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** Andrew lighting up a DistinguishedGentlemansPipe only to start coughing, then engaging in overdone exposition ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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** Andrew lighting up a DistinguishedGentlemansPipe [[OfCourseISmoke only to start coughing, coughing]], then engaging in overdone exposition ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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* ItsTheOnlyWayToBeSure: Dana's advice on dealing with vampires: heart and head, keep cutting until you see dust.
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** Anti hero example with Spike throughout the episode. First he reveals to Dana that he's a vampire, then let's slip he killed one Slayer, then that [[SayingTooMuch he killed Nikki Wood.]] Spike going after a emotionally scarred girl who thought he was the one who tortured her, then telling her he's the famed vampire that killed two Slayers, [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge that'll end well.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Dana re: Spike. For being the vampire who killed two Slayers as well as believing he was the one who tortured her before.
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-->'''Angel:''' She was yelling about being chosen. She's not a demon, Wes...
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-->'''Angel:''' She was yelling about being chosen.[[TheChosenOne chosen]]. She's not a demon, Wes...
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* SlashedThroat: The security guard who tries hitting Dana in the back of the head while she's holding a bonessaw.
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* SlashedThroat: The security guard who tries hitting Dana in the back of the head while she's holding a bonessaw.bonesaw.
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* {{Batman Grabs a Gun}}: Angel is engaged in his usual one-man rodeo show when suddenly he gets on the phone and demands backup from the Wolfram & Hart tactical squad. Turns out the 'possessed' woman is actually a vampire Slayer who's gone insane.
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* {{Batman Grabs a Gun}}: BatmanGrabsAGun: Angel is engaged in his usual one-man rodeo show when suddenly he gets on the phone and demands backup from the Wolfram & Hart tactical squad. Turns out the 'possessed' woman is actually a vampire Slayer who's gone insane.
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* GotMeDoingIt: Angel, after spending a meeting with Andrew, who insists on putting the EmphasisOnTheWrongSyllable.
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* GotMeDoingIt: Angel, after spending a meeting with Andrew, who insists on putting the EmphasisOnTheWrongSyllable.AcCENTUponTheWrongSylLABle.
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-->'''Andrew:''' You're like... you're like [[LordOfTheRings Gandalf the White]], resurrected from the pit of the Balrog, [[HoYay more beautiful than ever]]. (Hugs Spike, sobs) Ohh... he's alive, Frodo. He's alive.
** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' (and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]]) in the mental hospital escape scene.
** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' (and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]]) in the mental hospital escape scene.
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-->'''Andrew:''' You're like... you're like [[LordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Gandalf the White]], resurrected from the pit of the Balrog, [[HoYay more beautiful than ever]]. (Hugs Spike, sobs) Ohh... he's alive, Frodo. He's alive.
** Clear references to''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' ''Franchise/{{Terminator}} 2: Judgment Day'' (and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]]) in the mental hospital escape scene.
** Clear references to
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* TrenchCoatWarfare: Andrew opens his coat to reveal he's a WalkingArmoury.
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* TrenchCoatWarfare: TrenchcoatWarfare: Andrew opens his coat to reveal he's a WalkingArmoury.
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** "Sorry luv, I don't speak Chinese" is what Spike said to the Peking Slayer before he killed her ([=BtVS=] "Fool for Love").
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** "Sorry luv, I don't speak Chinese" is what Spike said to the Peking Slayer before he killed her ([=BtVS=] "Fool for Love"). Dana speaking Chinese is apparently due to her accessing that particular Slayer's memories.
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-->"Lass thought I killed her family. And I'm supposed to, what, complain? Cause hers wasn't one of the hundreds of families I did kill?"
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-->"Lass thought I killed her family. And I'm supposed to, what, complain? Cause hers wasn't one of the hundreds of families I did kill?"kill? I'm not saying you're right, cause...I'm physically incapable of saying that. But for a demon, I never did think that much about the nature of evil."
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* TheNicknamer: Spike dubs the doctor "Show-And-Tell-Me-Nothing". In an IncrediblyLamePun, Lorne refers to their Liaison to the Senior Partners as ''VideoGame/ParasiteEve''.
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* TheNicknamer: Spike dubs the doctor "Show-And-Tell-Me-Nothing". In an IncrediblyLamePun, Lorne refers to their Liaison to the Senior Partners as ''VideoGame/ParasiteEve''.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole with his hands severed.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole [[OhCrap with his hands severed.severed]].
