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* SarcasticConfession: Lilah tells Bethany that her "work just got insane, and our new clients are monsters."
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* SarcasticConfession: Not said in a sarcastic tone, but Lilah casually tells Bethany that her "work workload just got insane, and insane "and our new clients are monsters."" Bethany of course doesn't suspect that Lilah means that literally.
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Angel and Gunn break into one of Bethany's attacker’s apartments. Angel stands outside, since he is not invited in by the owner, while Gunn looks around. Gunn explains that Bethany’s attacker was an expensive muscle-for-hire. In hospital, the splattered muscle dies of his injuries, and Angel falls into the room. Doing some snooping of his own, he hits redial on the speaker-phone, and is greeted by a receptionist of W&H.
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Angel and Gunn break into one of Bethany's attacker’s attackers' apartments. Angel stands outside, since he is not invited in by the owner, while Gunn looks around. Gunn explains that Bethany’s attacker was an expensive muscle-for-hire. In hospital, the splattered muscle dies of his injuries, and Angel falls into the room. Doing some snooping of his own, he hits redial on the speaker-phone, and is greeted by a receptionist of W&H.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis. One of them passes away in the hospital while Gunn and Angel are checking out his apartment, allowing Angel to fall across the threshold he'd been leaning on.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis. One of them passes away in the hospital while Gunn and Angel are checking out his apartment, allowing causing Angel to fall across the threshold he'd been leaning on.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis. One of them passes away in the hospital while Gunn and Angel are checking out his apartment, allowing Angel to fall across the threshold.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis. One of them passes away in the hospital while Gunn and Angel are checking out his apartment, allowing Angel to fall across the threshold.threshold he'd been leaning on.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smushes with her telekinesis. One of them passes away in the hospital while Gunn and Angel are checking out his apartment, allowing Angel to fall across the threshold.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smooshes with her telekinesis.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smooshes smushes with her telekinesis.
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* AssholeVictim: The thugs that Bethany smooshes with her telekinesis.
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-->'''Wesley''': What class? [[AC:Advanced Bosoms]]?
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-->'''Wesley''': What class? [[AC:Advanced Bosoms]]?'''Advanced Bosoms'''?
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-->'''Gunn:''' "Knock, knock. See, this works great. You break [[MustBeInvited and I enter]]."
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-->'''Gunn:''' "Knock, knock. See, this works great. You break break, [[MustBeInvited and I enter]]."
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Bethany accidentally cause a dumpster to squash two men to death, but since those men had been planning to rape her, Cordelia says the men are "better off squashed".
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* PromiscuityAfterRape: Bethany who was molested by her father confesses that she sleeps around.
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* TheRunaway: Type 2.
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** "[[{{Series/TheIncredibleHulk}} You wouldn't like me when I'm happy.]]"
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** "[[{{Series/TheIncredibleHulk}} "[[Series/TheIncredibleHulk1977 You wouldn't like me when I'm happy.]]"
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* YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry: Inverted rather amusingly when Bethany suggests she can make Angel happy, causing him to respond; "You wouldn't like me when I'm happy."
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* YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry: Inverted rather amusingly when Bethany suggests she can offers to "[[UnusualEuphemism make him happy]]". Angel happy, causing him to respond; responds that "You wouldn't won't like me when I'm happy."happy", as the last time he made love he turned into the evil Angelus -- he's under a curse that will make him lose his soul if he experiences a moment of perfect happiness.
