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* AntiVillain: Zixlyr is only acting out of grief.
* {{Arranged Marriage}}
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* CallForward: The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS33E4ThePowerOfThree The Power of Three]]".
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* CallForward: CallForward:
** The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS33E4ThePowerOfThree The Power of Three]]".
** The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS33E4ThePowerOfThree The Power of Three]]".
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* MeaningfulName: Pandora claims this of herself.
* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora.
* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora.
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* RoyallyScrewedUp: The royal family is said to be this.
* SealedEvilInACan: Sekhmet.
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* ShoutOut: Peri motivates herself by going investigating by calling herself "[[Franchise/NancyDrew Nancy Drew]]".
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Peri motivates herself by going investigating by calling herself "[[Franchise/NancyDrew Nancy Drew]]".
** Peri motivates herself by going investigating by calling herself "[[Franchise/NancyDrew Nancy Drew]]".
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* SssssnakeTalk: An Ice Warrior ambassador shows up, and speaks in this.
* SuperhumanTransfusion: The way Erimem gets brought back from the brink of death.
* SuperhumanTransfusion: The way Erimem gets brought back from the brink of death.
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* IChooseToStay: Erimem decides to leave the TARDIS to marry Pelleas and become Queen of Peladon. To the writer's credit, this is given significantly more build-up and justification than similar companion departures, like [[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E6TheInvasionOfTime Leela's]].
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* SequelEpisodeSequelEpisode: To [[Recap/DoctorWhoS9E2TheCurseOfPeladon The Curse of Peladon]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS11E4TheMonsterOfPeladon Monster of Peladon]] and [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS13E3PyramidsOfMars Pyramids of Mars]]]]
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* CallForward: The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in The Power of Three]].
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* CallForward: The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS33E4ThePowerOfThree The Power of Three]].Three]]".
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** The Doctor also mentions the TARDIS controls are [[Recap/DoctorWhoS13E3PyramidsOfMars Isomorphic]], when this gets exposed as BlatantLies he mutters that they [[TheAlledgedCar used to work]].
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** The Doctor also mentions the TARDIS controls are [[Recap/DoctorWhoS13E3PyramidsOfMars Isomorphic]], when this gets exposed as BlatantLies he mutters that they [[TheAlledgedCar [[TheAllegedCar used to work]].
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entire action of the story takes place within a 24 hour period, from midnight to midnight.
* FourthDateMarriage: Erimem and Pelleas. They are engaged after knowing each other for less than a day. Erimem freely admits that they can't possibly love each other (yet), and is marrying Pelleas mostly because Peladon needs looking after.
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* MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast: The Doctor hums a few words or a Paledonian song (along the melody of God rest ye merry gentlemen) to calm down the Aggedor.
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* MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast: The Doctor hums a few words or of a Paledonian song [[Recap/DoctorWhoS9E2TheCurseOfPeladon Venusian Lullaby]] (along the melody of God rest ye merry gentlemen) "God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen") to calm down the Aggedor.
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** Peri mentions that Erimem's kids will end up looking like {{Beetlejuice}}.
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** Peri mentions that Erimem's kids will end up looking like {{Beetlejuice}}.Film/{{Beetlejuice}}.
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** The Doctor, wounded and drained of blood, says to Peri: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS21E6TheCavesOfAndrozani "Sorry, Peri, I don't think I can make it."]], luckily the first time around Peri is still conscious so she barks right back at him: "Well, I'm not through with you yet!" as she drags him out of the tombs of castle Peladon.
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* CallForward: The Doctor mentions that "everybody leaves" (Though this is an unintentional one, the [[Creator/MattSmith Eleventh Doctor]] mentions something similar in The Power of Three]].
** Peri mentions that the Doctor will always have her, because [[Recap/DoctorWhoS23E2Mindwarp she's not going to]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS23E4TheUltimateFoe marry some alien king]].
** Peri mentions that the Doctor will always have her, because [[Recap/DoctorWhoS23E2Mindwarp she's not going to]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS23E4TheUltimateFoe marry some alien king]].
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** Peri mentions that Erimem's kids will end up looking like {{Beetlejuice}}.
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* BatmanGambit: Sekhmet gets undone twice by fake blood, once in her backstory, once in the climax of the story.
** The Doctor also mentions the TARDIS controls are [[Recap/DoctorWhoS13E3PyramidsOfMars Isomorphic]], when this gets exposed as BlatantLies he mutters that they [[TheAlledgedCar used to work]].
* HeroicSacrifice: Gog attacks Sekhmet when she's about to reach full power, and dies shortly after. Zixlyr joins quickly after that, and Erimem poisons her blood to undo Sekhmet's locks. Zixlyr turns out to be an AlmostDeadGuy and pulls a RedemptionEqualsDeath by using the bomb he brought to kill Pelleas and his family with to blow Sekhmet and himself up.
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* SssssnakeTalk: An Ice Warrior ambassador shows up, and speaks in this.
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* SssssnakeTalk: An Ice Warrior ambassador shows up, and speaks in this.this.
* SuperhumanTransfusion: The way Erimem gets brought back from the brink of death.