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** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'', and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]], in the mental hospital escape scene.
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** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'', and/or ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' (and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]], Slayer]]) in the mental hospital escape scene.
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** Andrew to Wes, showing some people are still pissed about [=BtVS=] Season 3. "My hypothesis exactly, Pryce. I see Mr. Giles may have been wrong about you."
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** Andrew to Wes, showing some people in Sunnydale are still pissed about the events of [=BtVS=] Season 3. "My hypothesis exactly, Pryce. I see Mr. Giles may have been wrong about you."
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* FirstNameBasis: Andrew referring to Giles as "Rupert". Someone it's doubtful he does that to Giles' face.
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* FirstNameBasis: Andrew referring to Giles as "Rupert". Someone Somehow it's doubtful he does that to Giles' face.
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* TakeThat: Andrew says that Buffy is in Europe training Slayers, giving them "...the full X-Men minus the crappy third act."
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* TakeThat: Andrew says that Buffy is in Europe training Slayers, giving them "...the full [[Film/XMen1 X-Men minus the crappy third act.act]]."
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Dana ends up being taken in by the Watchers' Council and sent to England, so you'd expect the ''Buffy'' season 8 comics to feature her in some capacity. Unfortunately, she's technically an ''Angel''-only character, meaning the comics cannot legally even mention her.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Andrew takes Dana to be with the other Slayers, by having 12 Slayers with him, all of whom ''hadn't'' dated Angel.
-->'''Spike:''' What happens to her?
-->'''Angel:''' I don't know. Andrew and the Slayers took her. Didn't trust us to help her.
-->'''Spike:''' ''Andrew'' double-crossed us? [beat] It was a good move. Hope for the little ponce yet.
-->'''Spike:''' What happens to her?
-->'''Angel:''' I don't know. Andrew and the Slayers took her. Didn't trust us to help her.
-->'''Spike:''' ''Andrew'' double-crossed us? [beat] It was a good move. Hope for the little ponce yet.
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* ContinuityNod: We're filled in on what has happened with the Scoobies and Potentials after the ''{{Buffy}}'' GrandFinale.
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* ContinuityNod: We're filled in on what has happened with the Scoobies and Potentials after the ''{{Buffy}}'' ''Series/{{Buffy|the Vampire Slayer}}'' GrandFinale.
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** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' in the mental hospital escape scene.
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** Clear references to ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'' ''Terminator2JudgmentDay'', and/or [[Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS6E17NormalAgain another Slayer]], in the mental hospital escape scene.
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* TheNicknamer: Spike dubs the doctor "Show-And-Tell-Me-Nothing". In an IncrediblyLamePun, Lorne refers to their Liaison to the Senior Partners as ''ParasiteEve''.
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* TheNicknamer: Spike dubs the doctor "Show-And-Tell-Me-Nothing". In an IncrediblyLamePun, Lorne refers to their Liaison to the Senior Partners as ''ParasiteEve''.''VideoGame/ParasiteEve''.
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Gah, sorry. Missed one.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole with his hands severed''.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole with his hands severed''.severed.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole ''[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel with his hands severed]]''.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole ''[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel with his hands severed]]''.severed''.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like everyone to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well while out with Spike.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like everyone to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well [[AscendedFanboy while out with Spike.Spike]].
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Spike thinks he's facing a Chinese demon.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: ComicallyMissingThePoint
-->'''Angel:''' (re Spikethinks he's facing being thrown out a window) You should've waited!
-->'''Spike:''' Hey, keep your knickers on. Least now I know what we're dealin' with. It's a Chinesedemon.demon. Maybe a water dragon or one of those elemental thingies. (Angel sighs, rolls his eyes, and walks away) What?!
-->'''Angel:''' (re Spike
-->'''Spike:''' Hey, keep your knickers on. Least now I know what we're dealin' with. It's a Chinese
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* FirstNameBasis: Andrew referring to Giles as "Rupert".
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* FirstNameBasis: Andrew referring to Giles as "Rupert". Someone it's doubtful he does that to Giles' face.
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* HealingFactor
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* IAmAMonster
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The effects of turning every Potential in the planet into a Slayer.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The One of the effects of turning every Potential in the planet into a Slayer.