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* NeckLift: Bethany does this via telekenesis.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: When Cordelia is chastising Angel for letting a demon get away:
-->'''Angel:''' Do you know how ''hard'' it is to ''think'' with a ''rebar'' through your torso?\\
'''Cordelia''': Actually, [[ContinuityNod I do.]] Benefits of a Sunnydale education. [[note]]She actually knows ''double.'' Not only did it happen to the character in Buffy episode [[{{Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS3E8LoversWalk}} Lover's Walk]], but ''[[Creator/CharismaCarpenter the actress]]'' [[RealitySubtext had the same thing happen as well]].[[/note]]
-->'''Angel:''' Do you know how ''hard'' it is to ''think'' with a ''rebar'' through your torso?\\
'''Cordelia''': Actually, [[ContinuityNod I do.]] Benefits of a Sunnydale education. [[note]]She actually knows ''double.'' Not only did it happen to the character in Buffy episode [[{{Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS3E8LoversWalk}} Lover's Walk]], but ''[[Creator/CharismaCarpenter the actress]]'' [[RealitySubtext had the same thing happen as well]].[[/note]]
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* AbusiveParents: Bethany was sexually abused by her father. Wolfram and Hart's attempt to turn her into a killer amounted to putting her father in the same room, on the basis that she'd be unable not to kill him with her new powers.
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* ContinuityNod: As Cordelia patches up his wound, Angel remarks that they need to find out everything they can about the girl. "Like, oh, say, her name?" Cordy snarks. Exasperated, Angel rhetorically asks if she's ever tried to think straight with a stick of rebar through her torso. [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder "Actually, I do,"]] Cordy answers. "Benefits of a Sunnydale education." She is referring to the ''Buffy'' S3 episode "[[{{Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS3E8LoversWalk}} Lover's Walk]]".
** Gunn's attitude toward Cordelia has softened since the previous episode. He jokingly asks if she's still busy saving his life, as threatened in "First Impressions."
** Gunn's attitude toward Cordelia has softened since the previous episode. He jokingly asks if she's still busy saving his life, as threatened in "First Impressions."
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* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** As Cordelia patches up his wound, Angel remarks that they need to find out everything they can about the girl. "Like, oh, say, her name?" Cordy snarks. Exasperated, Angel rhetorically asks if she's ever tried to think straight with a stick of rebar through her torso. [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder "Actually, I do,"]] Cordy answers. "Benefits of a Sunnydale education." She is referring to the ''Buffy'' S3 episode "[[{{Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS3E8LoversWalk}} Lover's Walk]]".
** Gunn's attitude toward Cordelia has softened since the previous episode. He jokingly asks if she's still busy saving his life, as threatened in"First Impressions." "[[Recap/AngelS02E03FirstImpressions First Impressions]]".
** As Cordelia patches up his wound, Angel remarks that they need to find out everything they can about the girl. "Like, oh, say, her name?" Cordy snarks. Exasperated, Angel rhetorically asks if she's ever tried to think straight with a stick of rebar through her torso. [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder "Actually, I do,"]] Cordy answers. "Benefits of a Sunnydale education." She is referring to the ''Buffy'' S3 episode "[[{{Recap/BuffyTheVampireSlayerS3E8LoversWalk}} Lover's Walk]]".
** Gunn's attitude toward Cordelia has softened since the previous episode. He jokingly asks if she's still busy saving his life, as threatened in
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoonCutHisHeartOutWithASpoon:
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* DullSurprise
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* EtTuBrute
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* HatesBeingTouched: Bethany.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Bethany.Bethany's discomfort with being touched clues Wesley in to the source of her telekinetic powers: she was a victim of rape by her father.
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* HumansAreSpecial
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* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim / SwordOverHead
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* InSeriesNickname
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* MindOverMatter
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* MindOverMatterMindOverMatter: Bethany has this power.
-->'''Angel:''' What do we know about telekinesis?\\
'''Wesley:''' Ah. Yes. The power of moving things with one's mind. ''[{{beat}}]'' That's... pretty much it. The power of... moving... I-I'm better with demons, really.
-->'''Angel:''' What do we know about telekinesis?\\
'''Wesley:''' Ah. Yes. The power of moving things with one's mind. ''[{{beat}}]'' That's... pretty much it. The power of... moving... I-I'm better with demons, really.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Lilah's attempt to convince Bethany that only W&A can help her causes Bethany to develop the strength to stand up to her father and more control over her powers.
