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"Rebecca has a tough week after learning some news about Josh and someone surprising shows up to help her - Dr. Phil. Paula is pursued by an important new client Calvin (guest star Cedric Yarbrough) and not just professionally."
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"Rebecca has a tough week after learning some news about Josh and someone surprising shows up to help her - =- Dr. Phil. Paula is pursued by an important new client Calvin (guest star Cedric Yarbrough) and not just professionally."
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: "And I have to stop my eyes from drifting downward towards his crotch! / I can peek, but I have to be discreet!"
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-->"Then I got to park it in back, I don't even get why there's a spot back there. It's so tight, feels more like an exit."
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* AffectionateParody: Of mid-20th century French ''chansons'', as sung by Creator/EdithPiaf, Juliette Greco, etc.
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* AffectionateParody: Of mid-20th century French ''chansons'', as sung by Creator/EdithPiaf, Music/EdithPiaf, Juliette Greco, etc.
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* AliceAllusion: The "don't drink me" vodka, the bathroom with chess-board tiles and bunny-rabbit wallpaper... and the trippy perspective when Rebecca picks up the bathroom-floor pill is similar to Alice's growing and shrinking.
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-->"Then I got to park it in back, I don't even get why there's a spot back there.
there. It's so tight, feels more like an exit."
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* DoubleMeaning: When Josh's friends help him put together a dining room table for his new apartment for Valencia, they start making negative comments about the table that are clearly intended to refer to his relationship. ("There's still time to bail... on the table, I mean" "The truth is, none of us really even like the current table"). It's not entirely clear whether Josh ever picks up on this.
* EasilyImpressed: Paula is absolutely dazzled by Calvin, who's basically a successful local businessman who she thinks of as almost royalty. She even has an extended jazz number lauding his 'Preferred Traveler' status.
* InnocentInnuendo: When Josh's friends have a DoubleMeaning conversation about his relationship (see above) one of them doesn't pick up on it, and goes off on a rant about parking issues that comes of as an extended sexual metaphor.
-->"Then I got to park it in back, I don't even get why there's a spot back there.
It's so tight, feels more like an exit."
* EasilyImpressed: Paula is absolutely dazzled by Calvin, who's basically a successful local businessman who she thinks of as almost royalty. She even has an extended jazz number lauding his 'Preferred Traveler' status.
* InnocentInnuendo: When Josh's friends have a DoubleMeaning conversation about his relationship (see above) one of them doesn't pick up on it, and goes off on a rant about parking issues that comes of as an extended sexual metaphor.
-->"Then I got to park it in back, I don't even get why there's a spot back there.
It's so tight, feels more like an exit."
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Implied to be the reason Calvin develops an instant attraction to Paula, she appears to remind him of his dead wife.
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* SmokingIsGlamorous: Parodied. Rebecca appears to be smoking while lying in bed and watching porn, but then she tears the paper on the cigarette.
-->'''Rebecca''': Ooh. Chocolat.
-->'''Rebecca''': Ooh. Chocolat.
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* EverythingSoundsSexierInFrench: "Oui. Je sois garbage."
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* EverythingSoundsSexierInFrench: "Oui. Je sois suis garbage."
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* BigFishInASmallPond: Calvin is a huge deal in West Covina... but as it turns out he's really not as prominent a business man in the world at large.
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* BigFishInASmallPond: NormalFishInATinyPond: Calvin is a huge deal in West Covina... but as it turns out he's really not as prominent a business man in the world at large.
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* DeliberatelyMonochromeDeliberatelyMonochrome: Like an artsy French movie.
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* {{Pastiche}}: Of jazz/blues songs, especially Kahn & Donaldson's "Makin' Whoopee".
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* LadyInRed
LadyInRed: Paula is wearing a stunning red dress.
* {{Pastiche}}: Of jazz/blues songs, especially Kahn & Donaldson's "Makin'Whoopee".Whoopee".
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* BigFishInASmallPond: Calvin is a huge deal in West Covina... but as it turns out he's really not as prominent a business man in the world at large.
* TheCameo: Dr. Phil shows up as a hallucination of Rebecca's, and shows up in real life in the end.
* ThirdWheel: Darryl, despite being the owner of Whitefeather & Associates, is the third wheel at the dinner to woo a client.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Josh has no idea how far he accidentally pushed Rebecca to a depression.
* {{Pastiche}}: Of jazz/blues songs, especially Kahn & Donaldson's "Makin'
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* BigFishInASmallPond: Calvin is a huge deal in West Covina... but as it turns out he's really not as prominent a business man in the world at large.
* TheCameo: Dr. Phil shows up as a hallucination of Rebecca's, and shows up in real life in the end.
* ThirdWheel: Darryl, despite being the owner of Whitefeather & Associates, is the third wheel at the dinner to woo a client.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Josh has no idea how far he accidentally pushed Rebecca to a depression.
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* {{Pastiche}}:{{Pastiche}}: Of jazz/blues songs, especially Kahn & Donaldson's "Makin' Whoopee".
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* AffectionateParody: Of mid-20th century French ''chansons'', as sung by Creator/EdithPiaf, Juliette Greco, etc.
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* TheChanteuse: Paula as the singer in a smokey jazz lounge.
* EatingTheEyeCandy: "And I have to stop my eyes from drifting downward towards his crotch! / I can peek, but I have to be discreet!"
* LadyInRed
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''Eats French cheeses, drinks French wine.''\\
''He travels all the time''\\
''And at the airport cuts the line,''\\
''And when he checks his leather luggage''\\
''No extra charges are incurred''
''Eats French cheeses, drinks French wine.''\\
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1x07 - "I'm So Happy that Josh is So Happy!"
Written by Sono Patel, directed by Larry Trilling. Original airdate 11/23/2015.
"Rebecca has a tough week after learning some news about Josh and someone surprising shows up to help her - Dr. Phil. Paula is pursued by an important new client Calvin (guest star Cedric Yarbrough) and not just professionally."
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"Rebecca has a tough week after learning some news about Josh and someone surprising shows up to help her - Dr. Phil. Paula is pursued by an important new client Calvin (guest star Cedric Yarbrough) and not just professionally."
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"His Status Is Preferred" (sung by Donna Lynn Champlin)\\
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