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* ActuallyAGoodIdea: Cole has an idea for Molly to meet Brendan without looking like a stalker. Molly thinks it's actually a good idea, but Cole didn't like she said "actually".
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-> Written by: Chuck Tatham
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-> Written by: '''Written by:''' Chuck Tatham
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[[folder:Songs]]
* Birdie Busking - Birdie
* Momma's Got This - Paige, Molly and Cole
* Momma's Got This (Reprise) - Paige
* Don't Think About the Failures - Owen
* The Park is Mine - Politicians and Socialites
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* {{Troll}}: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat onto his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
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* {{Troll}}: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat onto his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee. She's also trying to stir up trouble between the Park League and city hall.
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* TheGadfly: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat onto his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
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* {{Troll}}: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat onto his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: When one of the socialites demands to know from the politicians why they froze their contract, one of the politicians responds by asking them [[LameComeback why do they have a contract that got frozen]] and tells them it works both ways. The socialite points out that doesn't make sense.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: When one of the socialites Park League members demands to know from the politicians city officials why they froze their contract, one contract. One of the politicians responds city officials tries to flip it back at them by asking them [[LameComeback why do they have a contract that got frozen]] and tells them it works both ways. The socialite points out that doesn't make sense.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Implied. Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them "she's alive and sticky" in Polish. While it's technically true due to how messy she is, it's unknown if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish, the kids believes it's the latter.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Implied. Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them "she's alive and very sticky" in Polish. While it's technically true due to how messy she is, it's unknown if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish, the kids believes it's the latter.
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* TriumphantReprise: After Paige gets her quote and found her next clue, he triumphantly sings the reprise of "Momma's Got This".
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* TriumphantReprise: After Paige gets her quote and found her next clue, he she triumphantly sings the reprise of "Momma's Got This".
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* ImmediateSelfContradiction: Paige tells Owen when they get to the Hat Luncheon they're going to be serious people doing their serious job in a serious way. Then Molly comes by to give Paige her crazy hat which is a miniature train looping a mountain.
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* ImmediateSelfContradiction: Paige tells Owen when they get to the Hat Luncheon they're going to be serious people doing their serious job in a serious way. Then way, until Molly comes by to give Paige her puts Paige's crazy hat on her which is a miniature train looping a mountain.
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* ImmediateSelfContradiction: Paige tells Owen when they get to the Hat Luncheon they're going to be serious people doing their serious job in a serious way. Then Molly comes by to give Paige her crazy hat which is a miniature train looping a mountain.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Bitsy attends the Hat Luncheon to purposely put a rift between city hall and the Park League by constantly reminding the League that city hall froze their contact and telling city hall that the League said some nasty things about them. Eventually, both of them gets fed up each other and fight.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Bitsy attends the Hat Luncheon to purposely put a rift between city hall and the Park League by constantly reminding the League that city hall froze their contact and telling the city hall officials that the League said some nasty things about them. Eventually, both of them gets fed up each other and fight.
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* OffTheRecord: When Paige questions Councilman Leon in the steam room on why he voted against renewing the Park League's contract, he told her the mayor told him to do it and that's off the record. Paige tells him he can't do that, but a lawyer who overheard their conversion points out he's allow to do that and argues that the source was in an altered state because of the steam room.
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* FoodFight: Bitsy gets the politicians and socialites into an heated argument that results in them getting into a food fight, with some actual fight mixed in.
* TheGadfly: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat on his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
* TheGadfly: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat on his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
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* FoodFight: Bitsy gets the politicians and socialites into an heated argument that results in them getting into a food fight, with some actual fight fighting mixed in.
* TheGadfly: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her haton onto his pant leg and saying that it looks like he peed on his knee.
