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Shelby is thrusted into a new role after a party-related accident.
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Shelby is thrusted thrust into a new role after a party-related accident.
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* IndyPloy: Kent fully admits he's got no plan to fight the Rat King, making it up as he goes along.
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* IndyPloy: Kent fully admits he's got no plan to fight the Rat King, King. He even quotes Indiana Jones's line "I'm making it this up as he goes along.I go" word for word.
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* UnfortunateNames: Shelby's brother was initially named "Butty Butterson" since he was Shelby's rear that was cut off. Shelby decides to call him Kent instead.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent came to be, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be a myth.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent came to be, given the idea that an earthworm's segment becomes a new earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two off is supposed to be a myth.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs. Shelby tries to do it as well, but nothing happens.
** Heck this is how Kent achieves everything in the episode. Doesn't want a bride because he is unaware of love, doesn't want eternal life because he has no concept of death from just being born, doesn't want endless wealth because he has no concept of money. Even his fight with the Rat King Kent admits he is just pulling off an IndyPloy.
** Heck this is how Kent achieves everything in the episode. Doesn't want a bride because he is unaware of love, doesn't want eternal life because he has no concept of death from just being born, doesn't want endless wealth because he has no concept of money. Even his fight with the Rat King Kent admits he is just pulling off an IndyPloy.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs. Shelby tries to do it as well, but nothing happens.
**happens. Heck this is how Kent achieves everything in the episode. Doesn't want a bride because he is unaware of love, doesn't want eternal life because he has no concept of death from just being born, doesn't want endless wealth because he has no concept of money. Even his fight with the Rat King Kent admits he is just pulling off an IndyPloy.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.
** It's not like he can't see Shelby again; Shelby lives in Jake's viola after all.
** It's not like he can't see Shelby again; Shelby lives in Jake's viola after all.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.
** It'sPersephone. Although it's not like he can't see Shelby again; Shelby lives in Jake's viola after all.
** It's
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent came to be, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be myth.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent came to be, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be a myth.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be myth.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent, Kent came to be, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be myth.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Jake is surprised how Kent, given the idea that an earthworm can have two living segments when cut in two is supposed to be myth.
-->'''Shelby:''' Myth is a powerful force in my life, dude.
-->'''Shelby:''' Myth is a powerful force in my life, dude.
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* FighterMageThief: The three guardians of the materials are stereotypical D & D examples, but in the order Mage Fighter Thief.
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* ShoutOut: The rats chewing on the Tree Fort's roots are reminiscent of the Nidhogg chewing the roots of the World Tree in Myth/NorseMythology.
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* FetchQuest: Kent has to collect three materials needed to forge the SwordOfPlotAdvancement.
* ForgingScene: Once Kent collects the aforementioned materials.
* TheHerosJourney: Kent's adventure follows all the standard beats.
* ForgingScene: Once Kent collects the aforementioned materials.
* TheHerosJourney: Kent's adventure follows all the standard beats.
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* LeaveYourQuestTest: The guardians of the materials needed to forge the sword all give Kent this, as does the RatKing at the end.
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* TheHerosJourney: Kent's adventure is an example of this.
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* TheHerosJourney: Kent's adventure ReforgedBlade: Subverted, Shelby's broken original sword is an example of this.handled by the blacksmith in a way that hints at this, but the sword made for him turns out to be completely new.
* SophisticatedAsHell: Leafbeard varies between high-flown HighFantasy speech and childish slang
-->'''Leafbeard''': Your sword was shattered to butts when I found you.
* SophisticatedAsHell: Leafbeard varies between high-flown HighFantasy speech and childish slang
-->'''Leafbeard''': Your sword was shattered to butts when I found you.
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** Heck this is how Kent achieves everything in the episode. Doesn't want a bride because he is unaware of love, doesn't want eternal life because he has no concept of death from just being born, doesn't want endless wealth because he has no concept of money. Even his fight with the Rat King Kent admits he is just pulling off an IndyPloy.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.Persephone.
** It's not like he can't see Shelby again; Shelby lives in Jake's viola after all.
** It's not like he can't see Shelby again; Shelby lives in Jake's viola after all.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs. Shelby tries to do it as well, but nothing happens.
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* HopeSproutsEternal: With the Rat King unable to gnaw at its roots, the willow where Finn and Jake live blooms for the first time in years.
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* {{Parkour}}: Shelby's attempt at it is what caused the accident.
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* TheWormThatWalks: No, not Kent, but the Rat King, whose body is made up of smaller rats.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life.
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* TheHerosJourney: Kent's adventure is an example of this.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life. This is similar to the Greek myth of Persephone.
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* IndyPlot: Kent fully admits he's got no plan to fight the Rat King, making it up as he goes along.
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* IndyPlot: IndyPloy: Kent fully admits he's got no plan to fight the Rat King, making it up as he goes along.
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* IndyPlot: Kent fully admits he's got no plan to fight the Rat King, making it up as he goes along.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Shelby gets his rear end lopped off in a parkour accident. It comes to life and thus, Kent is born.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs.limbs.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Having eaten food from the underworld, Kent must stay there for the rest of his life.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Appears to be the reason why Kent grew limbs.
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