeated Jaws and saved the future of the town, [[TheGreatestStoryNeverTold but nobody will ever know it as all three of them died in the process]].
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* BittersweetEnding: Our protagonists defeated Jaws and saved the future of the town, [[TheGreatestStoryNeverTold but nobody will ever know it as all three of them died in the process]]. Also, before leaving to go try and get Jaws, Brody fired his deputy, Jeff.
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* EvilLaugh: Jon lets out one after being given control of Jaws following Brody’s demise.
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* WhamLine: Shortly after Brody fails his last death check and dies to Jaws:
-->'''Paulo''': So, at this point I will reveal there ''is'' [[UnexpectedCharacter a backup character]]. (hands Jon [[GreaterScopeVillain the character sheet for Jaws]])
-->'''Paulo''': So, at this point I will reveal there ''is'' [[UnexpectedCharacter a backup character]]. (hands Jon [[GreaterScopeVillain the character sheet for Jaws]])
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* TakeThat: After tuning into a Music/CaptainAndTennille marathon, both Hooper and Brody state Amity's radio station sucks.