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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: April's swords... or scimitars, can even create an entrance to the Shadow Kins' world.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: April's swords... swords, or scimitars, can even create an entrance to the Shadow Kins' world.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[DefiedTrope Defied]], Charlie claims that his situation with Ms Quill is fair according to the morality of his planet. Tanya doesn't buy it and claims that the situation is slavery and wrong anywhere in the universe.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[DefiedTrope Defied]], Charlie claims that his situation with Ms Miss Quill is fair according to the morality of his planet. Tanya doesn't buy it and claims that the situation is slavery and wrong anywhere in the universe.
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* DidYouJustHaveSex: After Ram calls to inform the rest of the group that the Shadow Kin King Corakinus is possessing April, Tanya correctly guesses that they (meaning [[OfficialCouple Ram and April]]) had sex. Charlie misinterprets the pronouns, and asks if Ram and Corakinus had had sex.
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* DidYouJustHaveSex: After Ram calls to inform the rest of the group that the Shadow Kin King Corakinus is possessing April, Tanya correctly guesses that they (meaning [[OfficialCouple Ram and April]]) had sex. Charlie misinterprets the pronouns, and asks if Ram and Corakinus had had sex.
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* RejectedApology: April's father claims that he just wants forgiveness from her and her mother. However, what he did to them in the past is so horrible that they aren't willing to forgive him, and suspect him of being insincere and just wanting to force his way into their lives again.
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* RejectedApology: April's father father, Huw, claims that he just wants forgiveness from her and her mother. However, what he did to them in the past is so horrible that they aren't willing to talk to him, let alone forgive him, and suspect him of being insincere and just wanting to force his way into their lives again.
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* TitledAfterTheSong: The title refers to the song "Owner of a Lonely Heart" by Music/{{Yes}}.
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* TitledAfterTheSong: The title refers to the song [[Music/NineOhOneTwoFive "Owner of a Lonely Heart" Heart"]] by Music/{{Yes}}.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[DefiedTrope Defied]], Charlie claims that his situations with Ms Quill is fair according to the morality of his planet. Tanya doesn't buy it and claims that the situation is slavery and wrong anywhere in the universe.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[DefiedTrope Defied]], Charlie claims that his situations situation with Ms Quill is fair according to the morality of his planet. Tanya doesn't buy it and claims that the situation is slavery and wrong anywhere in the universe.
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* DidYouJustHaveSex: After Ram calls to inform the rest of the group that the Shadow Kin King Corakinus is possessing April, Tanya correctly guesses that they (meaning [[OfficialCouple Ram and April]]), had sex. Charlie misinterprets the pronouns, and asks if Ram and Corakinus had had sex.
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* DidYouJustHaveSex: After Ram calls to inform the rest of the group that the Shadow Kin King Corakinus is possessing April, Tanya correctly guesses that they (meaning [[OfficialCouple Ram and April]]), April]]) had sex. Charlie misinterprets the pronouns, and asks if Ram and Corakinus had had sex.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Due to her link with Corakinus, April considers soldiers who ran away this, claiming "Who'd want to live as a coward?"
* FertileBlood: Just a drop of blood can make the petals multiply at a exponential rate.
* FertileBlood: Just a drop of blood can make the petals multiply at a exponential rate.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Due to her link with Corakinus, April considers soldiers who ran away to suffer this, claiming "Who'd want to live as a coward?"
* FertileBlood: Just a drop of blood can make the petals multiply ata an exponential rate.
* FertileBlood: Just a drop of blood can make the petals multiply at
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* LastStand: Invoked. April while connected to Corakinus says the soldiers at Dunkirk should have fought and died.
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* LastStand: Invoked. April April, while connected to Corakinus Corakinus, says the soldiers at Dunkirk should have fought and died.
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* PsychicLink: As a result of the attempt to anchor the hear in Corakinus, one is formed between April and Corakinus, where they can hear each other's thoughts.
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* PsychicLink: As a result of the attempt to anchor the hear heart in Corakinus, one is formed between April and Corakinus, where they can hear each other's thoughts.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: April while connected to Corakinus asks who would want to live as a coward, to which another student replies "Most people?"
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: April April, while connected to Corakinus Corakinus, asks who would want to live as a coward, to which another student replies "Most people?"
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: April while connected to Corakinus asks who would want to live as a coward, to which another student replies "Most people?"
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* FertileBlood: Just a drop of blood can make the petals multiply at a significant rate.
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* MookPromotion: Corakinus tells Kharrus there is room on the throne by his side if she succeeds in keeping the heart in his body.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: April's swords... or scimitars, can even create an entrance to the Shadow Kins' world.
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* AbsurdCuttingPower: April is able to create a rift to the Shadow Kins' world using her swords.
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* GlowingEyes: April when she connects to the Shadow King.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Due to her link with Corakinus, April considers soldiers who ran away this, claiming "Who'd want to live as a coward?"
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* LastStand: Invoked. April while connected to Corakinus says the soldiers at Dunkirk should have fought and died.
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* ManEatingPlant: The Killer Petals, which reproduce using blood.
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* ManEatingPlant: The Killer Petals, petals, which reproduce using blood.
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* TheSwarm: The Killer Petals.
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* TheSwarm: The Killer Petals.
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* ThrowingOffTheDisability: April heals her mother's spine using her Shadow Kin powers.
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* WarIsHell: April's link to Corakinus causes her to deliver a talk about war and how people always die.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: April's eyes turn red due to her link with Corakinus.
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: April talking about how soldiers sign up to die in class, due to her mental connection with Corakinus.
