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* ComatoseCanary: Before Flack regains consciousness following his surgery, Mac asks him to squeeze his hand. He has to say it a few times before Flack barely does it.
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* ScarsAreForever: Mac's still has his battle injury scar from 1983 more than 22 years later.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion by taking on the role of a superior officer to get the man to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion by taking on the role of a superior officer to get the man and giving him a direct order to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
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* ShirtlessScene: Mac, when the paramedics cut off his bloody t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.
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* ShirtlessScene: Mac, briefly, when the paramedics cut off his bloody t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.injury.
* TerminologyTitle: Taken from the first of the 11 Marine Corps General Orders, "To take charge of this post and all government property in view."
* TerminologyTitle: Taken from the first of the 11 Marine Corps General Orders, "To take charge of this post and all government property in view."
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* ShirtlessScene: Mac, when the paramedics cut off his t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.
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* ShirtlessScene: Mac, when the paramedics cut off his bloody t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.
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* FromDressToDressing: After tying off the artery with the shoestring, Mac uses strips from his own shirt to staunch additional bleeding.
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* FromDressToDressing: After tying off the Flack's artery with the other man's shoestring, Mac uses strips from his own shirt to staunch additional bleeding.
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* MadBomber: The perp has delusions of being a Marine. He had tried 5 times to get into the Corps and had resorted to using aliases when he applied.
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* MadBomber: The perp bomber has delusions of being a Marine. He had tried 5 times to get into the Corps and had resorted to using aliases when he applied.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Thankfully, no one is killed.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Thankfully, no one is killed.killed by the blast.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury. Blood, guts, arteries... it's not for the squeamish.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury. Blood, guts, arteries...a spurting artery... it's not for the squeamish.
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* AfterActionHealingDrama: Mac enlists the office worker's help in stabilizing Flack, borrowing the man's shoestring to tie off a profusely bleeding artery in his gut.
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* AfterActionHealingDrama: Mac enlists the office worker's help in stabilizing Flack, borrowing the man's shoestring to tie off a profusely bleeding artery in his Don's gut.
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* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved:
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* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted Downplayed with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved:
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The bomber was trying to prove a point, but ended up becoming a villain himself.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The bomber was is trying to prove a point, that NYC is not ready for another terrorist attack, but ended ends up becoming a villain himself.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury. Blood, guts, arteries... it's not for the squeamish.
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* UnbrokenVigil: The team all come to visit Flack after his surgery when he has not yet regained consciousness. Everyone but Mac & Stella leave shortly after arriving. Later Mac is shown to be the last one by his bedside, trying to get his friend to squeeze his hand. The episode closes just after Flack does so.
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--> If there's a bombing in New York City, then that's where we're paid to be.
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--> If there's a bombing in New York City, then that's here's where we're paid to be.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
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* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.injury.
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An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them and office worker.
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An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them and an office worker.
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An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them an and office worker.
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An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them an and office worker.
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* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved.
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* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved.involved:
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* MadBomber: Obviously.
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* MadBomber: Obviously.The perp has delusions of being a Marine. He had tried 5 times to get into the Corps and had resorted to using aliases when he applied.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion of being a Marine. He takes on the role of a superior officer to get the man to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
* TorsoWithAView: Played realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
* TorsoWithAView: Played realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion of being a Marine. He takes by taking on the role of a superior officer to get the man to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
* TorsoWithAView: Played very realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
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"'''Charge of This Post'''" is the 24th and final episode of Season 2, and the 47th episode overall.
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"'''Charge of This Post'''" is the 24th and final episode of Season 2, and the 47th episode overall. It originally aired May 17, 2006.
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"'''Charge of This Post'''" is the 24th and final episode of Season 2, and the 47th episode overall.
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"'''Charge of This Post'''" is the 24th and final episode of Season 2, and the 47th episode overall.
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Directed by Creator/RobBailey
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/TimothyJLea
An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them an and office worker.
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* AfterActionHealingDrama: Mac enlists the office worker's help in stabilizing Flack, borrowing the man's shoestring to tie off a profusely bleeding artery in his gut.
* ClothingConcealedInjury: Justified and downplayed by Mac, whose battle scar from the 1983 Beirut Marine Barracks bombing is naturally covered by his shirt. When Stella sees it when he's being checked out by the paramedics after the ordeal, he merely comments, "Old injury."
* FlashbackEcho: Flack's injuries take Mac back to the barracks bombing, when another Marine was injured in much the same way.
* FromDressToDressing: After tying off the artery with the shoestring, Mac uses strips from his own shirt to staunch additional bleeding.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The bomber was trying to prove a point, but ended up becoming a villain himself.
* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved.
--> If there's a bombing in New York City, then that's where we're paid to be.
* MadBomber: Obviously.
* MonochromePast: Mac's flashbacks to Beirut are shown in sepia tones.
* NonFatalExplosions: Thankfully, no one is killed.
* ShirtlessScene: Mac, when the paramedics cut off his t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.
* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion of being a Marine. He takes on the role of a superior officer to get the man to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
* TorsoWithAView: Played realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/TimothyJLea
An explosion rocks a crime scene that Mac & Flack have been called to, severely injuring Flack and trapping the two of them an and office worker.
!Tropes for the episode:
* AfterActionHealingDrama: Mac enlists the office worker's help in stabilizing Flack, borrowing the man's shoestring to tie off a profusely bleeding artery in his gut.
* ClothingConcealedInjury: Justified and downplayed by Mac, whose battle scar from the 1983 Beirut Marine Barracks bombing is naturally covered by his shirt. When Stella sees it when he's being checked out by the paramedics after the ordeal, he merely comments, "Old injury."
* FlashbackEcho: Flack's injuries take Mac back to the barracks bombing, when another Marine was injured in much the same way.
* FromDressToDressing: After tying off the artery with the shoestring, Mac uses strips from his own shirt to staunch additional bleeding.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: The bomber was trying to prove a point, but ended up becoming a villain himself.
* JurisdictionFriction: Somewhat averted with the Department of Homeland Security. The officer in charge agrees to let Mac lead while insisting that her team be involved.
--> If there's a bombing in New York City, then that's where we're paid to be.
* MadBomber: Obviously.
* MonochromePast: Mac's flashbacks to Beirut are shown in sepia tones.
* NonFatalExplosions: Thankfully, no one is killed.
* ShirtlessScene: Mac, when the paramedics cut off his t-shirt to bandage his neck injury.
* ThatsAnOrder: Mac plays into the perp's delusion of being a Marine. He takes on the role of a superior officer to get the man to put down his weapon and release his hostage.
* TorsoWithAView: Played realistically with Flack's abdominal injury.