* NietzscheWannabe
* NietzscheWannabe
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Lilah's attempt to convince Bethany that only W&A W&H can help her causes Bethany to develop the strength to stand up to her father and more control over her powers.
* NietzscheWannabepowers.
* NietzscheWannabe
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* NotTheFallThatKillsYou
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* ParentalIncest
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* ParentalIncestParentalIncest: Bethany's father sexually abused her when she was younger, which caused her to develop her powers.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened
* [[HeWasRightThereAllAlong She Was Right There All Along]]
* ShoutOut: At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[Series/SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
* [[HeWasRightThereAllAlong She Was Right There All Along]]
* ShoutOut: At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[Series/SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened
* [[HeWasRightThereAllAlong She Was Right There All Along]]
* ShoutOut:ShoutOut:
** At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[Series/SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
* [[HeWasRightThereAllAlong She Was Right There All Along]]
* ShoutOut:
** At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[Series/SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
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* StealthHiBye
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* SpannerInTheWorks
* StealthHiBye
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* TakeTheWheel
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakeningTraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Bethany had her telekenisis awakened when she was abused physically and sexually by her father. It also flared up when someone threatened her in an alley.
* StealthHiBye
* SuspectIsHatless
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial
* TakeTheWheel
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening
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* WhatAreYou
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* YouJustToldMe
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* RagingStiffie: Angel claims he was having NightmareDreams.
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* RagingStiffie: Darla has been trying to corrupt Angel by using magic to send him dreams of his vampire kills. He claims he was having NightmareDreams.to find them nightmarish, but...
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* FridgeBrilliance: Lilah tries to groom Bethany into an assassin for W&H. Angel killed the firm's previous one [[AngelS01E21BlindDate last season]] and obviously they need a ReplacementGoldfish.
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* DawsonCasting: Though Bethany's age is [[VagueAge never stated]], there's the mention of her being in school. Daisy [=McCrackin=] was clearly not a teenager when playing Bethany.
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* FreudWasRight: Gunn is proudly showing off his new axe.
-->'''Gunn:''' "Thought I might get the chance to stick it in something now."\\
'''Cordy:''' "Men are all alike."
-->'''Gunn:''' "Thought I might get the chance to stick it in something now."\\
'''Cordy:''' "Men are all alike."
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* ShoutOut: At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
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* ShoutOut: At the site of the Dumpster Massacre, Angel asks an officer if he's seen a girl. The officer replies that nobody has been sighted except for their "[[SaturdayNightLive "[[Series/SaturdayNightLive Mr. Bills]]", then adds, "Oh no, Mr. Bill!" in falsetto.
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*RescueSex: Bethany assumes Angel expects this of her and tries to start it, even though she clearly doesn't want to.
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* DawsonCasting: Though Bethany's age is [[VagueAge never stated]], there's the mention of her being in school. Daisy McCrackin was clearly not a teenager when playing Bethany.
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* DawsonCasting: Though Bethany's age is [[VagueAge never stated]], there's the mention of her being in school. Daisy McCrackin [=McCrackin=] was clearly not a teenager when playing Bethany.
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* HatesBeingTouched
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* HatesBeingTouchedHatesBeingTouched: Bethany.
*HumansAreBastards: Lilah wants to convince Bethany of this to mold her into an assassin.
*HumansAreBastards: Lilah wants to convince Bethany of this to mold her into an assassin.
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* MustBeInvited: PlayedForLaughs when Angel leans against the invisible barrier preventing him from entering the apartment Gunn is searching, only to fall inside when the owner dies in the hospital.
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* VampireInvitation: PlayedForLaughs when Angel leans against the invisible barrier preventing him from entering the apartment Gunn is searching, only to fall inside when the owner dies in the hospital.