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* NightmareFuelColoringBook
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* NightmareFuelColoringBookNightmareFuelColoringBook: Dana's drawings on the wall of her room.
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* TheNoseKnows / ScarilyCompetentTracker: Got your scent locked in.
* NotSoDifferent / InnocentBystander
* NotSoDifferent / InnocentBystander
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* TheNoseKnows / ScarilyCompetentTracker: ScarilyCompetentTracker
-->'''Spike:''' All right, pet. No getting away. Got your scent lockedin.
in now. Could track you for miles.
*NotSoDifferent / InnocentBystanderNotSoDifferent
-->'''Spike:''' The tingling in my forearms tells me she's too far gone to help. [[IAmAMonster She's one of us now. She's a monster.]]
-->'''Angel:''' She's an innocent victim.
-->'''Spike:''' So were we... once upon a time.
-->'''Angel:''' Once upon a time.
-->'''Spike:''' All right, pet. No getting away. Got your scent locked
*
-->'''Spike:''' The tingling in my forearms tells me she's too far gone to help. [[IAmAMonster She's one of us now. She's a monster.]]
-->'''Angel:''' She's an innocent victim.
-->'''Spike:''' So were we... once upon a time.
-->'''Angel:''' Once upon a time.
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* PerpSweating: "What he said. But more threatening."
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* PerpSweating: "What PerpSweating
-->'''Spike:''' What he said. But with a bit morethreatening."of a threat at the end.
-->'''Spike:''' What he said. But with a bit more
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* RedOniBlueOni
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* RedOniBlueOniRedOniBlueOni: Spike and Angel.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists
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-->'''Angel:''' Look, shouldn't you be out in the streets, protecting the city from people like you?
*ThereAreNoTherapistsThereAreNoTherapists: Well there are -- they just don't know who they're dealing with. Whether the Slayer Organisation can do any better is debatable.
*
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* TwistedEchoCut: Maybe we made a mistake.
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* TwistedEchoCut: Maybe From Gunn saying to Fred (re joining Wolfram & Hart) "End of the day, I'm thinking we made the right choice." to Angel saying to Wes and Lorne, "Maybe we made a mistake.mistake coming here."
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-->'''Angel:''' ...[[WhamLine She's a vampire slayer.]]
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-->'''Angel:''' ...[[WhamLine She's a vampire slayer.Slayer.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: A non-verbal one from Buffy to Angel.
** Gunn is now thinking up reasons not to kill Eve, and regarding the District Attorney as his rival.
** Gunn is now thinking up reasons not to kill Eve, and regarding the District Attorney as his rival.
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* WhatTheHellHero: A non-verbal one from An off-screen one; Buffy refuses to Angel.
** Gunn islet Angel have a Slayer because he's now thinking up reasons not to kill Eve, and regarding the District Attorney as his rival.working for Wolfram & Hart.
** Gunn is
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-->[[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Check the view screen, Uhura.]] I got 12 Vampyr Slayers behind me, and not one of them has ever dated you.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole ''with his hands severed''.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole ''with ''[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel with his hands severed''.severed]]''.
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* BackFromTheDead / ArmedWithCanon: Spoofed when the sanitarium doctor warns that someone should stop Spike, because if he goes after Dana, he'll wind up dead. Angel mutters, "He'll just [[PopularityPower end up coming back]]."
* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well while out with Spike.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well while out with Spike.
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* BackFromTheDead / ArmedWithCanon: Spoofed BackFromTheDead: [[ArmedWithCanon Spoofed]] when the sanitarium doctor warns that someone should stop Spike, because if he goes after Dana, he'll wind up dead. Angel mutters, "He'll just [[PopularityPower end up coming back]]."
* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like everyone to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well while out with Spike.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Andrew, or so he'd like everyone to think. Needless to say he puts on a [[BadassLongcoat long coat]] as well while out with Spike.
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* {{Batman Grabs a Gun}}: Angel is engaged in his usual one-man rodeo show in rivalry with Spike; suddenly he gets on the phone to Wesley and demands backup from the Wolfram & Hart tactical squad. Turns out the 'possessed' woman is actually a vampire Slayer who's gone insane.
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* {{Batman Grabs a Gun}}: Angel is engaged in his usual one-man rodeo show in rivalry with Spike; when suddenly he gets on the phone to Wesley and demands backup from the Wolfram & Hart tactical squad. Turns out the 'possessed' woman is actually a vampire Slayer who's gone insane.
