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* CoolOldGuy: Shatoo, as he tries to at least help Erma and he puts his trust in her rather than the rest of the EDF's top brass.
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* CoolOldGuy: Shatoo, Shato, as he tries to at least help Erma and he puts his trust in her rather than the rest of the EDF's top brass.
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After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the EDF.
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After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, Shato, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo Shato about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the EDF.
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* NumberTwo: Dea is this for Shatoo.
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* NumberTwo: Dea is this for Shatoo.Shato.
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The issue starts with Erma recovering from her injuries she sustained during the Battle of Derzon, while her comrades-in-arms went to pay a visit to her in the hospital. Meanwhile, Erma herself was busy reading the battle report and she cannot avoid to curse the ILR for all the damage they caused in Derzon, as the civilian casualties went about more than 5000 people who died there. After her comrades left her room, Erma had a brief dream in which she remember [[{{Foreshadowing}} both past and future events]], but before she could make some sense on this, an EDF officer, named Vilso, speaks with Erma, trying to get her impressions about her participation on the battlefield, but the things soured quickly when Vilso [[BerserkButton made the mistake of questioning her battle performance taking into account her fallout with Tavas and her emotional state during the battle]]. After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the EDF.
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The issue starts with Erma recovering from her injuries she sustained during the Battle of Derzon, while her comrades-in-arms went to pay a visit to her in the hospital. Meanwhile, Erma herself was busy reading the battle report and she cannot avoid to curse the ILR for all the damage they caused in Derzon, as the civilian casualties went about more than 5000 people who died there. After her comrades left her room, Erma had a brief dream in which she remember [[{{Foreshadowing}} both past and future events]], but before she could make some sense on this, an EDF officer, named Vilso, speaks with Erma, trying to get her impressions about her participation on the battlefield, but the things soured quickly when Vilso [[BerserkButton made the mistake of questioning her battle performance taking into account her fallout with Tavas and her emotional state during the battle]]. battle]].
After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on theEDF.EDF.
After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the
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* BilingualDialogue: Somewhat subverted: We see both Erma and Dea speaking in untranslated Standard Language, despite in theory there's only a single language in-universe and there's very few dialectual variations, but the language itself is basically a cypher for English, rather than an elaborated language.
* CoolOldGuy: Shatoo, as he tries to at least help Erma and he puts his trust in her rather than the rest of the EDF's top brass.
* CoolOldGuy: Shatoo, as he tries to at least help Erma and he puts his trust in her rather than the rest of the EDF's top brass.
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* FunetikAksent: Many of the Ekosiaki soldiers speaks with very thick Southern accents (via TranslationConvention) but Erma doesn't seem to have problems to understand them.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: There's a brief scene when Erma is taken in a ride inside a flying car. According with WordOfGod, flying cars doesn't exist in the ''Albedo'' universe for the [[AwesomeButImpractical same reasons why those does not yet exist in real life]]. That car was included because most of the established rules regarding the setting didn't exist in that time.
* FunetikAksent: Many of the Ekosiaki soldiers speaks with very thick [[DeepSouth Southernaccents accents]] (via TranslationConvention) but Erma doesn't seem to have problems to understand them.
* FunetikAksent: Many of the Ekosiaki soldiers speaks with very thick [[DeepSouth Southern
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Col. Hitzok doesn't want to work with Erma, but he doesn't have a choice on this matter
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Col. Hitzok doesn't want to work with Erma, but he doesn't have a choice on this mattermatter.
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* BerserkButton: We're shown many of Erma's buttons: [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't like being pitied and doesn't like receiving help from other people for stuff she could do easily]].
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* BerserkButton: We're shown many of Erma's buttons: [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't like being pitied and she doesn't like receiving help from other people for stuff she could do easily]].easily]].
* TheDeadHaveNames: While reading the battle report at the hospital, Erma reads the names of all the dead soldiers who perished in Derzon.
* TheDeadHaveNames: While reading the battle report at the hospital, Erma reads the names of all the dead soldiers who perished in Derzon.
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* FunetikAksent: Many of the Ekosiaki soldiers speaks with very thick Southern accents (via TranslationConvention) but Erma doesn't seem to have problems to understand them.
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This issue not only marks the beginning of the Ekosiak sub-arc, but it was also the very debut of Creator/StanSakai's ''Creator/UsagiYojimbo'' on it, along with other comics along it.
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[[caption-width-right:172:Yeah, [[ComicBook/UsagiYojimbo Usagi]] debuted here, years before [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 fighting along with some mutant ninja turtles...]]]]
