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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he sees an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed in his super suit as Deadpool. As he leaves the phone booth, he sees Creator/StanLee, who compliments Wade on his suit. Wade tells him to, "Zip it." As he runs towards the old man, Wade discovers the man has already been killed by the mugger. Deadpool lays down, using the dead man's stomach as a pillow and eats the ice cream the dead man had bought while wondering to himself why there is a phone booth on a street corner in 2017. He then starts griping about about Film/{{Logan}}, Creator/HughJackman and ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} in general.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he sees an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed in his super suit as Deadpool.Deadpool, but struggles in the cramped space. As he leaves the phone booth, he sees Creator/StanLee, who compliments Wade on his suit. Wade tells him to, to "Zip it." As he runs towards the old man, Wade discovers the man has already been killed by the mugger. Deadpool lays down, using the dead man's stomach as a pillow pillow, and eats the ice cream the dead man had bought while wondering to himself why there is a phone booth on a street corner in 2017. He then starts griping about about Film/{{Logan}}, Creator/HughJackman Creator/HughJackman, and ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} in general.
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Good lord this was a mess.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he saw an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed for his super suit as Deadpool. As he left the phone booth, he saw Creator/StanLee and told him to be quiet. As he ran towards the old man, he was already killed by the mugger. Deadpool wondered to himself why is there a phone booth doing in a street corner. He starts saying negative comments about Film/{{Logan}}, Creator/HughJackman and ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} in general.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he saw sees an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed for in his super suit as Deadpool. As he left leaves the phone booth, he saw Creator/StanLee and told sees Creator/StanLee, who compliments Wade on his suit. Wade tells him to be quiet. to, "Zip it." As he ran runs towards the old man, he was Wade discovers the man has already been killed by the mugger. Deadpool wondered lays down, using the dead man's stomach as a pillow and eats the ice cream the dead man had bought while wondering to himself why is there is a phone booth doing in on a street corner. corner in 2017. He then starts saying negative comments griping about about Film/{{Logan}}, Creator/HughJackman and ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} in general.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he saw an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed for his super suit as Deadpool. As he left the phone booth, he saw Creator/StanLee and told him to be quiet. As he ran towards the old man, he was already killed by the mugger. Deadpool wondered to himself why is there a phone booth doing in a street corner. He starts saying negative comments about Film/Logan, Creator/HughJackman and Wolverine in general.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he saw an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed for his super suit as Deadpool. As he left the phone booth, he saw Creator/StanLee and told him to be quiet. As he ran towards the old man, he was already killed by the mugger. Deadpool wondered to himself why is there a phone booth doing in a street corner. He starts saying negative comments about Film/Logan, Film/{{Logan}}, Creator/HughJackman and Wolverine ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} in general.
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As Wade Wilson is walking at a street, he saw an old man getting mugged. He gets inside an old phone booth to get dressed for his super suit as Deadpool. As he left the phone booth, he saw Creator/StanLee and told him to be quiet. As he ran towards the old man, he was already killed by the mugger. Deadpool wondered to himself why is there a phone booth doing in a street corner. He starts saying negative comments about Film/Logan, Creator/HughJackman and Wolverine in general.