* TheGadfly: Bitsy messes with Owen by spilling water from her hat
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* ManipulativeBastard: Bitsy attends the Hat Luncheon to purposely put a rift between city hall and the Park League by constantly reminding the League that city hall froze their contact and telling city hall that the League said some nasty things about them. Eventually, both of them gets fed up each other and fight each other.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Bitsy attends the Hat Luncheon to purposely put a rift between city hall and the Park League by constantly reminding the League that city hall froze their contact and telling city hall that the League said some nasty things about them. Eventually, both of them gets fed up each other and fight each other.fight.
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* TriumphantReprise: After Paige gets her quote and found her next clue, he triumphantly sings the reprise of "Momma's Got This".
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* Metaphorgotten: Paige tells her children when life gives you lemons you have to take it in stride, and if you get the lemons talking there's a story inside. Molly and Cole tells her that her metaphor is broken.
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* Metaphorgotten: {{Metaphorgotten}}: Paige tells her children when life gives you lemons you have to take it in stride, and if you get the lemons talking there's a story inside. Molly and Cole tells her that her metaphor is broken.
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* FlashbackCut: When Owen tells Molly he hates speeches and he's not good at it and Paige tries to reassure him, he get a flashback to Owen bombing his speech twice.
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* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: When Molly and Cole thinks hanging out with Brendan is considered a date and Molly believes there's kissing at the end of a date, Cole leaves Molly alone with Brendan by cartwheeling into some bushes. After Molly and Brendan's first kiss ended badly, Cole pops out of the bush and gives Molly a thumbs up.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's alive and sticky in Polish. While that's technically true due to how messy she is, the kids are unsure if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Implied. Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's "she's alive and sticky sticky" in Polish. While that's it's technically true due to how messy she is, the kids are unsure it's unknown if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.Polish, the kids believes it's the latter.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's alive and sticky in Polish. While that's true, the kids are unsure if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's alive and sticky in Polish. While that's true, technically true due to how messy she is, the kids are unsure if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.
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* IAmGreatSong: "Momma's Got This", where Paige sings how she'll get her quote and how determined she is and she doesn't care how dirty she is.
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* IAmGreatSong: "Momma's Got This", where Paige sings how she'll get her quote and how determined she is and she doesn't care how dirty messy she is.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Bitsy attends the Hat Luncheon to purposely put a rift between city hall and the Park League by constantly reminding the League that city hall froze their contact and telling city hall that the League said some nasty things about them. Eventually, both of them gets fed up each other and fight each other.
* Metaphorgotten: Paige tells her children when life gives you lemons you have to take it in stride, and if you get the lemons talking there's a story inside. Molly and Cole tells her that her metaphor is broken.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's alive and sticky in Polish. While that's true, the kids are unsure if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.
* Metaphorgotten: Paige tells her children when life gives you lemons you have to take it in stride, and if you get the lemons talking there's a story inside. Molly and Cole tells her that her metaphor is broken.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Paige speaks to two restaurant patrons and tells them she's alive and sticky in Polish. While that's true, the kids are unsure if she's saying that on purpose or she's doing a bad attempt at speaking Polish.
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* OverlyNervousFlopSweat: Owen is so nervous about giving his speech at the Hat Luncheon that he sweat through three of his formal shirts and Paige tells him to just stick with his third shirt since he only owns five formal shirts.
* PepTalkSong: "Don't Think About the Failure", after Paige tells Owen to not think about the failure and only think about the future, he sings to himself to focus on giving a good speech.
* PepTalkSong: "Don't Think About the Failure", after Paige tells Owen to not think about the failure and only think about the future, he sings to himself to focus on giving a good speech.
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* PlotAllergy: When Molly shares her first kiss with Brendan, his face starts swelling up when he reveals he's allergic to peanuts and Molly ate a peanut butter parfait.
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* DirtyCoward: While a fight between the politicians and socialites breaks out, Mayor Whitebottom hides under the table and doesn't try to pacify the fighting.
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* IAmGreatSong: "Momma's Got This", where Paige sings how she'll get her quote and how determined she is and she doesn't care how dirty she is.
