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-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman]],''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
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-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman]],''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
->I was gambling and in heavy debt. I was totally broke when one day a man came to see me. He told me his name was [[VideoGame/FatalFury Geese Howard]]. He said that he would take on my debts if I would help him in his business undertakings. However, I soon found out [[SuperMobBoss what kind of a man]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Geese Howard]] really was.
-->--'''Takuma Sakazaki,''' ''VideoGame/ArtOfFighting (SNES port)''
->I was gambling and in heavy debt. I was totally broke when one day a man came to see me. He told me his name was [[VideoGame/FatalFury Geese Howard]]. He said that he would take on my debts if I would help him in his business undertakings. However, I soon found out [[SuperMobBoss what kind of a man]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Geese Howard]] really was.
-->--'''Takuma Sakazaki,''' ''VideoGame/ArtOfFighting (SNES port)''
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->The clause in the contract which specified this took the term "[[ReadTheFinePrint small print]]" to a whole new dimension: the clause was concealed in a microdot, occupying he dot of the "i" on page three of the loan agreement, in the phrase "Welcome, you are now a member of the Golden Assurance family."
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->The clause in the contract which specified this took the term "[[ReadTheFinePrint small print]]" to a whole new dimension: the clause was concealed in a microdot, occupying he the dot of the "i" on page three of the loan agreement, in the phrase "Welcome, you are now a member of the Golden Assurance family."
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will take a finger off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? All right, my son?
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise [[{{Fingore}} I will take a finger off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment.payment]]. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffablyEvil All right, my son?son?]]
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will [[{{Fingore}} take a finger]] off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffablyEvil All right, my son?]]
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will [[{{Fingore}} take a finger]] finger off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffablyEvil All right, my son?]]son?
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-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman,''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
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-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman,''' Roman]],''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
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-->--''Literature/RedDwarf: Infinity Welcomes Careful Drivers''
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-->--''Literature/RedDwarf: Infinity Welcomes Careful Drivers''Drivers''
->You see, your friend owes me money, [[AdventurerArchaeologist Mr. Drake]]. A lot of money. So when he told me that you two were onto something big- the "find of a lifetime", he said- well, I was intrigued. But he's made grand promises before. Haven't you, [[CoolOldGuy Victor]]? And here we are again. Another fool's errand... Unless, of course, you found something in there, Mr. Drake, that might compensate for all this... [[FauxAffablyEvil unpleasantness]]?
-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman,''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
->You see, your friend owes me money, [[AdventurerArchaeologist Mr. Drake]]. A lot of money. So when he told me that you two were onto something big- the "find of a lifetime", he said- well, I was intrigued. But he's made grand promises before. Haven't you, [[CoolOldGuy Victor]]? And here we are again. Another fool's errand... Unless, of course, you found something in there, Mr. Drake, that might compensate for all this... [[FauxAffablyEvil unpleasantness]]?
-->--'''[[LoanShark Gabriel Roman,''' ''VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune''
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-->--'''Barry the Baptist,''' ''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrels''
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-->--''[[TabletopGame/OldWorldOfDarkness Midnight Circus]]''
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-->--''[[TabletopGame/OldWorldOfDarkness Midnight Circus]]''Circus]]''
->Before he knew it, [=McIntyre=] had debts amounting to almost five times his annual salary. In desperation, to pay off the Ganymedian Mafia who ran [[BeastlyBloodSports the snail pits]], he'd taken a massive loan from the Golden Assurance Friendly and Caring Loan Society... which, as it turned out, was also run by the Ganymedian Mafia. He didn't know it when he signed, but they charged an annual percentage rate of nine thousand eight hundred percent.
->The clause in the contract which specified this took the term "[[ReadTheFinePrint small print]]" to a whole new dimension: the clause was concealed in a microdot, occupying he dot of the "i" on page three of the loan agreement, in the phrase "Welcome, you are now a member of the Golden Assurance family."
->Startled to discover his first monthly instalment was some seven times more than the original loan, [[TheGamblingAddict he gambled what was left and lost that, too]].
-->--''Literature/RedDwarf: Infinity Welcomes Careful Drivers''
->Before he knew it, [=McIntyre=] had debts amounting to almost five times his annual salary. In desperation, to pay off the Ganymedian Mafia who ran [[BeastlyBloodSports the snail pits]], he'd taken a massive loan from the Golden Assurance Friendly and Caring Loan Society... which, as it turned out, was also run by the Ganymedian Mafia. He didn't know it when he signed, but they charged an annual percentage rate of nine thousand eight hundred percent.