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* ContinuityNod: We're filled in on what has happened with the Scoobies and Potentials since "Chosen".
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* ContinuityNod: We're filled in on what has happened with the Scoobies and Potentials since "Chosen".after the ''{{Buffy}}'' GrandFinale.
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* DestinationDefenestration: Spike gets tossed out of a fifth-floor window by a Slayer.
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* DestinationDefenestration: Spike gets tossed out of a fifth-floor window by a Slayer. Dana.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Andrew says that Buffy is now in Rome. This sets up the events of "The Girl in Question".
** Gunn says they're battling evil and still have all their fingers and toes. He should have included hands.
** Gunn says they're battling evil and still have all their fingers and toes. He should have included hands.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Andrew says that Buffy is now in Rome. This sets up the events of "The Girl in Question".
**Gunn says they're battling evil and still have all their fingers and toes. He should have included hands.hands.
** Andrew says that Buffy is now in Rome. This sets up the events of "The Girl in Question".
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** Andrew says that Buffy is now in Rome. This sets up the events of "The Girl in Question".
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-->Willow and Kennedy are in Brazil. They're based in Sao Paulo, but, um, every time I talk to them, they're in Rio.
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* GilliganCut: Angel turns down the idea of having the Wolfram & Hart Tactical Team back him up, saying this demon possession case needs to be handled by someone with finese. Cue Angel exiting the lift...at the same time as Spike exits the lift next to it. Let the snarking commence!
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* GilliganCut: Angel turns down the idea of having the Wolfram & Hart Tactical Team back him up, saying this demon possession case needs to be handled by someone with finese.finesse. Cue Angel exiting the lift...at the same time as Spike exits steps out of the lift next to it. Let the snarking commence!
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-->Think we're just gonna let you take her back to your evil stronghold? Well, as they say in Mexico... No. We're not...gonna... let you.
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-->'''Spike:''' Lass thought I killed her family. And I'm supposed to, what, complain? Cause hers wasn't one of the hundreds of families I did kill?
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* SlashedThroat: The security guard who tries hitting her in the back of the head while she's holding a bonessaw.
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* SlashedThroat: The security guard who tries hitting her Dana in the back of the head while she's holding a bonessaw.
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* TakeThat: Andrew mentions that Buffy is in Europe training Slayers and giving them "...the full X-Men minus the crappy third act."
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* TakeThat: Andrew mentions says that Buffy is in Europe training Slayers and Slayers, giving them "...the full X-Men minus the crappy third act."
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Definitely averted by Andrew. Did you hear of how he and Spike saved the world by closing the Hellmouth? Buffy helped...
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* MilesGloriosus: Did you hear how Andrew and Spike saved the world by closing the Hellmouth? Buffy helped...
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** Fred organises the medical team, but assures the shaman they won't need a cadavar as they still have Spike's hands.
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** Fred organises the Wolfram & Hart medical team, but assures the shaman they won't need a cadavar cadaver [[Recap/AngelS02E18DeadEnd as they still have Spike's hands.hands]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole with his hands severed.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Spike wakes up to find himself chained to a pole with ''with his hands severed.severed''.
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* AbandonedWarehouse / CreepyBasement: Dara goes to the place she was tortured years before.
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* AbandonedWarehouse / CreepyBasement: Dara goes to the place she was tortured [[NeverRecycleABuilding years before.before]].
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** Andrew lighting up a DistinguishedGentlemansPipe only to start coughing, engaging in overdone exposition ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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** Andrew lighting up a DistinguishedGentlemansPipe only to start coughing, then engaging in overdone exposition ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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** Andrew lighting up a pipe and coughing ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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** Andrew lighting up a pipe and coughing DistinguishedGentlemansPipe only to start coughing, engaging in overdone exposition ([=BtVS=] "Storyteller") and being partnered up with an annoyed yet tolerant Spike ([=BtVS=] "Empty Places").
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* AsYouKnow: Andrew's exposition starts out like this for the benefit of the non-''{{Buffy}}'' watchers. Lampshaded.
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* AsYouKnow: Andrew's exposition starts out like this for the benefit of the non-''{{Buffy}}'' non-''Series/{{Buffy|The Vampire Slayer}}'' watchers. Lampshaded.