* InsaneTrollLogic: When one of the socialites demands to know from the politicians why they froze their contract, one of the politicians responds by asking them [[LameComeback why do they have a contract that got frozen]] and tells them it works both ways. The socialite points out that doesn't make sense.
* InsaneTrollLogic: When one of the socialites demands to know from the politicians why they froze their contract, one of the politicians responds by asking them [[LameComeback why do they have a contract that got frozen]] and tells them it works both ways. The socialite points out that doesn't make sense.
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* StaringContest: Bitsy has a staring contest with Shampagne, and while she always wins, Shampagne doesn't seem to get the purpose of the contest.
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* ContinueYourMissionDammit: Birdie sings loudly, trying to get Molly to notice that Brendan is flying his kite in the prk.
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* ContinueYourMissionDammit: Birdie sings loudly, trying to get Molly to notice that Brendan is flying his kite in the prk.park.
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* ContinueYourMissionDammit: Birdie sings loudly, trying to get Molly to notice that Brendan is flying his kite in the prk.
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* PersonalRaincloud: The hat Bitsy settles on for the luncheon is a wide brimmed one that has a miniature rain cloud fountain. It works by cycling water it collects in the brim, which Bitsy is fond of trolling others by spilling it on them.
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* PersonalRaincloud: The hat Bitsy settles on for the luncheon is a wide brimmed one that has a miniature rain cloud fountain. It works by cycling water it collects that pools in the brim, which brim. Bitsy is fond of trolling others by spilling it on them.
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* NiceHat: Since it's a luncheon attended by the rich and politically important the hats are pretty elaborate. The Tillerman kids make page a miniature train looping a mountain for Paige to wear.
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* NiceHat: Since it's a luncheon attended by the rich and politically important the hats are pretty elaborate. The Tillerman kids make page a miniature train looping a mountain for Paige to wear.
* PersonalRaincloud: The hat Bitsy settles on for the luncheon is a wide brimmed one that has a miniature rain cloud fountain. It works by cycling water it collects in the brim, which Bitsy is fond of trolling others by spilling it on them.
* PersonalRaincloud: The hat Bitsy settles on for the luncheon is a wide brimmed one that has a miniature rain cloud fountain. It works by cycling water it collects in the brim, which Bitsy is fond of trolling others by spilling it on them.
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* FoodFight: Bitsy gets the politicians and socialites into an heated argument that results in them getting into a food fight, with some actual fight mixed in.
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* QuarrelingSong: "The Park is Mine", Bitsy gets the politicians and socialites into an argument over the park's funds being frozen.
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* WhamLine: When they see the chaos going on at the Hat Luncheon, Brendan sees Bitsy among them and said "Aunt Bitsy?".
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* WhamLine: When they see the chaos going on at the Hat Luncheon, Brendan sees Bitsy among them and said "Aunt Bitsy?".Bitsy?".
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* VaguenessIsComing: The mayor's response to Paige's question as to why he got Shallenhammer to say "No" to the P3 funding of Central Park: "We think we can do better." He provides no further elaboration on the matter.
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* FirstKiss: Molly shares her first kiss with Brendan. Unfortunately, we learn Brendan is allergic to peanuts and Molly ate a peanut butter parfait, so he suffers an allergic reaction and his face swells up.
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-> Written by: Chuck Tatham
Owen has to give a speech while presenting the golden rake to a long time employee at the Hat Luncheon in Central Park where important people will be meeting there. Paige is trying to uncover why the park's funding would be cut off. Bitsy goes to the Hat Luncheon to try to sabotage it and stir up trouble between the attendees. Molly wants to spend more time with Brendan.
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Owen has to give a speech while presenting the golden rake to a long time employee at the Hat Luncheon in Central Park where important people will be meeting there. Paige is trying to uncover why the park's funding would be cut off. Bitsy goes to the Hat Luncheon to try to sabotage it and stir up trouble between the attendees. Molly wants to spend more time with Brendan.
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