->The clause in the contract which specified this took the term "[[ReadTheFinePrint small print]]" to a whole new dimension: the clause was concealed in a microdot, occupying he dot of the "i" on page three of the loan agreement, in the phrase "Welcome, you are now a member of the Golden Assurance family."
->Startled to discover his first monthly instalment was some seven times more than the original loan, [[TheGamblingAddict he gambled what was left and lost that, too]].
-->--''Literature/RedDwarf: Infinity Welcomes Careful Drivers''
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->I'll give you this much. You might get along with [[WouldHurtAChild this guy]]. He calls himself Mr Wizard, but he's another shitbag just like you. Now get out of here. I'll have you back in here in a week, though, and I'll have your markers on this desk. You either buy them back or I'm going to have my friends tool up on you. And like Booker T says, once they start, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown they do it until they're satisfied]].
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapes Popsy]]''
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapes Popsy]]''
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->I'll give you this much. You might get along with [[WouldHurtAChild this guy]]. He calls himself Mr Wizard, but he's another shitbag just like you. Now get out of here. I'll I'm gonna have you back in here in a week, though, and I'll have your markers on this desk. You either buy them back or I'm going to have my friends tool up on you. And like Booker T says, once they start, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown they do it until they're satisfied]].
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapesPopsy]]''Popsy]]''
->[[EvilSorcerer Cavendish]] then announces that the tent will be opening the following night for gambling. However, the stakes have subtly increased. On a subliminal level, some gamblers realize that the Ringmaster [[YourSoulIsMine holds their souls]], and they go home to nightmares. By the time the circus leaves an area, Cavendish has collected numerous souls to feed the [[EldritchAbomination Board of Directors]] as well as skim off the top to purchase sections of his own soul back. The last nights of the circus in an area find the tent full of desperate gamblers attempting to win their souls back. The smarter ones attempt to strike up various deals with Cavendish, even sacrificing innocents and loved ones to make the damning dreams stop.
-->--''[[TabletopGame/OldWorldOfDarkness Midnight Circus]]''
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapes
->[[EvilSorcerer Cavendish]] then announces that the tent will be opening the following night for gambling. However, the stakes have subtly increased. On a subliminal level, some gamblers realize that the Ringmaster [[YourSoulIsMine holds their souls]], and they go home to nightmares. By the time the circus leaves an area, Cavendish has collected numerous souls to feed the [[EldritchAbomination Board of Directors]] as well as skim off the top to purchase sections of his own soul back. The last nights of the circus in an area find the tent full of desperate gamblers attempting to win their souls back. The smarter ones attempt to strike up various deals with Cavendish, even sacrificing innocents and loved ones to make the damning dreams stop.
-->--''[[TabletopGame/OldWorldOfDarkness Midnight Circus]]''
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will [[{{Fingore}} take a finger]] off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffblyEvil All right, my son?]]
-->--'''Barry the Baptist,''' ''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrrels''
-->--'''Barry the Baptist,''' ''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrrels''
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will [[{{Fingore}} take a finger]] off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffblyEvil [[FauxAffablyEvil All right, my son?]]
-->--'''Barry the Baptist,'''''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrrels''
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-->--'''Barry the Baptist,'''
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->Hello, boy. [[VomitDiscretionShot Feeling a bit poorly?]] I know your friends are responsible for most of the cash, so I'm gonna give you one week to find it. Otherwise I will [[{{Fingore}} take a finger]] off each of you and your friends' hands for every day that passes without payment. And then, when you've run out of digits... your dad's bar, and who knows what then? [[FauxAffblyEvil All right, my son?]]
-->--'''Barry the Baptist,''' ''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrrels''
->I'll give you this much. You might get along with [[WouldHurtAChild this guy]]. He calls himself Mr Wizard, but he's another shitbag just like you. Now get out of here. I'll have you back in here in a week, though, and I'll have your markers on this desk. You either buy them back or I'm going to have my friends tool up on you. And like Booker T says, once they start, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown they do it until they're satisfied]].
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapes Popsy]]''
-->--'''Barry the Baptist,''' ''Film/LockStockAndTwoSmokingBarrrels''
->I'll give you this much. You might get along with [[WouldHurtAChild this guy]]. He calls himself Mr Wizard, but he's another shitbag just like you. Now get out of here. I'll have you back in here in a week, though, and I'll have your markers on this desk. You either buy them back or I'm going to have my friends tool up on you. And like Booker T says, once they start, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown they do it until they're satisfied]].
-->--'''Mr Reggie,''' ''[[Literature/NightmaresAndDreamscapes Popsy]]''