* SuperhumanTransfusion: The way Erimem gets brought back from the brink of death.
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* BloodMagic: Sekhmet's tomb is locked fourfold by BloodMagic, requiring sacrifice of four royal people.
** Sekhmet mentions [[Recap/DoctorWhoS13E3PyramidsOfMars Sutehk]] being an agent of hers.
* ClarkesThirdLaw: The "Blood lock" is a locking mechanism that can only open with a specific type of blood, in this case royal, how exactly royal blood is different from normal blood is never stipulated.
* ClarkesThirdLaw: The "Blood lock" is a locking mechanism that can only open with a specific type of blood, in this case royal, how exactly royal blood is different from normal blood is never stipulated.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent / OurVampiresAreDifferent: The former Queen Sekhmet.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent / OurVampiresAreDifferent: The former Queen Sekhmet. It's played up as a ghostly apparition that needs people's blood, but Sekhmet is AGodAmI SufficientlyAdvancedAlien who's locked away with BloodMagic.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Sekhmet.
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* FourLinesAllWaiting: There's Elkin and Arkos, the Doctor and Erimem (who tags along with some of the royal family at a few points), Zixlyr and Peri, and Pandora and Pelleas.
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* AntiVillain: Zixlyr is only acting out of grief.
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* ThePlan: Zixlyr stages an assassination attempt so that he can bypass the standard securities, and blow up the royal family.
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* TheBusCameBack: Alpha Centauri is the same Alpha Centauri from Curse and the Monster of Peladon.
* MeaningfulName: Pandora claims this of herself.
* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora.
* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora.
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* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora. NonAnswer: Belldonia doesn't quite answer the question how she knew how her daughter in law died..
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* MomentKiller: Pelleas encounters several, when he's trying to bond with Pandora.
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** The Doctor quotes [[http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/177007 The Listeners]] by Walter De La Mare, when asked if he had a reference for everything he follows up with a "[[Creator/WilliamShakespeare One more unto the breach, my friends]]."
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: OurGhostsAreDifferent / OurVampiresAreDifferent: The former Queen Sekhmet.
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* ShoutOut: Peri motivates herself by going investigating by calling herself "[[Franchise/NancyDrew Nancy Drew]]".
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* SecretUndergroundPassage: In the royal castle one opens up before Pandora.
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* CallBack: Queen mother Belldonia mentions that the Doctor looks [[Recap/DoctorWhoS9E2TheCurseOfPeladon far younger]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS11E4TheMonsterOfPeladon than the stories report]].
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* MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast: The Doctor hums a few words or a Paledonian song (along the melody of God rest ye merry gentlemen) to calm down the Aggedor.
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* RoarBeforeBeating: The Aggedor, a [[MixAndMatchCritters bear like being, with the head of a boar]].
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Talks of ghosts surround Peladon, as an upcoming coronation is supposed to be the subject at hand.
The Doctor and friends have a dynamic entry to the festivities, saving an ambassador of the Ice Warriors from an assassination attempt.
Things seem suspicious as several people want to make a grab for power, and an arranged marriage is the only way to keep a fragile peace... But sometimes there's a ghost in the machine...
The Doctor and friends have a dynamic entry to the festivities, saving an ambassador of the Ice Warriors from an assassination attempt.
Things seem suspicious as several people want to make a grab for power, and an arranged marriage is the only way to keep a fragile peace... But sometimes there's a ghost in the machine...
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* HealingFactor: The Doctor explains that the Time-Lords genetic temporal template patches wounds quickly, or in need be can [[TheNthDoctor do a full body process]].
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The Fifth Doctor returns to Peladon, along with Peri and Erimem. This audio adventure is something of a sequel to "The Curse of Peladon" and "The Monster of Peladon," which featured the Third Doctor.
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The [[Creator/PeterDavison Fifth Doctor Doctor]] returns to Peladon, along with Peri and Erimem. Erimem.
This audio adventure is something of a sequel to "The Curse of Peladon" and "The Monster of Peladon," which featured the [[Creator/JonPertwee ThirdDoctor.
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This audio adventure is something of a sequel to "The Curse of Peladon" and "The Monster of Peladon," which featured the [[Creator/JonPertwee Third
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* CrashCourseLanding: The ship the Doctor and friends try to save Zixlyr the Ice Warrior from ends up dropping out the TARDIS, forcing the Doctor to steer it into a valley.
* DistressCall: The Doctor, Erimem and Peri pick up one and try to save the passengers of a crashing ship.
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: The former Queen Sekhmet.
* RoyallyScrewedUp: The royal family is said to be this.
* SequelEpisode
* SssssnakeTalk: An Ice Warrior ambassador shows up, and speaks in this.
* CrashCourseLanding: The ship the Doctor and friends try to save Zixlyr the Ice Warrior from ends up dropping out the TARDIS, forcing the Doctor to steer it into a valley.
* DistressCall: The Doctor, Erimem and Peri pick up one and try to save the passengers of a crashing ship.
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: The former Queen Sekhmet.
* RoyallyScrewedUp: The royal family is said to be this.
* SequelEpisode
* SssssnakeTalk: An Ice Warrior ambassador shows up, and speaks in this.
