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* StunnedSilence: Carmen and Shadowsan just look in silence when they see that ''Hideo'' knocked out Zari with a guiding post. Shadowsan is the one the most shocked; this is his ''brother'' after all!
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* StunnedSilence: Carmen and Shadowsan just look in silence when they see that ''Hideo'' knocked out Zari with a guiding post. Shadowsan is the one the most shocked; this is his law-abiding ''brother'' after all!
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* BaitAndSwitch: After Hideo learns the truth as to what happened to his little brother, Hideo states that he cannot let Shadow-san return home...until after he finishes his duty with Carmen.
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* BaitAndSwitch: After Hideo learns the truth as to what happened to his little brother, Hideo states that he cannot let Shadow-san Shadowsan return home...until after he finishes his duty with Carmen.
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* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale, and the caper involves decorative masks from around the world.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" where Shadow-san reunited with his brother is played out again.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" where Shadow-san reunited with his brother is played out again.
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* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san Shadowsan wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale, and the caper involves decorative masks from around the world.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" whereShadow-san Shadowsan reunited with his brother is played out again.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" where
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* MacGuffin: The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin masks of Venice]] originating from many countries such as the Mask of Agamenon from Greece and a Mengu Mask worn by samurai from Japan.
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* StunnedSilence: Carmen and Shadow-san just look in silence when they see that ''Hideo'' knocked out Zari with a guiding post. Shadow-san is the one the most shocked; this is his ''brother'' after all!
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* StunnedSilence: Carmen and Shadow-san Shadowsan just look in silence when they see that ''Hideo'' knocked out Zari with a guiding post. Shadow-san Shadowsan is the one the most shocked; this is his ''brother'' after all!
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* MacGuffin: The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin masks of Venice]] originating from many countries such as the Mask of Agamenon and a Mengu Mask worn by samurai.
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* MacGuffin: The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin masks of Venice]] originating from many countries such as the Mask of Agamenon from Greece and a Mengu Mask worn by samurai.samurai from Japan.
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* MacGuffin: The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin masks of Venice]] originating from many countries such as the Mask of Agamenon and a Mengu Mask worn by samurai.
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* StunnedSilence: Carmen and Shadow-san just look in silence when they see that ''Hideo'' knocked out Zari with a guiding post. Shadow-san is the one the most shocked; this is his ''brother'' after all!
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* RedemptionQuest: Hideo specifically calls his brother's life now warring against V.I.L.E. as such. He tells his brother he cannot come back until it is done, but waits with anticipation.
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* YouHaveToBelieveMe: When Hideo arrives just as Carmen and Shadow-san have the masks in a crate, they show him a video clip of Mime Bomb and state he's a criminal. Naturally, Hideo is skeptical.
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* YouHaveToBelieveMe: When Hideo arrives just as Carmen and Shadow-san have the masks in a crate, they show him a video clip of Mime Bomb Bomb, who is passing time by miming that he is fishing, and state he's a criminal. Naturally, Hideo is skeptical.
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* TeethClencedTeamwork: One-sided on Mime Bomb's part who ''really'' can't stand Neal. Neal is completely oblivious to the hatred.
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* TeethClencedTeamwork: TeethClenchedTeamwork: One-sided on Mime Bomb's part who ''really'' can't stand Neal. Neal is completely oblivious to the hatred.
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* TeethClencedTeamwork: One-sided on Mime Bomb's part who ''really'' can't stand Neal. Neal is completely oblivious to the hatred.
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* BilingualBackfire: Played with. Zack in his museum employee disguise tries to pass off his fumbling of Zari's questions as his English being poor... so Zari, without missing a beat, switches to Italian to accommodate him. He's only saved by Player translating and telling him how to respond.
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* BilingualBackfire: Played with. Zack in his museum employee disguise tries to pass off his fumbling of Zari's questions as his English being poor... so Zari, without missing a beat, switches to Italian to accommodate him. He's only saved by Player translating and telling feeding him how to respond.responses through his earpiece.
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* BilingualBackfire: Played with. Zack in his museum employee disguise tries to pass off his fumbling of Zari's questions as his English being poor... so Zari, without missing a beat, switches to Italian to accommodate him. He's only saved by Player translating and telling him how to respond.