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-->'''Gunn:''' "Knock, knock. See, this works great. You break [[VampireInvitation and I enter]]."
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-->'''Gunn:''' "Knock, knock. See, this works great. You break [[VampireInvitation [[MustBeInvited and I enter]]."
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*FridgeBrilliance: Lilah tries to groom Bethany into an assassin for W&H. Angel killed the firm's previous one [[AngelS01E21BlindDate last season]] and obviously they need a ReplacementGoldfish.
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* DawsonCasting
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* DawsonCastingDawsonCasting: Though Bethany's age is [[VagueAge never stated]], there's the mention of her being in school. Daisy McCrackin was clearly not a teenager when playing Bethany.
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* AttemptedRape
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* AttemptedRapeAttemptedRape: Lilah sics two thugs-for-hire on Bethany hoping it will trigger her abilities.
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* BlownAcrossTheRoom
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* BlownAcrossTheRoomBlownAcrossTheRoom: Bethany's standard manifestation of her telekinesis
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-->'''Angel''' I don't breathe
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* BerserkButton: Mr. Chalke; and used deliberately as such by Wolfram & Hart.
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* BerserkButton: Mr. Chalke; Chaulk; and used deliberately as such by Wolfram & Hart.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Mr. Chalke.Chaulk.
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* PersonAsVerb: Cordelia asks Angel re Bethany, "Did she {{Carrie}} you?". This understandably causes confusion.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Lilah's hapless mooks in the intro. Her real aim is to fashion Bethany Chalke into one of these.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Lilah's hapless mooks in the intro. Her real aim is to fashion Bethany Chalke Chaulk into one of these.
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* VampireInvitation: PlayedForLaughs when Angel leans against the invisible barrier preventing him from entering the apartment Gunn is searching, only to fall inside when the owner died in the hospital.
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* VampireInvitation: PlayedForLaughs when Angel leans against the invisible barrier preventing him from entering the apartment Gunn is searching, only to fall inside when the owner died dies in the hospital.
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Angel arrives at the crime scene, but the police and an ambulance are there as well. He pretends to be the detective on call and pumps an officer for information. The trail of blood leads Angel into a nearby building, where a frightened girl is still hiding. She warns him to stay away from her because she is very upset. He walks closer, and is impaled by a flying piece of rebar. The girl starts to flee, but stops when Angel calls her again. He stands up and yanks the rebar out. [[ScoobyDoo Jinkies!]] Angel points out that he's "different from most people", just like her. He offers her his card. The girl takes the card and quickly runs off. After she's gone, Angel collapses, and mumbles: "Okay, maybe she can hurt me a little." Bethany walks up to an apartment door, but before she can unlock it, Lilah opens it, saying she was worried. Apparently, Lilah is letting her stay at her place. ''Some''thing's afoot...
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Angel arrives at the crime scene, but the police and an ambulance are there as well. He pretends to be the detective on call and pumps an officer for information. The trail of blood leads Angel into a nearby building, where a frightened girl is still hiding. She warns him to stay away from her because she is very upset. He walks closer, and is impaled by a flying piece of rebar. The girl starts to flee, but stops when Angel calls her again. He stands up and yanks the rebar out. [[ScoobyDoo [[Franchise/ScoobyDoo Jinkies!]] Angel points out that he's "different from most people", just like her. He offers her his card. The girl takes the card and quickly runs off. After she's gone, Angel collapses, and mumbles: "Okay, maybe she can hurt me a little." Bethany walks up to an apartment door, but before she can unlock it, Lilah opens it, saying she was worried. Apparently, Lilah is letting her stay at her place. ''Some''thing's afoot...
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* FreudWasRight: Gunn is proudly showing off his new axe.
-->'''Gunn:''' "Thought I might get the chance to stick it in something now."\\
'''Cordy:''' "Men are all alike."
-->'''Gunn:''' "Thought I might get the chance to stick it in something now."\\
'''Cordy:''' "Men are all alike."