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->'''Taro:''' Sonoshi is a supervisor who was sent to oversee Sonoi's group.\\
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->'''Taro:''' Sonoshi is a supervisor who was sent to oversee keep an eye on Sonoi's group.\\
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Using the reward for turning in Tsubasa's bounty, Tsuyoshi invites Tsubasa and the other Donbrothers for a meal at a fine dining restaurant; Tsubasa accepts, upon learning that Tsuyoshi seemingly has changed for the worse.
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Using the reward bounty for turning in Tsubasa's bounty, Tsubasa, Tsuyoshi invites Tsubasa and the other Donbrothers for a meal at a fine dining restaurant; restaurant. While Tsubasa accepts, initially refuses, he relents upon learning seeing that Tsuyoshi has seemingly has changed for the worse.worse after losing "Miho".
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During the meal, the gang gets into a huge argument over their issues, which winds up with them being threatened to be kicked out by the head chef, Takamura. Tsubasa then complains about Takamura's cooking. At the suggestion of Noriko, a gourmet critic who happened to be there, the two decide to have a cook-off.
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During the meal, the gang gets into a huge argument over their issues, which winds up with them being threatened to be kicked out by results in the head chef, Takamura. Takamura, threatening to kick them out. Tsubasa then complains about criticizes Takamura's cooking. At cooking, which catches the suggestion attention of Noriko, Noriko Iida, a famous gourmet critic who happened to be there, incidentally dining at the same restaurant as them. At Noriko's suggestion, the two decide to have a cook-off.
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* BreatherEpisode: After the last few episode, this is mostly comedy centered except for the ending shot.
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* BreatherEpisode: After the last few episode, episodes, this is mostly comedy centered except for the ending shot.
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* DissensionRemorse: Subverted. Tsuyoshi attempts to smooth things out with Tsubasa by treating him and the Donbrothers to an extravagant meal with the bounty money. Tsubasa meanwhile (after learning of Tsuyoshi using a doll as a coping mechanism) pretends to cede defeat on the "Miho" matter in the hopes of keeping the addled man at-ease. It instead causes the salaryman's {{Yandere}} side to take over and starts a new feud. Worse yet, Tsuyoshi overestimates the cost of the food and has to pay the debt back with menial labor for his trouble.
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* DissensionRemorse: Subverted. Tsuyoshi attempts to smooth things out with Tsubasa by treating him and the Donbrothers to an extravagant meal with the bounty money. Meanwhile, Tsubasa meanwhile (after learning of Tsuyoshi using a doll as a coping mechanism) pretends to cede admit defeat on the "Miho" matter in the hopes of keeping the addled man at-ease. It instead causes the salaryman's {{Yandere}} side to take over and starts a new feud. Worse yet, Tsuyoshi overestimates the cost of the food and has to pay the debt back with menial labor for his trouble.
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** At Tsubasa's flat, Taro outright states that he's met Tsubasa's Juto copy, but the latter doesn't want to talk about it. Taro's equally tight-lipped on how he knows what Juto are.
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** At Tsubasa's flat, apartment, Taro outright states that he's met Tsubasa's Juto copy, but the latter doesn't want to talk about it. Taro's equally tight-lipped on how he knows what Juto are.
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* ReversePsychology: Attempted by Tsubasa to calm Tsuyoshi down when the Miho dispute comes up again, him pretending to cede defeat on the matter. Tsuyoshi instead takes it as a challenge and bickering ensues. [[LockedOutOfTheLoop Shame none of the others could hear what they had to say]].
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* ReversePsychology: Attempted by Tsubasa to calm Tsuyoshi down when the Miho dispute comes up again, him pretending to cede admit defeat on the matter. Tsuyoshi instead takes it as a challenge and bickering ensues. [[LockedOutOfTheLoop Shame none of the others could hear what they had to say]].
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** The three-way fight between Shinichi, Tsuyoshi, and Sonoi is rendered moot when they broke the eggs that were sold. The farmer takes pity on them and gives them packs he originally planned to take home.
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** The three-way fight between Shinichi, Tsuyoshi, and Sonoi is rendered moot when they broke break the eggs that were sold. The farmer takes pity on them and gives them packs he originally planned to take home.
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* WorkOffTheDebt: To Tsuyoshi's shock, the ransom money he got for turning in Tsubasa to the police wasn't enough to cover for the meal they ate, resulting in him temporarily working for the restaurant to cover the bill, and why he was sent to fetch the high-quality eggs for chef Takamura.
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* WorkOffTheDebt: To Tsuyoshi's shock, dismay, the ransom reward money he got for turning in Tsubasa to the police wasn't enough to cover for the meal they ate, resulting in him temporarily working for the restaurant to cover the bill, and why he was sent to fetch the high-quality eggs for chef Chef Takamura.
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* DissensionRemorse: Subverted. Tsuyoshi attempts to smooth things out with Tsubasa by treating him and the Donbrothers to an extravagant meal with the bounty money. Tsubasa meanwhile (after learning of Tsuyoshi using a doll as a coping mechanism) pretends to cede defeat on the "Miho" matter in the hopes of keeping the addled man at-ease. It instead causes the salaryman's {{Yandere}} side to take over and starts a new feud. Worse yet, Tsuyoshi overestimates the cost of the food and has to pay the debt back with menial labor for his trouble.
