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* ItsAllMyFault: During their subsequent breakout, Hayley innocently tries to take the blame for where they are now. Seeing this, Susan shoulders the blame for how she was the one who got them on the wrong bus and then some. It's PlayedForLaughs, considering it's a somewhat long list of transgressions on her part.
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* ItsAllMyFault: During their subsequent breakout, Hayley Haley innocently tries to take the blame for where they are now. Seeing this, Susan shoulders the blame for how she was the one who got them on the wrong bus and then some. It's PlayedForLaughs, considering it's a somewhat long list of transgressions on her part.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: It's one thing when Susan is in a position where she and her daughter Hayley accidentally got on the bus for Military Boot Camp. It's another thing when the two of them are hungry from the meager boot camp meal they had for dinner. When faced with access to the locked fridge full of sumptuous food (which is only one dragon's fire breath away from unlocking), Hayley shows some real restraint from temptation. Her mother? Not so much.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: It's one thing when Susan is in a position where she and her daughter Hayley Haley accidentally got on the bus for Military Boot Camp. It's another thing when the two of them are hungry from the meager boot camp meal they had for dinner. When faced with access to the locked fridge full of sumptuous food (which is only one dragon's fire breath away from unlocking), Hayley Haley shows some real restraint from temptation. Her mother? Not so much.
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* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The main plot focuses on Jake trying to protect a spite village from the Jersey Devil while also bonding with his father, and the secondary plot centers around Susan and Hayley trying to escape a military boot camp they accidentally joined.
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* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The main plot focuses on Jake trying to protect a spite village from the Jersey Devil while also bonding with his father, and the secondary plot centers around Susan and Hayley Haley trying to escape a military boot camp they accidentally joined.
