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* SenpaiKohai: Oshiro is Erma's senior officer and she address him as such when Oshiro apologize to her for his noisy behavior with Toki.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology in September 2000, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, of ''Shanda the Panda'' fame, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology in September 2000, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, of ''Shanda the Panda'' and ''ComicStrip/DickTracy'' fame, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology in September 2000, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology in September 2000, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, of ''Shanda the Panda'' fame, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their bunk over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].
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* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their bunk over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].Oshiro]].
* SenpaiKohai: Oshiro is Erma's senior officer and she address him as such when Oshiro apologize to her for his noisy behavior with Toki.
* SenpaiKohai: Oshiro is Erma's senior officer and she address him as such when Oshiro apologize to her for his noisy behavior with Toki.
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* DidTheEarthMoveForYouToo: When both Toki and Oshiro had sex over Erma's bunk, while we don't see the act, the whole scene is illustrated with both SuperDeformed versions of both characters ''walking against each other'', mostly to illustrate how annoying was the whole scene for Erma.
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* DidTheEarthMoveForYouToo: [[DidTheEarthMoveForYouToo Did The Planet Danet Move For You, Too?]]: When both Toki and Oshiro had sex over Erma's bunk, while we don't see the act, the whole scene is illustrated with both SuperDeformed versions of both characters ''walking against each other'', mostly to illustrate how annoying was the whole scene for Erma.
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* DidTheEarthMoveForYouToo: When both Toki and Oshiro had sex over Erma's bunk, while we don't see the act, the whole scene is illustrated with both SuperDeformed versions of both characters ''walking against each other'', mostly to illustrate how annoying was the whole scene for Erma.
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* {{Irony}}: The already lullaby song Toki sang in her sleep, as while Erma will have a son and her own LoveInterest much later, on the other hand Toki will ''not'', other than sleeping with other guys.
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* {{Irony}}: The already aforementioned lullaby song Toki sang in her sleep, as while Erma will have a son and her own LoveInterest much later, on the other hand Toki will ''not'', other than sleeping with other guys.
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* LovableJock: Oshiro. He overlaps with InnocentlyInsensitive because he looks like a stereotypical jock, but never wanted to bother Erma on any way and he apologize later when Erma complained against Toki when she and Oshiro had sex in a very noisy fashion over Erma's bunk.
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* LovableJock: Oshiro. He overlaps Both Oshiro and Toki, despite being female. They overlap with InnocentlyInsensitive because he they looks like a stereotypical jock, jocks at first, but they never wanted to bother Erma on any way and he they apologize later when after Erma complained against Toki when she and Oshiro had sex in a very noisy fashion over Erma's bunk.
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* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].
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* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their bunk over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology, anthology in September 2000, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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* NewMeat: Erma was just a cadet in this time period and she was trying to fit herself not only in the academy but also in the more liberal culture of Danet.
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* NewMeat: Erma was just a cadet in this time period and she was trying to fit herself not only in the academy but also in the more liberal culture of Danet.Danet.
* RetCon: Originally Toki was straight and her relationship with Erma was entirely platonic, but Gallacci retconned this in 2016 in a soft retcon he did, turning her into a bisexual, albeit she only bi for Erma exclusively.
* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].
* RetCon: Originally Toki was straight and her relationship with Erma was entirely platonic, but Gallacci retconned this in 2016 in a soft retcon he did, turning her into a bisexual, albeit she only bi for Erma exclusively.
* RightThroughTheWall: Overlaps with CeilingBanger, as both Toki and Oshiro had very loud sex in their over Erma's head due to Toki [[HotSkittyOnWailordAction being smaller than Oshiro]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the last page of the story, Toki recites the last lines of the lullaby Toki was singing when she was asleep. The song refers both a mate and their baby son, and Erma herself says she could use that song for her after changing the species of the people involved on it. This became relevant, chronologically-wise, much later during the Ish-tako sub-arc when Erma has a baby son by her own and her own boyfriend, Alfon Voga.
* InterspeciesRomance: Between Toki, a Rodent, and Oshiro, a Feline. Albeit call it ''romance'' [[FriendWithBenefits would be an exaggeration]].
* {{Irony}}: The already lullaby song Toki sang in her sleep, as while Erma will have a son and her own LoveInterest much later, on the other hand Toki will ''not'', other than sleeping with other guys.
* InterspeciesRomance: Between Toki, a Rodent, and Oshiro, a Feline. Albeit call it ''romance'' [[FriendWithBenefits would be an exaggeration]].
* {{Irony}}: The already lullaby song Toki sang in her sleep, as while Erma will have a son and her own LoveInterest much later, on the other hand Toki will ''not'', other than sleeping with other guys.
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* LovableJock: Oshiro. He overlaps with InnocentlyInsensitive because he looks like a stereotypical jock, but never wanted to bother Erma on any way and he apologize later when Erma complained against Toki when she and Oshiro had sex in a very noisy fashion over Erma's bunk.
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''First Impressions'' is an ''Albedo'''s side-story originally published in Shanda Fantasy Arts's ''New Horizons'' anthology, with art of Mike Sagara and written by Mike Curtis, while Gallacci serves as the editor. It takes place many years before the Battle of Derzon during Erma Felna's younger days in the EDF military academy in the planet Danet and it explains how Erma met her best friend, the resident GenkiGirl and LovableSexManiac Toki Zha, and their earlier misunderstandings due to their personal backgrounds.
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!!!This side-story provides examples of the following:
* GenkiGirl: Toki, all the way.
* NewMeat: Erma was just a cadet in this time period and she was trying to fit herself not only in the academy but also in the more liberal culture of Danet.
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!!!This side-story provides examples of the following:
* GenkiGirl: Toki, all the way.
* NewMeat: Erma was just a cadet in this time period and she was trying to fit herself not only in the academy but also in the more liberal culture of Danet.