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* ActorAllusion: Rhys Darby gets [[WesternAnimation/VoltronLegendaryDefender the slippies]] again.
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* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale and the caper are decorative masks from around the world.
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* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale Carnivale, and the caper are involves decorative masks from around the world.
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* {{Irony}}: Neal the Eel’s specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that police are on their tail.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that police are on their tail.
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* {{Irony}}: Neal the Eel’s specialty of being slippery and hard to catch and being slippery.catch. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is just him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that the police are on their tail.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is just him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that the police are on their tail.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Hideo knocks Zari ucnonscious with a guiding post.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Hideo knocks Zari ucnonscious unconscious with a guiding post.
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* BrickJoke: Carmen using the olive oil to stop Neil. Later, when Zari appears to arrest Carmen and Shadow-san, Hideo knocks her unconscious with a guiding post. His response?
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* BrickJoke: Carmen using the olive oil to stop Neil.Neal. Later, when Zari appears to arrest Carmen and Shadow-san, Hideo knocks her unconscious with a guiding post. His response?
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* {{Irony}}: Neil's specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
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* {{Irony}}: Neil's Neal the Eel’s specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
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* ChekhovsGun: When Zack and Ivy lose Neil the Eel, they meet up with some vendors selling olive oil. Carmen uses a bottle of this to trip Neil up.
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* ChekhovsGun: When Zack and Ivy lose Neil Neal the Eel, they meet up with some vendors selling who wished to sell them olive oil. Carmen uses a bottle of this to trip Neil Neal up.
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* {{irony}}: Neil's specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
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* {{irony}}: {{Irony}}: Neil's specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.oil.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that police are on their tail.
* YouHaveToBelieveMe: When Hideo arrives just as Carmen and Shadow-san have the masks in a crate, they show him a video clip of Mime Bomb and state he's a criminal. Naturally, Hideo is skeptical.
* PaperThinDisguise: Zack's disguise as an employee from the museum is him in a uniform and scribbled-on mustache.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mime Bomb just dives into the waters of Venice after he gives up trying to tell Neal that police are on their tail.
* YouHaveToBelieveMe: When Hideo arrives just as Carmen and Shadow-san have the masks in a crate, they show him a video clip of Mime Bomb and state he's a criminal. Naturally, Hideo is skeptical.
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In Venice, V.I.L.E has their eye on a collection of masks from around the world. However, one of them only brings Shadowsan to confront something he never wanted to.
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* BaitAndSwitch: After Hideo learns the truth as to what happened to his little brother, Hideo states that he cannot let Shadow-san return home...until after he finishes his duty with Carmen.
* BrickJoke: Carmen using the olive oil to stop Neil. Later, when Zari appears to arrest Carmen and Shadow-san, Hideo knocks her unconscious with a guiding post. His response?
-->'''Hideo:''' I had no olive oil.
* ChekhovsGun: When Zack and Ivy lose Neil the Eel, they meet up with some vendors selling olive oil. Carmen uses a bottle of this to trip Neil up.
* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale and the caper are decorative masks from around the world.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" where Shadow-san reunited with his brother is played out again.
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Hideo knocks Zari ucnonscious with a guiding post.
* {{irony}}: Neil's specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
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* BaitAndSwitch: After Hideo learns the truth as to what happened to his little brother, Hideo states that he cannot let Shadow-san return home...until after he finishes his duty with Carmen.
* BrickJoke: Carmen using the olive oil to stop Neil. Later, when Zari appears to arrest Carmen and Shadow-san, Hideo knocks her unconscious with a guiding post. His response?
-->'''Hideo:''' I had no olive oil.
* ChekhovsGun: When Zack and Ivy lose Neil the Eel, they meet up with some vendors selling olive oil. Carmen uses a bottle of this to trip Neil up.
* CoolMask: Carmen and Shadow-san wear masks that wouldn't look out of place in Carnivale and the caper are decorative masks from around the world.
* {{Flashback}}: The scene in "The Daisho Caper" where Shadow-san reunited with his brother is played out again.
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Hideo knocks Zari ucnonscious with a guiding post.
* {{irony}}: Neil's specialty of being hard to catch and being slippery. He ends up slipping over spilled olive oil.