This issue not only marks the beginning of the Ekosiak sub-arc, but it was also the very debut of Creator/StanSakai's''Creator/UsagiYojimbo'' ''ComicBook/UsagiYojimbo'' on it, along with other comics along it.
[[caption-width-right:172:Yeah, [[ComicBook/UsagiYojimbo Usagi]] debuted here, years before [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 fighting along with some mutant ninja turtles...]]]]
This issue not only marks the beginning of the Ekosiak sub-arc, but it was also the very debut of Creator/StanSakai's
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This issue not only marks the beginning of the Ekosiak sub-arc, but it was also the very debut of Creator/StanSakai's ''Creator/UsagiYojimbo'' on it, along with other comics along it.
The issue starts with Erma recovering from her injuries she sustained during the Battle of Derzon, while her comrades-in-arms went to pay a visit to her in the hospital. Meanwhile, Erma herself was busy reading the battle report and she cannot avoid to curse the ILR for all the damage they caused in Derzon, as the civilian casualties went about more than 5000 people who died there. After her comrades left her room, Erma had a brief dream in which she remember [[{{Foreshadowing}} both past and future events]], but before she could make some sense on this, an EDF officer, named Vilso, speaks with Erma, trying to get her impressions about her participation on the battlefield, but the things soured quickly when Vilso [[BerserkButton made the mistake of questioning her battle performance taking into account her fallout with Tavas and her emotional state during the battle]]. After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the EDF.
After receiving her briefing about the situation on the planet, Erma went to meet Colonel Onni Hitzok, the main man behind the armed forces of the planet, on a club downtown. While meeting him inside the club, Hitzok quickly warns Erma that he doesn't trust her but he must work with her anyways, something she quickly agree with him.
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* BerserkButton: We're shown many of Erma's buttons: [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't like being pitied and doesn't like receiving help from other people for stuff she could do easily]].
* ReassignedToAntarctica: As a way to prevent Erma to become a dangerous precedent inside the EDF regarding women in the battlefields, she is sent to Ekosiak, a backwater planet, as a way to get rid of her easily.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Col. Hitzok doesn't want to work with Erma, but he doesn't have a choice on this matter
The issue starts with Erma recovering from her injuries she sustained during the Battle of Derzon, while her comrades-in-arms went to pay a visit to her in the hospital. Meanwhile, Erma herself was busy reading the battle report and she cannot avoid to curse the ILR for all the damage they caused in Derzon, as the civilian casualties went about more than 5000 people who died there. After her comrades left her room, Erma had a brief dream in which she remember [[{{Foreshadowing}} both past and future events]], but before she could make some sense on this, an EDF officer, named Vilso, speaks with Erma, trying to get her impressions about her participation on the battlefield, but the things soured quickly when Vilso [[BerserkButton made the mistake of questioning her battle performance taking into account her fallout with Tavas and her emotional state during the battle]]. After recovering from her wounds, Erma talks with an EDF commander, who warned her beforehand about the political implications of a woman participating in the battlefield, while explaining to Erma [[ReassignedToAntarctica the benefits of being sent to Ekosiak]], a backwater planet at the edge of the [=ConFed=] space. After some small problems after reaching the planet, Erma meets Shatoo, a secretary in charge of the EDF HomeGuard in Ekosiak, and after showing the capital city, he presents his aide, a Vulpine (fox) girl hailing from Erma's Dornthant named Dea-Htuhok Kho. Dea quickly explains both to Erma and Shatoo about some serious incidents happening in the planet, including terrorism and anarchy, but both Shatoo and Dea quickly noticed Erma doesn't know anything regarding the political situation of Ekosiak. Shatoo doesn't seem to mind about that anyways, since he trust Erma due of her credentials rather than blindly put his trust on the EDF.
After receiving her briefing about the situation on the planet, Erma went to meet Colonel Onni Hitzok, the main man behind the armed forces of the planet, on a club downtown. While meeting him inside the club, Hitzok quickly warns Erma that he doesn't trust her but he must work with her anyways, something she quickly agree with him.
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* BerserkButton: We're shown many of Erma's buttons: [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't like being pitied and doesn't like receiving help from other people for stuff she could do easily]].
* ReassignedToAntarctica: As a way to prevent Erma to become a dangerous precedent inside the EDF regarding women in the battlefields, she is sent to Ekosiak, a backwater planet, as a way to get rid of her easily.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Col. Hitzok doesn't want to work with Erma, but he doesn't have a choice on this matter
